**Tera Sukkon Ya Junnon Tera-Rantara FF**[Thread-1] - Page 82

Originally posted by: honeybees22

Yayy u finally updated yaar

Yup finally
it took ages didnt it??

U know veery well
seriously mereko samj nai araha ke mei kya kahu tujhe..

Yedi log soch samajh kee kab bateein karne lage?!!🤣
i am running out of flipping words urghh

Oye jyada running mat kario...😆
the starting made me cry so much.. i look like a pink zombie right now aahh😭 mereko rona agaya.
rhea is so understanding yaar

Likhte huye mujhe bhi rona aa gaya tha😭
she was shocked to hear raghu done this😲 mei bhi shocked hogai yaar

Tu kyun shock hoo gayi.. tujeh too pata tha😆
chalo koi to hope mila mujhee

Hmmm..😊
i think in future when antu knows raghu a bit more.. she will rethink about this like you said to me oncee hehe

He he...😆
but antu is going thru so much

I know her sufferings won't lessen up so easilly
thank god she finally opened upto someone.. that too her sis rhea

Yes...Sis bonding is always so special naa😛
i just dont know what to say yaar.. completely out of words for this

Out of words hain too expression se samjha do😆
itna lamba update tha yaar.. hand massage du kya?😳

Kar de😆
diary nai mila😲😲

Mr Diary hawa mein furrr...😆
abhi firse antu ka tension shuru hoagya yaar..

Yup...
naik sadan mei drop kardia...
abhi to party shuru huyi hai..😉

Yahan paarty kahan see aa gaya?!😆
the guards. shukar hai tali hoke sogaye

Useless guards raghu nee alsi bana diya hain sabko😆
raghu ka itna tareef kiya is update mei yaar.!!😳

uske hote huye koi bhi andar nahi ghusse ga lolzz

Uski jitni tareef karo kam hain.. he is like one man army!!😎
machar ko bhi special mention diya.. wah bhai kya baat hai..

ussey main kaise bhool sakti hoon?!!😆
hayee i would seriosuly have been shocked if she climbed the balcony and fell on raghu hahah.. my brain is working over time right now sowie😆

Yaar woo cat woman nahin hain🤪... Pata hain human pyramids char liya tha matki for kee time but uss ney school sports mein sikha tha yee sab... but wahan baalcony climb karne kii training too nahin di jati...😆... aur waisey bhi when u have a stair why should u climb?!!🤣
hayla chorni bane anadar chali gaye

Chorni ban ne kaa pahela exam for antu!!🤣
wont the cc cam catch her.. ?? agar kajal ke dukaan ne dekh liya to kya hoga

She took the route of balcony avoiding main door cause the CC cam was near the main door.. and don;t worry kajal kii dukan ussey dekhe uss sey pahele woo saf ehand mein pauch jayega.. u know whom i am talking about!!😆

raghu ko stare kiya wo bhi 5 mins😲😲

ussye sure hona tha naa ki raghu soo gaya kii nahin.. she was not drooling on him okk?!🤣

mera doubt ajj sach hogaya.. antu jungli billi hai yaar.

Woo billi nahin.. raghu ki sherni hain...😎

kitna smartly anadar chali gaye

She is smart no doubt.. thats how i tried to show her.. But also there was a bit childlike nature and imaturity in her.. actually antara here consist of so many shades
raghu wo to neend he nai ayi yaar..
wo dream bhaut powerful tha kya😳 uska after affect raghu ke sleep chori kar liya
antu bani sleep chorni.. 😆

Aur sath mein raghu kaa dil chorni bhi kyun?🤣
chalo ji raghu ko dekhte he pata chal gaya ke lady bheem aye hai darshaan karwane..haha bad joke na?

Very bad joke..🤣
han yaar even i was wondering why he was just lying there doing nothing but staring at her
raghu to kuch kuch huwa when antu stared at his handsome body haha
raghu ka Loveria worse horaha hai ise doctor antu ke zarurat hai hehe

Antu ko abb doctor bhi ban na parega?!! 🤣
he was right behind her and she didnt notice anything.. lagta hai antu ko loveria abhi tak nahi huwa but symptoms ajagye😳

symptoms... LOL...😆
and finally usne poke kiya..
mereko pata tha antu ka reaction.. i am not surprised.. stiff and cold is normal now..

