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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143


Exactly or voh naadi kinare wale pe mera sath zaroor deyty i know her 🤣

yaar nadi kinare nahi n yaar... kuch too sharam karo...😆
okk bye😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ifians


yaar nadi kinare nahi n yaar... kuch too sharam karo...😆
okk bye😳


Arey baba im joking 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
ufff ...aaah ...aaahhh...that was tooo hawt Ria babe...!!!!
u blew my mind away comletely...it was dangerously hawt n sensuous ...loved it ...enjoyed it thoroughly ...so finally Raghu antara ek ho hi gaye ...yepppiii...it was such a bliss to read this story ...i am deeply in love wth ur story ...cont soon ...i wanna see the next reaction of Rntara after this ...
waiting/...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ooopss...I'm late 😆
Res 😆

unres 😊

Well baby...what should I say today???
Its beyond what I had imagined...
I don't think it could have been more graceful than this...

it feels like I'm a 5 year old kid and suddenly a surprise gift is placed in front...making me wonder what's kept inside...Thats how your update works for me.

I keep on guessing,what might be the surprise today?

Ria you always do which is something outta box...and that thing of yours is completely reflected in the updates.Everything is perfect as I don't find any flaws with your updates.

Ria I'm so sorry as I won't review it...but I would love to mention something which captured my heart...
The moment lightening struck and Raghu got a glimpse of Antara in that saree...
OMG...it was breathtakingly beautiful.

seriously I don't have the courage to review this update...Ria I loved it so much that I can't express..

Now what I'm waiting for is their first morning.. after declaring themselves to each other..

Sorry Ria, I'm travelling since 3 days so couldn't comment before.

Do continue soon.
Sending you a big teddy bear wala hug.

Love you my baby..mwah
Edited by PurpleSunset - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
credit for the line again goes to my ridz...😳

A hidden den of Mumbai,

"eee madan bhai!! Aap ka plan kaam to karega naaa?! Delho pahele hic hiss raghu ne mere naak pe dam kar rakha hain!!agar iss baar kaam nahin kara naa to..." shetty said quite angrily. "arey shetty bhai... tum tension mat lo... yee plan zaroor kaam karega..." madan said as his face became hard, "s**e... mere sare ke sare sathi o ko maar dala... aura b mere piche para hain... nahin chorega ussey..." madan said in a dangerous voice. "kaise madan bhai?? Humesha pakarne jata hain aur woo too jaise machle ki tarah pisalke nikal jata hain..." shetty said. madan let out an evil crooked smile. "lekin isss baar hum waar raghu pe nahin karengey... aise kisi pe karengey jismein uski jaan basti hoo!" madan said greeting his teeth. "aap kis ki baat kar rahe ho?!" shetty asked in confusion. "bata ta hoon... pahele iss raju ko ane de..."madan said. "madan bhai, aa gaya main..." raju said from the door. "a gaya!!... le aya jo lane ko kaha tha?!" madan asked. "jii haan madan bhai..." raju came and handover the envelop to madan. Madan took out a picture from the envelop and showed to shetty. "arey ye too raghubhai hain... par inke sath ye chokri kaun hain?" shetty asked in confusion looking at the photo. "antara kaul!!... jo raghunath naik ki sab se bari kamzori ban gayi hain!!" madan said in cold voice. something pooped in shetty's mind. "maine khabar liya hain shetty bhai..nayi nayi ayin hain naik basti mein ye antara... Raghu pagal hain iss larki ke piche... tumne dekha hain pichle kuch mahino se raghu ne koi lafra nahin kiya... iss liye kyun ki woo sara din bas iss antara ka picha karta reheat hain... aur yahin larki humara shikar hain... ispe nazar rakho shetty bhai... mauka milte hi utha lo... agar ye antara hath mein lag gayi naa to raghu ko hum jaise chahein nacha sakte hain..." madan said with a victorious laugh. "par madan bhai... raghu ka gussa too aap jaante hi ho naa...agar hum log iss larki ko utha la to kahin woo hum sabko upar naa utha de.." shetty said. "jyada socho mat shetty bhai... Yee pyar ki bimari naa insaan ko kamzor bana deta hain... aur raghu koo bhi yee bimari lag gaya... Aur issi ka fayda humein uthana hain..." madan said broading his nasty grin.

