Pyaar aur Vishwas Rantara Ss part 7 page 15 - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey guys part 6 is up... please review and tell me how is it
and one more thing. I had asked suggestion from some people thorugh PM's for the title of this ss. thanks guys - Sophia21, sweetdesire, richurachna for your replies... I have named my Ss... please tell me how is it.
Part 6

Machmach Antara and Aman arrived at Machmach's house. He locked the door and closed all the windows. Antara and Machmach stood before aman with obvious questioning look

Antara - aman mein puri baat janna chahti hoon.. aur sach sach batana... mujhe har ek baat batao jo iss bomb blast se juda hai...she screamed... bolo mujhe

Aman - tumhara gussa hoona bilcul jayiz hai Antara...mein ne uss letter mein sab kuch sachhi likha tha

Antara - lekin issme mai ka kya haath hai saaf saaf batao

Aman - uunhone hi mujhe woh bomb diya tha... woh Kashmir mein unke kuch dushman hai unhe darane ke liye yeh bomb blast ki plan banaya aur kaha ki mujhe yeh plan ko anjaam dena hai... mein ne unhe kaha ki mujhe ek aadmi ki zaroorat hai toh unhone Raghu ko mujhe diya... mein ne use apne maksat keliye uska istemal(use) kiya aur mein kamyab raha... mai na mujhe Raghu ke baare mei har jaankari diya tha isiliya use aasani sa use manipulate kar paya...

Antara just gave a tight slap to aman... and said

Antara - yeh Raghu ke haathon mere papa ko marene keliye... ab mujhe mai ke baare mei sab kuch sach batao... woh yeh sab kaam kabse kar rahi hai...

Aman -bohot saalon se... unka yehi business hai...woh yehi kaam karke un black paison(black money) kamati hai...

Antara closed her eyes as tears fell down

Machmach - aaye tu yeh kya bol raha hai... kaise maane ham...bhai toh mai pe andha viswas karta hai toh hum agar bhai ko bataye to kaise

Antara - tum woh sab mujhpe chod do bas isse yehi rakhna... aur nazar banaye rahe... kahi bhag na jaye ya phir mai ke aadmi phir isse utha na le... tum kahi mat jaana samjhe... he nodded assuring that he won't go anywhere until the truth is out.

Machmach dropped her till the basti and went back.

Antara was walking down the basti towards her house. She was completely lost thinking about something. Suddenly she stopped at somewhere middle of the basti. She closed her eyes. She felt Goosebumps all over her body. She knew it wasn't due to the cold weather but because of the bitter truth she heard a while ago. A layer of tear formed in her eyes.

A pair of palms closed her eyes suddenly. She got surprised.

Antara - kaun hai... she touched the palms with her hands to feel the person... suddenly

Unknown person - comes near her ears and whispers... shh...

She felt the hot breath and suddenly recognised

Antara - Raghu

Raghu removed his hands and came in front of her...

Raghu - are wah miscall badi jaldi pehchan liya mujhe

Antara was facing Raghu for the first time after knowing the truth... complete truth of her father's death... she didn't know whether to say him the complete truth or not... he saw some tear stains on her eyes and got worried and held her face...

Raghu - miscall... tu ro rahi thi kya

Antara realised that he might have noticed so she tried to hide it...

Antara - kuch nahi Raghu woh bas... papa ka yaad aaraha tha... she said in a low voice

Raghu came one step forward and held her hands...

Raghu - tu theek hai

Antara shaked her head saying no and suddenly hugged him tight... he was surprised by sudden hug but hugged her back... he thought that she needs his support... on the other hand Antara who was hugging him like she will never let him go. Unbeknown to her a tear escaped her eyes... Raghu who was hugging her felt something he partly released himself from the hug and saw her face... she had closed her eyes tight and a tear had ran down her cheek. They both were close and had their arms around each other... he got panicked...

Raghu - miscall kya hua... please bata mujhe tu roo kyun rahi hai... dekh tu janti hai na ki mein tujhe rota nahi dekh sakta... are meri jaan nikal jaati hai... batao kya baat hai

She came out of the hug and took two steps back...

Antara - kuch nahi Raghu... bas darr lag raha hai

He came forward and held both her hands

Raghu - kis baat ka darr...tujhe abhi kal ki baat sata rahi hai kya ki tu mujhse dur ho jayegi...miscall tu aise hi darr rahi hai tu chinta mat kar aisa bilcul nahi hoga

Antara - Aur agar ho Gaya toh... Raghu agar koi baat ke wajah se tum mujse juuda hogaye toh

Raghu - nahi hoga... miscall tu meri jaan hai...aur agar koi apne jaan se alag ho jaye toh kya woh jee payega???

Antara - Raghu...

Raghu - nahi na..waise hi tere bina yeh Raghunath naik mein koi jaan nahi...

Antara - itna pyaar karte ho mujhse...

Raghu - sabse zyada

Antara - aur bharosa

Raghu - apne aap se bhi zyada...

She got stunned after hearing that and hugged him again... he hugged her back and said

Raghu - dekh miscall agar tujhe ab bhi dar lag raha hai toh...

