RaNtara SS: Tum Mile..COMPLETED - Page 20

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Posted: 11 years ago
Amaziing Update The story is unique, I like it a lot 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome part 👏 👏
Loveeddd ttt 😊
Urrgghh that psycho satya 🤢
Waiting for the next part 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
BEAUTIFUL!! ROMANTIC (fr prt 3)!! EMOTIONAL(fr prt 4)!!
Both d updates wr d bst updates fr dis story. I'm spellbound nd speechless. U hv portrayed d angst nd emotions of Raghu vry brilliantly. Antara is really lucky to hv a lover like him.
I nvr knew dat Antara hd such a maniac family wid a psyco. I feel sorry fr Satya coz something vry wonderful is in store fr him in near future which Raghu is gonna present him😆
D sizzling romantic moment (in prt 3) ws vry hawt!!!☺️ U surely know hw to set mobile screens on fire. Aww...d last RaNtara moment (in prt 4) ws so vry cute nd adorable.😳


D precap ws so awesome. Really can't wait to read d nxt prt...
So take ur sweet time to update d nxt prt.😃

In advance.- MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!🥳

Edited by KAJU10 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was wonderful ...waiting for Rantara marriage n suhag raat 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
thx a lot e1..
i'll reply to all comments soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
next update is on the way..
will post in a few minutes.. :) :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oops!! Seems like update has been stuck in heavy traffic jam...😆😆
Waitinggg...
Edited by gargi21 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Akki... i had sent yu frnd requst in FB... accept kiya kya... N sorry fo delay... Woh main aaj kal, If main nahi aa rahi hun.. sirf aap logon ki updates dekhne ke liye aathi hun...

heyyy this tym itz a very colorful update...👏 Thank yu...
raghu is sooo cute... He takes of antu sooo much... hayeee

Next rantara marriage??!!!! Wow... em waiting...🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

(Part 5)

heyy guys..here is the last part of the os..i hope u'll like it.
do read it and leave ur comments.. Happy Reading.. :)


it was 8 AM... RaNtara were sleeping as all curtains were closed they couldn't know that it's morning now... suddenly they heard a knock on the door.. which was not like a knock at all..
it was Akash... he banged on their door.. he was using abusive language for ANtara and asked her to open the door... RaNtara got up.. none of them replied.. so he left cursing her...
both Raghu n Antara looked at each other.. they were sleeping peacefully in each other's arms.. they passed a genuine smile to each other and ANtara hugged him.. and kissed on his chest above her shirt.. he hugged her tightly and asked if her bruises are still paining.. she nodded in no.. and they both slept again...

they woke up in an hour... Raghu saw her and explained his plan to her... and he stayed in her room only...
she agreed and came down stairs...
i am ready to marry him... she said...
DM pulled her ears... she hissed in pain... now what happened to the boy u wanted to marry... hmmm???
i don't want u guys to kill him.. like u killed my bhaiyya...
good girl..
now will u stop hurting me... DM left her...
Satya was very happy now... it's good u're agree otherwise i would hv killed u like we killed ur bhaiyya...
antara clenched her fist and controlled her tears...

we will call pandit in evening.. u can get ready by that time.. we will call some one to make u ready for wedding..
and we will hv all rituals in home only...
they all got busy in preparations and Antara came back to her room... raghu was there only.. he asked her about a few things...
i don't want to marry him..
u won't..
but if something went wrong.. what if they din't confess their crime.. they r too clever...she was crying...
he patted on her head... but we need to take some risks.. as we don't have any proof against them...
can't we just shoot them here and run???... he laughed on her innocence... and nodded in no...
she hugged him...
Antara u're a strong girl...just few more hours.. and then u'll be free from all this...
n u can go where'ver u want to go...

she pulled herself form hug.. and looked at him with surprise.. what do u mean wherever i want to go..
won't u take me with u to mumbai...
no.. i din't mean that..
then what did u mean.. last night u said u'll take me to our home... then??
yeah!! we will go there only...
he pulled her in a hug...
i want to marry u...
hmmm??... he looked in her eyes...
i love u.. i want to marry u...
he smiled and nodded in yes..

