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Posted: 11 years ago
Oohhh...haste haste lag gaye raste 😆
Ria kitna seriously matter bana dia tune yaar...
Ye basti ki aurate bhi na... bechari antara ko dara dia...
Iss darr k mare iss ko to high fever ho gaya...
Or raghu bhai...sab ko dara dhamka k chup kara dala...bole to bhai ekdum zakkkas...
But precap was awesome...raghu apni yedi samjane gaya hai...samjegi ya use hi samja k bhej degi...bole to...
Samaj samaj kar samaj ko samje ye samjana
Ek samaj hai, or samaj samaj k bhi jo na samjhe
Meri samaj me wo na samaj hai...😉
Kaisi lagi meri samaj...🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update dear 👍🏼
each nd every situation u described so perfectly 👏
Poor antara is in shock
raghu is somewht happy but worried for antara
😕
aww poor antu got high fever
Raghu going to meet her 😊
precap is really interesting
pls continue soon
thnx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow ria what to say ..i told u i hv
become ur fan aftr sajda nw dis is also grippingg...
grt loved hw beautifully u penned antus feeling
n reaction on dis whole situation...
poor antu...n raghu wowww what to say...a gem
of person cnt hurt antu ever...bt bappa ne kya kamall
kiya h...ahhh maza aa gya...
interesting to see ab kyq hoga n hw dere relation will
turn out.. waiting fr d nxt chapter to see hw
raghu will enter antqras house n talk to her...
raghu all d best...lol..
thanks ria update sooon n tkcr
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG Ria ...u just don know that ur each n every update is a master piece...👏👏👏
how to review this update i really don know ... the way u described Antara's pain is beyond perfect ...and i was thinking how raghu gonna behave after this ...he did the the perfect thing which was required at that moment ...he buried all the chatters about their marriage instantly ...he knew so well Antara ...deep in his heart he was happy but he was so sad for his Antara ... he perfectly knew what she was going thru...
AWww...poor Raghu and poor Antu ... i was madly waiting for them to come face to face ...but it didnt happen in this chapter ...
waiting for the next chapter like what u know very well Ria ...😆😆😆
ooopppsss ...Raghu in a dominating voice stopping Antara ...n with a bang he closed the door in front of her...haila ...Antu dargayi trembling ... abh aage kya hoga ??? kaise samhalega Raghu Antu ko ????
jaan neke liye Ria ki most POPULAR GAG zarur dekhiye jo har roz ata hai IF mein ...hahahaha
haila aisi holi gift mereko aajtak nahi mila tha ...thank you Ria for ur wonderful stories ...
luv u darling ⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
great update ria!!😛
uff!!..ye aunty log to ekdum yedi hi hai...😆
aww poor rantara..raghu is somewhere happy n more sad because of antu..i am feeling so bad fr her..she is not well..hope she will get fine...😔
i am exciting to see that WILL RAGHU DO SOMETHING TO MAKE HER FINE????😊
waiting ofr next update😃
tfpm...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PurpleSunset

Honestly speaking I can't review this update Ria..😕

It would be an insult inflicted on this update if i give my reviews
Ria...Ria...I wouldn't stop telling you that how amazing and gifted writer you are 😳😳
My heart literally sank while reading this update ...it was so emotional that it made cry for one long hour 😭😭😭
I couldn't see Antara shattered into pieces😭😭😭
I felt so terrible😭😭😭
sorry to made you cry purple dr... honestly even i was so sad while penning down the chapter. but don't worry, they will overcome the phase soon.. just wait a bit more.😳
Such a traumatic state of both only reminds me of these lines...

"The mist of your sadness wreathes around me.
I hear your voice but I cannot reach out for you."
ohh Ria..this update was beyond any perfection 👏
It was just FLAWLESS ⭐️
aww thank u dr😳
Loved Raghu's lines to control the damage which had already occurred...

"ab iss locha par koi baat naii hogi... ek ratti ki bhi naii... aur idhar jitney bhi log hain na sab apne bare bare kaan khol lo aur sun lo..." raghu moved his hard fiery gaze to all making them shook all over. "aur haan tayi... tu bhi apne dimag mein ye baat acchi tarah se baitha lena..." he said looking towards the woman who talked about antara and his marriage. "idhar jo kuch bhi huya sab idhar hich rahene ka... ye baat bahar naii jana chahiye... Ye raghunath naik ka order hain... aur sab ko pata hi hoga apun ki baat na maan ne ka natiza kya hota hain..." he said. All the people were looking towards him with fearful eyes. "fir bhi agar kisi ko ek paise ka bhi shak hain to apun bata dega... basti mein kahi bhi... kisi bhi kone mein bhi agar mere ko iss baat ki zikar sunayi di ya fir mere ko antara aura pun ke barein me kuch bhi ulta sidhaa sunayi diya too pahele se bata de raha hoon... ussi din basti ke galiyare se uski laas milegi... Chahein woo koi bhi hoo... apun ko agar dikha ussey kuch ulta sidha kahete huye too ussi waqt ura dunga... GHUS GAYA BAAT DIMAG MEIN?"

