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Posted: 11 years ago

Episode 51

Antara gulped and looked towards Raghu who was walking towards her...

Antara's Mind: Yeh...Yeh meri taraf kyu ah raha hai?..Kya chaiyay isay?..God please, Komal aur Nargis kay samnay kuch ulta sidha naa kar de...

Antara shook off the thoughts as Raghu reached the trio...

Raghu: Kya ho raha hai yaha?..

Komal moved near Nargis and whispers...

Komal: Hot hai nah?...

Antara heard and shot a glared towards their direction..Nargis noticed this nudged Komal..

Nargis: Hey..Komal he's taken..

She said winking at Antara...Antara's eye's shot open a she started at Raghu who was looking straight at her...giving his deadly smirk...

Antara: Komal...Nargis..CHUP RAO!!...Aisa kuch nahi hai...

Raghu: Acha wo choro..yeh apun ko batao ki yaha ho kya raha hai?..

Komal: Wo Main Antara ko bata rahiy thiy ki...Aap dono chate hoo tomeray papa ki house boat mein app araam sey reh saktiy hai...Aur waha aur koi nahi hai..Sirf aap dono hogay...

Nargis: "Sirf" App dono..She said with a grin...

Raghu: Acha..sirf hum dono?...Akaylay?...

Nargis: To haan yaa naa?!!

Raghu: Areey sau taka HAAN...

Antara: Lykin..aisay kaisay?..Matlab...ki...

Raghu: Arrey Miss Kaul kyu chinta karti hai?..Main hu nah...

Antara(slowly): tum hoo issi liye too dar hain...

Raghu: Kuch kahan tune?!!

Antara Nahin kuch nahin..

Raghu: soch kya rahi hain... chalchale rahe jate hain udhar.. woo house wale boat mein..

Antara: lykin..

Raghu: Tere iss lykin ke chakkar mein naa apun logon koo ab sarak pein raat bitani paregi.. arey itna mast jagah hain teri saheeli ke wahan aur tujhe to bas...

Antara: Acha thik hain... chalo.

So at last everything was fixed that they would live at komal's dad's houseboat for the rest of days, Raghu left from there leaving the three girls to what they do best..Gossip...

Nargis: Kya chal raha hai tum dono kay beech mai..

Antara: Kya?..Kuch nahi..hum sirf dost hai..

Komal: Acha..Sirf dost?!!..hmmm..

Antara: ufff...tum log bhi naa...baat ko ghuma ke jalebi bana naa koi tum dono se sikhe... woo bas mera dost hain..ek bahut acha aur khasss dost..really guys!..Raghu meray liyay bohat khas hai...Jab bhi main koi mushkil main thiy...Raghu nay meri jaan bachai..Usnay meri family ki jaan bachai...Wo mauth sey khel key aaya hai...Wo meri ek hasi kay liyay kuch bhi kar sakta hai...

Komal: Acha..bohat senti mat ho..Main papa sey baat karti hu ... Intazaam kay liyay..

Komal talked to her father and arranged everything. All of them moved inside the hotel and took discharge. But before leaving antara and raghu made the hotel owner to listen some words regarding to their services of cockroaches and mice.

Nargis left them as she had urgent works. They all headed towards daal lake and took shikara. Komal lead them towards the house boat which was situated near the floating garden of daal lake. The lake looked more beautiful from close. Its green clear water was like a transparent cover through which everyone could see the weeds and fishes under the water level. A big grin wwas attatched to antara's face. She missed the place a lot. She touched the water and splashed in childish fun. Raghu was smiling looking at her huge grin. She took out a beautiful water plant from the water. Raghu laughed at her childishness. Antara was a bit miffed at first but at last she also joined the laugh.

Antara showed raghu the beautiful and attractive points of lake from the shikara. She indicated towards a high hill top.

Antara: Raghu woo wahan pahar ke choti pe woo dikh raha hain tumhe.. woo bhagwan shankaracharya ji ka mandir hain...

Raghu: Yaha sey to woo bilkul sui ki nokh (niddle point) ki tarah dikh raha hai...

Antara: Raghu!..Aisay majak nahi banatay... bhagwan ka ghar hain...

Raghu: thik hain meri maa...

She also showed him the beautiful old mongal fort situated at far west side of dal lake on the peak of another top. She showed him each and every place of daal lake with childish enthusiasm And he continued to admire her. Komal silently watched those two with a small smile. she noticed something between them. she saw how raghu was stealing glances of her all the time. But Antara was in her own tune and was not noticing those.

"Raghu ko dekh ke mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hain ki uske dil mein antara ke liye kuch hain!!... baar baar sirf antara koo hi ghurta jaa raha hain.. uss ke behavior se hi saaf pata chal raha hain!..par yee antara bhi naa... uff... pagal larki... I am sure ki ussey bhanak bhi nahin hain inn sab ki...woo too apne dinuya mein khoyi raheti hain..." thought komal in her mind. She was sure that Antara didn't have the slightest idea about Raghu's feelings. She knew her pagal friend very well.

Giggling and laughing all the way, they at last reached to the beautifully decorated house boat situated near the floating garden of lake. "Hum log bas pauchne wale hain..." komal informed as the shikara moved inside the lotus plant's bunch on the water. The whole scenario looked calm and so blissful.

The houseboat was situated just at the middle of lotus flower bunches and it looked beautiful at very first sight. They both were mesmerized by the place. The shikara reached near the houseboat. "Welcome..." komal greeted and lead them inside the houseboat. Both Antara and Raghu stepped on the beautifully decorated wooden stairs which started from the upper level of water and ended on the balcony of houseboat.

written by ifza and minor editing by team.

Edited by ifians - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

lovely update ifz...😳the whole scenerio was described so beautifully...komal noticed them so nicely..n she is right antara ko koi bhi baat seede se samajh hi nhi aati😆...they reached there...wonderful😳

well done ifz n editing team

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome superb update
i want them to live in the boat house for long
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Posted: 11 years ago
soo now nargis n komal...
vill be d cupid ❤️... n bring rantara close..
raghu stealibg glances of antara 😳...
lovely update..waiting to see what happens nxt
👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
At last I am here.
I have been smiling like a fool while reading.
Raghu ke tuk tuk glances.

Wonderful

komal understood Raghu's feelings, great.
Waise bhi pyaar chupaye nahi chupta.

Dear, keep writing like this always.
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Posted: 11 years ago

WOWOWOWOW Amazing update IFZ

it was totally beautiful anf flawless
loved the part when u said rantara gave a talk to the manager about cockroach and mice lol I can imagine that happening
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Posted: 11 years ago
sach main komal an nargish bahot hot hai..
hayee..raghu an anti in house bote..raghu Larkin ko samjna muskil hai..

wow..if a asweem update..love u..

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update ifz 🤗
Awww Raghu hot 😳😳
Sach mein yedi ko kuch samaj hi nahi aata 😆
To ab Rantara ek hi boat house mein ufff bohat maza aane wala hai 😆😳
You described dal lake so well I start imagining it 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
Great writing Ifz,
Komal being Antara's bestie recognized evrything..:D

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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely updet ifza...
Komal was right. ...
Antara ko sach me kuch samaj nahi aata...
Jo sab ko dikh raha hai wo use kyu nahi dikhta...pagal ladki...

Arz kia hai...

Ishq na karne ke bas do hi tareeke thay,
Ek dill na bana hota ya tum naa bane hotey...!!!!!

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