n m sorry for what i said that day in mumbai..
he frowned his brows in surprise??
i don't regret that evening... i love u...
i was jus expecting that u were my husband..
he smiled and kissed on her nose tip...
he bended a little but stopped... they both could feel each other's breath...she nodded in yes and gave him permission...
he bended more and kissed her lips.. and she gasped...
he took her lips into his.. and kissed her gently.. she too responded and wounded her hands in his neck.. he slid his hands in her waist.. and lift her up...
they both kissed each other and he lift her and fell on bed on his back taking her on top of himself...
she clutched his collar and hid herself in his chest...and he snuggled in the crook of her neck.. sending shivers through her spine
.. she clutched more on his collar...
he rolled on bed and came on top of her.. ... i love you antara... i love u a lot...
you don't know how i have spent past 1 year and half without you...
i was so happy when i found u on railway station... i can't tell u how much i want u..
i love u...
he pecked on her lips again...and they hugged each other tightly and rolled on the bed...
they both slid in the duvet hugging each other...after an hour two.. raghu remembered some thing and got up..
he gave medicines to antara.. and applied ointment on her bruises...
after some time a maid knocked her door for lunch.. but she asked to hv it in her room only...
they both did lunch.. and raghu made some calls to police...and confirmed a few things...
suddenly some one banged on their door...

he hid behind curtains..n antara opened the door...DM came in...
"this is ur wedding dress... get ready.. we will get a girl to help u..."
she nodded... and DM left...


Raghu came out and Antara looked at him.. he put his hand on her shoulder and told her to get ready...
"its gonna be all right..."
he came out of her room.. and entered in Satya's room.. he was alone there and was getting ready.. raghu din't want to hurt him as he was mentally disturbed.. but even though... he was an evil.. and he was the one who tortured her Antara and killed her brother.. so he forgot about all mercy for a patient and he patted on his shoulder from his back...

satya turned and raghu punched him hard on his face... his nose started bleeding and he put his hand on his nose...
he looked at raghu in shock.. and raghu again put one more punch on his face... he fell down.. was about to scream when raghu sat down and broke her hand... and put his handkerchief in his mouth so that he won't be able to scream for help...he stood up and hit him twice in his stomach..
"you bloody dog.. dare you raised ur hand on my antara again.. i'll kill u..."
Raghu removed his belt and hit him hard... "i saw all those bruises on her body.. how dare you to touch her.."... he beat him badly... and asked him about the dead body of antara's brother..
satya told him when he removed the cloth from his mouth.. and begged for the mercy... but again the image of antara crying and her body covered with all blue marks came in front of his eyes.. and he hit him hard...


u deserve only this...Satya was trembling on the floor.. when Raghu hit him on his neck and he fainted..
raghu lifted him and tied in washroom...
he cleaned himself and got ready as groom... ...he made a few calls and lay down on the bed...

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Akash knocked his door... and asked Satya to come downstairs in a minute...
Raghu put his sehera and came down stairs... he was sitting in the mandap...when antara came with DM...
she was trembling.. bcz Raghu was no where.. n it's been an hour he contacted her... she was very nervous...
but she had to sit there as raghu said her to do so...

she sat there.. and was feeling disgusted thinking of Satya sitting near her...
Raghu slid his hand and touched Antara's hand... she immediately took it away... and looked at him with disgust...
Raghu smiled.. and took her hand and held it firmly...
she felt his touch.. and looked at him... he din't lift his sehra but held her hand tightly.. and patted on her hand...
she smiled.. and lowered her gaze...
pandit ji started chanting all mantras and marriage was done successfully.. though the name of satya was used at some places...

after a few minutes raghu received a call... police has found the deadbody.. they informed raghu and sent the body for postmartum .. and they came inside the house...
they arrested DM, Akash, baldev... they all looked at Satya... when raghu lifted his sehra.. and they all got shocked...
they all tried to run here and there.. (idiots...)
but police caught them...
"who are you...?" DM asked..
"your son-in-law sasu maa.."
what the hell.. where is satya...
he signalled police officers and they went upstairs and found satya tied up in washroom...
they brought him downstairs and everybody was shocked seeing his condition...
what is all this non-sense.. inspector.. u arrest this guy... DM shouted on top of her voice..
DM, stop shouting.. .. we are here to arrest u..
but what is our crime...
u n ur family killed mr. naik (antara's bhai), and tried to kill Antara...
u forced her to marry ur psycho son.. and poisoned her...
ur psycho son tortured her...

bt what is the proof that we killed some one..
we have found the body.. ANtara looked at raghu.. he assured her that they are right...
soon we will have all our proofs..
now you all are under arrest...

police arrested all of them and left.. ANtara hugged Raghu from side.. she had tears in her eyes..
"Thank You".. she said...raghu kissed on her head in reply...

how did u find about bhaiyya...
i hv my own sources...
u hit satya.. hmmm... he wiped her tears...
don't... it will be all fine...

they stayed in kashmir for a week and got all evidences about the murder...
satya was too scared of raghu that he confessed his crime...
raghu did all rituals and rantara came back to mumbai after a few days...


On The Way to Mumbai...

