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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
Beautiful story...
And thanks for the pm
One more thing tum bohot achha likhati ho...👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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woow riaa nyc yar new one grt going girl i like the new concept haha noor apa fighting fo water with som kanta bai hahahhha n basti s enjoying . wowo i was imaging thata scene what would hAPPEN if somthing lik this happen in jaan ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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RIA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ❤️ed it... Seriously...
Aur ek baath kahu kya... Tum bura math manna plz plz... Tumhare saare updates main, mujhe yeh update sabse jyade accha laga... Itz really wat we needed now, coz sooo many tragic scenes are going on in the show currently...
B/w ur update was really really cute, n wat u said is correct, itz really passionate n full of poetic moments... I enjoyed reading it... N eagerly waiting fo ua next update...

Aur iss baar mujhe tera lines dekhne ko nahi mila... vahi, tum hamesha bolthi rehthi ho na, ki 'Plz dont throw Eggs n tomatoes..,.. Or Sorry fo such boring update' n all... I missed it yaar...😃😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow ria kya concept hai itna sannata kyun hai basti mein
katrina ka poster dekhte hain aap aur tum arshad miyaan ko dekhti ho🤣
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 2: hear comes the referi😆

Their argument didn't stop. Govind was captured badly in middle. Saroj couldn't understand what to do. Meanwhile in the naik sadan an old lady was doing arti in her room. A tall and fare man was passing by his room wearing tracksuit but suddenly that old lady spoke out, "kyun re pintu? Aaj late ho gaya uthne mein?". The man immediately stooped at the door and turned towards that old lady with naughty smile. "ajji pls, kitni baar main kahoon aap se ki mujhe pintu mat kaho yaar. Tum bulate ho pintu, ayi bulate hain sahib!! Ekdin na ghar ke sare log bhool jayengey ki mera actual name satya nayak hain!!" satya made a poor face. "chal bandh kar apna drama aur Prasad le ja!" ajji gave him a playfull scold. Satya smiled and came inside. He touched ajji's feet and ajji gave him blessing. Then ajji gave him Prasad and asked, "arey ek baat bata! Ye chintu kahan hain?". Satya gave a mischevious smile, "ajji aap ke pyare raaj dulare chintu ji apne balcony mein bed pe so kar abhitak so rahe hain!!" he informed. "haay re deva!!" ajji stroke her own temple, "koi iss yere ko samjhao, subah ke 9 baj gaye phir bhi so raha hain.. pata nahin uss bistar se usey itna lagav kyun hain?!... arey iss yere se shadi kaubn kjarega?!!" ajji said with worried face. "shadi aur wo bhi raghu ki?!" satya's eyes became wide. "tab toh uss yere ke liye aap ko to koi yeri dhudni paregi dadi kyun ki koi normal larki usey shadi kabhi nahi karegi..." he said with a laugh. "oye chup kar...!! Saram nahi ati apni bhai ki burayi karte huye?!" ajji said. "ok ok baba... nahi karungi aap ki pyare chintu ki burayi!... arey yaar uska bara bhai hoon thora bahut tang khichayi to haq hain na?!" satya smiled. "chal thik hain!!" ajji smiled and put her hand on his head and ruffled his hairs lovingly. At the moment they heard kanta and noor's loud scream from outside. "lo phir sru ho gaye in dono... arey ek din shanty se nahi rahe sakte kya?" ajji asked making a face. Satya jumped in excitement and rushed towards the attic. "arey ab tu kahan chala?" ajji asked. "balcony pein..." sattya said while running, "ye show main miss nahi kar sakta!!" his voice faded. "hay re deva.." ajji stroke his temple again and turned towards god's idol. "bappa kya kya item bheje ho iss ghar mein!! Ek year toh uska bara bhai double year!!... pata nahi in dono ka kya hoga...thori toh akal de do dono ko!!" ajji prayed. Satya came at the balcony. The balcony was huge and decorated with some accessories and furnitures. It seemed like someone used that as a room. At a corner, someone was sleeping on the cot wrapped all over by bedshit. god! How can he still sleep?!! Does he have soundprrof ear?' sattu thought looking at the all covered fig lying on the cot. At next moment he rushed towards the cot and pushed the fig, "oye raghu uth!" he said. After two more huge pushes by satya at last the fig moved making a moan and removed the bedshit from his face. A face of an young man of dark skin tone and with slight stubbles peeped out. His eyes were closed and eyebrows were curled into a frown. There was a bit childlike thing in his face which gave a touch of innocence in his hard feature. "abbey kaun aa gaya yaar? subah subah kiski mati mari gayi jo kaam dham chorke mere nind ke piche par gaya!!" he said with an irritating voice. "arey raghu uth yaar!!" satya said. "arey sahib mere ko lath marna bandh kar.. apun tera 2nd hand byke nahi hain jo tera lath kha ke start ho jayega aur daurne lagunga!!" raghu said rolling on the bed. "kamal hain yaar!!" satya couldn't controle his laughter looking at his little bro's childish behavior, "arey raghu niche kahani ghar ghar ki serial ki live telecast chal raha hain aur tu itne awaz mein kaise raha hain?" he said. "arey isme naya kya hain sahib?! Roj toh ye bai vs apa ke match ki radio telecast suru ho jata hain subah subah. Abto adat par chuki hain. Sone de yaar!" raghu covered himself properly with the blanket. "arey yaar!!..."satya chuckled. Suddenly they both asked a huge scream and satya's whole feature jerked up. Even raghu jumped up from bed with shocked eyes. "abbey sahib ye bhukamp kahan se aa gaya?" he asked in confusion. "I don't know bro!! chal dekhte hain!!" he said and jumped to the corner of balcony to look at the road. Raghu also ran behind him closing the buttons of his shirt. The scene they saw, both of their jaw drooped. They saw noor apa and kanta bai holding a bucket and pulling towards themselves. "kanta tune meri balti tor di!! Aaj mein tujhe nahi chorungi!!" noor said in loud voice. "arey sahi kiya maine tere balti torke... waisey bhi das saal purana balti tha... main nahi torti toh kaal khud be khud toot jata... ab mera balti wapas kar nahi toh!!.." kanta threw dagger with her eyes. "nahi toh kya haan?! Nahi doongi teri balti!!..." noor apa screamed louder. They continued the bucket fight and raghu and satya looking at them with wide eyes. "ee sahib!!" raghu said from his side. "haan bol!.." satya said. "arey yaar... ye rassi khichayi competation ke bare mein toh sunna tha par ye balti khicho competition kab aur kahan se aya!!" he asked. "ab mujhe kaise malum hoga raghu. How do I know?" satya said, fixing his amazed gaze to kanta and noor. "arey yaar... tu delhi ki university se wo kya bari wwali degree aya hain.. tujhe nahi pata toh kya apun ko pata hoga?" raghu asked. "yaar MBA ke course mein ye sab included nahi tha par ab kuch toh karna parega.. nahi toh ye fight pata nahi kab khatam hogi. Chal kuch karte hain!" Satya said. "ee sahib! Agar tujhe inn pagalon ke kushti mein referi ban na hain na to ja. Mere ko bich mein mat khich!!" raghu said. "okk!!.."satya let out a sigh and rushed downstairs. "ye sahib bhi na... har roj isey sulah ksrne jana parta hain... issey toh... who kya kahete hain wo... M..B... choro job hi keheta ho... uske badle judge ban na chahiye tha.."raghu said scratching his head.

