Pyaar aur Vishwas Rantara Ss part 7 page 15 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ohh yes dear you should continue, update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Srujana... Itz sooo romantic yaar... awwwhhh... I cant describe it in words yaar...
I luv the way yu described antu's beauty... N the way in wich u have put all their emotions n feelings in words... i am able to c the scene oly, infront of my eyes... I luved it yaar... Update the next part asap... N pm me okayy...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aw kya mast likka hai yaar, you have done a swell job...
Posted: 11 years ago
#34
wow...!! beautifully updated
i'm in love with ur ss...
thanx for the pm
and plz pm me for next part too.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You write so well! You do justice to your characters in the story! Loved it, please continue 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey guys before you move on to the update I want to thank all those who have reviewed my story it means a lot to me. ur reviews inspired me to write more.
I really thank you all from the bottem of my heart.
here goes part a thank you gift to all of you. this is the most romantic part i've ever written all by myself excluding the liplock part plase give your honest reviews
PART 3

Part 3

After the kiss Antara directly went to her house and closed the doors of her room and started smiling to herself. She couldn't believe that she and Raghu shared such a passionate and intimate moment. She went to her bed and lied on her back and told to herself

Antara - Raghu aaj raat meri zindagi ki sabase acchi raat hai mein sach mein tumse bohot pyaar karti hoon aur ab mujhe pura vishwas hai ki hum ek dusre keliye hi bane hai... she blushed and hid herself in a pillow

On the other hand Raghu was going towards the pandal when aaji joined him and asked

Aaji - arre chintu kaha tha tu jab se aayi hu tujse thik se baat bhi nahi kar payi

Raghu - aaji wo... wo miscall

Aaji - ohh samaj gayi mein

Raghu - kya samaj gayi aaji

Aaji - yehi ki mohobat ka raita tum dono ke maan mein puri tarah pfail gayi hai

Raghu - aaji woh kuch aisa hi samjho

Aaji - chal ghar chal

Raghu - tu nahi aarahi

Aaji - woh kya hai ki mujhe Antara ke sath kuch baat karni hai

Raghu - Aaji miscall se kya baat karni hai tujhe

Aaji - kyun batau tu jaa ghar jaa mein thodi der mei aati hun

In Antara's house

Antara had changed to her yellow night dress and was in kitchen with Ruksana. She was blushing every now and then. This was observed by Ruksana. She saw that Antara was lost somewhere and asked

Ruksana - are Antara kya hua aaj haan itna kyun Sharma rahi ho itna toh dulhan bhi nahi sharmati hai Allah tum toh tamatar se bhi zyada laal ho gayi ho zara Hume bhi toh batao kya hua tum dono ke bech

Antara - Ruksana kuch nahi bas aise hi

Ruksana - aise hi... nai nai mujhe to nahi lagta... jo bhi mujhe yeh batao ki aaj ki raat tumhara liye kaisa tha

Antara - bohot achha tha meri zindgi ki sabse khubsurat raat tha aaj tumhe pata hai aajke dandiya mei mujhe kitna maza aya mei pehle se zyada enjoy kar rahi thi lag raha tha ki mei wapas apni zindagi jee rahi hoon

Ruksana - yeh toh bohot acchi baat hui

They heard a doorbell ring and said

Antara - iss waqt kaun ho sakta hai

Ruksana - mein jake dekhti hoon

She opens the door to find aaji

Ruksana - arre aaji... aap aayiye andar... Antara dekho aaji ayiye

Antara got happy seeing aaji and said

Antara - aaji aap yaha she touched her feet

Aaji - tujhe dekhna chahti thi aur kuch baat bhi karni thi

Antara - aayiye baitiya

Aaji - pehli baat yeh hai ki mei tumhare aur Raghu ke liye bahot khush hoon akhir tum dono ko pyaar ho hi gaya hmm

Antara blushed a bit

Aaji - are tu sharmana band kar aur kal se kaam pe aana Shuru karde... kya hai ki itne dino se koi mere khyal rakhna keliye tere jaise ko tha nahi waha toh tujhe kal se aana padeka mei kuch nahi sunne wali

Antara got really happy that aaji asked her to resume her job and said

Antara - jee aaji mei aajaungi thank you aap nahi jaante ki mei aaj yeh sunke kitne khush hoon

Aaji - jaanti hu acha ab chalti hun haa kal time pe aajana she got up and wet till the door with both of them.

Antara - jee aaji apna khyal rakhna aaji left

Antara ruksana went upstairs. Ruksana said

Ruksana - congratulations Antara tumhe tumhari job wapas milgayi

Antara - woh Ishaan kaha hai

Ruksana - woh mere room mei sula diya hai bohot thak gaya tha aur mujhe laga ki use disturb karna thik nahi hoda

Antara - thik hai koi baat nahi

Ruksana - waise ek baat batao...

She was going to ask something when she heard a knock on the balcony door

Ruksana - Antara tum ne kuch suna

Antara - nahi toh kyun

Ruksana - mujhe aise laga ki koi darwaza knock kar raha hai

Antara panicked on hearing this. She very well knew it was Raghu so she tried to avoid the topic

Antara - are nahi Ruksana tum jaake so jao

They heard it more loudly and Ruksana thought something is fishy. She went and opened the door to find Raghu desperately standing there. He was wearing his normal attire.

