os: chodo mujhe completed part 3 pg 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Guys dis my first os m nt a writer n i dont even know hw 2 write bt i am giving it a try hope u all lyk it




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part 1 below
part 2 pg 4
part 3 pg 6



please chodo mjhe..ye kya kar rahe ho tum..ab to mai tum se shadi bhi karne ko tayar hu to tum ye sab kyu kar rae ho says antara.. her eyes full of tears she was so scared...kaise chod du ? or kyu chodu meri antara meri jaan us..us kameene raghu ko gale laga rahi thi uske itna kareeb thi usse pyar karti hai or shadi mjhse kar rae hai says satya who saw antara hugging raghu and saying dat she loves him .n cant live widout him.bt satya didnt say nething n just left from dere neither raghu nor antara noticed him.. N after dat it has all gone bad wid antara..satya just entered her room at night bashing d door when she was going for sleep he throws her on d bed forcefully nd removes her dupatta..he tears one of her sleeves of her suit nd starts forcing himself on her...pls mjhe jane do..antara was crying so hard..ro kyu rae hai han? Jab us raghu ko gale lagaya tab tune use nae kaha ki mjhe chod do or ab main jab tjhe chuna chahta hu to tjhe dar lag raha hai..satya gets more close 2 her n she was trying her best 2 push him bt in vain in d process she got a tight slap from him her hands nd neck had scars nd blood was flowing from her lips..her wrist had marks of satya's finger which showed how brutally he was behaving wid her...aj tjhe mjhse koi nae bacha paega antara aj main teri vo halat karunga jo tu hamesha yad rakhegi..or raghu b tjhe pyar nae kar paega jab use pata chalega ki tera rape hua hai...nw antara was hell scared she picked up the vase from a near by stool nd banged it on his head wid as much force as she culd satya faints n she runs away for her life bt she didnt know where 2 go so she ran away to kalyan mandap hoping dat dere wud b noone.she went dere nd found all d lights closed she feels weak n falls on d floor she heards a voice nd gets scared..guessing dat it wud b satya she starts crying loud nd says dur raho mjhse mere pass ane ki koshish bhi mat karna warna...warna warna kya?she realises dat it was nt dat monster bt raghu who had come dere 2 check for her wedding preparations...


Dats it 4 today will continue soon hope u lyk it pls give ur comments...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice OS tina but satya ki jagah sirf raghu aur antara ka OS likhogi to I will be glad😛😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great OS!!!
Continue soon!!
Do make satya get bashed from raghu!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: nnks

nice OS tina but satya ki jagah sirf raghu aur antara ka OS likhogi to I will be glad😛😛


no problem dear next part will b full of rantara moments and a surprise too 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tinagupta1000


no problem dear next part will b full of rantara moments and a surprise too 😊

oh thanks tina dear waise ye post bhi tu continue kar le bas satya ki thodi pitaai karava de raghu se to bhi mein khush ho jaungi😛😛😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanku 4 liking it n i promise next part will b something dat will take away ur breaths 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing.os...cntinue soon...raghu ke haathon satya ki acche se dhulai karva do...lol...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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satya ka dhulai ..ohhhooo kitna sukun milega ... ..plzzz continue ..i loved it ...very much interesting ...wait nahi hota ...jaldi continue kar ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanku for liking it so much will continue soon 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow dear good use of staya pls update soon

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