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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Serena.V

Wow nice concept i love it

thank you dear😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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~JUNOON~







ok guys..i'm back with my next crappy update...pls do go through it...
Note:- #part 3 teaser would be included in part 4 now...sorry for inconvinience😳

PART 3


Phone buzzed to life.

MAN 1:- Woh dono mile kya?

MAN 2:-Abhi tak to nahi lekin itna pata chal gaya hai ki woh dono manali se ladakh ki bus mein baithe hai, aur hum bhi ab vahi ja rahe hai.

MAN 1:- KYA...!!! Abhi tak sirf unki location ka pata kar paye ho..maine tumhe muh maangi rakam sirf pata karne ke liye nahi di balki unko pakadne ke liye di hai. MAN 2:- Ji...jaisa aap chahte hai vaisa hi hoga.

MAN 1:- aur ha...jaise hi dono mil jaye, ladki ko khatam kar dena...samaj gaye??

MAN 2:- Ji...and he hung up the call.

With a sigh! Antara walked towards the bus when someone held her wrist from behind.Her eyes widened in shock and she gasped...!!! She gulped some air and slowly turned to see who was holding her wrist.At first she was utterly shocked because she saw no one in front of her.

But she could feel her wrist still caught by someone.she looked at her arm from above and as her gaze moved downwards towards her wrist portion, she finally saw who was holding her hand.She catched her breath at first and released it after one second,spreading a beautiful smile on her face.she bent down on her knees and looked from head to toe at the person standing in front of her.

The person who held Antara's wrist was a beautiful little girl who was playing among the other children at a nearby place some moments ago.Antara was completely lost looking at her lovely face until the little girl jerked her hand as if seeking for an attention from her.Coming out of her trance,she smiles and talks to her.

Antara: Hello cutie pie...kya naam hai aapka?

Girl: answers giving her dimpled smile...Nosheen.

Antara: Arree wah! Yeh toh kitna pyara naam hai.bahut accha laga aapse milkar Nosheen, par mujhe yeh bataye ki aap to abhi waha khel rahi thi...phir yaha kaise aayi...aur aap ne mera hath kyu pakda??..hmmm??

Nosheen:totally lost looking at the camera speaks...Didi kya aap meri bhi tasveer logi..pls!..pleading in the most innocent way making Antara's heart melt away. Nosheen had seen Antara taking pictures of her along with other friends while they played.

She was fascinated by the idea which made her grab Antara's hand.

Antara: Awwwe...ha meri cutie pie bilkul le sakti hu...chalo ab cute si smile do...ready...say cheese and clicks her Picture.

The tranquil atmosphere was suddenly replaced by gloomy dark weather.The black clouds appeared in the sky as if signalling towards omnious phase that was set to happen soon.No one had a clue about what was going to happen in next second of their life.As something bad was setting in,the nature had to make the balance,definitely something good had to be there...SO HE STEPPED IN.

Antara forgot that she was sitting in the middle of the empty highway road, as she got herself busy in playful chat with Nosheen. It came out of no where, when she heard the sound of speeding bike.she looked above Nosheen's shoulder in the forward direction and she froze.Her eyes widened in shock when she saw a speeding bike coming in their direction.with an increase in acceleration there was increase in the speed making the ride more noisy.Antara's brain had stopped working,she had only some seconds to react..to decide.

Antara was still on her knees and the little Nosheen was happily jumping in front of her.A lone tear escaped from her eye thinking neither of them was gonna survive.She squeezed her eyes at first and she shot open her eyes with a determination.she had decided what she had to do & what was right.She looked in Nosheen's Eyes once more and finally she held her hand.she tried to get up while pushing Nosheen to the other side of the road.During their this movement Nosheen lost her balance loosing Antara's hand, finally she fell n rolled to the side of the road in a safer place.

