Will you be my VAlentine-os

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THIS ROMANTIC UPDATION IS DEDICATED TO MY LOVELY FRIEND "SUCHI" WHO ASKED ME TO WRITE OS FOR RANTARA ON VALENTINE
14th Feb
It was lovely morning . All BAsti people were happy that today their is grand celebration in NAik sadan as Daya Mai Son "Satya" is going to celebrate valentine Day.
All couple in basti was happy that today atleast they can be together ..
MM was sitting at jeep top. he was looking all couple and their signal to each other. they want to be together but because of their parents they cant propose each other openly..
Raghu come out from Naik Sadan and see that MM is in very irritable mode . He come near to him and ask
Raghu- kya hua MM muh par 12 koi bajaya hua jaise vada paw mein theki chatni ke jagah meethi chatni pad gayi ho
MM- arrrey nahi bhai mujhe samaj mein nahi aata saala sabke kismet mein ladki hai par apun ke kismet mein koi nahi hai
Raghu- accha to tujhe kholi basna hai
MM- arrey bhai kholi to hai bas usme rehne wali chyie par apun tab tak nahi basa sakta jab tab tum apna kholi nahi basa lete
Raghu- kya bola apun kholi basa le...uske liye mulgi chayie kahan se aayi gi
Mein aa gayi..
both turn towards that sound they see Antara
MM- lo bhai kya entry maari mujhe to ek sec ke liye laga usne tere sawal ka jawab diya..
Raghu- MM and he give him tough look
Antara- kya baatein ho rahi thi
MM- apun bhai ke liye ladki khoj rahe the
Antara(laughing)- Raghu ke liye...ha ha ha...kya baat kar rahe ho isko jhagrne se fursat mile to pyar ke bare mein soche
Raghu- MAtlab kya hai mein jhagra karta ho aur tum kya karti ho aur tumhare pass aaj ke liye kon sa ladka hai...
Antara- arrey Kashmir mein aaj ke din mere ghar ke bahar bookey ke line lag jati thi...lekin yahan koi dekta bhi hoga to bechare aagey soch nahi pata hoga...
MM_ yedi aise koi ...agar koi tere ko pasand karta hai to tere ko aakar koi nahi bolega
Antara-tere bhai ke wajah se...agar koi dekta hai to tumhara bhai usko marne jata hai socho koi propose kar deta to bechara maar jaata
Raghu- haan to kya..who sab sadak chap type ladke tere zindagi mein kaise aane doga
antara- koi tum kon hote ho mere zindagi mein kon aayega ya kon nahi aayega faisle lene wale
Raghu- "Sabkuch"
both had a eye lock...
MM- bhai dekna band karo aur chalo apun log ko raat ki party ka tyari karna hai
Raghu- Ms. Kaul to aa gayi na
Antara nodded her head... Raghu smile back and call Pakya and ask to come and to see anybody does not propose antara..
All this convo was heared by "Satya"... he in his mind"raghu tu sabko ruk sakta hai lekin mere ko nahi"
At Night
NAik Sadan was decorated and looking like new Bride...
All Boys were wearing Blsck colour attire and Girls were wearing white attire as per party theme..
DM- Satya Yeh kya tarika hai pyar ko celebrate karne ka
Satya- MAi tu nahi samjhi gi ...waise aaj ke din tujhe aaj bahu mil jayi gi
DM- accha tune apne liye ladki pasand kar li bata kon hai
Satya- bas kuch pal ruk jaa
Music was going on and all couple were dancing. Suddenly Raghu feel some sensation ...he look towards the entrance door. their he saw antara wearing white saree ...her hair was open ad some curls were falling on her forehead...she had wear only earing as accessories...but her simplicity was only her beauty... she was looking out of the world... Raghu was looking her continuously...
She walk towards him slowly slowly and tilted her head when she reach near to him...
Suddenly Satya come their and disturb them...
Satya- Lagta hai jannat ki pari aaj is naik sadan mein ...
Antara was not comfortable with satya and his cmnt. she was knowing Raghu don't like him so she don't want to make Raghu mood off.
Antara- thank u satya ...Raghu chalo hum wahan MM aur pakya ke pass chalet hai
Satya was totally pissed off by this behaviour. he make some plan and ask waiter for one cold drink. He spike some thing on it and ask waiter to give antara...
Waiter offer drink to antara and she accepted it
Satya ask MAi to request Raghu to bring some more cold drink from market ...
Dm order Raghu and he left it...
other side antara was not feeling comfortable . her head was spinning...she asked MM to bring some water to drink as she is nt feeling well
MM went to bring water and he call Raghu as some thing is wrong with Antara.
Raghu ask MM to send pakya for coldrink and he turn his jeep back to naik sadan
In the party MM was searching antara as she was not looking any where . he called govind Mama also to find is she is their but negative answer
after sometime Raghu reach their and aasked MM abt Antara...
they were discussing what happen to her suddenly one flower vase fell from 1st floor window in front of them. they both see towards that side and saw antara is being assaulted by satya.
Raghu run towards his room and bring satya out of it and throw him to the dance floor
MAi- Raghu yeh kya hai tumne sahib ko aise koi maara...
raghu- mai yeh MS. KAul ke saath badtemeezi kar raha tha jo mein bardast nahi kar sakta
Satya- Koi Raghu Antara tumhari kya lagti hai
MAi- dost hai
Satya- uff mai ek ladka aur ek ladki kabhi dost nahi ho sakte...kya apko pata nahi dosti ke naam par ladka ladki kya karte hai
now Antara also join them but she was still crying. raghu seeing her crying was now out of control. he was about to give onekick to satya antara stop him
Satya- wah kya dosti hai Raghu aisi dosti mere ko bhi teri MS. Akul ke saath karna hai and all people were laughing
MAi- Raghu agar in sabka muh band karna hai to bata koi tumhe antara ki itni fiqar hai
Raghu- mai agar uske dard ko mein apne dard samjhta hu. usko khush dekh kar khus hota ho usko rote dekh kar mein bhi agar rota ho, agar uske sapne ko apne sapna samjh kar pura karna chahta ho, uske saath rehna mujhe accha lagta hai ,,,,aur agar in sab ehsaas ko Pyar kehte hai to "haan mein MS. KAul se Pyar karta ho"
Raghu turn towards Antara and saya
MS. KAul Apun ko tere rothne, tere manane se, tere muskarne se, tere jhagra karne se, tere hansi se, tere gir parne ke chalne se, tere har cheez se pyar ho gaya hai ..haan RAGHUNATH KO PYAR HOGAYA HAI
MS. Kaul bole to "WILL YOU BE MY VALENTINE " and he sit on his knee and offer rose to Antara
Antara nodded her head to yes and took rose from him
Raghu Stand and hug antara . Antara also hug him back
DM clap and says aaj sach much mujhe bahu mil gayi.
satya once again leave that place and loosing again from Raghu.
after dat Rantara married and live happily for years and years
P.S sry guys might be spelling mistake as typing from my mobile and thank for bearing this bakwas story
now give me ur sandel rotten eggs etc

