Together we are Perfect-A NiYaz SS Last Part UPDATED(Page 60) - Page 46

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ifians

wonderfull ending geet. i wish if i could read more. but good things have to end soon. loveed this ss so much and will always be in top fav list.😃

u defined niyaz's freindship so good. i loved it. thats how all bff should be...😊

Thanks a lot Ria know,U always be my Fav readeršŸ¤—

I just love all ur comments

Always motivating and supportive😳

I am so glad that u like last part also

Love u so muchšŸ¤—

now coming to ur quesšŸ˜‰

1. What is your favorite scene from this whole SS (something you can't forget)?

i liked each and every scene... but my most fav scene was when ayaz, niki, jas, viny went in a day out in jas's b'day... One of my fav scene too..Hi5šŸ˜†

2. Are there any dialogues you remember clearly?

rajdhani express... šŸ˜†..Lolzz..Nice onešŸ˜›

3. How did you come across this FF?

ur PM ofcoursešŸ˜†..He he he..ofcourse😳

4. Is there anything I should improve? (PLEASE don't say 'nothing'!, I'm welcome to criticism.)

sorry to dissapoint you but i will say "NOTHING" šŸ˜†

cause i can't find any fault in these SS...Awwiiee thats so sweet of u...getting such comment from writer like you means a lot😳..Muahhh

pls pls cont to write. u are awsome writer. i want something from you on rantara now rather than niyaz... would love to read how u define rantara

I will dear..For sure..But can't promise when..but don't worry jab bhi I will write will surely PM you

Take care

Muahhh

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Posted: 11 years ago
geet really thank u fr dis lovely journey into nitaz world thanks dear
Edited by ankusanu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetdesire


Thanks Rima dear
Muahhh

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sweetdesire thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey RimašŸ¤—
I know u would be buzy😳
but plz try to answer the questions
It will means a lot to me😳
Muahhh
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks dear for the lovely SS...hope you will continue to write another one very soon...loved every part of itšŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
Geet i hate yu..😭
Pagali u made me emotional der frndship is indeed really spcl to us..
Niyaz rocks so does u r update itna jaldi khatam geet!! Par i can understand perfectly wat u feel..😊 Geet it was jst perfect update awww wali feeling bilkul😳

I will wait for ur next ss/ff/os
Niyaz pe start karna wali u were d one n dat to so well..
I love ur ss every feeling described..every thing written.. loved it..
U r amazing writer no need to improvešŸ˜‰
Nd mi glad to have a frnd like u i loved ur new year gift..😳

Par mi thoda gussa itna jaldi khatam kar diyašŸ˜›
I hope u r satisfied wid my answers..
Keep writing pagali..
Loved it..
Lots of love.. n big wala hug..<3
-harshita..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Geet ...ur last update was like a beautiful song that started mesmerised me with its tune n divine purity n then gracefully ended... it reached deep into my heart ...and yess i wll say "NOTHING " for ur ss as i found no fault in ur ss ...
...i just wanna say that the way u drew this friendship of NIYAZ ...i wish i wd hv got a friend like this ...u r right what else a girl wd ask for ...n thn when u said forever never ends ...it consoled me in a way ...loved it ...n sad too that u ended it ...i know why u ended this so soon ...after rantara death it wll be a pain to write on rantara ...but do write ...and u r simply awesome ... if Rantara made me realise the true love ...ur NIYAZ made me realise true forever friendship ...its god's blessings ...not many in this vast world gets a true love n a true pure friend ...
thank you dear for writing this awesome piece. luv u a lot ...n be in touch always my friend ...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

Fantastic geetšŸ‘ loved ur SS dear😳

ayaz and nikita are true and best friends forever...😳
how peacefully and sweetly ayaz manofy nikita loved it😳
and yes "together they are perfect"šŸ˜‰šŸ‘šŸ¼
thanks dear😊 merry chirstmas and a very happy new year to youšŸ˜›


SuchišŸ¤—
Thanks a lot sweetheart for ur sweet comments
Means a lot
I am glad u like the name of this SS also😳
Muahhh
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Feram

thanks dear for the lovely SS...hope you will continue to write another one very soon...loved every part of itšŸ‘


Thanks dear
I will try to write something else for sure
ur words means a lot😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
its lovely geet
u r an amazing writer

now answers to ur questions
1)best scene was in the last part ayaz singing for nikita
2)best dialouge nae hai bt kuch parts jo kafi cute the like this was in part 1

Nikita: Thank god ki pack up ho gaya..gosh, I am hell tired...Aur ye kya baat hui,Kal ka call time 8 am hai..I mean itna jaldi

She made a puppy face...Ayaz smile on this ,shakes his heads on her nautanki and said

Ayaz: Bas bas,Nautanki..Samjh gaya mein...Koi nahi,aaj bhi I will drive only..Tu bas sare raste songs sunana as u do always..

3)well this one u know i came across ur story thru ur pm only
4)i have only one complaint why u r saying this d last part i m loving it so much pls continue yar its really awesome

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