RANTARA FF - Difficulties Faced in love ch-1 part-12 pg 12 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
very nice update dear..i loved it😳
antu tried to make him bit happy..aww raghu likes her company..
story is going very interesting😃
tfpm..its okay give long update next time
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Read the last two parts and they were just lovely!

Keep up the amazing work! (:
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Nice update 😊
Rantara had a sweet conversation 😊
raghu is admiring her beauty 😳
do continue soon
thnx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Just too good yaar
loving it
pls cont asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Hey Hi all , so finally finally and finally I got time 2 update my FF , it's been really tough 2 be faraway frm my Rantara and DDEJ
u all knw why i'm late dis time so I will not waste more time and just start -
Happy Reading 😊
Chapter - Love Express (Varanasi To Delhi )
Part - 4
"I am repenting d fact dat I was birn in a doctor's family. Ever since I was born , my father started nourishing dreams of seeing me as a doctor. As I grew of my adolescence , I was unsure about wat I wanted frm life . But now I know wat fills my heart wid excitement and ardor. I hve a strong desire 2 be a fashion designer . I hve assisted a boutique n even she strongly feels I hve dis talent . I dared and spoke about it 2 my father. He simply laughed at me ." Antara's tone was full of sadness. She further informed Raghu about her failure in cracking any MBBS entrance for 2 years. She hung her head in total sadness . Raghu waited a few seconds until it dawned on him dat was required 2 make a move. It was his turn now 2 remove d covering of sorrow frm her heart. He looked here and dere but nothing cme 2 his mind while Antara's face still looked grumpy. He had never performed such a task before in life, d task of handling a beautiful girl wen she was disconsolate. Time was running out and he wanted his timing 2 be perfect as d timing of Bollywood heroes. The hero is always close 2 d heroine at d time of her need and only dat makes d heroine fall 4 him. Imagine d case wen d hero is late and d bad man has already left after playing wid heroine's duppatta publicly , or d thief running away wid d heroine's purse is far beyond d reach of d hero. Noe here hero cannot dream of a happy married life wid d heroine b'coz he missed it. After hearing a big " Come On " dat came frm inside Raghu , he asked her , "Do u think ur father loves u ?"
Antara looked into Raghu's eyes and said, "Yes ".
"So it's highly unimaginable da such a father wud ever steal d happiness of his daughter. Yu just got 2 attack his emotions and i'm sure u will get him on ur side." Raghu exerted faintheartedly.
As soon as he finished sayinf dis, he made an attempt 2 observe Antara's face 2 see if he had made any difference. And as a matter of delight 4 him, d difference was clear; dat glitter had returned 2 her eyes. Having managed 2 cheer a beautiful girl , which was not an easy job 4 him, he felt like " The Badshah Shahrukh Khan ".
"Thanks ! I think it has been my fault only as I never convinced him d way I shud hve." Now in Raghu's mind he was overjoyed; somehow I had managed 2 give her hope. The next few minutes passed in silence . They both realized d need of silence 4 a few moments. Antara rested her head on d window pane. She appeared expressionless while she gazed out of d window , though hardly anything was clearly visible . The Sun was still 2 set , and it glistened on Antara's face through d black window pane , providing a golden glow 2 it. Raghu rummaged into his bag and emerged wid a short storybook as he didn't want 2 sit clumsily and lost, facing a girl who caused tingling of his spine very time he looked at her face. He started flipping through d pages of d book, struggling 2 conceal his desire dat demanded his eyes 2 be on d girl who sat in front of him. Way in dis world was going 2 hold his interest better dan gazing at dis beautiful creation of God ? He decided 2 allow myself a look at Antara again. He raised his head and now he foung her working on her nails in an attempt 2 give dem a better shape . Raghu pondered if there was any room at all 4 improvement, dey were already very beautiful . The moment he realized he was staring at Antara . he looked away , but by dat time it was too late n their eyes met.
So ok this is all 4 today , I hope u all enjoyed reading it
I'm writing small Parts as I think it will be easy 4 me 2 write as well as 4 u 2 read , hope u all agree wid me
So tata , phir milenge !!!! 😃
Edited by shivika838 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Nice update Shivika😊
I like Rantara conversation
Raghu gave an idea to Antara to make her father agree with her decision to become a fashion designer
Raghu stealing glances of her😳
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
So finally it ws raghus turn to..
Console antara 😛... hmmm
N he did dat...raghu drooling over
Antu 😳...
Nice update.. n hope ull update soon
Tkcr 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
oh so sweet update shivi..😳
rgahu felt like"the badshaah shahrukh khan".😎..that hero heroine track was very funny..bt its a fact in movies!😆
raghu seems like feeling more n more for antu..😳
tfpm dear..n update soon😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Lovely update shivika 😊
this time raghu consoled antu nd gave her advice 😉
Raghu full too drooling on antu hehe
Update soon
thnx for pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40

