mein tumhare saath hamesha rahuga part 6 @pg 14 updated- OS - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was very nice Richu, loved it yaar!
sorry for late reply!
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Part-IV MOrning
DM- Raghu tumhe do din ke liye bahar jaana hoga Nasik mein mall ke kaam par kuch panga ho rah hai jao usey thik kar aao
Raghu- ji mai lekin who...
DM- who antara . uski chinta mat karo hum sab hai yahan par.
Raghu- ji mai
in Raghu room
antara- tum kahin jaa rahe ho. packing koi kar rahe ho. waise akele jaa rahe ho.
Raghu- thamba baba thamba. kitna sawal puchti ho.haan mein jaa raha ho Nasik 2 din ke liye
antara- to mein kya karo gi
Raghu- tum kya karogi??? arrey tum hi to chahti thi na ki mein tumse door raho lo mein jaa raha ho. tumhe to khush hona chayie.
Antara remember when ever she is alone in naik sadn how satya try to come near to her.she get scared because she know Raghu ke hote satya uske kareeb aane ka khosish bhi nahi karega lekin agar Raghu nahi raha to
Raghu- ms. kaul kahan kho gayi
antara- Raghu pls mat jao. dekho tumne wada kiya tha ki mujhe jab tumahri zarurat hogi tum mere pass rahoge
Raghu- mein tumhare pass hi ho antara. ankhe band karne. dekna mein tumare pass hi tumhe feel hoga
antara want to stop him lekin ruk nayi payi
Raghu leave the basti
In night
satya knock the antara room
antara open the door and says tum
satya- haan mein dekne aaya tumhe koi problem to nahi
antara- nahi ., thank you. tum jao yahan se mujhe kuch chayie hoga to mein machmach se keh dogi
satya- machmach se arrey who tumhara bhai hai who tumhe nahi de sakta jo tumhe chayie
antara- matlab kya a tumhein
satya push her back and lock the door
antara- yeh tum kya kar rahe ho . dekho mein chilao gi
satya- ghar par koi nahi hai. mai kisi function mein gayi hai raat men aaygi, machmach aur ajji kirtan mein gaye hai aur kaki aur kaka picture dekne gaye hai. so aaj ki raat hum or tum
antara- dekho mein Raghu ko ph kar do gi. she took her mobile but satya snatch it and threw her on bed
satya- tumhe problem kya hai . hamari to shadi hone wali thi na phir ... tum to Raghu ko haath tak nahi lagane deti. tumhara badan bhi to jalta ho ga. aao aaj hum apni jalan ko khatam kare.
antara- satya chodo mujhe . agar Raghu ko pata chal gaya ki tumne uski antara ko haath bhi lagaya hai to Raghu tuumhe jaan se maar dega
satya- Raghu Raghu Raghu. bas aaj dekta ho tumhare Raghu tak tumhara yeh ehsaash punchata hai ki nahi
satya threw her dupatta and try to get on her. he tried her best to kiss and antara was begging to leave her
suddenly one hand grab him from back and threw him to the wall
antara- Raghu...
she get up from bed and hug her tightly . this time Raghu also hug her to make her normal. Raghu was burning in anger. he take dupatta from floor and cover antara properly.
satya- tum kaise wapas aayege
Raghu- bappa shayad janta tha tumhari gandi niyat ko tabhi to rasta block kar diya aur mujhe yahan wapas bhej diya apni antara ke pass.
satay and Raghu has a huge fight. they both were hitting each other badly. who ladte ladte neeche aa jate hai.
suddenly DM , machmach and ajji come.
machmach try to get away Raghu from satya but Raghu was contnilously teeling. tumhare khoon pee jogsa. tumhe himmat kaise hui antara ko haath lagne ki.
DM- raghunath...
Raghu stop from this voice.
Dm- Raghu yeh kya ho raha hai
antara come and says. mai who satya try to rape me...
DM_ antaraaa... tum hosh mein ho kya bol rahi ho
antara take her dupatta from her show marks which was made by satya in her hand , shoulder
ajji - satya ...akhir tumne apna ganda khoon ka rang dekha diya. tumhare baap ne jo kaam kiya who kaam tumne bhi kiya
DM- aayi ruk jao mat kuch bolo sab khatam ho jayega
satya was shocked to listen about his father. Raghu and machmach was also shocked
satya- ajji yeh tum kya keh raho ho
DM- nahi aayi tum kuch nahi bologi
ajji- daya aaj tak mein chup rahi lekin ab nahi. Raghu ko ab uska haq milna chayie. is ghar ki bahu ke saath koi galat kare mein chup nahi reh sakti
Dm- aayi...
ajji- satya suno. Raghu tumhara abhai hai haan Raghu tumhara soutela bhai hai. tum dono ko ka baap ek hai.
Raghu- ajji...
ajji - haan Raghu tum mere bte ke bte ho. jaise satya mera potahai waise hi tum mere pota ho.jitna haq is naik sadn par satya ka utna hq tumhara bhi hai
Raghu lekin mein to mai ko mandir mein mila tha
ajji- haan mile jarur the lekin anjane mein nahi balki daya mere kehne par lekar tumhe layi thi
Raghu see DM. she was very angry
mere beta aur Raghu ki maa apas mein pyar karne lag gaye the. daya ne mere bte ko bahut ruka lekin usne tumhari maa se shadi kar ke alag rehne laga. usne kabhi bhi hamse koi madam nahi li.
mein ek maa ho apne ko ruk nahi paati thi. mein apne bte se aur tumhari maa se hamesha milti thi lekin chup kar. jab tumhara janam hua tha chintu mein wahi thi. tumhara baba nahi chahte the ki tumhe kabhipata chale ki mein tumhari ajji ho. isliye jab tum bade hone lage mein tumse nahi milti thi.
lekin pata nahi mere beta kahan gyab ho gaya. tumhari maa ko mein mada karna chahti thi lekin who bahut khudaar thi usne meri madad nahi liya.
phir us din tumhari maa ka maut ho gaya. tab maine daya se binti ki tumhe sadak par na chode. lekin usne tumhe lana se pehle muhse vada liye ki tumhe kabhi bhi sachai na pata chale.
DM leave the room.
satya also leave the room. machmach want to say some thing but Raghu stop him and ask to leave.
Raghu take a key of jeep and went out
antara want to stop him but ajji asked him to leave alone.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Woah Satya is disgusting.. Thank god Raghu came on time!
So now that they are step brothers.. Raghu should get his right and satya should go back to London.. Bechara Raghu.. Out of nowhere everything came in front of him.. He's totally broken.. Only Antara can console him.. 😳
Awesome update.. Thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Sophia21