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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
Me First😛
Awesome OS...

Antara ki bookay ki lines..😆

Raghu's SABKUCH was awesome😳

MM and his jealousy..😃

Satya..Urghhh😡🤢..How dare he...

Rantara Confession..WOW..You reminded me of old times...Raghu kay dialogue..UFFF..Maar dala...☺️
Edited by Niyaz_Lover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww how sweet richu! very cute! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww thanks a lot richu fr writing and dedicating this OS to me...🤗
i loved it yr..rantara..forever 😳and satya..tai tai phish!😆
just loooveeddd it..so sweet story😃
thanks a ton...fr this and fr pm...🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So cute yar
Maine pyar kiya wala dialogue 😆
Loved it so much
Thanks for sharing
N manna pareyga satya ki har jaga har hi hoti hai 😆
Happy Valentines to you 🤗
Edited by Roy.nikki143 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aww rachana such a sweet cute touching os
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hayee richu
ur stories are always a treat to read
loved it soo much
start to end everything was just perfect
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow richu lovely os
how cute
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Posted: 11 years ago
#9
TeacherJi,

Wow wat lovely post, it was cute.

liked it Rachna
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
vry nice os rachna..
thanks fr it..
satya kamina acha hua marr padi...
my rantara together forever grt
thanjs n happy v day

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