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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
awesome dear👏
loved the rantara moments😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part-3

Next day antara wake up and went to kitchen for making brakefast. she was thinking whatever happen yesterday night and she cut her finger by chopping vegetables. that time Raghu was watching her . he want to bandage her finger but that time satya come and taken her finger into her mouth.
Raghu cant see this and he go away from there
antara- satya leave my hand you are crossing your limit and she give him one tight slap
satya- hold her hand tightly and says usi contract mein hamare yeh bhi hai ki room ke bahar duniya walo ke liye hum miya biwi hai aur ek acche husband ka kaam hota hai apni biwi ko dard mein saath dena. waise bhi tera aashiq tujhe dekh raha tha isliye aur yeh haath uthana mujhe bhi aat hai agli baar mat bholna.

antara was shocked and tears was coming from her eyes. she want to control herself but she was unable. she want to talk all this thing to some one but she know now there is no one in her life. Mama ji has already closed his home for her. noor appa was also angry and she has broken all her relation with her. only for her mother health she was going to mama house but she also know she cant share all this thing to her mother.
she was thinking whom to tell all her condition other wise she will die some day suddenly she remember how Raghu once asked to call his father and says each and every thing .

she come to her room pick up her mobile and went to terrace. there she find no one even Raghu was not there. she feel some what relax and start calling her father no.
antara- Papa aap to mere decision se kush ho na . aap to jante ho na maine yeh shadi kyon ki. papa mein apke khatil ke saath zindagi nahi gujar sakti thi aur uske yaad mein ro bhi nahi sakti thi. papa mein usko bhi wahi takleef dena chahti thi jo usne mujhse diya. usey bhi batana chahti thi ki jab apse apka koi chin jata hai to kaise dard hota hai. papa aap to jante ho na mere aur satya ke shadi ki saachai. hamne srif dekbhe ka shadi kiya hai . na mein usko apna pati mant ho na mein usko kabhi apne kareeb anne de sakti ho. maine Raghu ko takleef dene ke liye ussey badla lene ki liye ussey shadi ki hai lekin jab jab who satya mere karreb aata hai mujhe apne aap ne nafrat hoti hai. jis haq se Raghu ko maine apna sab kuch de diya mein us biswas ko kabhi nahi tod paogi papa. mein satya se nafrat aur aaj bhi kahin na kain mein Raghu se aaj bhi bahut pyar karti ho. papa mein is pya rko bhool kar Raghu se badla lena chahti ho papa pls meri madad karo and she was continuously crying.
but see the destiny all this conversation was heared by Raghu who was climbing stair to come to the terrace and he was shocked .
Raghu come back to MM garge and sitting and thinking- MS. kaul tune yeh kya kiya . mujhe jis aag mein jalna chahti ho us aag mein tu khud jal rahi hai. tu mujhe barbad dekh kar khush hona chati hai mein waise hi barbad kar lete ho apne aap ko lekin to jis daldal mein fas gayi hai usme mein aaj tujhe akele nahi chod sakta. us satya naaam ke rakshash se mujhe tujhe baachna hoga.

In night

satya come to his room and he was drinked badly. he was not able to walk properly. he saw antara lying in bed .satya come near to her and touch her hair. anatra open her eyes and got scared to see satya siitng so near to him. she stand and ask satya to leave the room as he is drunk and she don't want any scene.
satya-jaan tu meri biwi hai jab tumne apna wada toda to mujhe bhi todna padega na.
antara- maine kon sa wada toda.
satya- koi tumne Raghu ke saath kal samay baithaya tumne Raghu to toucjh kiya . usne tumhe gud mein utaaaya. ab kya baki reh gaya hai
antara- satya tum jo soch rahe ho wais ekuch nahi hai and pls let me go
satya hols her arm and pull her towards him. he started misbehaving with her. antara was trying to get herself free but she was unable so she slapped him again and was running towards door but satya try to grab her from back but he was unable but in this antara dress from back got unlossen. she saw herself . she find her dress was not in gud condition. her sleeves was unstiched .
she run away from room and went to terrace . she saw Raghu was sleeping there.
she was so scared of satya that time she forget her envy for Raghu and come near to him and start crying.her tears fall on Raghu feet.
Raghu wake up and saw antara sitting there. he saw her condition and understand what might hapeen. he pulled his bedsheet and cover antara properly.

precap:- satya beaten and family drama
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
read part 1,2 3 in one go...

kaash aisse hi show par huvaa

but raghu goin to slap is almost goin to happen

and one day antu will really get slap...

nice work richu
Edited by Nichuss - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
oh teri ...satya beaten in precap...jldi mar sale ko kyun hath lgaya antu ko plz raghu...
gd richu loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
nice update 👏
sattu ko next part mein maar daalo plz...isko aur seh nhi sakti😡😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
nice update richu!👏..aakhir antu ne raghu ka hi idea use kiya..phone wala...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Oh that crap started again 😡 how dare he touch antara 😡 glad 2 know dat antara went 2 raghu 4 help 😃 finally our hero all set 4 his MISS KAUL BACHAO MISSION 👏 excited 4 precap lovely update continue soon 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
beautiful work richu, its sooo emotional. poor antra
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
AWESOME update...
just luvd it...
plz plz do cont soon...
mara satya to ab...


PS: aur hum sab bas OS/FF mein hi padh k khush hote rahenge,,🤔
wo kutta serial mein se ni jane wala itna jaldi...😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
waise actual show mien antara ko bas wise hi kiss scene pe raghu ki yaad aayegi...aur bachane k baad bhi use hi tashan dikhayegi wo...
aur raghu bhai tu daru hi pita rahiyo...

kuchh ni hone wala is show ka...CVs yahan ke OS/FF se hi story bans le thodi..to wapas TRP badh jayegi...

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