Thread 1 Rantara SS JAAN (UPDATE part 23 pg148) - Page 96

Originally posted by: ruhakhan

loved the update

and dat creep satya he is such a jerk

and antara she is broken and has no idea wats happening

and nw raghu the angry young man is back

i just hope raghu gives a good reply to satya for his this act

do update soon

Originally posted by: ..Twinks..

Omg i hav no words for dis update i think it wud b wrong 2 judge dis update bt i wud lyk 2 confess my feelings it was a beautiful update i loved d way u described mamaji's helplessness hw he wanted 2 save antara from raghu as he knew wat raghu can do n dat crap he is so big looser manipulated everyone poor ruku hw brutally she was tied i appreciate even hw u portrayed satya's character let him b happy for a minutes bcoz our limit ka gunda will now become raghubhai n will get his jaan back at any cost wonder how much hot n sexy wud he b luking in his angry look in his jeans n jacket happy 2 know dat he has a gang of frnds who r ready 2 give dere lives for him wow raghu all set 2 get her loved d last line NAE MANEGI TO UTHAKAR LE AUNGA i wish vo aisa hi kare love u raghu muahhh i must say u r really a mindblowing writer u hav win over my heart from now on add me in ur huge fan list pls dear its a request 2 update next part as soon as possible otherwise i will die thinking of what happened next pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls continue soon luv u muaahhh once again i will say LOVED D UPDATE 😛

Originally posted by: ifians

pampu.. just great update!! i have no words for this!!👏

splendid work. each and every scene was thrilling. satya kidnapping antu.. raghu going to search for them... wow...👏

can't wait for next one😃

Originally posted by: Sushmitha.r

Yipeee... em 1st to comment...

Awesum update yaar...

Woh sathya ek jagah tik nahi saktha hai kya... Hamesha pooch ki tarah antu ke peeche peeche hi hoga woh... kaminaaa...

N MM bechara... Kithna sochtha hai uske bhai ke bare main... MM ua the best...

Loved ua update alot...

Waiting fo ua next update...

Originally posted by: honeybees22

OMG yaar pampz this update is osam great fab i have no words

i loved it sooo much yaar

i actually would not be surprised if this this story won the best story award because it desvers way more than that

i was thinking about this story at night and this was the only thing i could think of at that time

when i read ur updates i feel like im actually there ad watching all this happen in front of my eyes

u are the best writer i have ever seen in my life and this is 100% true dear

when i start thinking about words for this story i run out of words because none match the expections of this story cuz its just too great so no words have the power to match this

jm a huge fan of u now

this is the best story i have ever read in my life

loveing it soo much pls cont soon and keep giving us great updates

love

honey

Originally posted by: pampz

don be sorry Rima ...i love ur comments to read ...n thank u sooo much for loving the update ...n i wll try to update soon 😉

Originally posted by: princessaaliya

great update...n especially lovvved the last part!

continue soon

Originally posted by: ruhakhan

loved the update

and dat creep satya he is such a jerk

and antara she is broken and has no idea wats happening

and nw raghu the angry young man is back

i just hope raghu gives a good reply to satya for his this act

do update soon