Rantara FF:~The Garage~ CHAPTER 8-10 +Link to Th2 - Page 24

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Posted: 11 years ago
it was a fatabulastic update ...i loooved it ...plz don make us wait soo loong for ur update ...we love ur story so plzzz don torture us ...i want the next update sooon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow after a long tym dear ..i was missing diz ff soo much
Awesome update dear
RanTara nokh jhok as usual
But raghu forcefully kiss her as a punishment
Felt soo bad for antara coz every tym she hav to suffer
She didnt get job
She actually care abt limit ka gunda..
Now m waiting nxt kya hoga
Update soon dear


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Posted: 11 years ago
finally u updated nice part dear loved it
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Luved it yaar xx
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omggg...
u hv updated this ff after so long...
thx..it was lovely updt..
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Posted: 11 years ago
An: Chillao mat!! Main bhi chilla sakti hun.

--i loved this part...

antu back in tigress form...🤣
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šŸ˜›it felt too good to read the story again... this was really nice but want morešŸ˜›
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@deaddevil she is busy she cant but i think she will soon
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ok I'll try to make it up for nt updating for such a long time thts why I'm updaing chapter 8, 9 and 10...hope u'll like it😳

Chapter 8:

After making Antara sleep Noor Appa talked to Mami to let Antara at home the next day...Mami agreed and said tht she will talk to Raghu tomorrow..Just when Mami was about to lock the main door she saw Raghu a few feet away from their home looking really angry up to the sky...He was actually looking at the balcony door as he knew tht Antara was purposely not opening the door...
As Raghu was soaked in the rain and the rain didn't show any sign to stop nor Raghu showed any sign to shield himself frm the rain Mami decided to call him...

Mami: Raghu...after some more calls he turned to see who was calling him...

He walked to Mami who pleaded him to come in...
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Antara stirred in her sleep hearing someone shouting...slowly she recognized the voice and the name whom the voice was calling...Antara jumped frm her bed: Mami...Raghu?
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Raghu was sitting on the sofa with a towel in his hand which Mami gave him to wipe the water frm his body but he didn't move...Mami came to him with a hot cup of tea...

Mami: Yeh kya Raghu tumne to poncha hi nai...

Ra: Hmm wo..

Mami: Tum yeh chai pee lo...tumhe tand nai lage gi..aur yeh mujhe do main sukha de ti hun...

He handed her the towel and slowly sipped the chai thinking of wht happend...He was still angry at wht she had said to him...If he will find her he will make her listen to him..How could she say things like tht to him...

He was feeling good when Mami was caring for him...He always saw her as her mom as she took care of him like he was her real son...
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Antara sneaked out of her room and quitly popped her head frm the stairs to see wht was happening down there...She saw Noor Appa standing beside Mami and Mami doing something with a towel...Peekeing her head more out she saw tht she was drying Raghu's head..His back was to her so he couldn't see her...her breath hitched and her eyes widened...

An: Oh God yeh yahan kyun aya? Aur Mami? Kahin Mami ko pata to nai chal gaya ke yeh meri balcony mein tha? Aur? Aur isne kahin yeh to nai bata diya ke aaj kya...?? Nahi Nahi..she didn't knew when she was half hanging on the stairs..a lil bit more and she would fall on her face...just in time she hide back coz just then Noor turned around to see if there was someone as she heard some noise...Seeing no one she turned back to Raghu who was looking lost...

Noor: Woh darsal Raghu main yeh kehna chahti thi ke Antara ko kal ke liye agar tum chutti de do..Woh kya hai na ke usse phir teez bukhar char gaya hai toh...she said in a low voice..

Hearing her name Raghu came back...

Ra: Hmmm..he paused...Toh wo khud nai ake keh sakti thi?? he sais coldly

Antara made a face hearing his answer: Jo tumne kiya uske ke baad tumhe lagdta hai ke main tumhare paas aungi??..idioit..she whispered
This time Mami turned around but ANtara again hide...She understood tht she was too loud...

N: Nahi Nahi wo kya hai na ke wo aaj late ayi hai aur itna bheegi hui thi to woh seedhe sone chali gayi...

Raghu didn't want her to stay at home bt he had no other choice: Hmmm theek hai...

He couldn't sit there anymore and decided to leave: Acha Noori Aunty, Mami main ab chala.. Chai aur towel ke liye...he stopped as he saw someone sitting on the stairs just then Antara peeked her head out and their eyes met...Her eyes widen and she hide back praying tht he didn't saw her...

Ra: Shukriya...Noor and Mami smiled at him...Warna aaj kal to kuch logon ki madat karo to woh shukriya kehne ke bajaye ulta dusre ko hi sunane lag parte hai...he said thinking about Antara... Noor and Mami didn't understood wht he meant by tht...

Raghu turned around to leave when Noor again stopped him: Tum Antara ki baat kar rahe ho na..she smilingly said...