Through the glass of only single window of the room, the first ray of morning came inside the room. In the mid of the room they were lying on bed so cozily. Even in that drowsy state they were still wiggling slowly into each other's arm. Seemed like the intoxication of the last night didn't got over. Raghu's broad feature was placed on antara caging and covering her soft frame under him. his face was buried deeply in the delicate skin of her neck. His eyes were closed but his lips were still brushing slowly on her skin. His actions were affecting antara also. She was panting very slowly even though her eyes were closed. Her long hairs were scattered around her face and her swollen lips were trembling a bit due to slow gasps. Her fingers were still caressing his hairs slowly. Their entangled feature was covered by a quilt which was placed up to their chest. Imprisoned in each other's arm, they looked complete, content and inseparable. Antara took a deep breath and squeezed her eyes. slowly she opened her lids and at first she felt a heavy weight on himself and when her eyesight got clear she became aware of her position. He found herself lying underneath his hard corpse and there was not any single piece of thread in their body. her eyes became wide and whole feature heated up and turned red. Like usual, she tried to move out from his hold. But it was almost impossible for her to move a single cell of her feature under his pressure. Raghu was badly caging her under him. she slightly moved her face sidewise and found their clothes mingled on the floor like useless garbage. Her face flushed more looking at them. she understood that she was stuck badly. There was no way for her to escape and she had to wait till he woke up. She sighed and closed her eyes. she felt his tempting lips brushing on her nape. She felt the hot sensation there on her skin. Her tiny feature was fitted so easily under his hard corpse. One by one, the moments of last night flashed in her eyes. how both of them were carried away by emotions and submitted themselves to each other. His rough and hard caresses and intensified kisses over her skin felt so possessive and strong yet full of care and immense love. He didn't only touched her mortal form, he touched her soul and fulfilled them with his love. He made her him fully, eternally. Her heart pounded in joy at her thought. An wide smile spread on her face. It felt so good being in his strong arm, secured and protected. She was remembering about the moment when she first met him. she didn't know why she was unable to understand at first that she was destined to meet him. last night when raghu and she were deeply connected to each other she felt like her each and everything was made for him. antara caressed his hairs and brushed down her fingers caressing his neck. Her actions made raghu awake. Antara understood by his move that he had come out of sleep. She felt his smirk against his skin. Raghu snuggled through her hairs taking her lovely scent. Antara closed her eyes breathing heavily. He kissed deeply on the crook of her neck and lifted his face to get a view of his beautiful wife's face. he was sure that she was blushing red after the close encounter of last night. The view mesmerized him. Antara's face was literally glowing in the first morning light like never before. It seemed like after getting fulfilled by raghu's immense love, her pure beauty had started to shine fully. Her long hairs scattered lazily on the pillow and around her face, her closed eyelids and flushed chicks and mostly her slightly parted swollen lips looked breathtaking. He could still feel the taste of those tender petals. His eyes moved down to see her neck, throat and cleavages covered with the deep marks of love which he gave her last night. An irresistible smirk spread on his face while he remembered the honey taste of her soft skin. Antara felt his gaze on her and she slowly opened her eyes. her swollen lips parted into small but heavenly smile chocking his breath. Her warm hazels met his intense gaze. Both of them took a deep breath looking towards each other after their first night. Everything had changed between them from the previous night. Raghu lowered his face to her. antara didn't even try to move her gaze from him. she seemed lost. He placed his forehead on her which was covered with the smudged sindoor. He felt her soft bosoms rose up and collided with his hard torso as she took a deep breath affected by his closeness. He felt aroused yet again. his thirst didn't quenched last night. He wanted to feel her more and more. Raghu rubbed