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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: richurachna


haan yaar that was really too hot scene . uff remember that eye contact in that shower


how can i forget it...☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
wow wow wow that was really nice yaar loved it soo much
pls cont asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
plz pm me the next parts!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Achi baat hai wo nalayak satya ki asilyath bahar agaye. Well super sweet update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
awesome update
really loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Part1

Richu hahah LOL Satya ka Satyanash 🤣 yaar raghu ne to abhi se setting karli abhi se raghunath ki Miss Kaul bana liya 😳😳

Part2

Hayeee mahi moments when she is Satya's GF 🤣 @Richu tu bhi mast hai yaar! 😆😆😆
But yaar main samjhi nahi..Antara to satya ki GF to satya raghu se usse cheene ki baat kyun kar raha tha?? 😕😕
awww yaar ye ladka to 1 din mein hi haat se gaya 😳

Precap- Haila Richu tu to superfast nikli re! 😆😆😆 Update soon! Thanks for the pm!

Edited by Rantaraolic - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Rantaraolic

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#ff0066" size="3">Part1</font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#ff0066" size="3">Richu hahah LOL Satya ka Satyanash🤣yaar raghu ne to abhi se setting karli abhi se raghunath ki Miss Kaul bana liya😳😳</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#ff0066" size="3">Part2</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#ff0066" size="3">Hayeee mahi moments when she is Satya's GF🤣@Richu tu bhi mast hai yaar!😆😆😆</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#ff0066" size="3">But yaar main samjhi nahi..Antara to satya ki GF to satya raghu se usse cheene ki baat kyun kar raha tha??😕😕</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#ff0066" size="3">awww yaar ye ladka to 1 din mein hi haat se gaya😳</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#ff0066" size="3">Precap- Haila Richu tu to superfast nikli re!😆😆😆Update soon! Thanks for the pm!</font>



dear he want ki Raghu start loving antu and as she is her GF he will marry her and Raghu will behurt
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
excellent update rachna
i loved how raghu saved her from falling
i loved their mahi moment
and i loved when he gave her water
and what about the precap
kiss so soon ?
please update fast
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Luved d concept.
Part 1 ws jst awesome🤣
Yeh Satya kabhi nhi sudhar sakta. He's using his GF as a medium to hurt Raghu.😡Sattu aur uske fattu plans.
LOL!!!! Raghu is falling fr his to-be-bhabi. 😆
OMG!!! Raghu saved Antara frm falling nd deir mahi moment. Can't tell u hw much I miss all these RaNtara moments in d show.
PRECAP:LL so soon!!!!!😲

Kya mast story likhti hai re tu bole toh ek dum makkhan(butter) ke maafik chikni. Teri writing skills pe apun fida ho gyi hai.
Fatafat se story ka agla hissa(part) likhne ka warna aata majhi satak li.🤣

Plz update d nxt part soon.
If possible, wuld u plz send me PM fr d nxt prt.
Edited by KAJU10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Part-3

Antara was siitting in her room. DM come to meet her
DM- Antara kaisi ho
Antara- mein thik ho aunty aap batayi
DM- to kya socha tumne
Antara- Liss bare mein aunty
DM- satya se shadi ke bare mein
Antara- Aunty abhi tak maine kuch soch anahi hai, mein satya aur aap logo ke bare mein sab janae chahti ho akhie yeh mere pire life ki sawal hai isliye mein ahan aayi ho. meri family 15 days ke baad aa rahi hai aur agar maine yes kar diya to they will give their blessings and go back to London after our marriage
DM- bolo kya janae chahti ho
Antara- aunty pls bura mat manana. lekin khud mein find out karne chahti ho. mujhe 15 days ka time de do mein papa mummy ko answer khud dogi.
DM- thik hai beta.
she left ht eroom and instruct evry 1 to be nice and cultured in front of Antara.

Antara come out from nsik sadan and see Raghu and Machmach is hvng fun .
MMsee antara coming towards them
MM_ bhai dekh sahib ki sahiba aa rahi hai
Raghu turn face and see antara wearing white colour churidar and kurta. he was memorized with her beauty.
MM- bhai kahan kho gaye yehi soch rahe ho na ki Rakhsah ko kahan se yeh pari mil gayi
Raghu- Chup MM , yeh Ms. KAul ki apni marzi hai
Antara reach there and say hi to both of them

Antara- Raghu mujhe Mumbai gumoge pls
Raghu- koi mein kya guide dekta ho aur waise tere satya dekh nahi raha hai uske saath ja
Antara- actually Aunty bata rahi thi ki satya apne dosto ke saath farm house gaya hai aur kal morning tak aayega isliye I asked you, agar tumhe bura laga to sry. mein akele hi gum logi. ok bye
MM_ arrey kahan jaa rahi hai tu akele. yeh sehar tumhare liye anjaan hai. ruk mein chalta ho tumhare saath
Antara- koi tum guide ho
MM_ nahi tumhara bhai ho
Antara- BHAi do din itna ahem rista bana liya mujhse
MM_ rista ek pal mein ban jata hai aur to tu yedi hai aur yedi ko koi samjhdhar bhai mangta hai jo meinho isliye tumhara bhai hu mein
Antara- whats yedi
MM- yedi bole to pagal
Antara- kya mein tumhe pagal lagti ho
Aur nahi to kya is barish ke musam mein tum akele chali Mumbai darsan ko- it was Raghu who was listening their conversation
Raghu- MM tu ruk mein antara ko aaj ass pass ke jagah dekha kar aata ho
Antara- koi ab tum guide ban gaye ho
Raghu- nahi sahib ki hone wali biwi ko mein akele naho chod sakta, MS. kaul mein tumhe kabhibhi akele nahi chodo ga, yeh raghunath naik ka waada hai
MM- lo antara ab to bhai ne wada kar diya tumse ab kabhi bhi yeh tumhara saath nahi chodega
Antara- to chale
they both sit in the jeep and Raghu take antara many palces in Mumbai and they had a very gud time together. iN between they become friend also and share many things with each other like family, studies and many other information regarding each other

