RaNtara SS: Tum Mile..COMPLETED

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^banner by me..
heyy guys... i have written a new SS (converted from OS, as number of chapters were increased.)...it's a new idea that came to my mind yesterday...i hope u'll like it..Happy Reading.. :)

Part 1: Below
Part 2: Page 8
Part 3: Page 21
Part 4: Page 24
Part 5 : Page 29 (LAST)


(Part 1)

At 9 PM (A small Railway Station nearby Mumbai city..)

She was running like a mad..trying her best to catch the train..she ran till the end of platform but couldn't board the train..she was highly disappointed..
She came back to the enquiry office for complaining about her luggage..she was breathing hard and wasn't able to speak properly..
It was a small office..only two old age officers were there...and two lady officers in a side room..both were busy on their phone..
Excuse me..I missed my train..my luggage in the train only..my mobile..purse everything..
ohk..please sit...
yeah!! thanks..
do you have your ticket..
NO..
id proof?? anything??
No..i told u ..i forgot my purse in train.. i just came out for a few minutes to take water..and then i missed my train...
ohk..what was your seat n coach number..
yeah!! it's... it's...
hmm..?
i don't remember...i m nt able to recall it...
where were you going...tell us your name..we will find through our database..
where was i going?? i don't remember...
what's my name..?
i don't remember anything...omggg...n she started crying...
look miss..stop all this non-sense..and don't waste our time..
now please leave...before i call the guards...
no..please..listen to me...m not lying..i seriously don't remember anything..
plz help me..
may...may i make a phone call from here...
ohk....they said irritatingly..
she dialled some random number..which she din't know her self..
but probably she used to dial it more frequently..
it was ringing..but no body picked it.. she dialled 2-3 times again..but no response..
now railway officers was hell irritated..
look..either u stop all this drama..or we are going to complaint in railway police..u got it..
she was scared and crying madly..
those lady officers came out and made her stand up and asked her to leave..
you won't listen like this...they called in police station..
hello xyz police station..
sir there is a girl in xyz railway station..blah blah blah..
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what do u think...is she lying or..?
sir she looks very innocent..but i don't think she is what she looks like..
ohk... one of our officer in that area only..i'll send him..
ohk..thank you sir..

SIT HERE..!! AND DARE YOU SPEAK OR CRYING LIKE THIS...UNDERSTAND...!!
they made her sit in their room and locked it from outside..

she was sobbing..she din't understand..what's happening with her..what she was doing in that train...what the hell is doing in this city...

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after one and half hour...

Yes officer..thanks for coming...
what happened??
first she said that she missed her train..she had no id proof..no ticket..nothing..but she doesn't even remember her name..or the address...
where is she??
she is inside..
are you mad.? why the hell you locked her...how long it's been..
1 1/2 hour...
you're sick.. she is not a criminal...open it dammit...
did u give her some food or not..they lowered their eyes..
just leave u both..before i suspend you...LEAVE...!!
they both left...
he opened the door..it was dark and he could hear her sobs...
he looked the button and switched on the light...there he saw a figure hugging her self..sitting in the corner of room..crying...
with sudden light in the room she looked above...and he was shocked after seeing her...
ANTARA!!!!!

she looked at him confusing and happy expressions...
he ran towards her..and was about to hug her..but he din't..
Antara...you okay?? what are you doing here??
ji..Aap mujhe jante hai.. (you know me...) u came here to take me with u...??
he was shocked hearing such question...she hugged him immediately...he couldn't understand what just happened..he too hugged her..yes!!!...why wouldn't i?? he could utter...
he helped her to get up..he wiped her tears and asked..what are you doing here...
i don't know...i told them..but they din't believe me...
i don't even know my name, my address..anything...and she cried again...i don't know what i was doing in that train..i don't even know i was in the train or not...
plz help me...
Ssshhh!!...u no need to cry.. I am here...
do u know who am i...he din't say anything...and asked her to keep quite..
he came outside and stared at those ladies angrily...
i'll take her with me...

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he helped her to sit in his jeep and asked her if she wants anything to eat...
she nodded in yes and smiled..she was very happy to see him...
okk..he stopped the jeep in front of a shop and purchased some food and water..
he gave it to her and she ate it immediately...he smiled looking at her...she gulped some water and thanked him...

