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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: honeybees22

im shcoked yaar cant wait cont soon

Originally posted by: Feram

excited...thanks dear

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143

Omg its lovely, geet jaldi jaldi update karnas please, pm me also

Originally posted by: Serena.V

I really like this im happy 😃 😳

Originally posted by: ifians

hmm interesting...😉

kahin ye serial ka scene top nahin jo o log suit kar rahe hain??😆

Originally posted by: harshita1996

Geet mi excited..

Bahut n confused thoda..
Pls jaldi update karna...
Thanks fr d pm..:)

Originally posted by: shivam4387

Omg!
Update soon!
Thnq 4 d pm..!!


Thanks Guys for the Comment
hope u all will love next part😳
Lets see kya hota hai😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: neha.angel

OMG.. what s this... is it.. what m thinking.. no wait n a min.. kahi esa na ho what m thinking s all ma dream.. fr thiss nn need update plzzz update soon coz after reading this i can't wait .. anymore...i knw there will be tiwst in that bt what ever it s still want to read it .. it was splened one agar trailer esa hai to picture to aag lagade gii.. pm me fr that.. wating wating wating.. n can't wait any more... soo hurry up...


Hey Neha dear
Thanks for ur comment sweetheart
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I hope u will love it too😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Wahian4lyf

Excited!!!! Can't wait for the update 😊

Originally posted by: Nichuss

omggg geet...

wt to say...

if niyaz read it tey r goin to blush hard ha ha ha ha

:D

Originally posted by: Sushmitha.r

Geet itz lovely... em exited... at the same tym em confused also...😕



waiting fo ua nxt update dear... Update sooon...😃

Originally posted by: Smeera123

continue 😆 waise abhi tak fictitious characters ko hi read karte rahe 1st time ye h to bada maja aa raha h😆


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetieswagata

geet m so confused...yeh kya tha??😕

aur tadpao mat...jaldi update karna 😆

Originally posted by: KAJU10

WOW!!!!!👏
I hv read all ur updates in one go nd i'm speechless.
u r such a fab writer.
Plz update soon. I'm eagerly waiting fr d nxt part.😃


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Means a lot😳
will continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Kifsrkdewani

First sry about the late comment I was lil busy..2nd of all Omg Omg Omg did I just read that? omg this is my fav chapter officially before I even read the chapter lol do I need to say I can't wait for the update? Loved the promo great job yaar u r simply superb writer.ok I getta stop now and safe some complement for the chapter lol btw I'm thinking it's a dream or they r shooting for a scene.me n my crazy mind..


Hey dear
Thanks for ur sweet comment
Means a lot
And hey no sorry yaar😳

I can completely understand

will continue soon
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Heyy guyz🤗...Thanks sooo much 4 all the lovely comments. Means a lot to me..Your comments always brought a smile to my face😃. .Thanks a lot. I will try my best to write more and hope u all like it..😳


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Chapter 4


"You meet thousands of people, and none of them really mean anything to you. And then you meet one person, and your life is changed forever."

He looked at her standing in front on him with her eyes closed. He felt a mounting feeling inside him. He had never experienced it before; however, he could guess where it would lead them. No, don't...Don't mess it up!! But he couldn't help it...His feelings weren't in his control anymore. Nor were his senses. He could just feel her. Standing in front of him. Her hair blowing across his face. It smelt so good. She smelt so good. He could feel her fragrance surrounding him..

She suddenly felt His hands creeping around her waist.

She felt a weird sensation inside her. He had held her around the waist few other times before but today. It was different. There was more passion to it..she opened her eyes and turned to face him. He was looking into her eyes and she could see that the emotions were different today. There was passion in his eyes. He was urging her for something. She knew what he wanted but...

She move down her eyes. She was blushing like hell. And its not at all her fault.. Did he have to come so close to her?? She thought.. She could never think straight with him so close to her.. She couldn't seem to control her emotions in front of him...Her chain of thoughts were interpreted by his voice:

'Miss Kaul?' he said, softly.

Antara looked into his eyes. He could see so many emotions there. She was confused. She was scared. But there was something else. He could see the passion in her eyes.

