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PART 21
At Antara's house:
Antara entered her home n ran through the stairs n went to her room hiding her tears...Nur asked Govindji to take care of Mrs. Kaul n went to her...
A deadly silence was hovering on Antara's house... Nur and Mamaji were trying hard to keep Mrs. Kaul out of this ...they couldn't tell her why Antara had denied to marry Raghu ...but the shock of Antara's marriage cancellation was making her restless n sad.
Mrs. Kaul was continuously saying ...: main janti hun Raghu se kuch galti hui hai ...usne mujhe aaj subha mandir me bataya bhi tha ...ladke se anjane me ho gayi galti...aur anjaneme hui galti ko maaf karna chahiye...koi to Antara ko samjhao ...aise koi shadi todta hai kya bhala ...Nur n Mama didn't have any answer. ...Mrs. Kaul got angry n said : tum sab hatho ...aur mujhe Antara se baat karne do ...main samjhaungi use...arey Raghu pyar karta hai use ...Antara meri beti hai to kya ye uski nainsaafi hai Raghu ke sath ...Dr sab yehan hote to wo bhi yehi kahtein ...akhir kiya kya hai Raghu ne koi to mujhe batao ...
By the passing moments Mrs. Kaul was getting more restless n she started panicking. Nur and mamaji were trying hard to lessen the panic attack on her.
Rukhsana was there with Antara's family n she was with Antara at her room ...both sitting on the bed ...without any words...
Antara still in her wedding attire was sitting on her bed ...a devastated bride who had lost her everything on her very wedding day...totally motionless resting her back on the backrest of the bed... folding her knees ...her hands were laying down like dead limbs on either side of her ...only her eyes were wide opened...huge drops of tears were silently running down her flushed cheeks...
Ruku was staring at Antara sadly...she was also in tears...
Suddenly a doorbell was heard in Anatra's house. Nur, mamaji and Mrs. Kaul startled ...mamaji went n opened the door. It was Satya standing on the door with a determined stern face.
Satya entered n closed the door. He turned to mamaji looked at Mrs. Kaul once n said in a low voice : Mamaji main janta hun is waqt aap sab kis halat se guzar rahe hain ...main yehan apsabko console karne nahi aya hun balki main ek proposal laya hun...aap sab ko agar mera proposal thik laga to aunti ji ki halat thik ho sakti hai aur Antara ki zindegi bhi ...
Mamaji was stunned hearing Satya n said in a equal low voice: kaisi proposal? Hum sab ko plzz akela chod dijiye ...hum sambhal lenge apna parivar ko. Abh sunneko ya kahneko kuch bacha hi nahi ...plzz aap meherbani karke yehanse chale jaiye ...
Satya held Antara's mama's hand n said in a concerned tone: Mamaji Antara ki shadi aap mujhse karwa dijiye ...aaj hi ...aaj puri raat shadi ka muhraat bhi hai...main wada karta hun main Satya Naik Antara ki sahi maaine me ek achha pati banunga...main uski har tarah se layak bhi hun... Yeh to aap bhi mante honge ...
Aaj jo bhi aapsabko sahna par raha hai us Raghu ke wajese ...main uske liye mafi chahta hun...jitna bura karna tha wo to Raghu kar chukka hai ...aur bura mat hone dijiye ...Aaj Antara ne jo kiya Raghu ke sath iske baad Raghu Antara ko asani se nahi chodega...Antara mujhse shadi karke mehfus rahegi mere pas ...Daya Mai ke bte ke pas ...aap baat ko samjhiye mamaji...
Mamaji was not a strong hearted person ...he was already broken n worried for Antara...now he got hell scared for her as he loved her a lot ...
When Satya said that Raghu would not leave Antara at all ...a cold shiver raised in his heart n spreaded into his entire body. Mamaji knew Raghu very well...the most wanted n most notorious gangster of Mumbai city ...if Raghu wanted to do anything neither the police force nor any gang of goons could resist him even a bit ...Raghu had never ever cared for any rules n regulations if it came on his way.
Mamaji had seen him grow up from his childhood in front of him n seen n heard most of his dreadful deeds...n today his killer identity was also revealed...Mamaji's heart sank awefully as he didn't have any doubt that Raghu could reach to any bloody extent if he wanted to...n he knew Raghu would...he was sure.
Poor mamaji was dying to save his darling princess Antara...and therefore Satya's words sounded right to him.