Yup...😆
abhi mere 3ps ka entry hogai..

Party time for hina..😆
pulling se start huwa hayla...

3Pa kaa sab sey pahele P--- Pulling!!😆
raghu ka feelings are getting on his head aww..
even her anger and hard gaze made him mesmerized yaar.. kya loveria hai yaar

bahut khatarnaak loveria hain.. Tum soch bhi nahin sakte kii ye loveria kahan jaa ke pauchega!😉
ye sab sirf teri updates mei hota hai yaar👏
antu ne use pin mara😡😭 hayla
raghu ko kashmir wala escape yaad aygaya or mujhe bhi hehe

Acha jii?!😉
push bhi aya.. yayyy🥳

3Ps kaa 2nd P...pushing😆
raghu ko sab kuch acha lagta hai..
the feel of her soft and delicate body against his rough tough and strong hayla mei to red hogai yaar☺️
for raghu it was a damn good feeling uff.. mere liye bhi

Ahem Ahem.. Hinu control..😆
and finally
pinning.. my favvv... haylaa

I know😆
usne raghu ko nail mara😳 mixed feelings

Mera bhi yahin haalat huya tha likhte time😆
raghu ko aya gussa and pinned.. mei to dreamy hogai yaar
tune mera red red murder karida is update ke sath paroo ab mera kya hoga😲

Don't worry... main hoon naa.. main tujhe kuch nahin hone doongi😉
tashan bhi shuru hogaya in dono mei
kaka ne maari entriyaan ke rantara ke baji ghantiyaan re taan

Kya gana hain!!😆

antu to bari ban rahi thi ab kya huwa darling🤣 heart pounding hoagya

Aise situation mein kis kaa heart pounding nahin hoga re... upar see itna handsome banda hain sath mein🤣
raghu jo bindass hota hai worried and alert hogaya antu ke liye.. hayee loveria ka affect

Bilkul!!😉
kajal ke dukan urghh wo kaha se tapki
upar ke
asmaan se tapki khghoor mei atki gandi aurat🤢🤢🤢

Sahi kahan ree🤢
more or less bhi ayagai.. kya yaar ye 2 idiots kaha se ayega

Apne kamre se😡
raghu to antu ko leke wooshh thin air mei gayabb haha ab kon doondega

sahi kahan😆
antu thought he would hand her over haww.. but he didnt feelings change karlo antu darling hehe
she actually calmed down.. raghu assured her aww

Kuch Kuch Hoo Raha Hain... Kyun?!😉
kaka ke ears ke to mei..😡😡

unki taraf jaraha hai.. hope he doesnt see them
waiting to find out how antu gets her diary from our raghu😳

He he... la la land mein puach gayo humari hinu..😆
pls cont asap

Originally posted by: RaNtara4vr

Ok ji...😊... so here r my thoughts continued...😃...

Bring it on😉

Ohh ji...it ws a total shocker for me...i got stunned...😲...Rhea came to kno d truth...dint expect dat...totally stumped...dat too in dis way...😲...

Well it was already planned this way..😊

so casually she lied to stay back wid Antu...

...n Riuu ji ne Dhamaka kar diya...🤓......😆...

Arey maine kya kiya?!!

...actually dimaag se nikal gaya...k 1st chappy mein aapne mention kia tha...😃...but e1 den i dint think she wud come to kno like dis...n comparitively early...i mean abhi Antu ko Mumbai aaye huwe 1 month bhi nahi hua na...🤔...

I told before that it is preplanned story...😊

Hats Off to u Riuu ji...hw maturely u hav etched Rhea's reaction n Antu-Rhea's convo...just wonderfully superb...👏...👍🏼...

Totally loved it...❤️...

Thank You!😊

Ok...so in d coming parts...face-off k chakkar mein... koi bhaari gadbad kar na de Rhea..😕..Bechari Antu...kya-kya sambhalegi...aur kaise...🤔...

Aur bhi bahut kuch anna hain jii

Lekin aapki baaton se toh lagta hai...k Rhea will b a great support to Antu aftr dis Sach ka Khulasa on her......

Yup😳

am waiting for d upcoming parts......eagerly...😃...n aapne aapka siggie change kar diya...plz iska matlab bhi bata dijiye...😳...

Siggies cchange kar diya?!.. i didn't get that😕

gtg nw..agli baar continue karoongi...🤗...😳...😃...

