(EPISODE 74 on Pg 146)Do Dil Ek Jaan ..ek baar phir - Page 43

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Posted: 11 years ago
Very Well Written Prerna...
Hats Of To You...

Each and Every emotion was Very well written..I could feel it...
Well Done...




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Posted: 11 years ago
yeahh dis is becoming interesting... 😉...
finally we got rid of dat binod 😡... kamina kahi ka..
n antara ws broken though shes saved frm d evil plan of dat dm 🤢... as raghu hai na hmesha antu k pass 😛...
grt update prerna 👏...
Edited by ankusanu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oey hoyee meri preru
Awesome yar I just love it so much
Bonod ki kaise phatti maza agaya 😆
Antara ko atleast thora to laga key Raghu bhi angel hosakta hai 😉
Finally Antara on secret mission 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow Raghu exposed vinod
aww,antu feeling bad for herself,and,Raghu too
so,antu wants,Raghu to,be her angel
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome .
Loved it .
Thxs for the Pm .
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome updates 👏 ria nd prerna 😊
raghu was so hurted 😭
but thn mm 😃 ne realize karwa diya his love 😳
raghu ka plan 😆 mast band bajaya binod ka 😉
finally all well betwen rantara
antu trusts raghu 😃 raghu haply
raghu hugged 😳 her
antu ko doubt hua tht angel can b raghu 😛
ab antu on mission to find abt angel 😃
update soon
thnx for pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Epi 30:
Raghu can't sleep...restless...so much going on widin him...desperate...
want to confess...expose binod...

Raghu-MM phone convo...
Antu yedi...muh band nahi rakh sakti...
Raghu ko idea aaya...👍🏼...bole toh intelligent...😆

Antu came in d balcony to c Raghu...😳
Antu sad n worried for Raghu...
raghu will turn dis fikar to pyaar...❤️... n also handle binod...

Raghu came to Antu's home wen Binod was der...
"Bole toh surpress..."😆
...Band bajaane aaya Raghu d Hero uss feku ka...
Raghu noticed dat Antara more attached to him dan d angel...⭐️

kashmiri chai aka kehwa...touchin -touchin session...☺️
he dint allow antu to give tea to binod... he himself gave...
hmmm possesive...very possesive...😃

serialwaale Raghu ki Antu ke ghar main pehli baar kehwa peene ki yaad aa gayi...yahaan to opposite kar diya tum logo ne...😃...Raghu khud hi sarka antu ke paas...😳...

Raghu ka sab ke saath connection hai...😆
...kya plan banaya Raghu...👍🏼
Antu in fear held Raghu's hand...evn though her so cald Angel was der...
...binod ne khud sach bol diya...😛
...lekin us saboot ke khoj ke baare mein batane se pehle hi... Antu ne GET OUT kar diya...🤔
Antu broken...😔😭
Questionin whether anything in d world is true n pure?...
Antu ur answer is LOVE...soon u'l realize it...

Raghu consolin...
"...Par Jab Meri Ms.Kaul roti hai na tab bahut dard hota hai!!"😳
Antu bandaged Raghu's wounds...
Raghu blurtd angel's descriptn...Antu doubtin...😲
on Raghu being her angel...Antu on secret mission...😉



Mind blowin update as usual...keep it up...👏



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Posted: 11 years ago
arey waah..maza aayega!!!!😆
raghu ke plan ne binod ko almost dead kr hi diya tha...🤣
kuch bhi kaho raghu jaisa koi nhi...😎
n antu ne pehle hi darke rona shuru kr diya...😆
ab thoda to hint mil hi gaya hai..dekhte hain ki yedi ka dimag kitna kaam krta hai angel ko dhundne mein..😉
mast update prerna..fab job editing team!
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Posted: 11 years ago