"noor mera bulti chorne ka... Nahito aaj tere ko dikhati hoon ki bai power kya hota hain..." kanta said greeting her teeth. "arey ooh kanta!! Mujhe kam mat samjhna. Kashmir ki larkiyan dhamkio se nahi darte." Apa answered with more force. "kanta nahi chorna inhe!!" manohar said from kanta's back. "noor bas karo..." govind tried to stop apa. But nothing happened. "excuse me ladies!!" satya suddenly interrupted between them and both of them looked towards him with confused eyes. "arey satya baba tum?!" kanta said. "haan kanta aunty main... and hello noor aunty!" satya smiled nervously towards noor aunty. "may I say something?! Yahan pe actually chal kya raha hain?!" satya asked. "dekho na satya iss kanta ne meri balti tor di!!..." noor apa made a poor face. "abeye noor ki bachi!! Maine teri bulti tori?! Aur tu jo mujhe pani nahi bharne de rahi thi.." kanta said with angry look. "relax relax ladies! Let me handle the situation." Sattu said and he lifted the broken bulti on his hand. It's handle was just fractured. Satya fixed the screw and handle. "ye lijiye noor aunty aap ki bulti fix ho gayi!!" he showed him. "arey thanku satya!! Bhai tumhe to sab thik karna ata hain.." noor said with a smile. "thank u aunty!! Okk kanta aunty aap apna bucket bhi mujhe dijiye.. main ek sath aap dono ki pani bhar deti hoon okk?!!" satya offered. "thnku satya baba. Tumne toh sachmein problem ko... wo kya keheta hain... haan solution(solution) kar dala..." kanta said. "aunty that's solution not solution okk?!" satya said and went towards the tap. After some time he came back with bucket full of water. "hear ladies! Your buckets full of water." Satya said. They both took their bucket and gave an angry look towards each other. After some mins they fumed and turned to their house's. satya came back with a sigh and started to step up on the stairs of naik sadan's balcony. "kyun ho gayi teri jugdegiri?!" raghu asked looking at his exhausted face. "seriously yaar! They are never gonna change." Satya let out another big sigh. "arey toh kyun parta hain bich mein?! Larne deta un dono lady dara singh ko!! Apun ko kya yaar... mast taan ke so raha tha subha subha jaga diya!!" raghu said giving an yank. "kya subah subah haan?! Arey bro tu kumbhkaran ka record break karna chahta hain kya?!! Waisey bhi tu itni awaz mein so kaise sakta hain yaar?" satya asked in confusion. "arey mere kaan mein ruiya(cotton) lage huye the..." he said and showed him cotton balls. "yaar you are impossible!! Ajji sahi kahe rahi thi. Year hain tu bilkul! Tujhse koi shadi nahi karega.." satya said. "SHADI!!!" raghu jumped like he had seen ghost in daylight. "ysaar phir se nahi. Ajji ko phirse shadi wala bhoot dimag mein char gaya!! Yaar satya in larkiyon ke chakkar se mere ko door rakh yaar...!! Larki hain toh life mein tension. Apun aise hi thik hain.. bindas!!" raghu said with a chirpy smile. "really?! Tujhe koi bhi larki nahi pasand hain?!"satya frowned. "arey haan yaar kitni baar kahon?! Mujhe nahi pasand yaar!!ekdum barobar!" raghu said in confidence. "teri miss kaul bhi nahi?!" satya smirked. Suddenly raghu felt ye jerk. "mmm... miss kaul!! kaun miss kaul?!! Apun kise miss call dega haan?!" he stumbled. "mazak mat kar yaar raghu. I am serious!! Main janta hoon tu abhi bhi usey yaad karta hain!" satya said. "nahi main kisi ko yaad nahi karta!!" raghu shifted his gaze and looked hear and there impatiently. "really?!" he frowned again and suddenly he snatched out something from raghu's pocket. "toh uski bachpan ki yadein abhi bhi apni jeb mein liye kyun ghoom raha hain?" he asked. Raghu looked straightly at the sunflower design hair clip in raghu's hand. Suddenly a little girl's face flashed on her mind. Wearing a yellow frock with two spires in her hair and a long frame glasses in her eyes, she was looking towards him "raghu mera hair clip wapas karo!!" she said in her innocent angry voice. "nahi deta kya kar lega haan?!" he used to answer. "chintu kahika...!!" she said and fumed back to her house. "oye miss kaul!! Tujhe apni clip waps nahi milegi!! Samjhi?" he screamed from her back. Raghu was recalling his memories looking at the hairclip.

