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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Feram

very interesting...please update soon


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Wahian4lyf

cute precap

update soon!😊


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143

Aww loved it hope next update bohat dhamekdar hoga 😊


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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey guys..Finally I am here with an update. And yaah as u can read it..it is indeed a last part of this SS..I want to complete my SS with Rantara in DDEJ..Uske baad I don't know I will be able to write or not..So here is the last part..Hope you all liked it..

Chapter 7 (Last Part)

Ayaz put down his phone aside as soon as he saw some someone coming. He was waiting for Nikita so that they could go home together but for the 1st time she didn't wait for him..

He knew, he's known as a celebrity, a TV actor, and a well known face to the world, after all he is one to make his image but no one knew he's also a simple guy who only want love and care from his loved one. And was so alone in this crazy city called Mumbai. It was only Nikita, His Best friend who has always been there for him otherwise he doesn't know how he going to survive in this city. With such doubled faced peoples, but today He hurted her...

"I made my Best friend upset "He sighed...

There were Not a single day when Nikita didn't talk to me...It was all my fault, I admit but I didn't realize it until I saw tears rolling down to her cheeks last night. How could I do that...meri insecurities itni kaise bad gayi ki I hurted My BBF for that. It's always us...It's all my fault. I so want to apologize to her..But Dammit..She didn't even give me chance to do that..Subah bhi she directly come to set and just left me a text that she have to leave early. I know she is avoiding me, angry with me..Dammit Ayaz..u r such an idiot..You screwed everything. And now u have to do something and that too very fast...Nahi toh Nikita uska gussa sab par nikalne walihai like today.

Thinking about today Ayaz just got Goosebumps. Gosh, whole day Nikita was so angry. Her mood was so off. And all because of her. All day she was shouting to everyone.. Even the recent favorite Akshay was not spared. He got a threatening glare which was enough to quieten him as soon as he started one of his PJ's..In fact this Anger is also affecting her work. He still remember the no. of takes she gave for today's scene..I have to do something. SOON..

He took the keys of his car & drove away to Nikita's house..

Nikita was alone at home. Sitting on her bed, crying, thinking about all what just happened a day ago. Having chocho bar in one hand & hanky on the other..

"How could he say something like that?..Akshay, me and Vinni toh bas time pass karte hai..Khud toh kadoos hai..Kabhi enjoy nahi karta aur jab dusra kare toh bhi problem hai use..Stupid,Idiot.."

She stopped on her track when she found, She finished her chocolate already..

She sighed.."Ab isne bhi sath chor diya na..Koi nahin hai mera"..She said Pouting to herself.

All this while she didn't notice someone was standing at the doorstep & listening to her..He was equally sad & mad at himself but he had to clear the mess, after all he couldn't live a single day without her..

He silently close the door & stood beside her up-fronting his hand which had a chocolate bar..

Nikita noticed the bar & about to say thanks for it..Suddenly she thought about something & looked up..

"You? What you are doing here.? I told you Ayaz,I don't want to.."

"No! You don't want that and I know that.."

"Haan oh!..

He sat in front of her & cupped his face in no time. He knew She couldn't lie & She knows she could lie for him but not to him..

A tears felt down from her eyes &Ayaz couldn't take it anymore..

He hugged her tight..

"Sorry Nikita..You know I'm stupid, I'm Idiot but don't stop talking to me" I know I have hurted you & that's why you were not talking to me but trust me I didn't mean to offend you.."

"How could u even say that" Nikita told breaking the hug..

"I know yaar...I was just being STUPID..You know me na.. I could never hurt you..It was in the moment, I didn't mean it the way you think.."

He said holding his hand..

"But u said ki I was not paying attention to u...That was so not true..You know that Akshay me and vinni were only.."

"I kow baba..Kaha tohI ts all my fault..pata nahi kya soch raha tha..I feel ki I am nothing to you"..Nikita glared at him, He immediately bite his lips and said.."I know ki I am idiot but plz don't stop talking to me"

You are precious to me Ayaz..!"

Ayaz was staring at her..&Nikita continued..

"I may talked and chat with thousand people or even that Akshay but at last I come back to you, To my best friend..

Chatting and talking is easy but being honest is not which I can only be with you

Thousand of peoples can be with me but I find me, 'myself ' when I'm with you. So never think like this again..Ever.."

Ayaz had a smile after so much time..

"Sacch My Rajdhani Express..?"

Nikita chuckled at him..He is such a kid at times..She smiled.

"Mucch mein, My idiot and stupid Best friend"..She pulled his cheeks

They were sitting side by side now..Holding each other hand.

"Thank god,tu maan gayi..I was thinking pata nahi kya kya karna padega tujhe manane ke liye"..Ayaz said relaxing.

Nikita looked at him smirking..One look and Ayaz understood ki use ya nhai kaha chahiye tha.

Nikita: "Ab ye baat hai toh I want u to do something for me"

Ayaz: "Nahi yaar..Ab tu maan toh gayi hai."