--Episode 31--

The morning sunrays spread on the basti and came inside the room to fell on her beautiful sleeping face. Antara squeezed her eyes as the sunrays disturbed her a bit. She opened her beautiful eyelids slowly and smiled gently looking at the window. She lifted her head from the pillow and sat on her bed. The incident of last night flashed on her mind. She had a lot of questions running through her mind from yesterday and she need to find the answer...'Why is it that Raghu always saved her when she was in trouble'..'Why is it that she felt safe with him around?' Those questions never disturbed her before. But she could see the similarities now. She remembered how Raghu described her angel without her telling him...He knew how he looked and he was spot on. Also, whenever she needed someone badly, he was there for her. Just like her real angel, he saved her always from all crisis and danger! Damn, why didn't she notice that before!! Why she didn't get that her angel couldn't be anyone rather than raghu?!.But why didn't she tell her? And the most important thing, why did he helped her?!!!.WHY??...The question vibrated in her mind. She had to find the answers to all these questions...Otherwise she would not be at peace. She closed her eyes, "bhagwaniji!!" she told in mind, "Kya main jo soch rahi hoon woo sach hain!! Please bhagwan ji!! Iss baar galat ishara mat dena!!. Kyunki agar iss baar bhi main galat huyi too main mar jaungi!!.. jine ki aas hi nahin rahegi mujhmein... main samajh jaungi ki iss duniya mein kuch sachai nahi bachi.." she said in her mind and opened her eyes. Determined to find the answers to her questions she set of to find Raghu...

She walked out and saw Raghu working out on his terrace...She opened the mansion gate and ran upstairs. Battery and charger saw her with the corner of eyes but didn't stop her like before..Raghu heard the sound of footstep and a crroked smile crept on her face. The sound she could detect from anywhere. "Antara!!" hee whispered and titled his neck. He saw her running towards him. He placed down his weights and started to wipe of his sweats from his toned muscles...Antara came up to Raghu and stood in-front of him panting...

Raghu: Kya hua Miss Kaul...?

Antara: Wo..ermm..Mujhey tumsey baat karni hai...

Raghu: Bolo...

Antara: Raghu jab bhi meh mushkil meh hoti hu...Tum hamesha mujhey bacha letay ho...Kyu?..

Raghu: Kyu ki..Tu meri basti meh rehti hai...Aur yeh meri zimidaari hai kit u safe rahay

Raghu started taking steps forwards while Antara took steps back..Until she hit the pilaar behind her...She tried to run away but Raghu blocked her from both sides...

Raghu: Jab bhi tumay meri jaroot hogiy...Meh tumaray boolanay sey pehley waha ponch jao gah...Yeh Raghunath Naik ka wada hai...

Antara looked deeply into his eyes...Raghu was also lookind deep into her hazel eyes..He could see all the pain she was going through...Antara slightly tilted her head trying to read his eyes which were full of concern for her...

Antara: Kya lagti hoon main tumhaari?..

Raghu: Sabkuch...

Raghu realized what he just said and released her and turned around...Antara stood on the same spot...Her eyes automatically turned to Raghu's wrist...She saw it has covered with a leather belt and a hanky...She walked up to him and made him turn around...She lifted up his hand and was going to remove the hanky when he grabbed her hand and stopped her...

Antara: Kya hua Raghu...??

Raghu: Yeh tu kya kar rahiy thiy?..

Antara: Tumhari hanky nikal rahiy thiy..

Raghu: Kyu?..Nahi nikaal sakti...

Antara: Kyu?..Kyu pehntay ho tum yeh?..

Raghu: Yehitch To apun ka style hai..aur wo Varun dhawan to bhi yeh hi pehtah hai..Haina...

Antara slightly smiled and left from there...She had to somehow remove that hanky.

Antara: Hmm... aaj kaal bare style kar rahe ho..varun dhawan ke sath baat baat pe apni compare kar rahe ho... baat kya hain?!

Raghu: Arey kya karein yaar.. woo kya hain naa ki uss varun dhawan ke sath apne competition lag gaya hain..

Antara: competition!! par kyun?!!

Raghu: ee har baat tujhe jaan ni hain kya?!!

Antara: Tum agar meri har baat jaan na chahte hoo too main kyun nahin?!

Raghu: Arey kuch naii meri maa... apun wpp bas... kuch naii...

Antara: Aaj kaal bahut badle badle se lagte ho...

Raghu: badla badla sa?!! Kya matlab hain tera...

Antara: choro kuch nahii.. mujhe office ke liye late ho rahi hain.. (Antara watched her wristwatch and said..)

Raghu(huffed): Bach gaya...

Antara: bach gaya?! Kiss sey?!!...

Raghu: Arey aur kiss sey... tere question bank se... kitni sawal poochti hain yaar... itne sawal to school mein teacher bhi nahin poochta...

Antara: Raghu!!..

