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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: harshita1996

Hey amazing update..

The way Antara was busy wid d lityle girl was so sweet..!!
Nd d way she saved her was really nice..
The way u described Him was really well..jst perfect..:)
Thanks fr pm..
Precap interesting update soon..
Keep writing..:)


thank you babe..thank you so much for your appreciation :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: honeybees22

wow osam update

loving this story

finally Raghu is here and antara was lost

precap omg kya hoga



thanx honey for loving it. :-D
ab toh muje bhi nahi pata ki aage kya hoga...lol
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Capucine

Very interesting beginning,

Who is this guy? Why is he after the bus ?How Antara and Rukku will be linked to him?

Please some answers

Continue and update ASAP

Thanks for the PM


hey thanx for liking it...u'll get to know everything as the story unfolds itself :-D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Smaggy

<font color="#990066">wow yr...really very very nice.👏</font>

<font color="#990066">loved it.😛 full of suspense...😆😆thanks for Pm and pls continue.😆😆😆</font>



hehe..thanx for liking it..keep showering your love :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: PurpleSunset



hehe..thanx for liking it..keep showering your love :)


hey ..u r amazing writer..👏.u always will get love and support ..😊

keep writing...!!😃 😃

glad to know that today we are getting update...😆 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Smaggy

<font color="#990066">wow yr...really very very nice.👏</font>

<font color="#990066">loved it.😛 full of suspense...😆😆thanks for Pm and pls continue.😆😆😆</font>


thank you so much.keep showering your love :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
~JUNOON~




Hey guys i'm back with another crappy update..
pls don't kill me...if you don't like it


PART 4


Bus Engine roared to life and the journey was about to resume when a stunning gorgeous couple entered the bus for the first time.All the heads turned towards them and their eyes got widened in shock for a brief moment as the couple had arrived in their wedding attire itself.The groom looked handsome in his maroon sherwani but what caught most of the attention was the whole outlook of the bride.She wore a champagne colored lehnga with a short blouse revealing her bare milky curves.Her lehnga was embeded with different stones(mostly red and green),it felt like there was sudden outburst of millions of stars. The lehnga was tied low waist having fixating knots on one of the sides along with hanging tassels.Her bare curves were graced by beautiful belly button ring.The champagne colored blouse was fixed high above in the rib portion and was tied to only two strings from behind(above and below).Each string had a hanging red tassels touching some portion of her smooth bare back.Front neck portion was somewhat deep,revealing some of her assets.
On the whole it looked like it was a loose fitting for her body size.The full head of the bride was covered with a beautifully designed red net odhani{veil} along with oblique portion of chest and upper half of the back.The face of the bride was gazing downwards due to shyness and she looked mesmerizing in her kundan necklace with earrings.But what added more to her beauty was the Jhoomer,hanging sideways on her forehead.Most of the married guys had their Jaw drop while staring towards her as if they had never seen a bride as beautiful as graceful as her. Giving confused looks to each other,the couple made their way towards their respective seats.

After settling down,other couples got themselves introduced to new couple.In return Groom broke the silence and introduced him as Avinash, his wife as Avastika.They got into the conversation,in the middle of the on going talks Avinash saw his wife's trembling hands and whispered in her ear. Avinash: don't worry, everything is gonna be fine...with a crease forming on his forehead.In reply Avastika nodded in yes but still her fingers didn't stop trembling due to some upcoming fear.Suddenly she looked up beneath her see through veil and met one pair curious eyes across her seat,which were staring at her since the moment she entered into the bus.Avastika gave a reassuring look making Rukhsana's eyes turn soft.With somewhat calm face Rukhsana turned her head towards the Window seat only to meet strange pair of eye gazing towards the new couple and then at her.It was not only the strange eyes but the person who was sitting besides Rukhsana was totally unknown to her, a stranger on the whole.But where was Antara then???


Back on the road, the guy still remained in frozen state for a long time till sun bursted through the dark clouds making one object sparkle on the road.The glittering thing which was lying inches away from him caught his eye and he got down from his bike.He walked towards it and bent on one knee to have a close look.The object was sparkling because of diamonds studded in a small silvery circle and it held an emerald at the core.He picked it up and started gazing at it lovingly.Suddenly it clicked in his mind that whose earring it was,the moment that had just passed by got itself replayed again...


Raghunath Naik,28 year old,most famous Gangster of Mumbai had finally entered this beautiful place.No one knew,why he was here?...but where ever he went,he was never without a motive behind it.He was an orphan as his parents had died when he was very young.Finally he was adopted by Daya mai.{rest all same as #DDEJ }.Since tender age group,Raghu had lived a hard life,had craved for love but with every bad phase his heart had turned into stone.Now he was Ruthless,cruel,deadly and emotionless man who would go to any extent even might kill them if anyone dared to come in his path.whatever he wants he gets it even if it means costing his own life,he would never give a second thought about it.The only person who cared about Raghu's life was none other than his best friend Machmach.He was the only one who knew true Raghu inside out.They both had faced many hardships together and their friendship got only stronger with every passing phase.Machmach always stood by Raghu in every situation and he could give his life for him...for his bhai(as he used to call him). Raghu was feeling ecstatic due to the beautiful sorroundings,as he had never seen such a lovely place like this even though he had travelled to many places so far.The greenery,cold wind caressing his face and hair,the silent environment was consuming him.He felt something different in this atmosphere but couldn't make out what it was?