Woah Satya is disgusting.. Thank god Raghu came on time!
So now that they are step brothers.. Raghu should get his right and satya should go back to London.. Bechara Raghu.. Out of nowhere everything came in front of him.. He's totally broken.. Only Antara can console him.. 😳
Awesome update.. Thanks for the pm :)

next part mein aur bhi bahut kuch revel ho ga.so guys wait for now twist and turn a
thank you for your comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow what an updte loved it
satya nash and raghu bros ddnt quiet get that
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Posted: 12 years ago
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woww! what nice update...i liked it ...this is for you dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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dammit richu...awesome twist...
satya got lots f beating...yipeee

waiitng for next part

btwn wt was mm goin to say
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nichuss

dammit richu...awesome twist...

satya got lots f beating...yipeee

waiitng for next part

btwn wt was mm goin to say

he want to control him as he knew Raghu will not control himself after knowing the truth of his birth
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank god raghu agaya!! gr8 update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part -5
whole night antara was waiting for Raghu to come back. she called many times his mobile but he was not answering.he called machmach also but machmach told same thing "BHai ka pata milte hi tumhe bataoga"
antara was very much scared. kahin Raghu kuch apne aap ko nahi kar le. usko patatha agar who uski jaan hai to daya mai bhi uski jaan hai.
Next day early morning
Raghu come back home. he went ot ajji room where machmach antara and ajji was sitting .Raghu come and hug ajji very tightly and start crying.
Raghu-koi ajji koi. mein hi koi. kya mujhe kisi ka pyar nahi mil sakta. mere baba mujhe chod kar chale gaye kahin. meri maa bachpan chod kar chali gayi. daya mai ko maa mana lekin unhone bhi mujhe srif apne maksad ke liye pyar kiya unka har pyar apnapan dekabha tha. aur jis ladki ko mein zindagi se bad kar payar kiya who mujse nafrat karti hai.
ajji mein koi itna abaga hu.
ajji- nahi chintu tu abhaga nahi hai.mein tujse pyar karti ho. machmach bhai se bad kar tujse pyar karte hai. aur antara tujse pyar nahi karti to kya tere liya raat bhar paresan rehti. dekh uski halat ro ro kar apni adha jaan khatam kar li hai.
Raghu turn around and see antara.
antara come close to him and want to say something but Raghu start saying
Raghu- ms. akul muh par daya karne ki zaroorat nahi hai. mere ander abhi bhi itni khudarihai ki mein sar utta kar jee sako.maine tujse jo wada kiya hai tere father ke liye usko pura karoga . phir tum azad ho sakti ho is riste se.and leave the room
antara was shocked to listen ki Raghu usko azad karne ke baat kar raha hai.
machamch- hey yedi chinta mat kar. bahi tujhe kabhi nahi chodega. uski saanse bati hai tujme. agar tu nahi rahe aass pasas to who nahi zinda reh payega. abhi bhai bahut udas hai thik ho jayega. chinta mat kar
DM ROOM
DM- aayi tumne yeh thik nahi kiya. Raghu aur satya ko sachai bata kar
aaji- daya maine thik kiya. un dono ki beech mein jo nafrat hai ab use khatam karna hoga. tu aaj tak jo bhi ki maine kuch nahi kaha lekin ab in vaacho ke bhanao ke saath tujhe khelne nahi dogi
Dm- aayi tu janti hai ki ek aurat ke liye sab zayada takleef tab hoti hai jab uska pati usko chod dusri aurat ke saath rehna chala jata hai. aur us Raghu ko mere samne laa kar apne mujhe hamesha us takleef mein jeena ke liye majboor kiya