Precap: "didi!! There is a good news for us!" saroj said with gleaming eyes. "what's that saroj?!" geeta asked. "didi, antara called me!! She is coming back from Kolkata after finishing her study!!" saroj said with excitement. Geeta's lips parted into amazing smile.

So this is the 2nd chapter.😆 And please don't throw anda on me for including sattu hear.😆 Trust me he is total opposite ch in hear from the show😳. Not a crap one. And u will like him hear for sure.😊 And sorry for boaring update.🤢

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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
UNRESES...FINALLY! 🤣🤣🤣
Yaar OMG this was a hilarious update yaar couldn't stop laughing! Hayee finally we got the love angle! aww so they haven't met for quite a while now and he already lover her wuhooo 😆😆

Update Soon! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: alishamerchant

RES 😆

you will go mad with my RES's! 😆

mujhe toh lagta hain mujhe bas teri har reply mein ab res hi milegi...🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ifians

mujhe toh lagta hain mujhe bas teri har reply mein ab res hi milegi...🤣

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nahi re i have so MANY to read...i will sit down in the weekend and read 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: alishamerchant

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nahi re i have so MANY to read...i will sit down in the weekend and read 😳

matlab week end tak har din ek res... baap re..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ifians

matlab week end tak har din ek res... baap re..

tu kya har roz update degi?? 😲😲😲

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