Antara - nahi Raghu mujhe ab koi darr nahi hai... she said assuring him

She thought in her mind... bas ab Hume humare rishta ki sabse badi kante ko apne zindagi se kisi tarah nikal na hoga...

They came out of their hug and Raghu said

Raghu - waise kya tum sadak pe hi mere sath baat karti rahega yaa apne ghar bhi bulayegi

Antara realised it and welcomed him to her house.

She rang the door bell and Ruksana came out

Ruksana - Antara tum...

She was about to ask her whereabouts but she saw Raghu and changed her question

Ruksana - Raghu... tum yehan iss waqt

Raghu retorted - kyun nahi aasakta kya

Ruksana - yeh bhaigiri na Antara ke gharwalo ke samne karo tab mein tumhe andar bluaungi...

Raghu - Ruksana tu...

Ruksana - mein kuch nahi sunne wali bas tum jao yeha se waise bhi raat ke 11:00 ho gaya hai to jao jaake so jao

Raghu - tujhe toh mein baad mein dekhlunga... good night miscall..

Raghu was about to go when he realised something. He asked

Raghu - waise miscall tu iss waqt bahar kyun khadi thi??

Antara panicked and thought what will she say... just then Ruksana came to her rescue and told

Ruksana - Raghu... woh kya hai ki Antara ne sham ko kuch der so gayi thi aur use ab neend nahi aarahi thi toh meine kaha ki bahar todha hawa khake aaye

Raghu nodded giving into the excuse and went towards naik sadan.

Ruksana closed all the doors and windows and came to Antara. She made her sit on the sofa and brought a glass of water.

Ruksana - itni raat ko kaha chali gayi thi...

Antara - Ruksana woh...

Ruksana - mein jaanti hoon ki tum kafi der se ghar mein rahi ho... kahi tum woh khat padne ke baad kahi...

Antara - nahi Ruksana... mein woh Daya mai ka pecha karne gayi thi Machmach ke sath...

Ruksana - kya?? Tum theek hona aur aisa kya baat hui ki tum unke peecha kiya

Antara - mujhe shak hua toh mujhe karna pada and she told all the truth to Ruksana...at the end Antara was about to break down but Ruksana held her and gave her a hug.. they broke the hug and said

Ruksana - chalo kuch khalo

Antara - nahi mann nahi hai

Ruksana - khali pet soothe nahi hai chalo

She made her sit and eat dinner and makes her sleep

She comes into her room and thinks

Yah allah yeh kaise pariksha le rahe ho aap indono ka... dono bekasoor hai phir bhi aisa horaha hai inke sath

Next morning

Antara, aaji, MM, Ruksana, Aman in Machmach's house

They all gathered here so that DM won't suspect them as MM's house is a bit far from the basti. aaji got to know about everything and made an excuse of going to the doctor.but instead she took Antara and Ruksana to MM's house.

Ruksana - toh aaji ab kya kare

Aaji -mujhe lagta hai ki Raghu ko is bare mei bata dena hoga

Machmach - nahi aaji bhai yeh seh nahi paayega

Aaji - use sehna padega kyunki woh jisse bhagwan manta hai woh asal mein kitna bada katil hai.

Ruksana - lekin aaji use baatayenge kaise aur kaun batayega use

Antara -aman... tumhe uss bomb blast ke bare mein Raghu ko sab sach batana hoga

Aman -haan mein tayaar hoon... use sach batane ke baad maut bhi mujhe swekar hai..

MM -lekin yedi

Antara- meinjanti hun... mein Jaakar use sambhaalne ki koshish karungi...

Precap - Raghu gets to know the truth

------------------------------------------------------- coments please PM's on the way buddy me for PM's for future updates
Edited by srujanahpvr - 11 years ago
richurachna thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
wow dear superb.i love it
and thank you for using my suggestion name in ur OS name. lovely
w8tng 4 ur updation
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
wow loved it soo much
precap sounds scary
cont soon
Jaan21 thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#94
It's amazing loved the update
And the title is perfect really liked it
Plz update soon
bokul thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
lovely update
and i love the name
please continue
i have a request
if possible show a scene where raghu tries to commit suicide after knowing the truth by slashing his wrist
and antara saves him and takes him to hospital
later antara does karva chauth for him that touches raghu
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
Good update !!!
Thank u soo much!! Antara supporting raghu loved it!!!
Please update soon!!!
Thank for the pm!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: rima4ever

lovely update

and i love the name
please continue
i have a request
if possible show a scene where raghu tries to commit suicide after knowing the truth by slashing his wrist
and antara saves him and takes him to hospital
later antara does karva chauth for him that touches raghu

I wish I could do it but I can't
but I will surely look into ur request and try to fulfil it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: srujanahpvr

I wish I could do it but I can't

but I will surely look into ur request and try to fulfil it


i dont want u to change your story just for me
only if u feel it fits with the story include it
Sophia21 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
Awesome update!!! Im loving Antara.. And haaaye Raghu is sooo sweet .. He can't see her cry at all.. Ahhh precap is great.. I feel bad for Raghu though.. 😒

P.S .. Title is perfect *Madhuri Style* 😆 for Rantara 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow dear it was awesome. Plz update soon

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