Antara's mouth was wide open...

Raghu slyly smiled...

N: Woh kya haina Doctor sahab ke death ke baad aisi hi hogi hai humari Antu..khair choro yeh sab...

An: Kya main sach mein badal gayi hun?? she thought...

M: Waise Raghu humne bilkul waise kiya jaise tumne kaha tha...humne Antara ko bilkul bhi nai kuch pucha jab wo uss din late ghar ayi thi...aur tumne bilkul theek kaha tha uski tabiyyat jaldi theek ho gayi...

Raghu again smiled...

Antara was shocked to knw tht Raghu forbid them to ask anything...now everything made sense to her why no one asked her anything when she came back frm Raghu's house and why everyone forced her to do the job in his garage coz he took care of her...
But she didn't wanted to accept tht he cared for her...

Raghu didn't wanted to take the conversation further as he knew tht Antara was sitting on the stairs and listing to their conversation and he didn't wanted her to knw wht he had done for her as he thought she would misunderstand him so he wished them a good night and went frm there...

Antara also made her way back to her bed..when Noor came back she pretended to sleep...as soon as Noor feel asleep she slowly went to the balcony..

Antara was standing in the balcony thinking about everything again:
Had she really changed?? Of course she had...Noor Appa was right she never behaved like this before...Par mujhe kabhi yeh mehsoos hi nai hua kab main bubbly Antu se khadoos Antara bhang gayi ...she thought..a tear fell from her eyes realizing wht she've become...Shahid mere dekhne ka nazariya bhi badal gaya hai jiski wajah se main Raghu ko acha nai samajh ti..
Shayad woh...woh acha ho?? she hesitantly thought...
Thinking how Raghu behaved with her yesterday night and today in the garage she thought:
Par main puri ghalat nai ho sakti..Kuch to woh bhi ghalat hai...Kuch..before she could think further she saw him standing infront of her in his balcony directly looking into her eyes...
Antara gulped hard thinking tht she was caught by him..he was coldly looking at her...before she could move frm there he switched off the lights and lay on his chaar payi..

Antara was surprised bt at the same tim angry tht he didn't tried to talk to her...
A: Kuch nai bohat kuch ghalat hai iss mein..she said huffing in anger...Abhi todhi deer pehle to balcony ka darwaza torne laga tha aur ghar ke andar bhi agaya tha..Aur ab kaise so gaya hai...
Mujhe bhi iss se koi baat nai karni aur nahi main ab iss se koi mauka dungi baat karne ke liye...
She was feeling so angry at him tht he ignored tht tears made their way out of her eyes...
Seeing him not move she angrily went back to bed...

Raghu heard how the door got closed and slowly opened his eyes to see if she was gone... He didn't wanted to talk to her now coz his brain was a mess...he was feling so angry coz of how he behaved with her frm the past 2 days and how she avoided him...he didn't wanted to make things worse but he also wanted her to show how it felt to be ignored by someone if u want to say something to...

Thts it both didn't want to bow infront of eachother...Lets see who will bow firstWink



Chapter 9:

Next Morning:

Again Antara woke up late as she slept late last night..her body was hurting but still she made herself ready...Noor and Mami informed her tht she had a day free as she is still ill...
Antara was really ill...she was feeling completly deaf the only things which she could hear was the sniffing of her nose, her eyes were puffy frm the crying of last night she didn't know why but she couldn't stop herself frm crying, at last her voice it was coming and going and mostly it was gone and when it came it came like a shrill so she had to use her hands to communicate...

Raghu was early up and decided to start his work...He was feeling out of place as everything was reminding him of her, Antara...

Antara was feeling really bored as she wasn't allowed to do anything...Finally she decided to cook
Using kitchen gloves and a mouthpiece so here bacteria wouldn't get into the food...

All were sitting there with an open mouth but didn't said anything coz they knew she was ill and if they would forbid her anything she would fight without any reason and at the end would cry...

Antara shushed everyone away by saying tht Noor Appa and Mami should take her mom on a walk until she is ready with the food...

Raghu decided to take a break and go around his basti to look if everything was ok...He met Noor, Mami and Geeta and talked to them for a while where he came to knew what craziness Antara doing...

Mami: Raghu tum please Antara ko samjhao ke wo ek jaga pe aram se beht jaye...

Raghu just looked here nd there: Aunty main kaise?

Noor: Haan Raghu tumhari baat wo maan legi...

Raghu just nooded as he knew they didn't knew wht happend btw them and headed towards their house...

He again turned around and said: Jab tak main na kahu koi bhi nai andar ayega...

Noor and Mami nooded hestitanly while Geeta just smiled...

Ra: Ab phir Miss Kaul se larna parega...he sighed and entered their house...

He closed the door behind himself and when he turned around he felt like banging something as Antara's antics were making him crazy...