Par Sahib Antara kya chahti hai wo bhi janna zaruri hai na...kuch hi pal pahle usne itna kuch saha ...khudki shadi tod di ...abh firse shadi ki baat karege to wo nahi manegi...kuch dino baad wo khud ko samhal legi to main usse ye baat kahunga ...Mamaji mumbled to Satya...
Satya smiled cunningly n said in a confident tone : Mamaji kuch dino mein Raghunath bohot kuch kar dalega is baat ki guarantee main aap ko deta hun ...aap aapki Antara ko us Raghu se bachana chahte hain to jo bhi karna hai aaj isi waqt kijiye ...aap Antara ka pita saman hain ...aapko uske liye faisla karneka pura haq hai.
Satya stopped for a while n said again: mamaji kya main ekbaar Antara se akele mil sakta hun ...main Antara ko mujhse shadi karne ke liye mana lunga ...wo jaan chuki hai Raghu ka sach ...abh wo mujhe na nahi kahegi ...
Aap bas Aunti ji aur Nur apa ko bata dijiye ke apko kya sahi lagta hai Antara ke liye aur kyun ...baki sab kuch aap mujhpar chod dijiye ...main sabkuch dekhlunga ...
Mamaji noded to Satya n said : main didi aur Nur se baat karta hun ...tum jao Antara se mil lo...wo upar hai ...
At Antara's room :
Antara was still sitting on her bed in the same position when Satya entered her room. He saw Rukhsana n cursed her in his mind: abh yeh Raghu ka paltu dost yehan kya kar rahihai ...isko to rafa dafa karna padega...
Satya looked at Ruku n said sternly: main Antara se baat karna chata hun ...plzz tum do minute ke liye hume akela chod do ...mujhe mamaji ne bheja hai...
Rukhsana didn't want to leave Antara alone with Satya but she had to. She noded n moved out of the room but stayed behind the curtain keeping an eye on them.
Satya closed the door as he knew Ruku was behind the curtain. At first Ruku got upset but soon she found quite a big hole on the door n she could see clearly Antara n Satya. She kept her eyes glued on the hole.
Satya sat on a chair beside Antara's bed facing her...n said : Antara main janta hum tum mujhe pasand nahi karti ho ...shayad mera samjhaneka tarika galat tha ...par main yehan tumhe sirf yeh kahne ke liye aya hun ki main tumhare sath hun ...hamesha rahunga ek dost banke. Main bas yeh chahta hun ki tum apne aap ko sambhal lo jitni jaldi ho sake...sambhal logi na tum ???
Antara didn't look at him for once ..she didn't even budge a bit. Satya took the water jug from the side table n pour water in a glass...he trickily added a tiny pill into the water which desolved immediately.
He again asked Antara with a soft voice: Antara maine tumhare sath jo galat tarike se pesh aya uske liye mafi chahta hun ...plzz mujhe maaf kar do ...aur tum khudko sambhal lo ...
Antara closed her eyes once n noded to him silently.
Satya's face lit up and he forwarded the glass of water to her n said: agar tumne mujhe dil se maaf kar diya hai to ye pani pilo ...tumhe pani ki zarurat hai...plzz Antara ...
After few seconds Antara frowned n said: main akela rahna chahti hun ...aap jaiye yehanse...
Satya knew she was loosing her nerves...he said : ye glass lo ..aur pani pilo ...main chala jaunga ...
Antara was dying to be alone ...she took the glass from him ...drank the whole water n said : NOW LEAVE...
A devilish smile appeared on Satya's face : Thank you Antara ...meri baat manneke liye ...main jaraha hun ...n take care of urself.
Satya opened the door n saw Rukhsana there facing him with rage in her eyes ..: kya milaya aapne pani me ? she hissed.
Satya made a puppy face n bent down on her and whispered on her ear: ...E-c-s-t-a-s-y Pill... ise lene se insaan apne sari dukh sari dard bhul jata hai ...ek do ghante me iska asar suru ho jayega Antara par...aur fir wo meri kisi bhi baat ka bura nahi manegi ...aur to aur meri h-a-r b-a-a-t manegi...main uske sath kuch bhi karun wo mana kar hi nahi payegi ...ulta saath degi...an evil wild crave for Antara was playing on his face ...suhaag raat khatam honeke baad bhi sayad usme is wonder pill ka asar ek ghanta aur rah jaye ... puri tarah hosh mein aneke baad ...haan insaan ko depression hota hai ...aur Antara ko shayad kuch jyada hi ho...Satya smiled sinfully
...bas yehi chotasa negative effect hai is wonder pill ka ...par tum fikar mat karo ...main hun na!!!!!...Anatara ko main sambhal lunga...