his nose aganst her nose with a naughty smile. "ummm..." antara whizzed a bit. he moved and kissed on her chicks making her red shade go deeper. He brushed rough stubbles on her soft chicks. "ummm... Kya kar rahe ho..." she asked in a slight irritated but still childlike voice. "wohich jo apun hameesha karta hain... tere se pyar..." he said in flirty yet deep voice making her heart ponder. Her face again got red. He continued to brush his stubbles on her chicks giving her pinching feeling. "raghu... chub raha hain!!.. mat karo naa.." she said in pleading voice. "acha!!... abhi tere ko chub raha hain... kaal raat ko to naii chuba..." he felt his skin getting warmed up. "bahut gandhe ho tum... mujhe pareshan karke bahut maza ata hain naa?!" she said whimpering. "waah re... abhi apun gandha ban gaya... kaal raat ko to mere ko aise zakar rahi thi.." he said frowning. "chup raho...maine aisa kuch nahi kiya..." she said in loud embarrassed voice looking away from her. "acha?!!... abhi dikhaoon kya?!!..." he raised his body a bit from her. she was still looking away from him. "dekh..." he said in firm voice. "nahin mujhe kuch nahi dekhna hain... jane do mujhe!!" she said in low and helpless voice. "dekhna to tere ko parega hi misscall..." he said in commanding voice. antara squeezed her eyes tightly. Raghu sighed and moved her face towards him. "eee misscall!! Akhein khol naa... ab apun se kyun sharma rahi hain?! apne pati se koi sharmata hain kya?!!" he said chuckling. Yet his voice was tender. "raghu kya dikhana chahte ho mujhe?!" she asked in feeble voice still closing her eyes. "wohich jo tune mere ko diya... tere pyar ki nishani... ek baar dekh na antara... dekh kaise apun ke seene mein bas gaya hain..." he said in his deep intense voice fluttering her heart. antara slowly opened her eyes and looked at his toned bear torso with dry throat. At first she took some time to understand then her eyes widened as she observed some light red marks on his chest and neck. That marks were none other than but the marks of her own lip gloss!! Her whole face turned red. "yee maine kab kiya?!!..." she couldn't resist the question that snapped out from her mouth. raghu laughed a little looking at her stunned face. "sone se pahele... Kya mast puppy maarta hain re tu...par afsoos ki sirf do ya teen diya...yaar puppy dene mein to kanjusi mat kar...free mein kuch aur bhi de deti..." he chuckled. "chup raho... kitne badmash ho tum... Jaldi se poch dalo.. warna koi dekh lega..." she lifted her hand to rub those lip gloss marks his chest. he quickly caught her hand firmly and looked in her eyes with a serious face. "koshis bhi mat karna..." he said firmly. "ye nishani mere ko meri antara ne diya hain.. ye apun kisi ko bhi mitane nahin dega.. aur nahi kabhi mitne dega..." he said in his dangerous killer voice. she breathed heavily looking at his intent eyes. "aur haan... Agli baar apun ko jyada pappiya chahiye misscall... itne se apna man nahin bhara..." he again teased her. "agli baar!!..." her eyes widened and face became hell red. "nahin to kya?!!..." he left her hand and caressed around the love bite mark he had given on the crook of her neck. Antara felt shiver by his rough finger's touch on her skin. There were several marks of his teeth grooved on her skin of neck and throat. The eternal impression of his right over her heart, mind, soul and body had been shown by those marks. "dekh apun ne kanjoosi naii ki... waisey bhi kanjoosi karna apne fidrat mein naii hain..." he said in deep voice. "raghu!!..." he flushed and said loudly. "kya?!! Abhi bhi yakeen naii aayaa... dikhana parega..." he asked quite naughtily. "kaha naa mujhe kuch nahin dekhna... mujhee bas jane do.." she said rolling her eyes. "aise kaise nahin dekhegi tu... abtoo apun tere ko dikha ke hi rahega.." he said and caught around her feature tightly causing her bosoms to collide heavily with his torso. Antara's breath chocked by his action. He caught around her tightly and started to pull her up to make her seat on the bed along with him. "raghu!!... kya kar rahe hoo?!!" she asked in fearful voice. "arey dar mat yaar... kha naii raha hoon tujhe... bas tujhe kuch dikhana hain..."he said and quietly tossed his body holding her so that she came on his top. He slowly lifted his body along with him and sat on the bed. He made her sit on his lap. Antara was squeezing her eyes shut and holding the quilt tightly to cover up herself. The quilt could only cover up to her bosoms. "eee misscall!!" raghu's deep voice roamed in her ear, "akhein khol aur saamne dekh..." he said. She couldn't deny his dominating