Ra: Eh Miss Kaul...he said in a loud voice bt she didn't respond she didn't even gave any sign tht she heard him...MISS KAUL!!!

Raghu closed his eyes to remain calm: Dekh Miss Kaul mera dimag na kharab kar aur sidhe se meri taraf dekh...

When she started to hum a song he got angry...he strode towards her, grabbed her by her elbow , turned her around and pulled her mouthpiece down...Her confused eyes met his angry eyes...

Ra: Itni deer se tujhe bula raha hu aur tu jawab hi nai de rahi hai!!! Tu samajh ti kya hai aapne aap ko??

Antara could slightly hear him bt didn't understood wht he was saying the only thing she understood was tht he disturbed her while she was trying to kill her boredem and trying to forget him for a while...
She released her elbow frm his grip, put her mouthpiece on and returned to her cooking...

Raghu stood infront of her: Behri hai ya Gungi? Jawab kyun nai de rahi??

Antara looked at him and in a high pitched cracked voice said: Dekho mujhe kuch nai samajh arahi to tum baat na karo aur mujhe kaam karne do...

Raghu was totally pissed off with her and walked out of her house while Antara just looked after him, tears making their way out of her eyes coz of his harsh behaviour towards her...

Raghu informed Noor and Mami tht its for no use to explain anything to her and after tht he got back to his work...

Again a day passed where both didn't talked to eachother...Finally Antara made up her mind tht she would talk to him when she'll get her voice back...
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Chapter 10:

Next Day:

Antara was feeling better thts why she decided to return to her work and talk to Raghu!!!...
But no one let her go so she had to spend another boring day at home...
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When the night came Antara decided to talk to Raghu as there was no other chance she could talk to him...

As she entered the garage she saw MachMach working and Raghu calling someone...

Raghu cut the call and instructed M.M..

Ra: M.m ja paas wali basti mein gunde ghuss gaye hai,..jake sambhal le...aur agar baat zyada bigre mujhe phone karlena...

M.M nooded and went...he saw Antara standing there and smiled at her...Raghu's back was facing her so he didn't saw her yet...

Antara didn't knew how to get his attention...Raghu turned around nd saw her standing just behind him...he was shocked as he didn't expected her here...

Ra: Tu??

An: Haan main...mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai...she said in her cracky voice...

Ra: Mere ko tujh se koi baat nai karni...he said walking away...

Antara blocked his way: Maine kaha na ke baat karni hai to karni hai...Chup chap meri baat suno

Raghu just pushed her to the side and walked out of the garage...bt Antara was detreminded to clear everything so she followed him...
Raghu walked to the terrace and was about to lay on his chaar payi and playing his mouthorgan bt soon he felt her behind him...

Raghu looked at her: Tereko samajh nai ayi...MUJHE TUJHSE KOI BAAT NAI KARNI...he yelled at her...

Antara didn't knw wht to say...He turned his back to her and spoke

Ra: Waise bhi tereko ab kya baat karni hai? Koi baat rehgi thi us din ke baat? he hissed in anger...Jo baat kehni hai Noori Aunty ya Mami ko bata de wo ake mereko bata dengi, waise bhi tune khud kab baat ki hai...Bheegi billi hai tu jo logon ke peeche baat kar sakti hai par logo ke saamne himmat nai hoti kuch bhi kehne ki issi liye tu dusron ko aage kar deti hai aapni baat mann wane ke liye...he said in a restrained bt still harsh manner...
Turning around he saw her still standing there

Ra: Tu abhi tak yahin hai? Itna kuch kehne ke baad bhi tu nai samjhi nai??

Antara slowly turned around to leave...she didn't now tht he thought this about her...

Ra: Aur haan ab tereko yahan aane ki zaroorat nai hai...tujhe koi acha kaam karna tha na to ja dhund le aapne liye koi acha kaam...Lekin agar tere saath kuch ghalat hua na to phir roti hui na ana kyunki maine tujhe mauka diya tha izzat ke saath paise kamane ke liye...with tht he switched off the lights and lay on his char payi...

Antara just stood there on the spot thinking wht he said...and the only thing which she whispered was:
Ghalat to ho chuka hai Raghu...she said remembering wht happend the other day in the office and wht Raghu did with her...

She looked over her shoulder at him but he had his back to her...Thinking tht he is sleeping she slowly returned to her house..Little did she know tht he had heard wht she said...His eyes were wide open and he jumped of his char payi bt he could't see her anywhere...

Ra: Itni jaldi kaha chali gayi yeh? he thought not seeing her anywhere...
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I HOPE U LIKED IT...will try to update soon...I knw I shouldn't say this bt still I'm saying it maybe in this new year some miricale happen which makes me update more often😃

AND YES HAPPY NEW YEAR TO ALL OF U😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
awsome chapters... really really good...
just enjoying the bittersweet conflict of rantara fully..
glad to have u back
Edited by ifians - 11 years ago

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