Hum Hai Do Dil Ek Jaan -Os last PArt @pg 17 - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fantastic . Loved it . Thank you for the PM 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow just wow
machmach is still there aww
I hope satya nash ka satya nash hojae
pls cont asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
yeah really nice ...hopeling k jldi se
rantara mil jaye n us satya ki khoob pitai ho...maza as jayega yar
thanks dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
Nice update Richu! Waiting for Rantara!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 7

Antara was lying in the bed . She was totally lost what to do. She don't want to marry satya but as Satya and his man has kidnapped her parents. She was blaming Raghu for her condition. Suddenly she feel that some one has jumped into balcony and trying to get inside the room. She looked towards watch it was 2:00Am. She think who will be at this time. She feel scared . She taken vase on her hand and hide herself behind the balcony door.
Man enter the room by opening the door of balcony. He enter the room and slowly call"antara". Antara was holding vase very tightly. She was suppose to beat man but suddenly that man pull her towards him and they fall on each other. Antara was on the floor and that man was above her.Antara has closed her eyes.Slowly Slowly she open her eyes and she was shocked to see Raghu above her.
They both were looking to each other eyes . they both were lost to each other. suddenly antara come to her sense and ask raghu to move.
Raghu- nahi hato to
Antara- kya ,kya bola tumne hato mere upper se hato
Raghu- Maine kaha nahi hatta to
Antara- to mein chilao gi aurphir who satya aa kar tumhe mar bhi dalega
Raghu- Agar marne hi likha hai to koi na pehle tumhe cho lo
Antara -matlab...
She was abt to tell properly but raghu keep his lip on her lip.
While kissing raghu hold antara hand and start tighting his grip.
Antara want to oppose but she also feel good and feel that he has kiss him before also.
For how long they kiss each other don't know they get relies when tears come down from antara eyes.
Raghu get up first and give hand to antara to get up.
Antara hold raghu hand and get up. She was still crying.
Raghu- Dekh Ms. Kaul maine tujhe kiss is liye nahi kiya ki mein teri izzat ke saath kuch karna chahta tha. Mein tujhe yeh batana chhta tha ki jo cheez mera hai ussay lene mein kahin bhi ja sakta ho aur tum meri ho.
Antara see raghu with blank eyes...
Raghu- Mein janta ho ki tumhara maan mein baut sawal hoga lekin un sab sawal ke zabab ke liye tumhe mere saath chalna hoga .chalogi mere saath
Antara- Kahan
Raghu- Mujh par biswas rakh MS.KAul
Antara- pehle kiya tha raghu lekin mujhe dhoka mila
Raghu- Manta ho antara ki maine tujhe is janam mein nahi peechle janam mein bhi tujhe dhoka diya tha...maine tumse sachai chupa kar tumhe dhoka diya..lekin...
Antara- kya bole ...pchla jaanam ...kya tum pagal ho...kuch bhi...aur kon si sachai ki baat kar rahe ho...
Raghu- tumhare haar sawal ka jawab dogo lekin uske liya tumhe mere saath chalna hoga chalogi na ms.kaul.
Antara- theek hai chalogi lekin agar mujhe laga ki tumhari niyat galat hai to mein ...
Raghu- kuch adat kabhi nahi jaati peechle jaanam mein aisi hi mujh par saq karte thi aur phir ladti thi lekin ky fayada jeeta than a.
Antara look him as he sound mad..

They reach KALAYAN MANDAP'
Antara look each corner of kalian mandap. She feel some dizziness. She feel that some unclear vision is running in his mind. One girl is dancing , one guy burning matchstick and then saw one girl and boy making love .
Antara feel that she don't have strength to stand . She was about to fall but raghu hold her . Antara feel that raghu has save him like this many time. Raghu was holding her from waist from one hand and holding her one hand by his another hand .
She close her eyes and this time she can see all clear vision that She is running by goons and raghu help her to save from goons. How they spend night over garge when her brother ishaan was lost. How raghu come to take his shirt and how he save her from fallng stick when she was leaving basti.
How Raghu has treat her badly when she says bad mouth regarding his grown up. How Ajji was helping her everytime to escape her from raghu's anger. How antara dance in Kalyan MAndap from hiding raghu to win competition. How they lost in jungle and then how raghu support her when dayamai get angry on her. How she misses raghu in noor appa wedding then how she hugged her and then how she realizes that she love raghu when he save ishaan .their proposal then satya entry then raghu's truth for his father death then how she marry satya to take revenge and lastly how aghu and she was killed by satya.
Tears was rolling down from her eyes while remembering all things Raghu slowly slowly make her stand and hug her tightly.
Antara- raghu mujhe maaf kar do maine tumhe peechle jaanam mein galta samjha aur is baar bhi tumhe galat samjhe .
Raghu- shh... Ms.Kaul chup ho jaye itna mat ro. Maine kaha tha na ki mein tuhare saath hamesha rahoga. Tumhare soch se phle tum mujhe apne samne pao gi. KAha than a tumhe meri zaroorat ho na ho lekin mein tumhara mada karta rahoga. Aur yeh bhi kaha tha mein tujhe rote hue nahi dekh sakta. Aye chup hojaye ...
Haan chup ho jaye meri yedi behna nahi to bhai tumhe khush karne ke liye phir koi pagal wala kaam karega aur mujhse bhi karwayega.
Raghu and antara both see towards that voice. They saw Machmach
Antara- MM tum and she run towards him an hug him.
MM- Aaj maine dono apne bhai aur yedi behna ko wapas paa liye
Antara- haan MM ab hume bhagwan bhi alag nahi kar sakta...lekin...
MM slowly take her back from their hug and says lekin...kya
Antara- kal to meri shadi hai na satya se. Mujhe us insaans e shadi karne padega jisne mujhe peechle jaanam mere pyar se alag kiya tha aur mere hone wale baache ko bhi mere saath maar dala tha
Raghu- Ms. Kaul is baar satya hame nahi apne aap ko maarega . IS baar uski Shadi tumse nahi meri shadi tumse hoga. Aur raha baat baache ka to wada karta ho shadi ke 9 mnth ke baad hamara baacha hamre saath ho ga miss kaul...and he winks his eyes

All three laugh together and all basti people were listening this laugh and feeling relax that their happiness are coming back in this basti
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
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wow wow wow ...i loved it ...so is janam mein Raghu ne mouka miltehi kissed Antara ...LOLZZ...abh Satttu ka band bajega ...kash yeh sab hum dekh pate ...lovely update ...👏
Edited by pampz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
nice update richu...👍🏼
antara too got her memory back...😃
loved it 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
wow...superb...😊 😊 rantrara back with old sweet memories..😊 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
Read parts 6 and 7 in one time and Wow.

So nice to read that they remember what happened in their previous lives, they find back MM.

Now wait to see Pahttu dead.

Thanks for the PM

continue and update ASAP
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aur raha baat baache ka to wada karta ho shadi ke 9 mnth ke baad hamara baacha hamre saath ho ga miss kaul...and he winks his eyes lol.most funny... shadi hui nh aur bache..ommmg raghu contrl
Btwn nice update dear

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