Gun and Guitar-a RANTARA ff(note at pg150)

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hi guyzz!!first of all,so happy to be a part of this forum!😃...lovely show...!!rantara is so cute..😳.
i wrote this story just now.i used to write in other forum but this is my 1st rantara stiry...and i am warning that i am a crap writer...and my all chaps became so long!!😆 always...
but pls if u think this story is a bit tolerable then give ur cmnts...and sgould i cont it??!😕
pls give ur views...

gun and guiter
chapter 1
"no no nargis,not like that,play it correctly...!!"the tall beautiful girl with long slightly curled black hairs,fare skin and dark brown eyes,standing near the mike said to her friend who was steating on the chair with her guiter in hand."but it was the right tune antu!!i don't understand why u are so perfectionist yaar!!"nargis said with a little sad face.the girl near the mike smilled."nargis!!i am not saying that it was not correct!!but still something was missing!!u know what?!u are just playing the correct note...but it was not coming out of ur heart!!nargis,feel the passsion in song..then put it on the tune!!..."she said excitedly."uff antara!!..."another girl said from her side,"you are a crazzy music lover you know...!!"she said.antara's smille broaded,"my father always said that,'play the music which always touch other peoples heart'.i remember this words always afreen!!u know this music has some real magical powers...it can do anything!!it soothes each and every scur,pain of heart!!and i want to spread my tune allover in world..."the girl's dreamy eyes gleamed in ultimate jay."tu bh na antu...i don't know how u still could manage to cherish this impossible dreams!!antu we live in kashmir!!!a place which was sometimes called 'heaven of the earth',a place full of beauti and music!!but now it has turned into a living hell!!now the chill air doesn't vibes the beautiful songs of birds and humans but only guns,bomb blasts and screams of people..!!"nargis's voice chocked and tears rolled down from her eyes.antara and afreen were looking towards her with stunned frozed eyes."trust me,this guiter's sound will be lost in that sound of gun!!"nargi said in husky voice.antara slowly came near her and kept her hand on her shoulder"nargis!!.."she said in low voice.nargis hugged antara tightly,"what was her fault antara?!!why did they killed him?!he was just a little kid!!.."nargis's voice chocked.just one month ago,nargis lost her little brother riyaz in the bomb blust near lal chauk."no nargis you are wrong!!..u know why those guns got victory over us?cause we are affraid of them..!!nargis agar hum haar maan jayengey to kaise hoga?!!i won't be affraid from those guns and i know someday our guiters tune will surely over come that sound of dead!!kashmir's valley will surelly again be callerd as heaven...!!"antara said with determined face."antara!!.."nargis said in a husky voice."u know riyaz loved ur song!!will u play his fav song for me?!!.."nargis asked.antara smilled and took the guiter.caressing over the cords with her delicate finger she let out a beautiful tune...at the next moment she started the song,
chann se bole chamake jab charar bole
kwaab dekha hai aankh kaa khumaar bole
kwaab chalke toh aankh se tapake bole
channa chlake toh pura aabshar bole
urju urjdurkut urju urjdurkut...
at the next moment two girls joined her in same tone,there song spreaded through the air of kashmir.
after their song reharsh three girls came out of the clg."god!!just four days left for annual function and our song is not ready yet!!.."afreen said worriedly."don't worry yaar!!why fear when super singer antara kaul is hear?!.."nargis said playfully."nargis?!!"antara said playfully."uffs madam is angry..waisey kya prog hain tum logo ka?!!chalo na aaj gulmarg ghumne chalte hain..it had been long time since we visited there!!"nargis asked excitedly."ya nice idea!!what say antara?"afreen asked."no way afreen!!papa and ma has gone to visite shankaracharya temple today.so i have to take care of the house.even apa and that saitan is not home..."antara said."cmn yaar antu whats the big deal!!we will come back soon..!!"nargis made a puppy face.antara looked at her face.nargis had became normal after huge effort after riyaz's death.so she didn't wanted to make her sad again."ok!!.."antara smilled."yayy..."nargis jumped in happiness.after some days all of them took the car.they were heading to the gulmarg and when they were bypassing the road stretched at the side of beautiful dal lake they saw lots and lots of police and millitary on the road.that was not a new thing in srinagar on those days.they were habitiuated with that.but still it looked like their was a tight security allert allover."hey what happened?!"antara asked curiously."whats new...may be they heared of another bomb plant!!but i am sure they won't be eable to find it before it get blust and take more lives!!.."nargis said in hard voice.both afreen and antara looked back to her."arey nahi nargis aisa kuch nahi hain...u don't know the news?.."afreen asked."what news?!"antara asked."now what can i say.not just this terrorists but...u know our beautiful kashmir has became the most secured hidding place for the peoples of underworld.the police had been informed that a very dangerous criminal and gangstar of mumbai had ran away and he is now somewhere in kashmir!"afreen informed."god!!.."antara stroke her head."we were allready troubled by these terrorists now all bad peoples from allover the world has started to gather hear...when everything will be over?!!"antara asked looking at the beautiful lake and houseboats.
antara looked foroward.there was a huge shit of pure white color stretched allover upto horizon!!not a single spot on that white shit.that was sometimes glowing like diamonds in sunlight and when the cloud and fog was covering the sun the shit was turned into silver. gulmarg!!!one of the mose beautiful places in kashmir.the golf couse of the gulmarg,one of the largest in asia was all covered with ice allover and at the end the huge unending renge of pir panjal ranges all covered with snow,standing with it's glory.antara visited so many times hear but the place never failled to amuze her.at some distant nargis and afreen were busy in their ice childish ice throwing game like other visitors.antara left them and forowarded her steps towards the horizon.
after some moment when she was quite far from the people and she saw someone at a distant struggling to walk over the snow with his heavy boots.he was all covered with heavy jacket and jumpers.he was facing his back towards her.antara felt a bit fun looking at his unease state.she heared his irritating words."kaha marwa diya yaar mujhe??...juhu ke retile beach mein mauj me ghumta...aur dekho yaha iss barf mein dance kar raha hoon!!!.."he whimpered and his feet got disbalanced.he fell on his face and antara bursted in laughter.the guy lifted his face.his sunglasses and hood had fallen and his face was quite visible.at the sound of giggling he turned back and was suddenly startled finding a young girl at behind.at that moment suddenly a chill air came and ruffled antara's hair arround her smilling face.that stranger eyes got frozed on the sight.
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i know it's long😆 but if u permits me to cont then i'll try to give short updates!!😃pls reply..
ps:dedicated to kavs who told me write something on this title..🤗