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excuse me??.. you know me..but i don't know you...who are you.....he looked at her... Naik..ACP Raghunath Naik...
she smiled...how do you know me??...he din't reply..
how did you find me..that i was there...
you called me 2-3 times..i couldn't pick your call..but when i called back..i came to know you were there..
oh!
she laughed...he stopped the jeep..like what happened to her at sudden.....what happened??
when they din't believe me..and threatened me that they will give me to police...heheh..but least they knew you already know me..hehe..
he din't reply to her...but smiled..

It was 11:30 by now..Raghu was driving on full speed...he looked at her..she already dozed off...
he brought her to the hospital...when they reached..she woke up and asked where is she??
you don't need to panic..
you are not looking well...that's why i brought u here..just hv a small check ups nd then we will go home.. okay..?
home?? where do we live..??
i'll let u know..first u come here...

she wasn't all prepared for the checkup but it was required because he noticed something...which he couldn't say to her...
i'll bring u loads of chocolate and we will go home as soon as u'll get checked up.. he smiled..
she nodded and smiled as he promised her to give chocolates...

After an hour...
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Nurse came out of the room... Sister??.is she okay..?
she is fine sir..you can meet her...
okay..thanks..
he ran inside..she was lying on the bed..her eyes were close but she was conscious...
she is very sweet girl.....doctor said...yeah!!
Antara!!... she opened her eyes... I am fine Raghu...he was so happy hearing his name from her mouth..he smiled at her...

Mr. Naik..may i talk to you for a few minutes...
yeah!! sure doctor.. he patted on her forehead..i'll be back...she nodded...he left with doc..
your husband loves you a lot..Nurse said to ANtara..
ANtara blushed...

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In doctor's office...
you were right Mr. Naik...
his brows frowns... she is not lying...she really don't remember anything..
and there is something that i need to tell you...
yes doctor...
there are loads of bruises and marks on her whole body...i think she was beaten very brutally...
he was loosing his temper and clutched his fist...

you need to find out about this..because those marks are like if it happened with her several times..because some of the bruises are fresh but some are like 1 year or few months old..and there are only marks...
Raghu wasn't able to believe all this.who can even think to harm such an innocent girl..
and one more very important thing...it's not an accident that she lost her memory...he looked at doc with surprise and questioning eyes..
we found some pills in her stomach which weakens your brain and you start loosing your memory slowly..
n i think she has been given such pills since one or two years...

he was shocked hearing all this... we asked her if she used to take some pills..but she has no idea about anything..
she is rly innocent..and some thing very fishy happened to her...


ohk..thanks for everything doctor..i'll find about all this..now can i take her home...she might not feel comfortable here..
yes Mr. Naik...

he was about to leave...when doctor stopped him..
if u don't mind..can i ask you something Mr. Naik..
sure doctor...
as far as i know u live all alone..n u've been here for last few months only...
how do u know this girl...
it's just...it's okay if u don't want to tell anything...
u sure u wanna do this..
yes doc..i can't leave her like this...
they both smiled weakly...

Raghu signed the discharge paper and took ANtara with him...Antara saw those papers when he signed them... It was written "Antara Raghunath Naik.." on place of patient name..


thanks for reading it guys..i hope u liked it..please leave ur comments/sugg/questions...
and please hit the like button..
loads of luv..
-akki

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SweetiePie25 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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deaddevil just loved it... so much suspense..
i cant wait for the next part..
pls write soon and pm me..
Edited by SweetiePie25 - 11 years ago
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Lovely . I Liked . Would like have PM for the next . 😊
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it was superb please continue soon waiting for the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was jst amazing...
Loved it..
Acp raghu nath Naik..
Who is doing all dis to Antara poor girl par Raghu hai na..!!
Update soon..
Will be waiting..:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omgg it was so nice ragu as acp..grt plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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really lovely..u r amazing writer...beautifully written
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SweetiePie25

deaddevil just loved it... so much suspense..

i cant wait for the next part..
pls write soon and pm me..

heyy..thank u so much buddy..
m glad u liked it..
will updt soon..
actually me too need to think what happens next..😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow a new os😊
m luving ur writings very much😊
antara s married to raghu or wat😕
or they wer lovers😕
poor antara😭
who did those things to her😡
continue soon😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh wow it was amazing...
Desperately waiting for d next part plz update soon...

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