aaji- aur tumne us tekleef ke agge is ghar ke dono baacho ko barbad kar diya. Raghu ko itna andha ban diya apne mamta mein ki uska accha bura kuch samaj mein nahi aaya. ek katputliki tarah tumhare aggey nacta rah hai. aur satya who tumhare pyar ke liye itna tarsha ki usko pyar mohabat kya hota hai pata hi nahi uske andar itni nafrat bar diya tumne ki aaj who apni bhabhi ke saath galat karne jaa raha tha
ajji- aayi satya mere beta hai aur mujhe kya uske saath karna chayie kya nahi mat bato
aaji left the room
DM to herself- aayi aap nahi zanti mujh us Raghu se kitna nafrat hai. aur upar wala bhi mere saath hai ki uske haato dr, kaul ki maut hui hai jo bomb maine aman ko diya tha.raghu kabhi bhi apne aap ko sahi shabit nahi kar payega koi ki aman mere passs hai . aur sahi shabit nahi kiya to antara usko nafrat karegi. Raghu ko bhi usi nafrat mein jeena padega jis nafrat se mujhe jeena pada tha.
this all things were heard by satya
satya to himself- nahi yeh nahi ho sakta . aayi criminal hai. usne antara ke papa ko marne ke liye bomb diya tha. mein us Raghu se nafrat karte aaya jo khud nahi zanta tha ki aayi ke pyar ke peeche kya sachai hai. mujhse zayada to abagah to Raghu hai. usko maa ka pyar mila who bhi jhuti. jisko zondagi se bar kar pyar kar raha hai who antara ke life se sab kuch chine wli bhi aayi hai.
nahi mein yeh nahi hone doga.ab Raghu ko sab khusyio mein wapis karoga.
he went to Raghu room
Raghu room
antara- Raghu kuch kha lo tumne kal raat se kuch nahi khaya.
Raghu- ms kaul mujhe kuch der ke liye akele chod do
antara- chod dogi lekin pehle kuch kha lo. and she try to feed him by her own hand
Raghu stop her hand and said- ms. kaul jab mein keh raha ho jao yahan se to tum jao he said all this line in angry voice
antara- nahi jaogi kya kar loge
Raghu hold the plate and threw it towards wall.antara get scared and her eyes filled with tears
Raghu see that antara is scared now. he low down his voice and said- dekh ms. kaul jab mein baat nahi karna chahte to mujhe mat force karo.
antara- agar mein tumhare jagah hoti to tum mujhe akele chod dete
Raghu see her and says- ms kaul tu meri zindagi hai lekin mein tere liye kuch nahi ho isliye hum dono ki baat alag hai
antara- aur Raghu agar mein yeh kaho ki mein tumhe apni zindagi banan chahti ho to
Raghu see her in surprised and says- oh to tum mujpar daya kar rahi ho. and he start shouting. tumne kya soch ki chalo Raghu to akele ho gaya is duniya mein to ab mein Raghu ki life mein aajati ho aur us par hokum chalogi. tum bhi srif apne maksad ke liye mere zindagi mein aana chahti ho na. koi zarurat nahi hai. tumhe jaan ahai to abhu=I jao yahan se. nikal jao yahan se
antara- Raghu pls meri baat suno mere mann ais ekuch nahi hai. accha thik hai tum jaise chate ho mein yahan se chali jao to thik hai mein chali jati ho lekin tum pls shant ho ao
antara was about to leave satya enter the room and says
antara kahin nahi jaa igi Raghu
Raghu get more angry and he give one punch to satya- khabardar jo miss kaul ka naam bhi jubaan par liya to
satya- jab itna pyar karta hai to jaane ko koi keh raha hai. dekh iske ankho mein tere dard mein yeh ro rahi hai. jo ladki tujse nafrat mein tere dard ko apna hissa man rahi hai tu us ladki ko apni zindagi se nikal raha hai.
Raghu- sahib tu...
satya- haan mein aaj tak jo apne bhai se maine chena hai usko wapsa to nahi kar sakta lekin antara jo tumhari hai jo tumhari jaan usko tumse door nahi jaano doga
satya to antara- mujhe maaf kar do aaj tak jo bhi maine tumhare saath galat kiya hai "bhabhi"
Raghu and antara both were shocked to listen dis word
rghu- sahib yeh kon si chal hai tumhari
satya- chal to ab hum dono bhai mil kar chalege us culprit ko saaza delna mein jo antara bhabhi ke papa ke gunhegar hai
part- 6 will be updated soon

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