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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143


Hahaha yeah next to next update is going to be rocking plus alot abhi bata nahi sakty q k I have to wrap up this story

this story is not going anywhere so soon because its ma fav one 😳
ok going now bye or else I will get killed by my mum and remember romance in the next update😳
rantara ayazu dreams!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: honeybees22


</div>this story is not going anywhere so soon because its ma fav one 😳
<div>ok going now bye or else I will get killed by my mum and remember romance in the next update😳

rantara ayazu dreams!


Hehe ok good night
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 13


Raghu, Ajji and MM all sat back in the jeep and headed towards Naik Sadan. During their journey Ajji asked, "Acha chintu yeh bata meine itne saal baad wapis lauty ho tune basti tu ache se sambhly nah??"

"Haan ajji don't worry meine sab ache sey sambhala tha, jaisa ap chor key gaye thy waisa ka waisa hi hai". During the whole journey Ajji kept asking questions about basti and some improvements they need to be done in basti for people. Raghu still didn't get a single chance to check his cell phone. He was so happy that Ajji has come back and now he will not let Ajji go back to village.

"Acha chintu, tu yeh bata tune apne liye koi yedi phasaeye key nahi ya woh kam bhi mujhe hi karna hoga" asked Ajji micschievously. "Kya ajji ap bhi nah" said Raghu very shyly. "Arey yeh kya tera thobra tu ek dum naye naweli tubelight ki mafik chamak raha hai, kuch garbar to zaroor hai." ajji frowned.

"Ajji woh..." Raghu paused and was about to inform about Antara. While Ajji said, " Chal acha hai tune koi larki to phasaeye nah ab mein hi tere liye ek sundar si larki dhundogy"

"Kya??" Raghu asked shocked. "Ajji mera matlab hai key itne bhi kya jaldi hai, apko pata to hai mujhe pehle khud ka business set karna hai" Raghu asked to divert the topic

"Yede, tu mein konsa kaal key kaal tere hath peele kara rehe hoon, larki dhundogy phir tujhe mileaogy tab bhi jakey to baat pakki hogy nah, yeda chal aage dekh key jeep chala" Ajji said In a raised voice.

Suddenly Raghu remembered that he forgot to tell Antara about Ajji's arrival and also she might be calling him since morning. Raghu stopped the jeep and started searching for his cellphone.

"Yeda hogaya hai kya jeep kyun roki??" Ajji asked.

"Ajji, woh mera mobile pata nahi kaha rakh key bhool gaya" he start searching all over in his jeep. Suddenly his eye caught on his leg and saw his cellphone there.

"Phewww, mil gaya" Raghu said excitedly.

Raghu looked at his cellphones and was shocked to see 50 missed calls from Antara. 'Aisa bhi kya hogaya jey itnd sare calls kiye Antara ney, kahi koi garbar to nahi' he thought. Ajji patted on his shoulder and he came out of trance. "Chintu, kya howa teri tabeeyat to thik hai nah" asked Ajji.

"Haan Ajji sab theek hai" and then they all proceed towards basti.


At Kaul house, Everyone was busy in their work. Mami was cooking suddenly she rememberes she don't have sugar at home. She called Antara and told her to go and get some sugar from the market. Antara nooded and headed towards the market.

On the other hand, Geeta was selecting dress for Antara in her room. 'Haan yeh dress bohat acha hai meri beti ek dum Rajkumari lageygi yahi theek rehyga' she kept that dress aside and again got busy in selecting jewelleries.


Raghu, Ajji and MM entered in the basti, when Raghu remembered he got some important work. His work was none other than to call Antara. He cannot talk to Antara while Ajji is with him. Raghu stopped the jeep on the entrance of the basti. "Ajji, woh mujhe bohat zaroori kam yad agaya ap ghar jaye mein apna kam pura kar key aata hoon" said Raghu.