Rukhsana was dumb struck for few seconds hearing his wicked plan...she hissed back at him with severe hatered in her eyes: Antara itni dukh se guzar rahi hai ...wo aaj apna sab kuch kho bathi hai...aur aap usehi barbaad karne ke liye ...she stopped for a second...main soch bhi nahi sakti koi itna gir sakta hai ...aap jaise kamina kisi bhi ladki ke layek nahi ho...
Satya laughed at her n mocked her: Thank you Rukhsana for your compliment...
Satya left bewildered Rukhsana outside Antara's room and went down. Mrs. Kaul was not ready to marry her daughter with Satya. She was getting more restless by the passing time ...
Satya heard her and his jaws hardened ...he came to her n said politely...: Aunti ji main abhi abhi Antara se baat karke araha hun ...wo mujhse shadi ke liye maan gayi hai. aap bhi maan jaiye ...Please.
He took mamaji a bit distant to Mrs. Kaul and said in a low voice: bas mamaji abh aap aunti ji ,Nur apa aur Antara ko lekar mere car me baith jaiye ...shadi yehan nahi hogi... shadi meri beach cottage mein shanti se aaraam se hogi... aap taiyari ka fikar mat kijiye ...wo sab main dekhlunga...
Haan aur ek baat ...Antara shadi ke liye maan gayi hai par usse is bareme kuch baat mat kijiye abhi...wo abhi baat karneki mood mein bilkul nahi hai...let her rest for a while...tabtak Main Ajji aur Aayi ko yeh khush khabri de deta hun... Satya gave a broad smile to Mamaji ...
Mamaji was confused and couldn't think properly...he was hell scared for Antara and he wanted to give her a safe life with Satya ...save her from RAGHUNATH for ever... the name Raghu brought cold shiver in his spine...
At Satya's Room:
Satya came back to his room thinking to himself : Satya ko mouke ka sahi istemal karna ata hai ...isiliye to Satya ki jeet hamesha hoti hai ...
He took his cell n called up someone ...: cottage pura dulhan ki tarah saja do ...ek ghante mein pohochraha hun ...mere khas room ka sazawat best flowers n candles ke sath karna...bilkul suhagraat wali room dikhna chahiye...aur han shadi ke liye ek pandit aur mandap ka intezam karlena...
and most important mujhe best securities chahiye ... cottage ke charo taraf gun holder security men khara kar do ...taki na koi bahar se andar ghus paye ...aur nahi koi andar se bahar bhag paye ...samajh gaye ??? koi galti nahi hona chahiye...kyunki jis se bhi galti hogi ...wo apna jaan se jaiga...get it damn clear in ur head ok !!!!
Satya was about to leave his room when bumped with Ajji. Ajji aap mere kamre mein ???kuch chahiye???...:Satya a bit shaken looked at his Ajji.
Ajji smiled at him n said : mera ashirvaad tujhe nahi chahiye kya apni shadi mein ???
At Antara's house:
Satya was back in Antara's house with few men...all were claded with guns in their waist...mamaji , Nur Apa n Mrs. Kaul was shocked to see them .
Satya looked at mama n said: Mamaji yeh aap sab aur Antara ki security ki liye hai...ghabraiye nahi ...aap plz sab ko lekar bahar chaliye ...main Antara aur Rukhsana ko leke ata hun ...
The gun-men steered mamaji Nur n Geeta out of their house n made them seated in a car where ajji was already present. The car didn't wait for Antara n Satya ...it started off in a high speed immediately. A security man informed them Satya would be coming with Antara n Rukhsana in another car.
Satya moved to Antara's room n signaled the men . the men noded at him. Satya held Antara's hand n said : chalo Antara ...tumhare parivar Aunty ji ko leke already nikal chuke hain ...tumbhi chalo ...
Antara n Rukhsana got puzzled. Antara jerked n nervously exclaimed : Mamma ...mamma ka tabiyet aur bigar gayi kya ???? she trembled n got down from the bed n ran down the stairs wiping her tears...