voice. slowly she opened her eyes and the scene startled her. she didn't notice the large mirror set on the wall opposite to their bed. In the mirror, she could clearly see her state. her scattered tangled hair loosely fallen on her shoulder, her forehead covered with smudged sindoor, her deep red face and there were deep red marks of love bite on her hands, neck and throat, the impression of his intense love on her, sign of his victory over her everything. She was glowing like a full fledge flower came out from bud state. she looked complete with raghu's love. She flushed and lowered her gaze. Raghu caught around her shoulder giving a deep kiss on her neck. She sighed heavily and smiled still lowering her gaze. "dekha?!! Yahich hain apun ki antara..." he said deeply making her heart flutter. "raghu!!..." she said deeply but couldn't say further, anything didn't come out if her mouth but she just felt his immense love in her heart for him. she felt his hands sliding around her waists under the quilt and his face buried in her shoulder. "ek baar aur apun ka naam le naa antara... s**a, khud ka naam kabhi itna acha nahin laga..." He said in intriguing voice which thudded her heart loudly. "raghu!!..." she said in low voice blushing. "ek baar aur.." he said snuggling through her hairs. "raghu...!!!" she breathed heavily and closed her eyes as he kissed deeply in her neck and continued to brush her lips on her revealed neck giving Goosebumps all over her. the heat again raised between them. "aur ek baar..." he said in deep voice between his kisses. she obeyed him helplessly drowned by his maddening wet kisses. her breath chocked when his hand moved under the quite upward caressing her softness. "raghu!!..." she said in low feeble voice, "please ab jane do naa ...koi aa jayega..." she said in stumbled voice. "ane dee!!..." he said continuing his kissing on her nape. "raghu bahut ho gaya... ab choro naa... mujhe ajib lag raha hain..." she said in shy face. raghu raised his head and looked at her face with a frown. "ajib lag raha hain?!! suhag raat ka result itni jaldi aa jayega ye to mereko pata naii tha.." he said with a chuckle. "raghu!!.." she said loudly and elbowed him. god he was just so shameless. "chee!! Tum bhi naa..." she said in a loud angry voice, "bahut maza atta hain na mujhe pareshan karke?! Jaon baat nahin karungi tumse.." she looked quite miffed. "sorry!!..." he winked towards her, "woo kya hain naa... Tu gusse mein ekdum pataka lagti hain!!.." he chuckled making her more red, "par ek baat bata... tu iss halat mein ghar kaise jayegi?!!" he asked looking at her feature merely covered by the quilt. "oh god!!" she widened her eyes, "yee too maine socha hi nahin... mere kapre..." she looked towards the ground with wide eyes and looked towards her saree and dresses on the ground. "ab main ghar kaise jaoon!!.." she said worriedly. "arey to jane ko kaun kahe raha hain?! idhar hi rahe jaa naa..." he said with another chuckle. "nahin! Main yahan nahin rahe sakti..." she said. "kyun?!" he asked quite surprisingly. "mama mummy ko humari shadi ke barein mein pata nahin hain... jabtak unhe pata na chale main mujhe unke ghar mein hi rahena parega..." she said. "dhet... yee uncle aunty beach mein kyun aa gaye.. " he said ruffling his hairs in irritation. "kuch hi din ki too baat hain... woo ate hi main unhe sab bata dungi..." she said looking at his miffed face. he didn't tell that he was quite worried about antara's mama govind. Raghu knew that he would surely have problem accepting him. aunty jii was not that much strong gut but that uncle...!! However, who cared?! He know how to make him agreed. Antara let out her hand and tried to grab the saree from the ground. but she failed due to her odd position. She was facing problem to hold the quilt in her hand and to lift the saree with other hand. Raghu smilled a little and lifted the saree from the ground. his hand reached that easily and he handed over that to antara. she took that with a huge blush on her face. she properly wrapped the saree around her and got out of quilt. Raghu's piercing killer gaze looked at her feature top to bottom hardly covered by that thin black net saree. Antara felt that and became red. She didn't had courage to face his killer gaze. She quickly grabbed her things from floor and noticed an attatched room at side she went there and closed the door while his intense gaze was still following her. raghu noticed till the last time that how her blushing face was covered by the wooden door. He let out a deep sigh. Still her scent, her softness seemed attached to him.