Originally posted by: RaNtara4vr

Ok am gonna review frm chprt 20...😊...and m nt sure if may mix up othr chaptrs scene..🤓..😕..pehle hi warning de doon...😆...shayad chota sa ho kahi pe...😊...

Okk i understand...😆

Raghu still heraaan-pareshaan of Antu's ignorance.....Aftr Antu-Rukku reachd Basti safely...bechaari Antu...😔...kitna sambhalegi n chupayegi......Raghu was expecting an Outburst kind of reaction...😡...but she walked away quitely...😕...with all d pain n hurt...(...Ohh...shes so draind out ...yaar......)...n Raghu notices everything...he is aware of each n evry minute emos shes going thru...but only problem...cant find d root cause......

The outburst of antu won't happen soon.. She has already become cold and emotionless towards raghu... She has created the unbrakable wall around her... to break that wall will not be so easy for raghu.. he had to wait so long for that..

n wen he wud cum to kno...dat he too is involved......Bagwaan jaane kaise sambhalega...n kya-kya hoga...(...n Aap bhi jaane...kyunki pehle likhna toh aapko hi hai...😆...😃...)...

Well i am not gonna say anything about that phase... i want to keep that for future...

Yeh kya kar dia Rukku ne......Pehle toh Sandal-pahunchao Mission mein atka tha...aur ab Paise pahunchao...😲...😆...Raghu kahi yeh na soch raha ho..AATAH MAAHJI SATAKLI......(...Ok...kind a bad joke...🤢...)...Pehle haath mein Sandal...aur ab chutte Paise lekar Dimaag ki baji hui hai...Raghu Bhai ki......lekin pahunchaye bina chain bhi toh nahi milega...Jiski chiz hai...us tak pahunchane mein...Ya jab tak use woh na mile...Raghu bhai try karthe hi raheinge...Haar nahi maanege...Golden Hearted Gangster aftr all......Apne taraf se har mumkin khoshish karte hi rahenge...

Yup thats also true... antu jitna bhi apna sach chupana chahein.. raghu koo avoid karein raghu on't leave her...😆

Antu a Selfless Soul...😊...n dis revenge-justice seeking mission is taking a toll on her...n spending time with her family n friends eases her pain...atleast to a little extent...🤔...

may it b wid Rukku, Mayank , Rhea. Maama-maami, or humara Ishuu...

Wow yaar..kya parallel draw kia aapne...Rapunzel ka...Antus situation resembles it...n hw innocently yet deeply u explained it thru Ishu...😊...Hats off Riuu...👏...Awesome...👍🏼...

Thank You... My all stories have some kind of impression of fairy tell charterers..here raghu and antara's story have the impression of my to fav disney movies.. Tangled and Beauty and The beast.. Mostly The 2nd one.. beauty and the beast..

(...yea i came to kno k Flynn Rider(FR) pe aapka dil aa gaya...❤️...😃...Lekin uska asli naam toh Eugene hai na...jo baad mein reveal hota hai...kahin aap bhull toh nahi gayi..ya phir aapko FR hi jyaada pasand hai...😆...😉..

Yup.. u are write,, mujhe flynn rider naa, hi jyada pasand hain!!😆)...

Aur yeh aaya Apna HERO...jab Ishu ne Antu ko apne HERO ko imagine karne ko kaha...ise kehthe hai..Kismat...lekin yeh ishaare samajne ko na jaane aur kitna waqt lagega in dono ko...actually sab ko...

Well kismat kee ishare samajh nee mein sab koo time too lagta hain!!😆

Ok gtg nw..will b back to continue my pending reviews...tc..Yedi Behna...🤗..❤️...n Happy RaNtara thoughts n dreams..😊......