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Posted: 12 years ago
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chapter1=page1
chapter2=page2
chapter3=page5
chapter4=page7
chapter5=page11
chapter6=page15
chapter7=page20
chapter8=page25
chapter9(part1 & part2)= page28
chapter10=page30
chapter 11(part 1)= page 32,chapter 11(part 2)=page 33
chapter 12= page 35
chapter 13= page 38
chapter 14=page 43
chapter 15=page 46
chapter 16=page 49
chapter 17=page 52
chapter 18=page 55
chapter 19=page 58
chapter 20=page 66
chapter 21=page 69
chapter 22=page 93
chapter 23=page 107
chapter 24=page 113
chapter 25=page 125
chapter 26=page 132
chapter 27=page 138
chapter 28=page 142
chapter 29=page 146

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Edited by ifians - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey dear..wow itz juz superb .. u hav written soo beautifully .. keep continue :-D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome chapter Ria, love the FF already, can't wait for your next update :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank you so much for accepting my request and write this ff


so cute titile ...just like the show...

antra background is emotionally and lovely and the bonding with her friends is so cute

and our hero entry in her life...omg

first meeting mein ab kya hoga
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ur writin gud..infct d description abot Kashmir was amazing..i was feelin it. :-) plzzz do continue..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaveriw2008



thank you so much for accepting my request and write this ff


so cute titile ...just like the show...

