RaNtara FF:- Meri Aashiqui (Updated Chapter 20-page 46) - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago
wow nice update.👏 ...so basti ka bhagan again ready to help...😉 😉 .
thanks for pm. loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb Update. U remind me yaar old days of DDEJ. uff that glancs..eye lock

Precap. Bechare Sharam but how Antara come there . Seems interesting..please update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update ...lovely Rantara scene ...👏update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww . Very interesting . loved it . Thxs for the PM 😊 Continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update
thanks for the pm
and update soon! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Update soon please
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank u all...
Really appreciating the comments...
Hmmm...
Here goes chapter 6.

Chapter 6
Antara return home. She was hell furious. All she could think about was raghu's rudeness.
Antara:- "kitna batmeez hai yeh larka. Gunda kahin ka... Samajhta kia hai?? Main bhi dekhti hoon kaisay sharma ko paise daitay hain papa."
Saying this she went to her father's room. She saw her father was sitting reading magazine. She saw her dear daughter and said.
Mr. Kaul:- "aray meri princess, kia hua? Itna gusa kiun aya?? Ishu ne kuch kaha kia??".
Antara:- "aray nahin papa.. Ishu toh parh raha hai... Mujhay apse kuch zarori baat karni hai..".
Mr. Kaul:- "haan beta bolo...".
Antara:- "papa woh.."
Before she could say anything she heard her mom calling them for dinner.
Mr. Kaul:- "chalo princess khana kha laite hain phir aram se baat kartay hain".
Antara nodded in yes and followed her father to the dining table. Antara sat down and started eating. She was not all in mood to eat. But she knew if she will not eat then her father and mother will become a bit worried. She silently ate and noticed that her father was not at all stressed. He was laughing and giggling with ishan and chatting... Ishan was all busy telling him about the friends of basti.
Ishan:- "apko pata hai papa... Is basti kay log bohat achay hain! Yahan par sab bohat pyar kartay hain.. Aditya, parshant... Meray abhi tak sabse achay dost hain... Aur raghu bhaiya and MachMach bhai... Yeh dono bohat achay hain".
Listening to raghu's name antara eyes shot up. She stroked her fork on the food in a harsh manner. Mrs. Kaul noticed this and ask her.
Mrs. Kaul:- "antara beta r u ok??".
Antara looked towards her mom and passed a smile which was forced badly by her.
Antara:- "yes mama i m fine."
Saying this she stood up.
Antara:- "mama papa i m done."
She went to was her hands and helped her mother.
On the other hand raghu was sitting on his terrace holding his fist.
Raghu(to himself):- "uski himmat kaisay hui mujhay gunda bolnay ki?? Samajhte kia hai woh.."
Rasika came to terrace holding his plate.
Rasika:- "bhai apka khana??"
Raghu:- "kia hai?? Meray ko nahin khana bola na.. Abhi kia zabardasti hai!!??"
Rasika noticed he was hell angry. Rasika:- "bhai woh papa ka phone aya tha".
Raghu:- "ab kia hua unko??"
Rasika:- "woh unko lauttay huay aur 2 mahiney lag jayain gain."
Raghu:- "is mein konsi nai baat hai... Unka toh aj tak yehi hai.. Tu ja mera bheja ubaltay pani ki tarah garam hai.. Mujhay mat paka.."
Rasika went, on the way she bumped into MachMach. Rasika was about to fall when MachMach caught her. Due to panic she closed her eyes due to fear of falling but she was suprised she didnt fall. She opened her eyes and saw her "Machu" looking at her.
Rasika saw him and put both of his hands wrapping his neck.
She forget that she had a plate in her which had made a sound of falling. They were lost in each other when raghu shouted sitting in a loud voice. He didnt move as he knew that his sister was a total havock.
Raghu:- "abay yaar.. Oye rasika kabhi toh dekh kar kam kiya kar."
They both came back to reality and MachMach left her in a haste after hearing raghu's voice.
MachMach came to raghu.
MachMach:- "bhai woh mereko tujhay kuch pochna tha. Apun sabko bol dala keh kal sab puranay kapray ki factory kay pass rahein magar karna kia hai??"
Raghu:- "Ab jo hoga kal bata lag jayai ga.. Aur ab tu bhi ja ghar ja kar mast lamba ho kar so ja.. Aj bubbly aunty ko sab dor rakhna.. Meray ko kal sab chahyai.."
Saying this raghu left and MachMach also went.
Raghu came to his room. He changed into his night pyjama's and was about to go bed when he saw her standing again. Seeing her again in her white shalwar kameez, he lost her breath again. She was looking at the sky innocently with alot of questions in her eyeS...
His heart skipped a beat but when he remembered those word which she said a few time back. His face again changed again. She went inside as she remembered something. Raghus saw this and went.
Antara came to ishan's room and said:- "ishu tu sogaya kia??"
Ishan:- "nahin didi, kia hua??"
Antara:- "ishu dekh tu mera chota bhai hai.. Aur main teri chinta karti hn.. Tu us raghu aur MachMach say dor raha kar".
Ishan:- "q didu.. Woh toh bohat achay hai !".
Mrs. Kaul was passing by when she heard them talking. Without a moment she walked inside and folded her hands looking at them.
Mrs. Kaul:- "tum dono behan bhai soyai nhn?? ".
Ishan:- "mama main toh sonay hi wala tha jab didu ai aur kehnay lagi keh ius raa..."
Antara cut in between and said:-