Originally posted by: sanjinimala

Fabulous job as usual! 👏
Wonderfully written,first part was emotional,and you nicely penned it down
I loved rantara encounter 😳
You described everything beautifully ⭐️
Things said and done between rantara were just superb 😳
I loved Raghu's ouch! Woh bhi twice 😉
Hehe..hats off yaar! 👍🏼
One word for this update, BRAVO!!!! 👏
Thanks heaps for updating
Please soon continue karneka 😉

Originally posted by: honeybees22

Amazing banner paroo 🤗

Originally posted by: Rohan30

Fabulous job! 👏
Very well written ⭐️
Take a bow from officer Rohan
Miss India rocks! 😎
Continue soon

Originally posted by: Nethravathi

Chapter 20

Sorry Main phirse late hogayi

Coming to the update

Ruksana madam toh SRK bangayi. Aur uski jabar jabar kabhi band nahi hota. Par Raghu ki nazar toh Antu par hain. Antu toh ek hi din main famous bangayi shetty ke aadmiyon ko sabak sikaakar. Par Shetty chup nahi baitega iss baat se Raghu pareshaan hain.

Udaar ke paise aur adhoori baat mujhe bhi pasand nahi hain.Raghu toh sochte sochte tak gaya ki 10Rs ko Antu tak kaise pahunchaaya jaaye. Saala 10Rs. Bhi Raghu ki neend udaaraha hain Antu ki tarah

Antu madam Ishu se baat karke kush horahi thi par humaare Raghu miya ki entry ne usse bhi khatam kardiya. Haaye kya concentration hain Raghu. Aisi concentration main karpaati toh exams main top karti. Uske har moments par nazar hain tumhaari. Antu itna bhi gussa teek nahi yaar. Raghu kitna handsome hain tu usse doosri planet ki alien ki tarah dekthi hain. Raghu toh irritate hogaya Antu ki behaviour se. Vo kitna bhi shaanti se baat kyu na karein Antu madam toh badak jaati hain. Vo Raghu kya kehta hain Jwalamukhi ki tarah.

DM ki naam sunte hi Antu paagal hojaati hain. Aur Raghu ki vaat lagjaati hain.

Originally posted by: Nethravathi

Chapter 21

Antu ka ro roke bura haal hain. Vo aur kar bhi kya sakti hain. Apne past ke dard ko bulaana itna aasaan nahi hota

Antu smiled seeing pigeons aur Rukku madam bhi aagayi Antu ko hasaane ke liye

Raghu ko bura laga Antu se aise kadwi baatein kiya. Par ab pachtaane ka kya fayda. Antu pehle se hi tumse gussa hain aur ab vo aur bhi badak jaayegi

Antu knew that Raghu was following her but she could not see him. She could feel him. She was scared to go to station after Raghu's warning. When Raghu is here why to fear? Shetty ke aadmi ne acid laaya Antu pe daalne keliye😡😡 Acchi tarah se dulaayi ki Raghu ne

Originally posted by: Nethravathi

Chapter 22

Antu bhaag milka bhaag ke scene enact karrahi thi aur Raghu uske peeche peeche. Hamesha aisa hi hota hain. Ye dono bhaagte rehte hain.

Train ke chain kheechliya Raghu ne aur Antu madam keechke lejaaraha hain. Antu phirse chot lagaaliya apne pao main aur Raghu mia phirse Antu ke doctor bangaye. Antu pehli baar Raghu ke bina nafrat se dekha. Good sign yaar

Rukku bhi na smell pehchaankar Antu ke ghar gusgayi. Antu was frustrated tht black marks of grease is not going from her dress. She is trying to remove the dark spots of her past which makes her cry.

Rukku ne Antu ko Naik sadan legayi. Haayee ab toh Raghu ko balcony se Antu ko dekhne ki mehnat nahi karni padegi😆😆😆

Originally posted by: Nethravathi

Chapter 23

Rukku ne Antu ko Pari maa yaani Ajji se milaane legayi. Ajji toh bahut kush hogayi Radha rani ko dekhkar. Antu ne Dance karnese mana kardiya. Par Ajji bhi kam ziddhi nahi hain mana hi liya Antu ko

Raghu to Antu land main khogaya tha par iss daayan kabhi bhi uska peecha nahi chodti😡😡😡 exactly uss macchar ki tarah

Raghu mia tho pink flower ko dekhkar Antu ko imagine karne lage aur sad hogaye jab Antu ko apne se door jaate huwe dekha toh

Ghar aaya toh waha pe bhi Antu. Raghu tu har jagah Antu ko dekhta hain. Apna mooh band rakha karo yaar jab Antu ko dekhte ho toh nahi toh macchar gus jaayega🤣

Antu madam phirse phisli aur as usual humaare hero Raghu waha bhi haazir😉😉😉

Antu ki baatein Raghu ko pareshaan karrahi hain