Rukhsana started to follow her but the gun-men tied down her completely within split of seconds...her mouth ...hands n legs were tied so tightly she hardly could move. Satya waved his hand to her laughing at her like a devil n locked her up in Antara's room .
Antara was looking here n there in her house for her mamma n then moved out her house ...a car came n stopped beside her abruptly...Satya came from behind ...held her n pushed her inside the car without giving her a second to realize what was happening with her ... he too got into the car n the car glided away leaving the entire basti n devastated Raghu behind. The whole thing happened within less than one minute.
Satya was cherishing his first step towards his triumph. He looked at utterly shaken Antara n tried to comfort her ...: calm down Antara...main abhi tumhe tumhare mamaji se baat karwa deta hun ...Relaaax... Don worry...main hun tumhare sath ...
Antara was hell scared n worried for her mom: mamma thik to hai na ??? wo sab kahan hai ???mujhe istarah se tum kahan leke jaraheho ??? mujhe nahi jana tumhare sath ...stop the car Satya...i said STOP the car...
Satya called up one of his men n said : mamaji ko phn do ...
Haaan mamaji main Antara ko lekar nikal chukka hun ...aap Antara se baat kar lijiye ...wo Auntiji ko lekar bohot pareshaan hai ...
Antara grabbed the phone n said : hello mamaji ...mamma kaisi hain ...aap sab kahan jarahe hain ? ye Satya mujhe kahan lekar jaraha hai ?
Mamaji : Antara sab thk hai beta ...didi bhi thik hai ...mere sath hi hai ...bus tumhare safety ke liye hum sabko kuch samay ke liye basti se bahar jana pad raha hai ...
Antara cried out : safety ???? kis baat ki safety ???
Satya snatched the phone from her n spoke to her mamaji : mamaji Antara ki mom aap ke sath hai ...Raghu ke bareme baat nahi kijjiye unke samne ...main Antara ko samjha deta hun .
He cut the phone n looked at Antara who looked completely broken n baffled...
Satya looked at her with concern n sensitively started her brainwashing: I know Antara tum kitni takleef se guzar rahi ho ...tumhe aur takleef hogi yeh jaan ke ki Raghu tumhare pita ka khun karneke baad tumhe puri tarah barbaad karneka soch raha hai ...wo bohot khush hai tumhe dard de ke ...aur abh wo tumhe aur dard dena chahega...yeh baat tumhare mama samajh chuke hain...man janta hun aur tum bhi samjho...isliye kuch waqt ke liye hum basti se dur ...Raghu se dur jarahe hai...
Antara trampled on the car seat closing her eyes. tears rolled down her cheeks.
At Antara's locked room :
Rukhsana was tryng hard to untie herself but she miserably failed. She kept on trying and moved towards her mobile phone that was fallen down on the floor...she saw a little sharp edge of wood on Antara's bed side table beneath the desk...she moved near it n used it to slide down the tie from her mouth ...the table fell down upon her due to her pressure hurting her badly but made her mouth tie slide down. Rukhsana's hand were twisted n tied to her back so she bent down on her cell n used her chin to put it in loud speaker mode ...with a hell lot of trial she was able to give Raghu a call but after few seconds Raghu's cell got switched off. She prayed to her Allah n tried to call Machmach...n atlast God listened to her ...Machmach received her call.
At the terrace at Naik Sadan :
Raghu was staring like a lost man at the balcony door in front of his terrace which was tightly closed...it seemed the door would never ever open in front of him again...everything was finished... Raghu ripped n pealed off his wedding sherwani in severe frustration n threw it away from his sight.
he was back in his jeans n shirt... Sitting on his bed ...placing his elbows on his knees n resting his bent head on his palms...suddenly his phone rang... He cut the phone n threw it away...it got switched off.
Muchmuch was there n he was sitting on the floor devastatingly...this time his phone started ringing ...he was about to cut the call but couldn't seeing the name flashed on his mobile screen...
it was Rukhsana calling MM. Muchmuch thought to himself ..: yeh Ruku to yedi ke ghar me hogi ...abh ye call kyun kar rahi hai ...kuch aur bura hua kya ?
MM received the call suppressing his fear...: bol
Rukhsana started crying profusely on phone...she was sobbing with broken sentences...: wo Satya le gaya ...mujhe bandh ke rakha tha ...kisi tarah raghu ko phn kiya ...fir tumhe ...Antara ko kuch pila diya usne ... Kuch sun nahi payi main ...darwaja bandh tha ...par maine hole se dekha ...aunti ji Nur apa mamaji sab ko le gaya ...