"Raghu..." she was about to say something but cut it out by Raghu's confident voice

"Apun ne tere se kaha tha na...Mujhe ye sarmati and baat baat par gaal lal karne wali Misscall nahi chhaiye..Mujhe toh meri gusse wali miscall hi pasand hai"...

She looked at him and smile. They shared a romantic eye lock..*Mahi tu in the background*.


"And Cut!" The director shouted. Nikita and Ayaz broke their gaze and turned to him, raising an eyebrow in question. The man stared back at them silently, before clapping. Soon the entire studio was applauding their performance, again amazed at the charisma and chemistry NiYaz always bring to the scene. They Smile to each other before Hi5ing each other. So they again did it..They both really do a lot of practice and put so much effort. Just to see this moment. Just to hearing these clippings. Their all hard work indeed pays off whenever they delivered good scenes. Everyone likes their performances and now they have at least 1 hr to relax.

Ayaz: "So u again did it haan"...He said smiling at her

Nikita: "See I told you. I am just the best". She raised her imaginary collar and winked at him...He Raised a eyebrow at Her, She bite her tongue and giggled before saying:

"yaah yaah,Mr. Hero,I know...u r also very good and this chemistry is indeed our mutual efforts. Now stop self parsing urself and get ur ass off from this sofa, I also waana relax man...Its been 3hrs , we are shooting non stop". She said and relax herself on the same sofa

Ayaz: so wts the Plan?

Nikita: nothing. Just waana relax yaar..1Hr...she squealed with delight...Gosh,I so wish ki Ye 1 hr kam se kam 3 hs ke baad hi finish ho.She said lazily

Ayaz: yaah..And pigs can fly. He said sarcastically

Nikita looked at him with her famous scowl and said: "whatever dude...waise u know.".She suddenly said excitedly.."Meine toh tumhe bataya hi nahi...Last night mom called up. She said they are going to come to Mumbai...Can u believe it...That too for the whole 1 week. I am so excited". She said happily and squealing with happiness like a kid...Ayaz Smiled seeing her behaving like a 9 yr..waise bhi hai toh bilkul 9 yrs ki hi tarah..A cute Kid. He thought smiling and said.

Ayaz: wow, that's such a good news ...so when are they coming?

Nikita: The day after Diwali. And u know, Brownie is also coming. I am going to meet him after so long..Eekkksss

Ayaz: yaah ,ur dog na?

Nikita said defensively..."Hey Don't talk like that about him ok...He have a name. Brownie Sharma. She said with a pout

Ayaz: kya baat hai.. Brownie Sharma haan..he said teasingly. She looked at him with a glare..

Ayaz smiled at him and said...Ok baba,Ur brother Browinee Sharma..Bas..I am sure uski eyes bilkul teri tarah hogi..He said winking at her

Nikita: Very funny...But he is very cute ok.. Don't worry..Jab aayega na toh milwaungi..I am sure u gonna Love him..

Ayaz: I am sure I will.

Their usual chit chat was disturb by one of their spot boy

Spot Boy: Sir and Mam,Wo kuch media wale aaye hai..Aap dono ke liye puch rahe hai

Nikita: Unse kaho hum dono do min men aa rahe hai..She said to the spot boy and turned toward Ayaz and said..Chalo Jee...Mil gaya mujhe mera resting time. She said Sulking

Ayaz: oh come on Nikita..Its for our fan. Remember they daily tweet us for our off screen masti..Chal tym for that only. She said giving her a side hug.

Nikita Said smiling : yaah..Chalo lets the masti begin.

So here it it😳

First of all toh three cheers for Ria aka ifians, and Kifsrkdewani...You guys guessed it so right.👍🏼 And to others. I so love u guys🤗. I am so sorry If I disappoint anyone of you😳...Waiting for your comments.. 😳


Previous Chapter : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/do-dil-ek-jaan/3800237/together-we-are-perfect-a-niyaz-ss-last-part-updated-page-60?pn=17

Next Chapter : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/96713720

Edited by sweetdesire - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
woww yr!! tune to dil khush kr diya jb maine last part read kiya ki ayaz concerns about his fans😊
nice update😆
Edited by Tsuchi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow geet yaar really nice loved it
pls cont asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you . very nice . Please continue 😊

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