Simultaneously Antara too lost her balance making herself fall again in the middle of the road in a lateral position,making her hair fall on her face.In an instant she tried to get up but before she could make any further movement, ear deafning sound of the bike brakes were heard.A loud scream escaped her mouth,she squeezed her eyes tightly in fear and she lifted her arm in front of her face.The dorsal portion of the hand in front of her eyes and her palm facing the opposite side..it was her reflex to incoming threat.As few seconds passed,there was no noise and she felt that nothing had happened.She opened her eyes and started moving her hand slowly from her face.

Stormy winds had started making their way, one gush of air made Antara's hair blow away from her face making view more clear.She was breathing heavly,her lips had dried up and her face flushed due to adrenaline rush.With so much of fear still lingering in her eyes,she looked up and saw him for the first time...There and then the moment STOPS.

She saw a tall,fair and breathtakingly handsome man on a black bike just at an inches distance from her.He was wearing black jeans and a black shirt with bottle green hooded jacket.His feet covered with black shoes were on the either side of the bike touching the ground.His eyes were not visible as he had his black aviators on and his perfect lips barely opening.His musculine body structure only depicted his strong physical strength.Behind his back,hung a guitar and that showed he was musical too.There was no doubt that in every way this guy was a hunk.

His rough looks and ruffled hair created a charm that could allure the absorption of any girl and did create a havoc in Antara's heart too. OH YEAH...he was sensous and seductive...He was devastatingly and inhumanly beautiful.A shiver ran thru her spine when she saw him staring at her with an expressionless face.He was dazzling her and evolving new emotions in her which were new to her and never felt before.Antara came out of her thoughts when she heard Rukku shouting her name in worry.Many people gathered and Rukku came running to her,helped her get up.

Rukhsana asked her whether she was fine ,in reply Antara gave her a feeble smile and nodded yes.Suddenly it clicked in Antara mind and she started looking out for Nosheen.she was hell scared for her.when Rukku told her about Nosheen's whereabouts,she got relieved.Nosheen was totally fine and her parents had taken her back to their home. Rukhsana made her walk towards the bus.With one last glance towards her back,she saw the final glimpse of the guy who was still in the same position and staring towards her direction.Her face flushed due to his burning gaze and shyly she turned towards the bus.It was a spellbound moment.

On their way back towards the bus, someone called 'Excuse me' from behind.Both Antara and Rukhsana turn to look at the people standing near them, only to find them staring blankly towards their direction...



PRECAP:- His Phone vibrated.He picked up the Call and spoke huskily 'HELLO'...After listening for sometime he glared towards the bus which was blurring away.



reviews and criticisms are most welcomed.😊

loads of love

purple



Edited by PurpleSunset - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey guys i wanna thank everyone who are liking my updates...as i'm a newbie so cant make posts more than 10 per day...still i'll try to personally thank u all...
thanx again😊
Edited by PurpleSunset - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: ifians

the teaser is so intigruing... can't wait for chapter..



thank u😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
thank u😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Grt start dear... it was nice update..
Antu so lovingg..eagerly waiting fr next
Update dear..plz update soon
Thanks..n happy writingg dear.. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
wow what a scene... i just caught my breath when the bike was about to hit antara...that part was full of thrill
someone was following the bus... hmm suspense... i am gonna like that...
now who is that man hmmm... he comes in her life with a storm and shook her world...😃
waiting for more... it's getting so much interesting,,
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
Amazing update purple...
I was like... Bike going to hit her...
Nosheen was sweety...
Loved it...
Amazing...
But it was short...
Thanx for the pm...
Update soon and pm me..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
Amazing amazing amazing update purple..!!
Wat a start yaar...
Simply mesmerized by your way of writing...
Good goin dear...
Continue soon... :) :)
Im waiting... :) :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg ... my wild imaginations are running in my head ...is that the guy who is appointed to kill Antara ..???? and if the guy is Raghu ??? omg omg ...is Raghu here a professional killer ???..u r giving too much tension dear ...cant handle it ...plzz update soon ... cant wait ...😃
n the way u described the byke about to hit Antu was fabulous ... i literally stopped my breath while reading ... ufff ...lovely ...i am in love wth ur story completely ...😃

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