He couldn't have done anything better than this😊
yup thats true... he knew that if the news spread how miserable it would make antara's life. so he supressed the matter immeaditatly so that antara didn't get any more mental trauma from the gossips about them..
He did repair the outer damage but what what about the inner one...the inner turmoils
they both are going through???
don't worry he would do that too. in his weirdest way... but veryone knows that only he was the one who could do that... and trust me, he will do that,... he will bring back antara's smile to her face.. how.. that i can't tell...😆
What is Raghu's mistake in all of this???😕😕
It pinched me when Antara thought that she was bounded to Raghu for her damn whole miserable life...!!!!
Can't she even think once about having a beautiful life with Raghu???
"Why mind over matter...?"
Why she is listening to her brain all the times????
Why doesn't she let her heart to take over the charge???
Why she's building so many walls around her????😡
All these questions are leaving me frustrated 😡
yup i understood but just think on her way. when antara met him in kashmir she was attrackted towards him. shee had developed something deep towards him. that time she only heard of her heart. but when she came to know about his reality it shook her whole world. it created deeep affect on her. and after that one year she was not like before. she was matured and stronger than before and when raghu again came infront of her her heart was again drawned to him but that time she was affraid to losten to her heart as she think that she would again lost everything just like before. but don't worry, how much wall she created arround her, raghu will break all the wall and again got victory over her heart again..😉

Btw it was right on Raghu's part,that he didn't disturb her...
he did give her some space to think rationally😊
I loved it...when they both felt each others presence on the either side of the closed door..😳😳😳

"YE DONO TO PATI PATNI BAN GAYE.."
awww..this line made Raghu and me totally happy😆
yup obviously... akhir apni zndagi(antara) jo mil gayi ussey.😉
it felt like a dream come true to him...
It was like...

"Sometimes something happens in one second that changes all your seconds after that ."😳😳😳

Precap is something I cant wait...so pls do update soon...😉
love ya...mwah🤗


love you too MUAHHH...🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: honeybees22

OMG that was soo emotional ri umade me cry

but raghu is happy that antara s his wifey awww and he has rights on her well done raghu
antara aww poor her but soon she will accept him
precap ohh cant wait pls cont asap ri

thx hinu..
sorry to make you cry.. but don't worry this phase will be over soon😊
yup raghu do have right on her... he is her husband afterall.
thx for reply
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nazi786

Wow what an update
Poor antara is so emotionally shattered after this. Every time she tries to go away from raghu god always brings her back right in front if him. Raghu made sure no1 sed anything to her about the incident
Omg that's what u call love when u can feel there person present without seeing thm.
Poor antara has got a high fever raghu is going to make sure he gets to see her now. Mmm the precap seems intresting m. Please update soon. Thanks for the pm

thx nazi...😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143

Omg ria such an emotional update 😕

yup i know yaar😭
She is so badly hurt and shattered I can't see her like this
I wanted to hug her tight and console her everything will be alright 🤗
Thank God Raghu ne us mandir mein sab ko ruk liye, kisi ko kuch nah batane key liye
it was needed yaar... otherwise the condition would get worse.
Raghu is also badly hurt and shocked, he wasn't able to go inside and talk to her 😭
Still she can felt his presence, when Raghu was hidding
She cried all night and me too while reading this update 😭
ohh sorry yaar... i don't wanna make you cry..😭
She has got fever, OMG now Raghu will not leave her for hurting herself 😕
yup thats true... it's not gonna be so easy story yaar. they have to go through so many things. but don't worry.😉 as i promissed there will be so much intense romance, 😳shadi to ho gayi allready...😆 aur haan bacha bhi milega.. 🤣and rantara will always be together..😉
Shocking and interesting precap 😲
Sorry if you didn't like my review, but kya karo im so so sad
no yaar i like it... don't worry... sad reply for sad chapter is okk🤣
But you did a good job and I love you for that
Continuee soon 😃

thx yaar.. love you... muahhh🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik

Oohhh...haste haste lag gaye raste 😆

Ria kitna seriously matter bana dia tune yaar...
Ye basti ki aurate bhi na... bechari antara ko dara dia...
Iss darr k mare iss ko to high fever ho gaya...
Or raghu bhai...sab ko dara dhamka k chup kara dala...bole to bhai ekdum zakkkas...
But precap was awesome...raghu apni yedi samjane gaya hai...samjegi ya use hi samja k bhej degi...bole to...
Samaj samaj kar samaj ko samje ye samjana
Ek samaj hai, or samaj samaj k bhi jo na samjhe
Meri samaj me wo na samaj hai...😉
Kaisi lagi meri samaj...🤣

thx a lot ridzy... loved your reply🤗

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