"Theek hai chintu" Then, Ajji and MM drove towards Naik Sadan. Raghu was calling Antara again and again, but she was not picking his calls. 'Lagta hai yedi naraz hogaye mere se, hey bappa bacha leyna mujhe Miss Kaul key gusse se'. After calling her ten times, he decided to go and check to her house where was she and why isn't she picking his calls.


MM took all luggage and entered in the Naik Sadan. When Saroj came outside, "Arey Ajji ap agaye??" "Arey Saroj kaise hai tu or teri bhabhi kaise hai, sab barobar hai nah koi taklerf to nHi howe nah itne saloon mein" asked Ajji. "Arey nahi Ajji, Raghu key hote howe kya takleef hogy". Both talked for a while and left after few minutes.

"Ajji, sp yaha kya kar rehe hai andar chaleye.??" asked MM.

"Arey yede, itne saalo baad louty hon shanti se basti to dekhny dey mujhe" Ajji said and she start looking towards basti. She noticed that Raghu has really taken good care of basti and everything is in good condition. Again MM said, "Chalo nah Ajji"

"Aeyyy Machinder, apni Machmach band kar. Ek kam kar tu andaar ja mein zara akhi basti ka ek round laga keyt aaty hoon". "Magar Ajji ap abhi abhi to aeye ho or abhi hi" said MM. "Bohat MM karne laga hai kyun bey tu ajji ko bataeyga ab kya karna hai or kya nahi han??" Ajji almost screamed in frustration. Ajji started walking around in the basti, when everyone greeted Ajji and took her blessing. Suddenly Ajji heard some girls's voice near the shop who was arguing about sugar prices. "Arey bhaiyya yeh ap kya price laga rehe hai bahar market key pass sugar ka bhao kam hai or ap to kuch zyada hi laga rehe hoon." That girl was none other than Antara. "Arey madam jee yahi bhao sab jaga hai ap kisi se bhi ja key pooch lo??" said that Shopkeeper. "Theek hai aghr apko nahi deyni to mein bahar market se hi ley logy or basti walo ko bhi yahi kahogy key woh bhi market se hi liya kare" confidentally she said to shopkeeper because if he will sell with wrong price, he will lose all his customers in the basti. "Arey rukiye madam dekhiye aisa mat kijiye, mere pait pe kyun laat mar rehe ho ap??" he said in a pleading way. "Bhaiya apka ghar issi shop se chalta hai or dusre log ka pait bharty ho ap inhe yeh sab cheezein bech kar, aghr ap hi aisa karogy to hum jaise log kya khaeygy, kabhi yeh socha hai apne. Sirf apka hi ghar or family nahi hai dusro key bhi ghar parivaar hai". Antara tried to explain the common problems now people are facing. "Madam jee ap bilkul sahi keh rehe hoon, ap sugar issi bhao mein lijiye, zyada se zyada kamaeye ho issi liye mein aise beymani kar raha tha per ab se nahi karoga". The change in that shopkeeper's behavior and how Antara explained and warned him, Ajji was wuite impressed with her.


Antara bought the sugar and start moving towards her house when Ajji stopped her. "Aey larki naam kya hai tera??" Ajji questioned her. "Jee woh mera Annn... Lakin ek minute ap kyun mujhse mera naam pooch rehe hai??" Antara asked. "Woh kya hai key mujhe teri shadi mere pote se karani hai?? Ajji said and laughing on the other hand. "Jeee" Antara asked shockingly. "Arey mein mazak kar rehe thy, woh tune jaise ussi yede ko seedha kiya nah issi liye poochi. Bari hi samajdari se tune usse dhamkaya bhi or samjhaya bhi" she said in a convincing tone. "Shukriya, woh kya hai inn jaise logo ko seedha nah karo to sir pe char kay nacry hai" Antara said.


'Yeh larki mere chintu ki biwi ban jaye to uss yede ko bhi seedha kar deygi. Bappa kuch karo kuch to idea doon take mein isse apne ghar ki bahi bana sako' Ajji thought.