He closed his eyes to sooth his wounded soul.It was just a distraction to ease away his pain of past.As the past painful memories of his dead parents hit him,blood rushed through his veins at a faster speed and so did his accelerator.For some moments he got drowned in those memories and when he emerged,suddenly his eyes shot open. Within seconds his pupils dilated at the view which was happening at some distance away.He checked his speedometer and it told him that the needle was pointing towards the maximum level.Blood washed from his face as he saw a small girl jumping playfully in the middle of the road.Her back was facing towards him and one thing was clear that she was not alone as someone else was there with her.He couldn't see at first as the person was covered by the little girl.One moment passed and he saw something,someone's eyes above the little girl's shoulder.Those eyes were sparkling at first and next second widened in shock as it stared towards the direction from where bike was coming at a bullet's speed.His heart sank for the first time by watching those big,almond shaped hazel orbs which were now full of fear and gazing towards him.

Raghu hit the brakes very hard trying to stop the bike.Tires started to screech causing loud noise making birds fly away from the nearby trees.The more nearer he came the more clearer got the view.He saw her squeezing her eyes for a moment and then looking into the little girl's eyes.In panicked state she tried to get up while pushing away the little girl's hand to the other side of the road.Her moment got imbalanced which made her fall back on the road.She folded her knees while trying to get up again.


He couldn't see her face as her hair blocked the vision.When the bike was about to hit her,a loud scream escaped her mouth and in reflex her hand covered her face.Unknowingly her scream made his heart wrench.He felt as if someone had stabbed his heart and it caused enormous amount of pain.He pressed the brakes more harder this time while clenching his teeth,causing impression of bike tires on the road.When the bike almost approached her,his heart skipped several beats...thumped and went dead because he still thought it was inevitable for him to stop the bike.Finally bike came to a halt just inches apart from her.Stormy winds made her hair leave her face,lowering her arm made him look at her fully for the first time.He gasped, his dead heart started to flutter at first and finally fibrillating as if it got wings of its own.Her first sight made his heart turn into fire,his body was filled with love and desire.He felt like she was the poetry scribed on the walls of his heart...like a blind man seeing the sun for the first time.From that moment on he wished that She was His..But before he could react she disappeared..making him wonder..making him confused..putting him in dilemma..whether it was a reality or his dream about a fallen angel from heaven...

Suddenly his phone vibrated and he came back to the present.He shrugged off all his weird thoughts about her, got up and took out his phone.He picked up the call and spoke huskily 'HELLO'.After listening for sometime he glared towards the bus which was blurring away. Immediately moving back towards the bike,he made a call and spoke 'PATA LAG GAYA HAI...CHAL AAJA' and sat on his bike. He looked at the emerald earring again and thought about the moment when it fell from her ear during the time she lost her balance.He smiled a little, took out his wallet and kept the earring inside it.With one gaze towards the direction of the moving bus,he hit the ignition started the bike and drove away from there...!!!


PRECAP:-
A loud scream came out from Rukhsana's mouth when the gun was pointed towards the newly married couple...!!!!!


Guys if u want to make some changes from my writing point of view pls do lemme know..
pls do leave your reviews and criticisms here..
love😳
purple


Edited by PurpleSunset - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88

wow osam

Raghu was the same person in the show
wonder how they will fall in love
precap scared
pls cont asap
Edited by honeybees22 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
hey dear...my name is suchita(or suchi😆)
i read all ur updates at once and its first time commenting on ur SS...
firstly..i loved the tittle..it symbolize PASSION😳
UR ALL UPDATES ARE AMAZING..👏
as i read it once so i am giving individual..comments 😆

part 1-its really sad to know about antara's life as she totally changed after her father's death😭...bt i am happy to know that antara and her mom😊...are trying hard to over come this situation.

part 2-Rukku and her parents are so nice😃.towards antara and all made a plan to divert her mind and send rukku and antu fr a trip😊

part 3- it was fantastic the way u described the whole scene when she was sleeping and her dupatta flowen away😳bt who are those mans?😲and whom they were talking about..about rukku and antu😕... futher scene at dabba and cute girl Nosheen(very nice name..i heard it first time😊)and the last part was simply outstanding...👏the entry of that handsome hunk😎..antu got stunned😆

i loved ur all update dear
may i know ur name pls?😊
Edited by Tsuchi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: Serena.V

👏I CANT WAIT ANY LONGER


you gotta wait dear.. a bit more :)

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