rantara ff-sajda tere pyar mein[note at page 150] - Page 63

Originally posted by: pampz

as usual it was mindblowing ...don call it crap yaar ... it was wonderful ...the way you describe Rantara n their awesome dialouges ...ufff ...u just made me watch Rantara in front of my eyes ...the subtle deep feelings between them comes every now and then ...n u draw this so beautifully ...i love it ...waiting for more n more n more ...😃

Originally posted by: Rantaraolic

ekkksss Ria!

That was so good!

ROFLLL Rasika ke saath ek dum mast kaam kiya MachMach ne 🤣

oo I am sure this Aman will definitely create problem and now that Antara knows Raghu knows siddiqui she will try and find out about the relationship!

OMG...is this story heading where I think its heading?? 😲

Originally posted by: Nichuss

Muje ee updt bahuth pasandaaya..

Tjh fight reminded me f one shot fite in garage...

Aman still dbtful on antu...

Antu' sharp mind ...suddenly got suspicious f locked room...

Finally antu left fighting with raghu for timesake...

Hear too antus sharp mind caught the mai connection with siddqui..

Ths inform may allow antu to make friendly hands with raghu, so she will b able to get some proofs...

Even its a filler...lots f key factor...

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darlsss next shld b paroshan plzzz

Chapter 21

"uncle do u know daya naik?!!" antara asked in phone. "daya naik... ummm... yeah I remember! Yup some years before in a case she was suspected but as there was not a single clue, we have to leave her. naik basti's mistress right?!" vishal uncle said from other side. "yes uncle, and I think she had some relation with headmaster." Antara said. "what?! But where did you get the news?!" vishal uncle asked in a quite surprise. "well I came to know that daya naik and headmaster know each other very well. You can consider as close family friend. I think you should keep eye on daya naik." She informed. "hmmm...but, are you sure that there must be any link between them? is the source of this news is reliable?!" he asked. antara became silent for a moment and said, "yes uncle!! The man who told me about daya naik and headmaster's relationship can never tell lie about this things. And I can bet on that." She said. "well, then I will inform chief about daya naik!! the lady didn't seemed so much clear personality like she looked. Btw, thanks for the information. And please don't take any risk which can lead you into danger!!" vishal said. "okey uncle." Antara assured. Antara disconnected the phone and jumped on the bed. It was late at night. Her head was becoming heavy after the whole day hectic schedule. So many unsolved key of the mystery, that puzzle, something 011.ig.nsb... and then siddiqui's locked room, the maze of siddiqui house, aman's suspicious reactions and lastly the new thing, daya naik and sahabuddin siddiqui's relationship! She didn't know why but the thing was ticking in her mind. why?! She didn't even know the woman. She just heard about this daya naik or daya mai from mami and other basti people. Antara took paper which was containing that secret code and looked to that abruptly. That unsolved codes. 011.ig.20&022.cs.10&033.nsb.13.!! what did it actually mean?! From these past days she was knocking her head to solve the puzzle. Did that actually mean something or she was just wasting her time?!! She threw the paper on the table and close her eyes in frustration. Sometimes she really felt hopeless, alone!! Yes a very much alone. Each and every day, every night the thought stroke her. Specially, when she was in siddiqui mansion today, apart from aman and other things, zara and zoya di were remembering about her own family. could she ever met them again?! her momma, mummy, mama ji?! Ishan was there for how long? After her father's death, no one could fill the empty place. There was no one with whom she could share her thoughts, her happiness, her sorrow! Her momma was not in a state to understand anything. Ishan was just a little kid. Antara let out a deep breath to compose herself. She knew that from the very first day that she had to go alone on this path, then why she was feeling so lonely today?! Wasn't it obvious? Antara opened her eyes and looked around. She found an photo frame on the table, containing her father's photo. She took the photo on her hand. Her lips parted into a sad but beautiful smile. "papa!!" she uttered slowly. "I know you are with me, right?!". It seemed like the smile on his father's face became broad a little. She also smiled wider. "take care of momma. I know you will... you are watching all of us... Pappa!! I don't know why but today I am feeling so lonely..." suddenly her voice choked. She felt her eyesight were becoming blur due to the appearance of sudden moist appearing in it. "it's not like that I am afraid now. I don't afraid of those terrorists papa and will never step back my foot. But pappa, sometimes I really felt like there was no one in the world for me. When I wanted to talk to someone, when I needed a shoulder to cry on, you are not there, no one was there!" she brushed her tears with a sigh. "sorry papa, I know, I am not your little princess anymore. And trust me I have overcome the phase. But sometimes, I really feel a big hole in my chest... And it feels like it could never be fulfilled again..." she hugged dr kaul's photo and closed her eyes. Trying to feel the warm, the love of her father! "will it always be like this papa? Is there no one who can understand me like you, like I know myself?!!" she asked silently. At the moment ripping out the silence of night that slow, beautiful, heavenly sound of harmonica reached her within the chill air of snow which ruffled her hair. Antara smiled from her heart forgetting her sorrow. Her eyes were closed. Whenever she heard that sound of harmonica, she forgot about her all sorrow! The song was known to her. a very old Punjabi folk tune! But she never heard someone to play this like this, soul touching and divine. Back in Mumbai, she always craved to hear that harmonica every night. And suddenly the thing pooped up in the mind. she heard the music in Mumbai, then how could she hear that now? In Kashmir?!!! Was she dreaming?!! Antara quickly pooped out her eyes and jumped on the bed. She was all shocked!! It seemed like the sound of the mouth organ was coming from the balcony of their house. But how that could be possible?!! Antara slowly came out of blanket and wrapped a sawl around her. the mouth organ sound was haunting her. She slowly followed the music and reached at the balcony. The night was beautiful! Overflowing with the moonlight of pre full moon! The music was creating an heavenly environment. In the small halogen light of the balcony she saw someone sitting at the age of balcony and playing the mouthorgan. Although his back was facing her, she didn't take a single second to recognize that who was actually him. Her eyed widened. She felt the most dangerous shock of her life at that moment. The soothing beautiful tune that took away her sadness and sorrow every night was belong to nonw other than but him!! Confused, surprised and no doubt a little bit regret within her heart antara slowly moved to him.