Antara also find a little but arranged washroom on that other room and it was quite good for her. she really need to take a bath. Her feature had really gone stiff because she had to lie underneath his heavy feature all the night. She blushed again and again remembering all the moment. Each and every inch of her feature seemed to be containing his love marks. The slight soreness between her legs were reminding about the moment when he finally made her his and only his. That memory of the moment of heavenly pleasure, the content feeling to become one with the person to whom you were destined made her nerves alive. Her heartbeat rose again. She blushed and smiled widely hiding her face in her palm. She was still feeling hiss intense gaze on him. However she composed her with a deep breath and moved forward. She got everything which was required for her in that washroom. The cold water sooth her stiffness and made her free from the hangover of night at last. But still the memory and feeling was deeply imprinted inside her heart which no one could remove. She came out from the washroom jerking her hairs to clear to make them dry. As she came back to the previous room she didn't found raghu there but there was something in the bed which amused her. it was her blue full sleeve salwar which she saw at her closet last night. Who brought that here?! She sighed heavily. Who else could be rather than raghu?! only he could do that! but how did he managed to go inside their house. It was locked! But as she knew him, he could do impossible possible. She sighed and took the dress and changed her saree and wore that blue salwar. She got out of the room. It was so early in the morning and the basti was still silent. She found raghu standing near the railing leaning at front. The pink and blue checked dress with blue jeans really suits him good. Raghu sensed her and looked back to her smiling face glowing magnificent in first morning light. He let out the brightest grin she ever saw on his face. His eyes were gleaming in utter joy. He came near her at slow pace keeping his pleasant gaze on her. she stood there silently admiring his handsome and yet so innocent looking face. he came and stood in front of her supporting the frame of the door. Their eyes never left each other for a single second. Raghu leaned a bit and came near antara's face. "good morning!!...antara.." he said in his usual deep, irresistible manly voice. antara flushed a bit and lowered her eyes. "same to you!!..." she greeted her back sweetly. A silent pause occurred between them where raghu continued to admire her face which was glowing so brightly that morning and on the other hand, antara was busy in hiding her blushing face from him. "wooo tumne ye dress kahan se laya?! Ye too meri cupboard mein tha..." she asked curiously. "apne balcony ka darwaza too tu humesha khulla hi rakhta hain..." raghu said with a chuckle. "tum bandh rakhne do to naa.." she said with a slight frown. Both of them laughed a little. "okkk bye... abhi mujhe jana hoga.." antara said. "arey yaar.. apun jab bhi hi bolta hain tu bye kyun bolta hain re?!! ulti baat bol ne ki adat par gayi hain kya?!!" raghu asked in a quite miffed voice. "nahin!! Aisi koi baat nahin... actually, kaal subha mujhe phone aya thaa... aaj mera recording hain flamingo ke studio mein... too mujhe uske liye jana parega.. so I need to prepare!!" she said with a smile. "S**a uss hathi koo aaj hi recording rakhna tha..." he said in miffed voice. "arey tum pareshan mat ho... I promise, recording khatam hote hi main sidhe tumhare pass hi aungi.." she said smiling wider. Hisheart warmed up in immense happiness. "pkka!! Tu ayegi?" he asked for confirmation. "bilkul!! Pakka aungi... sara din tumhare sath bitaungi... ab khus?!!" she asked innocently. He frowned a bit. "sirf pyra din?!!... mere ko to ratein bhi teresath kaatna hain misscall!!" he smirked irresistibly. Her eyes widened and her chicks again caught the deep red shade. "abey tu itna tomato banegi naa to mere ko ekdin tomato ka dukan kholna parega..." he teased. "chup raho..." she pushed him a bit and run away hiding her blushing face. "eee misscall!!..." he screamed from behind, "arey ek good morning kiss to de jati... itni kanjoosi mat kar...raat ko mahenga paregaa..." he said with a smirk. antara didn't dared to look back. she just rushed down the stairs and ran towards her house with a huge smile on her face.

