Pyaar aur Vishwas Rantara Ss part 7 page 15 - Page 2

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wow i cannot believe it was your first try
i mean it is so good that i cannot believe u wrote for the first time
its too good
please pm me the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow yaar i loved it soo much
im in lovew with this and rantara short romance loved it
pls pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey nice os great start update soon love rantara n ruku... wats d suspense..?!:) waitingg update soon..:D
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Great os.. Thank god they sorted everything out.. Omg who's coming?? Continue soon :)
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wow nice dear continue soon and plz pm me
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guys here's the 2nd part of OS I really thought u guys will guess the mystery person bt anyway read along you will find out.

I don't know how it is please give your honest reviews

Part 2

Night had finally arrived and the dandiya competition was yet to start. Antara and Ruksana came out of the house and were talking and laughing with each other. Antara had worn a beautiful red anarkali which had silver works on them. She came and said

Antara - Ruksana mujhe tumhari help ki zaroorat hai karogi kya

Ruksana - ha kyun nahi batao Raghu ke sath phirse akele milna hai kya

Antara - Ruksana nahi who baat nahi hai waise baat kuch aur hai woh kya hai ki... she whispered something into her ears and Ruksana readily agreed to it. They reached the place where all the dandiya sticks were kept and took one pair for themselves. Just then Raghu came there from his home towards the pandal. He had worn the read sherwani and was looking dangerously hot...

The moment RAntara saw each other they couldn't stop drooling at each other. Slowly Raghu approached towards Antara. She blushed when she realized that he was pouring all his love from his eyes to her. She looks elsewhere but not at Raghu. He comes close to her and says

Raghu - Miscall...

Antara - hmm she said still looking down

Raghu - maarne ka iraada hai kya he said huskily

Antara - kya Matlab

Raghu - ab tu itni khubsorat lagne lago gi toh mein pata nahi shayad ek din hospital pahuchunga

Antara - achha toh ab tumhe mere khubsurat dikne se tumhe problem hai... faking anger

Raghu - arre mera wo Matlab nahi tha miscall mein tho bas yeh keh raha tha ki tu ek dum phataka lag rahi hai

Antara blushed for a moment and said

Antara - waise tum bhi bohot handsome lagrahe ho... kisi ka dil churana hai kya

Raghu - nahi toh jiska dil churana tha voh toh ab meri hogayi hai yeh toh bas kisi ko dikhane tha ki mei bhi barabar ki takkar de sakta hoon he said in a flirtatious tone.

Antara - ohh toh tum ab mujhe takkar dena chate ho..

Raghu - yuhi samajh lo aaj dandiya ras mein dekhte hai ki kaun zyada behtar hai

Antara - lekin Raghu

Raghu - kyun dar gayi koi baat nahi main samajhta hoon tujhe aati nahi hai isiliya na he said trying to provoke her.

Antara - nahi aise koi baat nahi hai... mujhe aata hai khela aur ab tumne challege kiya hai toh harne keliya tayaar ho jao she retorted back.

Raghu - miscall tu shayad jaanti nahi iss basti mein aaj tak koi mujhe hara nahi paya hai he said with a lot of attitude

Antara - har cheez ka pehli baar hota hai toh tayaar rehna Raghu

Ruksana saw them giving tashan wala look to each other and came to them. She said

Ruksana - are are are yeeh kya ho raha hai prem ki panchiyon ke bech takrar

Antara - ab takrar ho hi Gaya hai toh dekhte hai ki kaun jeet ta hai

Antara goes away from there Ruksana says

Ruksana - Raghu yeh kya kiya tumne

Raghu - aaj subah jo hua uke baad miscall ko haste hue dekhna tha mereko mein chahta hoon ki woh aaj ki dandiya ras na bohot enjoy kare woh duniya ko bhol kar masti kare subah se thik se use smile bhi karte hua dekha nahi maine toh aaj mein yeh raat uskeliye yaadgaar banana chata hoon mujhe woh yedi wali miscall dekhna hai

Ruksana - are wah Raghu kitna pyaar karte ho apni miscall se she sighed a heavy breath and said kaash hume bhi aisa pyaar naseeb hota

Raghu - Ruksana mujhe lag raha hai ki us yedi ke sath milkar na tu bhi usiki tarah yedi ban rahi hai

Ruksana - Raghu

Raghu - aur nahi toh kya tujhe bhi ek din pyaar hoga samjhi

Ruksana - accha baba thik hai ab chalo dandiya Shuru hone wala hai

In the meanwhile Antara on the other hand was at the other end of the pandal. Unknown to her Satya comes where she is tells

Satya - hey Antara

Antara hearing Satya got scared at first bt became bold and said

Antara - sahib aap yaha she said uncomfortably

Satya - oh ho Antara meine us din hi kaha tha ne ki tum mujhe Satya bula sakti ho he said reminding her of their meeting in her house

Antara - its ok sahib kya hai ki agar mai ko pata chala na toh... mein apne aur Raghu ke rishta ko apni choti galti ke wajah se jokhe (danger) mei nahi daal sakti

Satya - good i like it... acha laga yeh jan ke ki tumhe apne aur Raghu ke rishta ko sahi salamat rakhna chati ho

Antara very well knew he ment that he was determined to break her relationship with Raghu.

Antara - mujhe kuch kaam hai men abhi aati hoon she said hoping to avoid him

Satya - meintumhara madad karoon

Ruksana came on the right time and replied

Ruksana - arre sahib aap ko takleef lene ki zaroorat nahi hai mein hoon Antara ki madad karne

Machmach then took the mike and announced to everyone that Daya mai has come so they can tar the dandiya program now. But just then a Car entered in to the basti.