"Arey ap kaha kho gaye??" asked Antara. "Kuch nahi or yeh bata key tu yaha kaise tujhe to pehle basti mein dekha nahi??" she asked. "Je woh ap govind or saroj ko janty hai mein unki bhatije hoon". "Deva rey deva matlab to tu hai Antara??" Ajji asked. "Jee han lakin ap mujhe kaise janty hai??" Antara asked. "Arey mein ayyi matlab ajji hoon, tu nahi pehchanty mujhe??" Ajji questioned her. "Ajji??" she said surprisingly. "Ajji ap kahi woh Raghuu ki..." And she stop because Ajji had no idea what relation she has with Raghu. "Han wahi Raghu ki ajji, tu janty hai mere chintu ko??" Ajji said in a mischevious tone. "Han aaty jaty dekha hai or Raghu ko kon nahi janta" Antara said shyly. " "Acha ajji mein chalty hoon mami mera intezaar kar rehe hogy??" said Antara. She was about to leave when Ajji told her that even she is going home and both proceeded towards their home.


Raghu went near Antara's kaul, suddenly Saroj came outside. "Raghu tum yaha bahar kya kar rehe hoon kuch kam tha kya??" asked Mami. "Arey nahi nahi aunty jee mein to bus ghar ja raha to socha Antara..." Raghu was about to say something, but mami stopped him in between and said "Acha Antara se kam tha, tum yahi ruko woh bus abhi aaty hi hogy, woh kya hai nah Raghu aj usse dekhny larke wale arehe hai". "Kya??" He almost shouted, he couldn't believe his ears what mami had told him. His Antara, his wife and their family is thinking about her marriage. How is this possible, Antara is Raghu's wife. It cannot be possible, but why Antara didn't say anything to her family. Raghu had hundreds of questions in his mind. His trance was broke whdn mani patted on his shoulder. "Arey Raghu kaha kho gaye??" "Nahi soh kuch nahi aunty jee" said Raghu. "Lo woh agaye Antara" Raghu quickly turned and saw Ajji and Antara together.


"Arey saroj yeh Antara tu kitne bari hogaye or khoobsurat bhi, kisi ki nazar nah lage" and she put kajal at the back side of her ears. "Han Ajji ap sahi keh rehe hai isi liye to hum chahty hai key Antara ki shadi jald se jald hojaye, or apko pata hai aj hi larke wale isse dekhny arehe hai. Antara ne to haan kardi bus larke wale haan kar dey to acha hai". Thats's it Raghu couldn't even hear one more word about his Antara getting married to someone else without saying a single word he left from there. Antara could see his anger but couldn't say anything infront of all. "Kya itne jaldi shadi kara dogy??" Ajji said. She didn't want Antara to get married to someone else except Raghu.




PS: Sorry hinu I know its not upto the mark, but I just finished it off in half hour and you know the reason too.

Probably this chapter has now only two or three more updates left so bear it with me. 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved the update! Finally you updated after a long time!

Thanks for the pm! And please, this time update a little bit more sooner? Please?
Edited by Wahian4lyf - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
omgg antara ko dekhne ladke wale aa rh h 😡
raghu nh chodega ab 😈... bt gd thing is dat
ajji too loves antu fr raghu 👍🏼 dats grt..
nw waiting fr nxt part hope jldi everything is
sorted outt..waiting fr nxt part...
update soon n thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww.
Lovely . Loved it .
Thxs for the PM
Continue writing
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Posted: 11 years ago
finally u updated
thanks for the pm
loved the update
fantastic update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update 😛
ajji liked antu
poor antu stucked
nw raghu angry
eager to knw more
do update soon 😃
do pm me next part 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
yipeee after sooo long yaar
i loved it
ajii haye hyayee
antara ko dekh ke pasand be kar liya kya baat hai
raghu and his anger and his miss call
how can antara say yes#????
pls cont asap an i know the reason dnt worry cuz we have a deal remember
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww...Raghu to dhishum dhisum karega ladke wale ka...suprb update

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