Antara came to know that Raghu is orphan and he has been bought up by DAya MAi and he respect her very much.
and Raghu came to know that antara is well educated and her family is staying at London. she is having 1 younger brother too. his father is Doctor in London and antara loves music very much.

They were returning to the house meantime jeep brake down . Raghu was trying to repair jeep suddenly rain started. Antara was standing just near to Raghu. suddenly in the cloud there was huge thunder and its sound scared antara and he hug Raghu tightly.
First time in his life any girl has touch him like this. he want to hug her back but some thing was stopping him and he keep his hand up.
After some time antara come back to her senses and she turn back and close herr eyes.
Raghu was also seeing here and there and suddenly his eyes was stuck at her back. as she was wearing white colour dress. he can see her body properly .She was having g very hot figure and her curves was making Raghu restless. but he control his emotions and take out his shirt and put at antara shoulder
Antara- Raghu mujhe iske zarurat nahi hai mein is tree ke neeche jati ho tum pls jeep thik karo
Raghu- tum to thik ho lekin kya hai tumhare kapre theek nahi hai . kehte hai na bearish mein white colour nahi pehnane chayie.

Antara understand what he want to say so she quietly wear that shirt and move towards the tree
Raghu was trying to repair the jeep but he was not able.he was luking here and ther but not a single person was there to whom he can ask for help
He called MM and told to send mechanic.
Antara- Raghu jab tak mechcanic nahi aajata tum bhi is tree ke neeche aa jao
Raghu has no choice to he also go there
They both don't want to see each other but from side they both were looking to each other time to time
Raghu in his mind- Saala apun ko kya ho raha hai. jab se yeh ladki Aayi hai kuch na kuch aise ho raha hai jo nahi hona chayie.pata nahi koi mein iske taraf kicha jaa raha ho

Antara in her mind- I don't know but some thing is there which making me mad about him. He is like magnet. he is pulling me towards him. I cant stand beside him . I have to go from here.

She was leaving from there and Raghu stop her by holding her hand
Raghu- kya hua kahan jaa rahi ho dekho bearish ho rahi hai mechanic nahi aaya hai . tum bheeg jao gi
Antara- Raghu mujhe jaaane do pls
Raghu- arrey yedi hai kya , achank se kya ho gaya tujhe
Antara- Raghu mera haath chodo and let me go
Raghu pulled antara towards him and antara fall on Raghu .she holds his color to save herself falling totally on him
They were very close to each other. there breathe can be heard by each other . there was pin drop of silence . only falling of water on road can be heard. sudeenly thunder occurs and antara move towards Raghu by scared and her lips touches Raghu lips.within a second she come back few steps.
Raghu was also shocked by this activity.
they both were breathing heavily.now Raghu tighten his grip around antara waist and pulled her towards himself. Antara closed her eyes and Raghu touches her lips by his lips one time then again he repeat his action . he done this action for 4 to 5 times . now antara take her hand to Raghu shouler and make a round by her nhand . Now antara openher eyes and see Raghu they had a MAhi moment . then antara given permission to Raghu to kiss her by her eyes. then Raghu kisses her and this time she was also responding. For how long they had kiss they also don't remember . By the time when they become normal Antara see Raghu and she given him one tight slap and says - how could do this to me. tumne mujhe kiss kaise kiya. aur maine tumhara saath ... nahi yeh nahi ho sakta. Tumne kya socha ki mein London se aayii ho to mere liye kiss karna aam baat hogi. Nahi raghunath naik tum galat ho. Maine to aaj tak kisi ko apne kareeb nahi aan diya aur maien apne aap se wada kiya tha ki Mein pehle kiss apne husband ko dogi. lekin tumne...
She run towards the road to go back to NAik sadan
Same time Raghu sit onhis knees and see upside towards the sky
Raghu- BAppa the kya ho gaya mujhse. Sach much maine aise kaise kiya... Bappa mujhe maaf kar dena.

In the night same day

DM- Raghu kya hua tum aaj itne udhas koi ho
Raghu tols every thing to DM whatever happen
DM- Raghu tumhe Antara pasand HAi
Raghu- mai yeh tum kya bol rahi ho
DM- Raghu maine pucha tumhe antara pasand hai
Raghu- Nodded his head for yes
DM- mujhe aaaj subah hi lag gaya tha jab tum antara ke liye itne perasan ho raha the. lekin Raghu antara satya ki pasand hai so tumhe aaj hi antara se door jana hoga. Tumhe 15 din ke liye NAik Sadan se door jana hoga
Raghu touches her feet and come to the terrace

Precap- Antara restless for Raghu - Rantara HUg

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