"Aray mama ap q nahin soyein?? Main toh bs aise hi yahan thi."
Mrs. Kaul passed a smile and said:-
"Aray bs ja hi rahi thi. Chalo antara ja kar sojao aur ishu ko bhi sonay do."
Antara nodded and looked towards ishan in a warning and ordering tone:- "jo kaha hai yad rakhna".
Ishan hit his head and laughed:- "lagta hai meri didu ko mumbai ki hawa nahin suit ki".
Antara went to her room. She lay down when he heard the same tone which helped her sleeping the other day. She again dozed off listening to the tune.
Raghu also slept with holding the MO in hand. Mrs. Naik walked in and saw his son sleeping. She kissed him and put his blanket on him.
The other day, raghu rang the bell of kaul house in order to pick mr. Kaul. He went with them. At 10:00 antara woke up and got freshed. She went down and saw her mother working while ishan was studying and preparing for his entry test in school. She looked around to find his father when his mind shot up.
Antara:- "mama papa kahan hain?"
Mrs. Kaul:- "woh kahin kam se gayain hain raghu kay sath."
She became hell tensed and was not able to understand. She blamed herself for sleeping so long. She blamed the music for which she slept so peacefully.
On the other hand, Mr. Kaul went inside the factory. There he saw Principal Sharma standing. He saw him and start approaching to him.
P.S:- "welcome sir, paise kahan hain?? Main sedhi baat karta hoon ghuma kar karnay ki mujhay adat nahin".
Mr. Kaul:- "ji yeh lijayai paise" and handed him the bag.
While sharma holded the bag. He heard someone patting his shoulder.
He turned and saw raghu standing behind him. His bright smile started to fade away.
Raghu:- "kaise ho principal sahab. Bohat time huay milay huay. MachMach uncle ko safely ghar lay ja.. Main ata hoon sharma ji aj bohat time bad milay hain unko lay kar ata hoon."
MachMach nodded and was about to take Mr. Kaul when he was stopped by sharma.
P.S:- "aray bhai sab apnay paise toh lay kar jayai apko pata bhi hai main rishwat nahin laita college mein dakhlay ka time khatam hogaya hai koi rasta nahin".
Raghu laughed, he came in between him and Mr. Kaul. He took the bag and opened. Sharma was suprise to see that there is no money in the bag but it contained of rods, hockeys and a gun.
A shiver ran down his spine. He left the bag and took a step behind.
Raghu took the gun from back and gesture MachMach and Mr. Kaul to leave. Raghu pointed the gun and told him to move. He tied him behind his jeep and started to drive. Sharma was dragged brutally insisde the basti.
Antara who was standing in her balcony all worried saw the sat. Her eyes widened in shock. Raghu's mom and sister were also watching this.
Raghu stopped the jeap and untied sharma. Rasika recognized him and gesture her mom.
Rasika(whispering):- "ayi yeh toh sharma hai humara principal.. Bhai q laya isay yahan???"
Mrs. Naik:- "pata nhn isne zaroor kuch ghalat kiya hoga warna mera beta kisi say aise hi bura nhn karay ga".
Sharma managed to stood up infront of raghu pleading and sobbing.
P.S:- "raghu bhai mujhay chor do."
Raghu:- "aray sharma ji ap mujhse mafi q mang rahay hain."
At the same time antara came and stoop in opposite to him. Sharma was facing his back to her.
P.S:- "raghu bhai mujhay janay do.. Meray chotay chotay bachay hain.."
Raghu gave a glare to him. He moved towards him and said:- "yeh sab kuch karnay say pehlay sochna tha".
P.S:- "bhai jo bhi karta hoon unkay liye karta hoon. Yeh paise bhi.."
Before he could complete, Raghu waved his hand in air and punched sharma hard.
He landed straight into antara's feet.
Raghu:- "abhi bhi teray ki 50,000/- chahayai kia??"
Antara eyes shot open how he came to know about it??
Mr. Kaul also came and stoop right beside antara. Sharma looked up and plead infront of them.
P.S:- "please sir mujhay maf kar dijayai... Ghalti hogai.. Ap ja kar kal form lay lijeyai ga.. Mujhay bacha lijayai".
Raghu was about to hit him again when Mr. Kaul said:- "chor do beta bs karo.."
Raghu stopped and looked at antara who was hell shocked at his behaviour.
Mr. Kaul and pakya helped Sharma to get up. Raghu ordered pakya to take him to the doctor. Mr. Kaul came and stood next to him. He saw him in a thanked expression.
Mr. Kaul:- "beta mujhay samajh nahin araha tumhara shukriya kaise karun??"
Raghu:- "aray uncle beta bhi boltay ho aur shukriya bhi abhi ghar janay ka aur mast khush rehnay ka."
Everyone left but antara was still standing looking at raghu and his papa..

Precap
Antara was all lost in her thoughts.
Antara(to herself):- " Grow up antara... Akhir kab tak tu aise hi aday baat par chalti rahay gi.. He helped u... U must thank and say sorry toh him".

Chalo yaar update done... Crap lekha sab...
Do like and comment..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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me first 😆
really nice update
finally antara realizes that raghu is not that bad
and mach mach and raskika 😆

love the precap,
thanks for the pm and update soon!😊
Edited by Wahian4lyf - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey amazing update though short ..
bt nice Raghu is really smart..
The way it was described by you was superb
really well..
update soon keep writing..:)
thanks fr pm..<3
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Posted: 11 years ago
Super fantastic update . Loved it . Thank you for the PM 😊

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