Machmach's eyes got widened in fear...he gave his cell to Raghu n said nervously: yediko le gaya Satya kahin pe ...yedi ko kuch pila diya hai pani ke sath ...Ruku kuch kah rahi hai ...tu zara sun bhai ... me ...me ...mereko kuch samajhme nahi araha hai ...
Raghu looked at Machmach vacantly n then took the cell from his hand ...Rukhsana cried over phone and told Raghu the whole thing ...
Raghu's eyes became furious ...jaws hardened n fist squeezed... his each n evry fiber got alert as he sensed his misskaul was in danger. Raghu disregarded the trauma he was going through...he shoved off his acute pain disgrace n heart ache aside... n he asked in a calm but furious tone: kya pila diya ...yaad karke bol...
Rukhsana tried hard to remember n said ...: ecs...ecsta...ecstasia aisa kuch bolatha ...chotasa safed pill maine dekha tha ...pani me ghul gaya ...bola ki isse insaan sab dard sab dukh bhul jata hai kuch ghante ke liye ...kuch haad tak hosh kho bath ta hai insaan ...
Raghu stood up leaving his bed...gritting his teeth...he restlessly slided his fingers in his hair backward closing his eyes...: Ecstasy ...yani MDMA...Drugs!!!!...meri misskaul ko drugs diya!!! ...wo kahan lekar gaya meri misskaul ko ...bata mereko ...
Rukhsana kept on crying hard n said : Raghu bachalo tumhare Antara ko ...wo Sahib uske sath ...bohot galat karne wala hai...wo kahan Antara ko leke gaya mujhe malum nahi ...mujhe yehanse nikalo ...main bandh hum Antara ke kamre mein...
Raghu turned to Machmach n said: Ruku misskaul ki kamre me bandh hai...ja use leke aa
Raghu picked up his phone ...switched it on and called up some one ...: Sahib ka car kuch der pahle nikla basti se ...kis taraf gaya ?...
The person on other side said something to which Raghu sighed n said : pakka ? tune thik dekha tha na ...?? ...thik hai ...
Raghu called up Pakiya then and said: Pakya ..mereko aabhi isiwaqt das bara khas aadmi chahiye ...tu aur chotu sabko leke puri taiyari ke sath basti aja ...puri taiyari matlap puri taiyari ...SAMJHA???
Pakya: Han bhai ..samajh gaya ...kahin operation karneka hai ...puri taiyari ke sath sabse khas bara ko leke do minute mein pohochta hun ...bhai aap ke bulane par bara to kya hamare gang ka hazar jaan dedega ...
Raghu : Hmm... janta hun ...
In the mean time Machmach was back with Rukhsana. Raghu tucked his gun in his jeans n wore his jacket over his shirt to disguise the gun on his waist. Raghu was wearing a ash color shirt with greenish blue checks in inner collar n sleeves ... blue jeans n a deep ash colored jacket...he looked more than dashing in his livid gangster mode. None could imagine that this boy was going through such deadly emotional turmoil just few minutes before...the moment he realized that his jaan was in danger he completely changed...his stern eyes... well built tough iron body and his determined bodylanguage shouted that his only focus then was to bring back Antara physically intact.
He looked at Machmach n said in dangerous determined voice: Machmach ...chal misskaul ko wapas mere pas laneka hai...
Machmach was getting his mental strength back seeing his Bhai in full action mode shoving off his grief and shock but he got puzzled in one thing n asked: par bhai apun log kahan dhundega Yediko ...Sahib kahan leke gaya hoga use ...hummese kisiko nahi pata ...
Wahin gaya hai jahan wo apna haar kala kaam ko anjaam deta hai ...uska beach cottage ...shahar se bahar...mereko khabar mil chukka hai: Raghu said with utter outrage.
Machmach: par bhai wo yedi teri baat nahi mani to...itne gussay se shadi tod kar gayi ...abhi uski bheja to itna garam hoiga ki wo sabkuch ulti dekhegi aur samjhegi...uparse Sahib ne use wo drugs ...
Raghu raised his hand n stopped him: Raghunath puchne nahi jaraha hai...nahi manegi to Uthake Wapas le Ayunga...chahe uski marzi ho ya na ho...
To BE Continued...
Edited by pampz - 11 years ago
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