After a long time, raghu was playing his mouth organ that night. The silence of night was making him bore and restless. Antara again got into silent mode and he didn't want to make another mess by disturbing her. But he was worried! Each and every time she folded herself in her shell. For the first time he felt like if she also needed time to comfort. Haan!! He was thinking about a girl's comfort! What happened to the old careless raghunath naik?! MM was right on that day when he said, "bhai tu badal raha hain!!"... However, he ended up in balcony with his mouthorgan and after sometimes he was totally driven away by the music. Forgetting everything, the world, the surrounding! He didn't even know that someone was standing behind him. But as usual he felt something again!! that unusal different feeling whenever she was near. His lips stopped on the mouth organ. He lifted his face and slowly turned back. Yes she was there, standing silently fixing her eyes on him. "TU???!!!" he snapped out in surprise. But to his better surprise she didn't said anything but keep staring at her. He slipped down from the railing and stood on his feet. Her silence made him confused. Specially the way she was looking towards him without a blink. Not a single glance of anger was there! Rather than that, her wide eyes were filled with shock, amusement and also ADMIRATION!! A big silent moment passed while they were silently looking towards each other's eyes to search for their answers. "eee, kya huya?!" he finally asked with a bit confused voice. "yee dhunn???!!!..." antara slowly started to talk, her voice was full of amusement, "yee dhunn...tum baja rahe the?!!" her voice was still stumbling. "haan toh?!! Tere ko kya?!! Mere baje ki shor se nind toot gayi kya?!!... dekh miscall ab ye mat kehena ki idhar baja bajana bhi allowed nahi hain..." he again started his express again. "ek baar aurr baja sakte ho?!!.." she asked slowly. His voice resisted instantly and he snapped back to her with wide eyes. Again another silent moment! It seemed like he was trying to digest her request. "kya boli tu?!" he asked at last. "plsss..." she asked in a poor voice. Raghu thoroughly looked at antara's face. He never looked her like this. Her eyes was so eager and almost begging him for agreement. Those eyes were enough to melt even stone. Raghu slowly turned backside. Thinking that as an sign of deny, antara's face became sad. She didn't say a single word and moved back. She slowly moved her steps away from raghu in slow pace. Just some steps away and again that melodious divine mouth organ tune spread through air causing to resist her foot. Antaras eyes gleamed and a smile appeared in her face. She moved backside and found raghu standing at that same place supporting the pillar. He was playing the mouth organ!! His eyes were close and face was so calm. Perhaps the most beautiful tune he ever made. At each and every passing time, antara smiled wider than before. She slowly moved towards the railing and looked at the glorious night showering in moonlight. The mouth organ tune was just melting in her heart. it seemed like her all sadness was going away and there was nothing in that world, rather than just her and that tune. For that moment, antara forgot everything. She totally submitted her soul to that mouth organ tune. She closed her eyes! Something very old, a blurred moment, but truly precious flashed in her mind. her smile broad and to her unconscious, she started to hum with that mouth organ. Raghu's hand immediately stopped when he heard her voice. He slowly looked at side. just at some distant of him, there stood she, closing her eyes and that beautiful smile which her never ever saw playing on her lips! Something was sparkling at the corner of her eyes. The silvery moonlight was playing in her face. The scene was so mesmerizing!! Raghu's jaw almost drooped. She was looking so beautiful. Like an angel from heaven came down to earth in that night and singing. His eyes were at first totally mesmerized and amused and slowly it was catching the intensity. His hands limply fell on the side of his like he didn't have any hold on them. the scene totally drove him to another land. Antara was humming the exact same tune which he was playing before some moment. Suddenly to his surprise his hums formed into beautiful words...