Raghu:Arey ankh kya dikha rahi hain?! Tere sawal se apun too kyaa.. prime minister bhi pareshan ho jayega... misskaul.. tujhe naa... woo reporter ban na chahiye tha... yaa fir woo kaun banega crorepati ka host hona chahiye tha... wahan ekdum feat ho jati tu!...(he said teasingly)

Antara nodded her head in disappointment. Seriously he was master in teasing! She understood that it was not easy to get something out of him. She had to do more hard works. Disappointedly she moved back to the stairs of balcony. "ee miss kaul naraz ho gayi kya?!!" raghu asked from her behind with wide grin. "Choro raghu!! ab mujhe adat par chuki hain.. mujhe pata hain kit um mujhse sidhe mooh kabhi baat nahin karoge.." she moved back for a while and said those angry words to him. she again moved towards the stairs with angry pace. Raghu stood there enjoying her cute angry face. Antara was about to get down the stairs when her phone rang, "hello!!" she picked the phone. "Antara!!!" a cold hard voice came from other side. Antara shook allover!! She recognized the voice of devil at it's first chance. "Satya!!!" her mouth dried in fear. Satya chuckled. "wow I am impressed antara. you recognized me at firstr place!! Wow!!" a mocking laugh came from other side.

Antara: why are you calling me now satya? What do you want from me?

Satya: nothing but revenge misss antara kaul!!

His dark voice again started to shiver down her spine. His voice floated from other side.

Satya: what did you think antara that I forgot you?! no antara!! satya naik can forget anything but not the enemies! And you are one of them now.. remember antara I told you that you have to pay for my each and every drop of blood which was caused by raghu!! yes antara you have to pay back!! and now the ball is on my court... Don't you understand, well let me explain. Just after some weeks, our collage is about to open. And raghu won't be there with you. So antara only you and me!! Tab raghu tumhe kaise bachayega mujhse antara?!!!!" His evil laugh roamed in her ear. She quickly cut the phone with a deep fearfull gasp. She was sweating all over and her eyes were wide in anticipation. "ms kaul!!" She heard his voice and turned back funding raghu standing just at her front. Her fearful eyes met his concerned orbs. Raghu noticed from th distance that how her face changed color while the phone call came. Sensing the danger she immediately moved to her side. Looking at her pale face he understood that it was something very big matter. "Kya huya?! tera chehera safedkyun oar gaya?!" he asked worriedly. "satya!!" she just uttered a single word and raghu;s face hardened. "Kya??!!! Satya!!! Uss fatichar ne call kiya tha tujhe?!! kya kahan usne?!! Tune mujhe phone kyun nahin diya... " raghu hold her shoulder and asked her with frustrated voice. Antara looked at raghu with wide eyes and said slowly, "woo... satya... woo kahe raha tha ki... woo mujhe collage mein..." she couldn't say anything more as her voice chocked. A lone tears escaped from her eyes. "Arey mskaul!! Shant ho jaa... kuch nahin huya... apun hain na.." he gently brushed her tears and cupped her face, "bol kya kahan uss fata poster ne?!" he asked. Antara took a deep breath and told him everything. "S**a!!!" raghu kicked his foot in anger after listening to everything. "Ab kya karoon main raghu?! Main collage too nahin chor sakti... final exam hain mera vacation ke baad... aur woo satya bhi wahan rahega!!... ab kya hoga raghu... Tum too wahan collage mein jaa bhi nahin sakte..colllage tim emein students ke ilabha aur koi wahan allowed nahin hain!!" she said worriedly. "Ee allowed nahin hain matlab?!! Sun tere uss cololage ke rule book mat dikha apun ko... apun khud apna rule banata hain.. agar tujhe bachae ke liye mujhe uss collage ka gate tor ke andar ghusna para too apun woo bhi karega..." he said with confident voice. "mujhe pata hain raghu!! par isme mushki; mujhe hi hogi.. agar meri wajah se collage mein koi chaps huya too principle sir mujhe rusticate kar dengey!!!" she said worriedly. "hmmm!! Yee too locha ho gaya yaar..." raghu scratched his face, "ek baat bata!! Collage time pe bahar ka koi nahii andar jaa sakta... sirf student kyun?!! Par chutti ke time pe andar jaa sakta hain kya?!" he asked. "haan!! Holidays ya vacation pe outsider allowed hain!!" antara said. "too chal abhi apun ke sath tere collage mein!!" raghu said dragging antara. "abhi??!!" antara was startled. "haan abhi!! Dekh ab tu chik chik mat kar aur chal!!" without giving her any other chance to resist, raghu dragged her downstairs and however antara had to follow him. "ee battery... gari nikal ne ko bol apna..." raghu said loudly going downwards with her.


Written by IFZA and edited by editing team.

Edited by ifians - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
excellent amazing update
good job ifza

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