Nikita: "Aisa bolega toh mein phir naraz ho jaungi"

Ayaz: "Nahi meri maa..tu naraz mat ho..bata kya karna hai"

"If you insist...make me feel special."

"In which way?"

"Mujhe kya pata. Just do it! And u have 24hrs for that" She bit her lower lip to stop the laugh and move towards the window... Why had she said it? Maybe because she had been feeling so average these days. Or maybe Ayaz was the only person she could say any kind of weird stuff without being judged. Oh well, he always made her run around in stress and tension. He should get a taste of his own medicine

Ayaz stood up from there and said to himself.."Now only god can save me"..he go from there..Nikita turned at him and smiled..Its going to be Fun.

Nikita didn't really feel like sleeping despite it being so late ,She got up and turned on the computer. Once on, she started randomly surfing the net. Liking her friend's photos, commenting on some status, checking out some random LOL pages for a good laugh; she just waited for sleep to come.

But something else did...

It took her a while to notice the tapping on the glass door behind her. On the chair, she turned around to see anything unfamiliar. It all looked normal at the first glance. But after a little while, she saw the source of disturbances.

Someone was throwing pebbles on the door.

Alarmed, she got up and walked towards the door. Sliding the door to the side, she stepped out in the night which wasn't so hot. A gush of wind played with her hair as she walked in the huge balcony. Some small pebbles lay on the floor. Confused, she picked one from the floor. Just then, a somewhat bigger pebble landed near her foot. Looking down she noticed that it was covered in paper.

She picked it up and opened the paper. A diagonal arrow was drawn there, pointing towards the balcony boundary. Not entirely sure of herself, she walked towards the balcony wall and looked down. There was nothing strange in the immediate sight. Was this someone's prank?

Irritated, she turned around to leave but she froze. Blinking, she looked down again. Her eyes widened in shock. Her heart seemed to start throbbing in her neck. She thought it was some kind of dream but apparently not...

Ayaz's wide grin and him waving his hand enthusiastically at her made her realize that it was real. Ayaz was standing down her balcony.

A cry of shock almost escaped her lip but it was the mere shock of all this which stopped it from doing so. And was that a guitar on his back?

"Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?!" She whispered frantically and asked him in hand gestures. He just took out his phone and motioned her to do the same. Her eyebrows creased in puzzlement but he urged her to do so. Turning around, she rushed to the room and picked up her phone and went out again.

As soon as she appeared on the balcony, her phone started ringing and she accepted the call. Her eyes were set on him who had put his phone on the on a box and set the guitar. Words seemed to fail her. Was he going to do what she thought he was going to do?

"Here's something special for you My BBF!" His words rang in the phone and she blinked. His fingers had begun strumming the guitar and music filled the night. Closing his eyes, he seemed to be completely engrossed in the song.

If you ever find yourself stuck in the middle of the sea,

I'll sail the world to find you

If you ever find yourself lost in the dark and you can't see,

I'll be the light to guide you...

Was this some dream? Was he actually down there singing a song for her?

You can count on me like 1 2 3

I'll be there

And I know when I need it I can count on you like 4 3 2

And you'll be there

Cause that's what friends are supposed to do, oh yeah...

He kept singing and with each passing moment, the reality seemed to dawn on her. Ayaz Ahmed, her best friend, was actually down in front of her balcony singing a song for her. The Ayaz who was literally the heartbeat of many girls around, was here singing a song for her. Not just a cheesy song. A song of friendship...

If you toss and you turn and you just can't fall asleep

I'll sing a song

beside you

And if you ever forget how much you really mean to me

Every day I will

Remind you...

At this verse, he opened his eyes and winked at her. A surprised smile curved her lips. Now, he wasn't breaking the eye contact. He was smiling, he was playing the guitar and he was singing. For her. Could there be anything more special than this feeling...?

You can count on me like 1 2 3

I'll be there

And I know when I need it I can count on you like 4 3 2

And you'll be there

Cause that's what friends are supposed to do, oh yeah...

You can count on me cuz I can count on you!

[The song is Count On Me by Bruno Mars ..One of my Fav song on Friendship..This Song always remind me of NiYaz Friendship..Hope u all like it too...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yJYXItns2ik&noredirect=1 ]

He finished the song and put his guitar aside. She was speechless. She couldn't even say anything. He picked up his phone and put it on his ear.

"Now, wasn't that special?" His words were teasing her but she couldn't even reply back. She was just trying to control her thumping heart which had just went through the most beautiful 2 minutes of her life. The most special two minutes...

"Hey! is ke badle mein ek "special" thank you tou banta hi hai!" He chuckled and she seemed to be pulled out from her thoughts. She looked at him, standing there looking all casual as if coming to a girl's place at 3 in the morning and singing a song for her was a perfectly normal thing to do. What had she done to deserve someone like him?

"I love you My best friend forever "Her words were straight from her heart. She just wished that they could convey what she was feeling right now.

"And I love too my Rajdhani Express!" He replied back and her heart seemed to burst inside her chest. Warmth was spreading all over body. Blood rushed to her cheeks as she blew a flying kiss towards him and he caught it and placed it near the heart.