Back on the balcony raghu ruffled his hairs with a huge grin on his face. God!! He was getting crazzy!! Crazy for her more and more with each and every passing day!! he closed his eyes and felt his heart who was beating only in her name. Seemed like there was no sound of lub-dub, only the name antara could be heard with his each and every beat! He remembered about the moment last night when she literally surrendered herself to him. each and every moment when they got closer removing their each and every barrier and finally when he finally made her him completely, everything flashed on his mind and his heart got filled with so much content pleasure. He could clearly remember while going into her sleep her gentle fingers caressed his hairs and all of a sudden kissed on his chest twice gently, yet deeply and full with emotion. Her soft petals against his skin gave a warm heavenly feeling which he never had. he hold his heart which was running madly. "tum ho too aisa lag ta hain ki jee rahi hoon... tum nahin ho too lagta hain... zindagi khatama ho gayi hoo..." her words roamed in his mind giving him goose bumps. "apni akha life to tu hain antara..." he said slowly, "ab bas tere sath rahena hain yaar... hare ek min hare ek second bas tere sath rahena hain... ab ek min bhi tujhse door naii rahe paunga.." he said intently. She told him that she would be going to flamingo studio. What if he dropped him?! A huge grin spread on his face and he rushed outside.

ps: first of all a big big apology to all of you guyss... seriously i don't want to make you wait long but as i was too busy on these days so it became a bit late and thats why i also left with a shorter chapter this time. wanna add more but really didn't get time. love you all for the huge appreaciation for my prev chapter. love you all...🤗

Edited by ifians - 11 years ago
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FINALLY FINALLY!!!!!!😃

RII u finally updated u have no idea how long I waited for this update yaar u made me wait for so long
first part, I feel like laughing so hard right now
does shetty love to get beaten up by Raghu and this time whatever he is thinking is crazy =if he touches antara is like touching raghus life so this time shetty ka ram ram satya hoga finally
rantara ufff RI kitna murder karege yaar tu
itna intense update ufff I feel like a tomato right now
it was soo beautiful yaar
their cute nok joks and cute romantic moments wow
I love you RI yaar ur the best
congoo for becoming the CV of the week
pls cont asap and please dnt take long😭😛
Edited by honeybees22 - 11 years ago
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i am still typing baba... sorry i was so busy today... couldn't have time to finish,...but coming soon..😊
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Originally posted by: ifians

i am still typing baba... sorry i was so busy today... couldn't have time to finish,...but coming soon..😊

ok jaldi pls
its k yaar
waiting
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😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 RIII???
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sorry yaar... my net was going in snails speed in these days... so couln't update😭
but updated at last😊

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