Pyaar aur Vishwas Rantara Ss part 7 page 15 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
beautiful update... šŸ‘šŸ¼
thanx for pm...
lovely, romantic...
plz cont. it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Awww tat was so romantic

antu surprised raghu wirth cheek kiss

aaji askd her to join caretaker job soon...wow...

More romance in naik sadan
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Hey amazing update so romantic loved it.. thanls fr pm keep updating happy writing...:)<3
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

Super duper upadte yaar, kya sweetly likka hai, rukksan is really a masti kor person. lovely yaar, you made me fall in love with them again...

SPLENDID!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Amazing update!!!
Romantic dance!! This was new!!! Now i want to see them dance in the show!!!
Loved it!!!
Thanxx for the pm!!!
Update soon!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
superb awesome brilliant outstanding
i simply loved it
please continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Hayeee that was so cute and the music OMG loved it plz update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Hey dear
Love the update
Rantara dance is too romantic
so waana read more
so do continue soon
Thanks for the PM
Take care

Geret
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
wow this was so romantic i loved it
pls cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
hey guys part 4 is here
I personally am not much satisfied with it. but the next part will be full on twists and turns.
forgive me if you din't like it much
PM's are on the way
PART 4

Part 4

Next morning

Antara woke up after such a beautiful night. She saw the time, it was 6:30. She had to go to Naik Sadan. So she started to get ready and went. She entered the naik sadan. On the way she saw satya who was going for a morning walk. She tried to avoid him but he caught up with her and asked

Satya - antara tum yehan... itni subah

Antara - han woh aaji ne bulaya haisatya

satya- par aaji toh abhi soo rahi hogi

antara - sahib aapko shayad pata nahi lekin aaji 7 baje uth jati hai toh mujhe jana hoga

satya - aisa kya kaam hai ki tumhe subah subah aana pada

Antara got a bit worried as she knew if satya come to know that she is aaji's care taker then he will try to take advantage of it. But he would somehow know so she was going to say when she saw aaji coming.

Aaji - arre antara tu aagayi... she saw satya and said.. satya tum toh iss se mile hoge na... yeh meri care taker hai... bohot aar meri jaan bachai hai isne

Satya - really... tumne toh yeh baat mujhe bataya nahi... waise thanks meri aaji ka jaan bachane ke liye

He forwarded his hand for a hand shake

Antara - its ok mera farz tha

Just then Raghu came to her rescue and said

Raghu - sahib... mai ne tujhe bulaya hai apne kamre mein

Satya - oh. Bad timing antara. Tum yehi rehna.. he said in serious flirty tone... aaji ka dhyan rahne ke liye..

Satya went away from there exchanging glares with raghu. Raghu's eyes showed some kind of suppressed anger which was noticed by antara. Aaji sensed something is not right between the couple so she excused herself saying

Aaji - antara mei apnekamre mei jaa rahi hoon mere liye gara doodh le aana

Antara - jee aaji

Aaji left the couple alone for some time

Antara - raghu tum...

He took a step forward and held antara's hand and said

Raghu - tujhe kuch bolne ki zaroorat nahi hai miscall... mujhe tujhpe pura bharosa hai.. bas dar iss baat ka hai ki mein jab yeha na rahu toh sahib kuch kar na le

Antara - raghu tum chinta mat karo mein puri koshish karungi ki sahib sa humesha dur rahun... aur tumhe call karti rahungi.. hmm

Antara assured him. He caressed her hair and gave an understanding look.

He got a little naughty for a while and started moving towards her giving her a killer look. She started moving back... she was afraid that she will melt anytime if she dared to look into his eyes so she looked downwards...

Raghu - waise raat kaisi thi miscall

Antara blushed hard remembering all the events of last night... their dandiya... their kiss... their romantic dance... and lastly her good night kiss to him

She suddenly hit the pillar and he blocked her by putting both his hands on either sides of her... she said

Antara - raghu tum yeh kya kar rahe ho... dekho koi aajayega... hum hall mei hai

Raghu - toh aane de

Antara - raghu please mujhe jaane do

Raghu - tab tak nahi jab tak tu mujhe kiss nahi degi

Antara - arre raghu kal raat ko hi diya tha na

Raghu - woh to raat keliye tha... apun toh abhi keliye mang raha hai

Antara had no escape but she suddenly had a scared look on her face and says

Antara - mai... aa... aap

Raghu suddenly let go of her and turns back to see no one there... antara escapes from there saying

Antara - jaal tha... itni aasani se nahi dungi mei

She ran away from there with a smile .Raghu comes there following her

She comes to kitchen and keeps her bag... and keeps milk to boil.. She starts to prepare a dish for aaji and brings all the ingredients form the cupboards

Raghu comes there and sees her running around for the ingredients... he smiles on seeing her and leans on the kitchen door... she sees him and they smile to each other and have a eyelock.

She sees the other way and got busy with her work... one container was above on the shelf which she couldn't reach. She tried by going on her toes but couldn't. He came behing her and kissed er cheeks.

She got startled and turned around. He said

Raghu - mei utar tha hun

Antara - hmm

While taking the dabba down his chest pressed on to her. She was breathing hard from the close proximity of his. He took the dabba and kept it aside and looked in to her eyes. She was just looking at him lovingly. He came forward and kissed her cheek. Antara started blushing. He said

Raghu - abhi toh mein jaa raha hun miscall dekh ta hoon tu kab tak bhagti hai mujhse

He winks at her and goes out of the kitchen. On the way out he says

Raghu - waise miscall doodh bohot garam ho gayi hai. Gas off karna

She comes out of the trance and switch of the stove. She smiles to herself and shakes her head.

She takes the milk and the dish she prepared to aaji's room. Aaji throws a lot of excuses to antara so that she won't eat the bland food. But antara convinces aaji in a very sweet way... antara was enjoying with aaji after so many days. They chatted with each other. Did some exercises and laughed a lot. Aaji said

Aaji - tu haasti hui kitni sundar dikti hai... tujhe dekhe kitna din ho gaya tha... meine tujhe bohot miss kiya... pata hai raghu toh jab bhi time milta na mujhe call karke tere bare mei baat karta tha

Antara - kya baat karta tha aaji

Aaji - bohat baat karta tha... tere baare mei tere se judi har baat pe... uske baato se saf pata chalta tha ki tum dono ek dosre se bahut pyaar karte hoon

Antara blushed and looked down...

Aaji - tu sharmati hui bhi bohot khubsurat lagti hai... ek minute rukh mei abhi ayi

Aaji goes to her cupboard to search something when she realizes that its with DM. She says

Aaji - antara mere ek kaam karegi.. meine daya ko apne kuch sari diya tha jaake woh lea

Antara - ji aaji

Antara goes to DM's room slightly scared to face her she comes to her room and knocks the door

Antara - mai

DM sees antara. She as busy so she replies haan bolo kya baat hai

Antara - mai wo aaji ne aap ko kuch sadiyan(saris) de thi toh aaji ne kaha ki mei le aaun

DM - haan wo...ruko mein deti hun

DM a bit absent minded takes few saris which were aaji's and hands it over to antara

Antara - shukriya mai

DM - tum jaa sakte ho

Antara goes away from there

Precap - someone is holding the letter in hand and reading it. Who is that person???

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