"Good night..." She whispered on the phone.

"Good night." He replied and disconnected the call. Never for once did he take his eyes off from her. The look in his eyes, as if she was the most precious thing in the world. What more could a girl ask for?

He waved her a final goodbye before turning around to leave. He had climbed over the wall to be here and he was going back through the same route. Her eyes followed him as he disappeared behind the wall. Now, she couldn't see clearly but the sound of the car starting and moving away pierced the night's silence. When all was quiet again, she walked back in the room..

Sometimes in life, you find a special friend. Someone who changes your life just by being part of it. Someone who makes you laugh until you can't stop. Someone who makes you believe that there really is good in the world. Someone who convinces you that there really is an unlocked door just waiting for you to open it. This is forever friendship. ..Just like our NiYaz..Nikita and Ayaz got their BBF in each other..Both just can't thank their stars to giving each other..When they're down and the world seems dark and empty, they both lifts each other up in spirit and makes that dark and empty world suddenly seem bright and full. They both gets each other through the hard times, the sad times and the confused times. If one walks away, second follows. If one lose his/her way, second guides and cheers you on. They found forever friendship in each other, and forever has no end.

So This is it...I can't believe I completed my first SS that too on NiYaz😲..I always want to write but I was so scared to write anything and then NiYaz came to my life..I just adore them and their friendship like anything..They are the Sole reason of the origin of this SS..But It will not be complete without you guysšŸ¤—..You all are just too supportive..I am so glad that I got such a lovely set of readers for my first writing..You guys motivated me so much..I can't thank enough to each and every reader of this SS..But still I want to say Love you guysšŸ¤—..You all are just the best..Hope to see you all soon with another FF or OS...Till then..Take care Guys...Thanks once again...Lots and lots of hug and kisses..

Singing off!

Geet

A crazy NiYazian😳

Edited by sweetdesire - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Must readšŸ˜‰šŸ˜³


Hey Everyone!šŸ¤—

So finally this SS has come to its end. I really, really, from the bottom of my heart hope that you liked this part. It took me a long time to write it, since I wanted it to have the perfect ending and I didn't want to miss anything out.😳

I would also like to take this opportunity to Thank each and every one of you who has supported and motivated me to write this StoryšŸ¤—. When I first started it, I had absolutely no plans of continuing to be honest. I was too anxious that I wouldn't be approved as a writer but the love you guys showed me .Thanks to all the silent readers, the people who 'Like' the parts and/or comment! Thank you all so so so so much! Muaaah to you all!šŸ¤—

Also, many of you have thanked me for having the concept of NiYaz and writing it for you guys. I'd like to tell you all that I also had a lot of fun writing it up because everything about it has always been NiYazish I can't deny that this SS has been a really cheesy one..šŸ˜†

Anyways, sorry for the LONG blabber. I just had to let it out😳.. I have a few questions to ask you guys. You better reply to them.šŸ˜”šŸ˜†

Question Time:

1. What is your favorite scene from this whole SS (something you can't forget)?

2. Are there any dialogues you remember clearly?

3. How did you come across this FF?

4. Is there anything I should improve? (PLEASE don't say 'nothing'!, I'm welcome to criticism.)

Finally, A very Happy New Year to Everyone! May this year bring all the success, love and happiness your way! Muaaah! <3

Lots of Love

Geet


PS: Hey guys..I know u all are super buzy..But plzz its my huble request to answers the questions..It will take only 5 mins...plzzz😳


Love u allšŸ¤—

Edited by sweetdesire - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Geet i cant believe u have ended this SS... it has been the best SS.. pls write more dont end it... its really heart breaking to see it end.. pls
Edited by SweetiePie25 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

wonderfull ending geet. i wish if i could read more. but good things have to end soon. loveed this ss so much and will always be in top fav list.😃

u defined niyaz's freindship so good. i loved it. thats how all bff should be...😊

now coming to ur quesšŸ˜‰

1. What is your favorite scene from this whole SS (something you can't forget)?

i liked each and every scene... but my most fav scene was when ayaz, niki, jas, viny went in a day out in jas's b'day...

2. Are there any dialogues you remember clearly?

rajdhani express... šŸ˜†

3. How did you come across this FF?

ur PM ofcoursešŸ˜†

4. Is there anything I should improve? (PLEASE don't say 'nothing'!, I'm welcome to criticism.)

sorry to dissapoint you but i will say "NOTHING" šŸ˜†

cause i can't find any fault in these SS...

pls pls cont to write. u are awsome writer. i want something from you on rantara now rather than niyaz... would love to read how u define rantara

Edited by ifians - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I want to thank you for writing such a wonderfull story about niyaz. The ending was just perfect.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fantastic geetšŸ‘ loved ur SS dear😳
ayaz and nikita are true and best friends forever...😳
how peacefully and sweetly ayaz manofy nikita loved it😳
and yes "together they are perfect"šŸ˜‰šŸ‘šŸ¼
thanks dear😊 merry chirstmas and a very happy new year to youšŸ˜›
Edited by Tsuchi - 11 years ago

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