A person came out of the car (i thought everyone will guess who this person is) and said Ek minute abhi nahi...

Everyone saw towards that person with a puzzeled expression and were shocked to find Aaji

Aaji - Tum log mere bina dandiya nah Shuru karoge arre mujhe bhi to khelne do

RAntara got happy seeing seeing Aaji and Raghu said

Raghu - aaji tu yaha he went and took her blessings

She blessed him.

Antara - arre aaji she ran to her and hugged her. Antara was now very happy that aaji was back. Aaji blessed her and said

Aaji - kya baat hai Antara badi khubsurath lag rahi hai tu... kii ki nazar a lage tujhe

Satya also came forward and took her blessings. Aaji blessed him and hugged him. She said

aaji - kitne saalo baad tujhe dekh rahi hoon tu kitna badal gaya hai

Satya - aaji mei tere liye toh wahi Satya rahunga joh bachpan mein hua karta tha

just then DM came there and asked her after taking her mother's blessings

DM - aai tu yeha... tune bataya nahi ki tu aa rahi hai (she was a bit surprised to see her)

Aaji - pehle yeh bata tune kya kaha tha ki Satya ke aane ke baad tu mujhe wapas bulayegi toh bulaya kyun nahi agar Antara na mujhe bataya na hota toh mujhe pata hi nahi chalta she said with a slight anger

Mai looked at Antara. Antara was scared and said

Antara - mai woh bas meri muh se nikal gaya tha mei mei... she started stammering

DM faked sweetness and said

DM - arre tum itne ghabrai kyun rahi ho.. mei khud bulane wali thi aai ko lekin tumne mera kaam kar liya.. shukriya

Antara heaved a sigh of relief and Raghu looked at her. Raghu signalled her to not to take tension about this matter. They had a small eyelock. Then Antara looked away.

The dandiya program started and every one were on full swing. It looked as if the whole basti was enjoying the night. Especially RAntara.

Disclaimer - guys i seriously don't know much about dandiya so all what i have written below is purely my imagination

People were dancing in two circles the outer ones had males and the inner circle consisted of females. They were doing the steps such that they could alternatively change the position of circle for a period of time.

Suddenly Raghu saw that Satya was trying to come close to Antara even though she was trying to be away.

He immediately signalled Ruksana who was standing beside Antara to do something. She understood and suddenly and intentionally tripped herself and in the process Satya fell down with a thud. Ouch...

DM shouted for him and took him to other place and asked to continue the dandiya competition. Now only six people were left among them were our RAntara MM and ruku.

Suddenly Aaji announced that there will be a twist there will be competition in couples

Ruksana suddenly held Machmach and pushed Antara so that it looked like they both want to pair.. Machmach looked at Ruksana in awe for her speed in executing the plan.

The competition started and in the end finally our RAntara were the winners. Daya mai handed over the prize to them and blessed them. Raghu then pulled Antara and took her to their romance karne ki jagah when everyone were busy with other things and did not notice them.

He brought her and pinned her to the wall. She blushed and looked down

Antara - Raghu tum mujhe yaha kyun laye

Raghu - humari jeet ko celebrate karne keliye aur sham se jo hissab baki hai use pora karne keliye.

Antara - Raghu...

Raghu - shhh... Miscall.. aaj mein tujhe dikhana chahta hoon ki mein tume kitna pyaar karta hun... tumhare bagair jeene se mujhe dar lagta hai... aisa lagta hai ki mujhse meri jaan nikal diya ho... mujhe aaj ...

Antara - shh... kuch mat kaho Raghu tumhe jo kehna tha wo tumne keh diya ab mujhe blone do... mujhe bhi dekhna hai humare pyaar... mujhe bhi wo sab kuch mehsoos karna chahti hoon jo har ladki karti hai... jab koi uske dil ke itne karib hota hai ki woh use apna sab kuch mane... Raghu mei bhi aaj dekha chahti hoon

She said as she closed her eyes and placed her hands on his chest.

Raghu looked at her. She looked so beautiful. Moon's rays were falling on her and she looked so pure and angelic.

He went closer to her ad kissed her forehead then her both the eyes and her cheeks.

He wanted to go further but stopped himself and went a bit back.

Antara sensing Raghu's hesitations opened her eyes. She saw that Raghu was looking directly into her eyes. She said

Antara - ruk kyun gaye

Raghu -wo tujhe koi aitraz toh nahi hai na

Antara nahi hai.. mei khud chahti hun...

He came closer to her and she closed her eyes. He to close his eyes and softly place his lips on hers and gently caressed her lips with his. Antara slowly raised her hand from his chest and wounded them around his neck.

Then Antara parted her lips allowing Raghu to nibble on her upper lip. After some time the slow soft lip lock became a passionate kiss as they both opened their mouth and explored each other. They parted after some time and opened their eyes. Passion and love were oozing out of them. Their proximity created a change in atmosphere around them. They looked into each other's eyes for a while and Antara said

Antara -ab hum dono sach mei Do dil ek jaan hogaye hai

Raghu - sach mei..

And saying that Antara who was completely red of what happened a while ago, escaped his arms and ran away while Raghu stood there feeling the moment.

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well this is the end of part 2

I wanted to ask you guys that wether should I continue this story and make it a RAntara SS or not

i'll decide as per your reviews

if you have really liked this part then plz hit the like button

so comments please

PM's on the way

Edited by srujanahpvr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
wow loved it soo much
pls cont it and thnks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Hey amazing thanks fr d pm keep writing really nice satya fall wid a thud i liked it... hehe:D happy writing...:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
brilliant awesome update
please make it a ss or ff
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
grate. ajji come back. u should continue and thanks 4 the PM

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