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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
areyyy yeh to pura ulta dhamaka tha ...very nice ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Nice start richu!!!
Thanx for the pm!!!
Update soon and pm me!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Richu
Love the starting
plz continue soon
Thanks for the PM
Take care

Lots of Love
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
... lovely lovely lovely...
Aur Rantara ke frnship dekhne ke liye waiting...

Update soon...<3
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Really cool waiting too for their friendship 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Wow yar loved this concept 😊 loved raghu as always 😳 lovely update pls write soon 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part-II
Next Day morning

Antara wake up and come to the terrace. She find that its terrace cum room. In one side it was looking as gym section. Punching bag.,trademill, dumbbell. She was reaaly very happy to see that area. She was also fitness conscious .

She come to the front portion of terrace. She find one cot where raghu's cloth was lying . and then she saw shower area. It ws open bathroom and she laugh's that how anybody can have shower so openly.she went to shower area as one kite was there and down children were shouting for raghu to give that kite.

Kite was at top of the shower. She was jumping to have that kite. She tried 4 to 5 times but she was unable to reach at kite.

But suddenly from back she find one hand has reached that kite. She can feel the breathe of that person . he was so closed. She turned and she found it was Raghu.they were very close . their lips was about o touch. They both can feel the breathe of each other.they both were looking into their eyes"MAHI MOMENT"

One of the child come and ask for kite from raghu. They both come from their conscious . raghu turn and given kite to that child. Child left the terrace.

Antara was leaving from that place but suddenly her leg slip abd was to fell but raghu hold her waist and save her. In between to save herself she open the knob of shower. Again they were lost into each other eyes"MAHI MOMENT"

Hey antara darling are you OK satya says and he come close to them

Antara come out of the conscious and get away from Raghu- haan I am fine satya
Satya- ok go and change your cloth mai is calling for brakefast
Antara-ok I join you all within 5 mins
Antara left the terrace

Satya- raghu raghu raghu hai na meri item ekdum hot. Tere bhi dil machal gaya na usey dekh kar
Raghu- sahib tujhe sharma nahi aata apni hone wali biwi ke liye aise bol kar
Satya- arrey antara hai hi aisi cheez ki kisi ke liye bhi dil machal saka aur tune to uske kamar ko pakra who bhi panni ke neeche. Teri to badan mein aag lag gayi hogi
Raghu hold satya color and says in angry- agar who meri hoti to uski baar mein aise mein kabhi nahi bolta aur uske gandi niyat se dekne wale ki mein jaan le leta sahib
And he push satya to cot. Satya fell there and raghu leave the terrace

Satya to himself- raghu raghu raghu tune meri aayi ko muhse chena hai to dekh kaise is antara ko mein tujhse cheno ga koi muhe pata hai tu issey pyar karega aur nahi karega to mein karwoga

At dinning Table

DM- buntiya brakefast lao
Antara- what is this
Satya- wada pao, Mumbai famous dish
Antara-ok but can I have some fruits as u know satya I cant eat oily thing
Raghu- arrey Ms. Kaul kha kar dekh maaza ayyega aur tujhe yeh bole to oil ki chinta nahi karna ka
Raghu take tissue paper and put wada into that and press and all extra oil come out and stick into tissue paper
Raghu- lo MS. Kaul ab kha kar dekh aur haan saath mein yeh mirch bhi khana maaza aa jayega
Antara smile and take that wada and put into pao and she atarted eating and she love it so much that she eaten two wada pao with 2 green chili
But she feel starting doing "shi shi shi"
Raghu- arrey tere ko to mich lag gayi . ruk mein aaya
In between satya wa shouting at her why she eaten this if she cant handle it . he said that fro next time he don't want this type of drama in dinning table.
Antara was shocked to see that at her condition instead of giving water he is shouting at her
Raghu come with cold drink and given her and ask to drink.
Antara was drinking that and giving thanks to raghu by her eyes
Raghu understand that and he smile and says arrey Ms. Kaul chinta mat kar mein jab tak ho tujhe kuch nahi hone doga. Aaj is mirchi ki wajah se teri aankh mein ansoo aaya hai lekin ab kabhi teri ankhoo mein ansoo nahi aaney doga.
DM was shocked to see raghu like this.he never she this raghu so much concern and having love in his voice.
DM_ agar raghu ko abhi nahi rukkka to mere haath se kahn nikal na jaye
Satya at his mind- to anshoo nahi dekh sakta aur mein teri ankhoo mein ansoo laoga raghu.

Precap- raghu kisses antara (LL) ans satya try to misbehave with antara
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
part 1
Raghu- always welcome MS. kAul. itna angrezi apun ko bhi aata hai and he wink his eyes.
.☺️..☺️..☺️..☺️..☺️..☺️..☺️.
omggg

i just love raghus winkkk.☺️...it really skipped my heart...☺️.

part 2..

Antara was leaving from that place but suddenly her leg slip abd was to fell but raghu hold her waist and save her. In between to save herself she open the knob of shower. Again they were lost into each other eyes"MAHI MOMENT"

essshhh wht a scene

DM_ agar raghu ko abhi nahi rukkka to mere haath se kahn nikal na jaye
Satya at his mind- to anshoo nahi dekh sakta aur mein teri ankhoo mein ansoo laoga raghu.


yeh dhono maa-betaa kab sudergaa...

precap././././././././././././././././

cant wait for it
Edited by Nichuss - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
great going richu darling...nice..update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice dear!😊 bt acc to precap LL itni jaldi🤣 abhi to story start hi hui hai🤣
Edited by Tsuchi - 11 years ago

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