Raghu was sitting on his seat and busy on a call...
Antara was sitting and putting her head on his shoulder...when he ended his call...
she looked up and called him...Raghu...
hmm..
thank u so much for everything.. m so lucky to hv u in my life..
you know what.. u're right.. n u're welcome for that...
she hit him slowly on his arm.. n he hugged him from side...

how can u love me so much..
why.. is something wrong with u..
raghu plz...
i don't know.. it's just that i hv never felt like this for any one else... i care for u.. n want to keep u safe from everyone..
he smiled looking at her.. and she slid her arm in his.. and dozed off on his shoulder..
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it was 8 PM.. Raghu came in room and gave a packet to antara...she looked at him..
and he smiled... "it's for u... "
she was about to open it.. but he nodded in no.. "not here..."
she came to the room she used to stay in before...
she opened the packet... it was a red lehenga.. and some jewellery...
she smiled thinking of why he brought all these things...
after a while she was all ready.. she was feeling shy in going out by herself.. so she sat on the corner of the bed...

after a few minutes she heard a knock on the door and heart stopped.. she took slow steps and heard that knock twice...
but as she approached towards the door.. no one knocked. probably.. his heart was beating with the equal steps hearing her footsteps...

she took a deep breath and opened the door... he was there wearing a white kurta payjama... he was looking so handsome even in that simple dress...that her heart stopped beating...
n he looked at her... she was looking so beautiful in that red lehenga... he praised himself for such a lovely choice...

he came forward and she took backstops...
he stopped so she did... they both smiled and she lowered her gaze..
he held her slowly from her waist.. and she slid her hands on his arms...
and kissed her forehead.. she closed her eyes...


you're looking beautiful...he said and lifted her in his arms...
antara held him from his collar and hid herself in his chest...
he brought her to their room.. and opened the door...and came inside... n put her down...
Antara open your eyes.. he said.. so she lifted her gaze...
the room was decorated beautifully with all red and white flowers...
he dimmed the lights and some stars hanging in whole room started glowing...

she looked at him and smiled... "it's beautiful..."
but not more than u... he lifted her chin... and looked in her eyes as asking for permission...
she closed her eyes as allowing him.. and he bended a little and took her lips into his...
he took one of her hand and wounded in in his neck.. and placed his hands on her waist.. and deepened the kiss...
he removed her nose ring while kissing her...
she reciprocated his actions and kissed him back with equal passion...
they both lost in their kiss that they both were breathing very hard...
after a few minutes.. Raghu picked antara and placed her softly on their bed...
he stared at her face... and kissed her both eyes...
she held his arm..and he slid his hand on her waist..
and snuggled in her neck.. she moved her face aside to give him more access...
he removed her earrings..and licked her earlobe... he removed her jewellery one by one and kissed her allover her face...
he made her lay down on bed.. and came on top of her from side...
and snuggled in her neck.. and moved downwards.. he kissed on her neck line licked her collarbone and gave her some love bites marking her as him...
he snuggled in her cleavage... and slid her sleeves from her shoulder and licked her more visible skin...
he bit her skin.. and lifted a bit.. and removed her kurta...
he took her hand n placed it on neck... she roamed her hands on his back.. he bit his cleavage and she digged her nails in his shoulders... he caressed her softness with his hands and kissed on her navel... and licked her skin... she roamed her hands in his hairs in pleasure...

he slowly removed her top and took her b**** in his hands... she cupped his face and pulled him close to her face...
she looked in her eyes.. and he took her lips in his...they both kissed each other for like ever... and they removed all their barriers without breaking the kiss...
they hugged each other and rolled on the bed... she came on top of him.. and kissed him all over his body...
she rolled herself on him.. making him aroused.. he groaned in pleasure.. and took the lead soon...

he made her lie down on the bed.. and cupped her b**** in his hands... rubbed them.. kissed them.. nibbled them.. and marked her with his love bites... she moaned in pleasure.. making him more aroused...

he again kissed her lips and she felt his hardness on her stomach...
"i want you".. they both whispered and smiled on each other's lips...

he looked at her... and she blushed...he again took her lips in his.. and showered his wet kisses on her whole body moving to downwards...
he snuggled in her inner thighs and kissed there.. she pushed his head for more... he was getting wilder with her moans which were getting increased with his sweet torture...
after a while he made her comfortable and thrust into her.. she hissed in pain.. but he locked her lips with his.. and stopped to make her feel relaxed.. she took a deep breath and nodded in yes...
he thrust again into her and showered his love for her...he could see some tears rolling on her cheeks.. he kissed them.. and looked in her eyes with concern...
"i am okay " she said.. and he kissed her again...
and they both made love to each other for whole night consummating their marriage..

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thanks for reading it guys..i hope u liked it..please leave ur comments/sugg/questions...
and please hit the like button..
loads of luv..
-akki

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Edited by DeadDevil - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
update done... :)
PMs in a minute.. :D

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