Hey , wat's up everyone !!!!😃

I'm back wid next part of my FF , thanks everyone 4 ur response 4 my FF it's really encouraging
Ok so I will not wait much time and get started , 1 2 3 go...
Wish u all a very happy and enjoyable reading -😛
Chapter -1 Love Express (Varanasi To Delhi )
Part- 5
"It seems books r ur best pals," Antara chortled . Raghu was speechless 4 a few seconds wid a shy smile showing up on his face. He opened his stuttering mouth widout any words stored in it wid a response.
"No, I was just..." He left d sentence hanging as he steadily kept d book beside him.
"U were just...?"
"I was just reading dis short story... Ah... quite an interesting one!"
"So aren't u going 2 share ur interesting story wid me ?" She demanded as her eyes narrowed and her upper and lower eye lashes kissed each other more frequently. He swallowed harder, struggling 2 cme up wid some story. He reached 4 his book quite discreetly as he cud'nt think of any escape frm those brown eyes.
"Hey hey ... no classroom reading please. I want 2 hear ur story in ur own words," Antara said. Her eyes widened like an ocean dis time.
"Of course... why not," he stammered
"So let's get started," she said excitedly , elongating her dark pink glossy lips in a heart stopping smile.
Raghu summoned enough courage 2 open his mouth , but widout any story wid him. He was hardly reading any story.
"I don't think it will hold ur interest," He said in a few broken sentences.
"Don't lie; u hve already told me it's interesting . So dre u go," she spoke wid varying expressions.
Now he realized he had 2 think of smething but it was as difficult as finding a bucket full of water in a desert at dat precise moment. After taking a few seconds , he was struck by d idea of narrating her d story of sme movie. Still dere was risk in case she realized it was d story of sme film n not an original one frm d book. He choose 2 play safe; He picked an old movie n not a latest one. After taking 5 minutes 2 prepare himself, he opened his mouth.
"It's about 2 men- james and victor, they r kind of thieves. Once dey go 2 a village called Gabriel. James and Victor meet Taylor who is d village chief. Taylor persuades James and victor 2 agree 2 fight Gabriel and free d whole village frm his threat. And yeah, taylor (D village thief) ia a man wid only one hand. Years ago his other hand was axed by Gabriel so it ends wid james and victor killing Gabriel . But sadly, james also gets killed fighting wid Gabriel." The story was over and now Raghu breathed . Antara was startled and he noticed she was controlling her laughter. The next moment she asked 4 his book and he gave it 2 her in diffidence . She gave a quick look 2 d page of contents and closed d book wid a big smile.
"Raghu, there is no such story,"
"There is .. I am sure.. I just read.." He fumbled . He said 'shit' in his imagination.
"Dear, it just can't be b'coz it was ur own Englis remake of Sholay starring Amithabh Bachhan and Dharmendra,"
Antara articulated dis time and laughed like mad.
Ok guys , this is all 4 today , hope u all laughed and enjoyed while reading dis
Plz leave ur reviews in d comment boxes below , it encourages me 2 write more a lot 😊
Tata , Phir Milenge!!!! 😛

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