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Nikkisha Roy

@Roy.nikki143

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Posted: 11 years ago

#771

Awesome awesome awesome 👏
Loved it so so much riyu 🤗

Edited by Roy.nikki143 - 11 years ago

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priyanka

@ankusanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#772

ria what to say dear??
again fab one yaar..lovely
beautifully written ..loved d way antu ws
blushing in d mrng n raghu ws teasing her
bout d lipgloss marks...yess hes crazy fr her..
awww he went to her room n brought her dress..
bt dat kamina shetty n his chamchas planning to
kidnap antara n hurt raghu...urggg...
raghu will surely kill dem.waiting fr nxt part ria..
.thanks dear n hugs fr d wonderful update dear

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Afy10

@Afy10

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Posted: 11 years ago

#773

Superb update 👏
rantara romance nd sweet moments
beautifully written 😉
shetty planning to kidnap antu
raghu wont leave him if he hurt her anyway 😡
he is so crazy for her 😳
waiting to read more
do continue asap
thnx for pm 😃 😛

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pampz

@pampz

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#774

OMG Ria ...Riaaa ...rIaaa ...yeh kya tha ???? hv gone totally fida on this update ...cant express how my deepest feelings arose deep from my heart ...and my heart is kust jumping and thudding loud in joy ...utter joy ... only u can do this to me Ria...

loved raghu's actions and his awesome dialougues ...the scene of showing Antara his love bytes on her body was just ummm...can find the appropriate word for that 😳😳😳...am overwhelmed ...

Raghu toh sach mein bohot badmash ho gaya ...bilkul besharam

loved it madly ..and enjoyed it thoroughly ,,,,,

and u know na vampu needs more ...😆

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Riddhima

@Khushi_Dillse

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#775

Wow ria...thank you dear for this long update...

Awww raghu subah subah apni misscall ko sataate ho...kya aadmi ho yaar...😆 she is feeling so shy...raghu to sach me naike basti ka spiderman hai...yaha se waha or waha se yaha...but now I m scared ...ye shetty yaar...antara ka kidnapping...ye raghu or antara ki khushi yo pe kala saaya...lagta hai next update action pack hoga...fabulous updet yaar...lovely...

Jab koi puchta hai mujse meri zindagi ki Qeemat

To muje yaad aa jata hai tera Muskurana...

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Purple

@PurpleSunset

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Posted: 11 years ago

#776

Ria...now give me a hug first 🤗
This was an extraordinary update ❤️
so blissfull...amazing and mesmerising too..
It was an absolutely unique update in every sense 👏
very subtle yet elegant and gracefull...👏
I got goosebumps all over my body while reading dis update 😳
Ria...to be very honest...this update made my heart flutter 😆
Awww...just ask my heart...how i'm feeling about this update bcuz words can't express them 😃
AND
Now its gonna become more exciting n thrilling with the upcoming twist. 😊
ohh man!...I'm just dying see my tough,arrogant and rowdy Raghu back.😳
hehe...I've already started dreaming about the next upcoming update...😆
I just hope that its thrilling...totally action packed and full of hardcore romance 😆 🤣
Ohh god...RIA...I CAN'T WAIT NOW 😆
So you gotta update soon and that too a looong one this time.
No escape for you. 😆
Love ya baby...mwah 🤗

Edited by PurpleSunset - 11 years ago