Ruksana - Raghu tum yaha... she was shocked to see him there but understood everything in a second... she decided to pull their leg

Antara was in panic state thinking why Raghu was here

Raghu was shocked to find Ruksana there and fumbled

Raghu - Ruksana... woh... kuch... kaam tha

Ruksana - toh darwaze se bhi aasakte the na yeha... hai alla tum yaha yeh sedi(ladder) humesha rakhta ho kya

Raghu desperately looked at Antara asking for help. Antara said no. Ruksana observed this and said

Ruksana - are Raghu mei toh bas tumhari tag khech rahi thi... Mein bahar jaa rahi ho jo bhi kaam hai jaldi khatam karna

She winked to Antara and went out of the room.

After she was gone Raghu closed all the doors and went to Antara who was standing there smiling to herself. She was looking down not able to make an eye contact with him after what happened some time ago.

Raghu observed this and started moving towards her. When he came near to her she started moving backward till she hit the wall. He put his hands on the wall blocking her. She couldn't escape him now. He came more near to her. She still not making eye contact asked him

Antara - Raghu tum yaha kyun aye ho

Raghu - kuch lene tha tujhse socha abhi le lun baad mei toh tu so jayegi

Antara - kya

Raghu - woh... good night kiss... kya hai ki tujhe dekhe bina soone ka maan nahi kar raha tha toh socha milne aau aur jab aa hi gaya hu toh kuch lekar hi jaaunga na

Antara - Raghu nahi... woh Ruksana aajayegi

Raghu - meine sare darwaze and kar liya hai... koi nahi aane wala hai yeha

Antara was not able to hold herself now and escaped his arms. He quickly caught her hand and hugged her from back... he said

Raghu - agar kiss nahi dena toh tu kuch aur bhi kar sakti hai

Antara - kya

Raghu - mere sath dance kar

Antara - par Raghu...

Raghu - dekh miscall mana mat karna

Antara - lekin Raghu music...

He still held her in his arms took out his phone and played a song

please play the song while reading it will give a better effect.
He released her from the hug and took her hand and went back few steps. He pulled her such that she came and hit his hard chest. He took her right hand and kept it on his shoulder. He wounded his one hand around her waist.

She took his free hand in hers and started swaying to the music they were taking in this beautiful moment. They did not break their eye contact the whole time. They felt heavenly in each other's arms. They both were so close that their hot breath was felt on each other. He took her hand twirled her around. He took her in his arms again and wounded both his hands around her waist and leaned on her. She held his shirt for support.

He made her straight. She was looking down. He held her chin and raised her head upwards. She looked at his eyes. His eyes had filled with love towards her. She realized that his love towards her is the strength to face the world. She is ready to face the worst conditions if he is with her. Because she is incomplete without him.

She rested her head on his shoulder as swayed to the music rhythmically. The atmosphere was so romantic. She felt to be in his arms like this and never leave him.

The music stopped as the song had ended. Antara hugged him tight as if she'll lose him any moment. Raghu was surprised by her action but hugged her back. After few seconds he felt hot tears soak his shirt. He panicked and removed her from the hug. He asked

Raghu - miscall kya hua tu ro kyun rahi hai... dekh mei tujpe zarbardasti nahi karna chahta tha mein to sirf...

She silenced him by putting her finger on his lips

Antara - Raghu mei aaj bohot khush hoon... aaj mujhe ek saath itna khushi mila raha hai ki mujhe dar sa lagraha hai ki kahi yeh khushi sirf aaj tak rahega she expessed her fears to him

Raghu - bilcul yedi hai tu... miscall tu yeh aisa bilcul mat socho... tum bekar mei dar rahi hai... tu tension mat le... dekh raat bohot ho gayi hai tu so ja... he relaxes her

Raghu wiped her tears and lead her to bed and made her lie down. He leaned on her and kissed her forehead and said

Raghu - goodnight miscall sirf mere hi sapne dekhna

He was about to go when Antara held his collar and kissed his cheek. Raghu got stunned 😲. He looked at her. She said

Antara - kyun nahi chahiye tha kya

Raghu - nahi aise baat nahi hai... good night

Antara - good night lekin tum bhi sirf mere hi sapne dekhna

He looked at her and winked. He left.šŸ˜‰

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so that's all for now. please give your honest reviews. ur comments are ones which inspire me to write more
Edited by srujanahpvr - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow well done yaar superbb it was such a romantic update 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hayee such a romantic update .. Lol Raghu got caught šŸ˜† .. Im glad Ajji gave her the job again.. Now she will be in NS all the time šŸ˜‰ .. Haw she kissed him.. Lots of kisses everywhere these days šŸ˜† .. Awesome update 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sushmitha.r

Srujana... Itz sooo romantic yaar... awwwhhh... I cant describe it in words yaar...

I luv the way yu described antu's beauty... N the way in wich u have put all their emotions n feelings in words... i am able to c the scene oly, infront of my eyes... I luved it yaar... Update the next part asap... N pm me okayy...


Didn't know I had meet a Srujana (me) and Susmitha (my sister) on the same forum:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hayeee ! Kitna romantic tha

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