Akhiyan noon rehene de, akhiya de kol kol

Chan pardesiya ve, bol bhavain na bol..

Akhiya nu rehene de... Rehene de...

Akhiya de kol kol...

The chill air blew away her hairs around her face. The whole surroundings became divine. Antara smilled and slowly opened her eyes. Although there were tears, they were gleaming with utter joy. She looked back to raghu who was still looking towards her with wide amused eyes. Antara didn't saw the hidden intensity emerging from those eyes. "thank you!!" she said with a really sweet smile he ever saw. He jerked like he got an electric shock which broke his trance. "ye kya tha???!!!" raghu couldn't resist the question slipping out of her mouth. "matlab?!!" antara frowned a little thinking that he was again teasing her. "arey apun ka matlab... ye gana..." He asked in stumbled voice badly trying to find his normal voice. "ohhh...!!" again that smile got back in her face. "ajib baat hain!! har raat ko main tumhe ye dhoond bajate sunti hoon aur tun kahe rahe ho ki tumhe ye gana hi nahi pata...!!" her smile broad in amusement. Raghu almost felt goose bumps allover when she said that she heard him playing every night!! "arey who apun ko kya pata... Wo basti me ek budhaa chacha tha jo bachpan mein mouth organ bajana sikhaya tha aoun ko... tab se baja raha hoon... ab mere ko gana kaise pata?!!" he said in confusion. "sach mein, bahut acha baja lete ho tum.!!" antara said with another satisfactory smilled which again gave him a big high voltage shock. "KYA??!!!" his mouth made a big O. he couldn't even believe his ears that antara the yeri no one actually praised him. "sach kahe rahi hoon... jhooti tareef nahi nahi karti main..." she answered calmly, "aur haan apna mooh bandh karo, Kashmir mein macharro ki kami nahin hain..." she almost smirked while saying the last words. He quickly closed his mouth and tried to keep his attitude intact. "wo waisey... Ek baat bata... Iss gane ka matlab kya hain?!!..." he asked in confused tone. "matlab?!! Well..." she again let out that beautiful smile almost taking away his breath. To his unconscious a deep long breath escaped from him. "akhiya nu rehene de akhiya de kol kol... chan pardesiya ve bole bave na bol... Apne akhon ko mere akhon ke pass rehene do... Mere pardeshi musafir, mere mohabbat, chahein tum kuch kaho ya na kahoon... par in akhon ko apna didar karne do..." She said looking at the moon floating in sky. The night seemed so magical. She let out a deep breath and looked back to raghu. He was silently gazing towards her with that deep intense eyes that antara also felt the wave emerging from him. That intense dumb gaze also made her silent at that moment.

sorry guyzz... i know it was really a dragged and boaring one. i want to write it properly and shoryly but couldn't get enough time to edit that. so pls bear this one from now on. from next i will try not to drag much.

wow so nice rantara mometments were cute