antra background is emotionally and lovely and the bonding with her friends is so cute

and our hero entry in her life...omg

first meeting mein ab kya hoga

i am happy that u like it!!!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: SuShaanRocks

ur writin gud..infct d description abot Kashmir was amazing..i was feelin it. :-) plzzz do continue..

ahh thank u!!last year autumn i visited kashmir!!so i can describe the places in detail...!!the memory is still bright!!😃
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hears the 2nd chap..😃 pls ignore spelling mistakes as i am very bad in literature..😆
hope u enjoy..
chapter 2
antara was all busy in laughing so she didn't noticed that intense look on his eyes.his eyes' expression was so amused!!as if he was in shock or transe.antara controlled her outburst with great difficulty.but still she was giggling.she steped over the powdery snow carefully and came near him.his eyes were still glued to her face.antara bended and offered her hand to him.but he didn't noticed it.his expression was catching a new range of intensity as the time was passing.antara felt a bit confused as the person didn't take her hand."hey come on!!do u prefer to seat in this snow all the evening?!"she asked with a huge smille.suddenly the guy seemed came out of his transe and he drooped his gaze in embarrasement."what?!!.."she rolled her eyes.at that moment looking at her slightly angry and also so innocent face a mild cute smille spreaded on his face.without saying a word and continuing to look at her face he stretched his hand to take her palm in his grasp.antara caught his hand with her both palms tightly and draged him up.after a moment he was on his feet."so there u are...if u are so much irritated with coldness and ice then why did u came hear??!!"she giggled again.for the first time in this long 15 mins he opened his mouth,"sayad kismat mujhe yahan le aya...aaj pata chala kyun.."he said.antara's smilled ended up in a scowl by his sentence.she didn't expected that kind of statement in his very first convo.she then looked at him throughly.he seemed young...mostly arround her age or some years older.he had a real sharp musculine feature.his deep voice and his tan skin made him look so manly.but yet there was a short of childlike touch in his face.spacially that mild smille which was playing at his face made him to look a bit kid like.his coal black eyes were totally fixed on her face and he seemed a bit lost."hey hello..!!"antara waved her hand near his face and he jerked up again."what are u thinking now?!!don't tell me that u loose ur memory by that fall!!..."she laughed again and his mild smille broaded more looking at her smille."sorry sorry..i was just!!it's like...when i start laughing it's so hard to stop and ur fall was so...please don't take it seriously..!!"antara apolozized."it's ok!!..."he assured with another smille."madad ke liye sukriya...!!"he added in a greatfull voice."arey isme sukriya kis baat ki?!"antara smilled again,"aap agar humari jagah pe hote to aap humari madad nahi karte kya?!"she said.his eyes suddenly got saddened by this words.his eyes shifted towards the horizon where the snow covered ground had rushed to meet the blue sky.antara was again confused by the sudden mode change of this guy!!what type of person he was?!!he was behaving weirdly from the begining.she was about to ask him something when suddenly she heared nargis and afreens' voice calling her."antara,antara..where are you?!!"they were screaming.antara bit her tounge..!!she totally forgot about them."i have to go my friends are calling me.."she said and turned back.his hand stretched foroward automatically in a kind of gesture like he wanted to stop her.but he resisted with great effort.he looked a bit confused and a slightly sad!!she was going further and his confused eyes were catching more intensity.suddenly she stooped and turned back to him with a mischevious smille,"and yes..."she promped,"beware while walking on the snow!!.."she let out another smille and again heared nargis's scream.she turned and saw them running to her."nargis..."antara called her and moved her feet."hey where have u been?!we are searching for u allover..."nargis said."nothing just hovering hear and there.."antara said."le ab jaldi chal!!nahi to der ho jayegi.."afreen said."yeah lets go..."antara said and moved foroward with them without giving a single glanse at backside where his eyes were still fixed on her.his gaze followed her till they got vanished behind the turns of road.the place suddenly seemed so empty!!he could still hear her smille echoing in his ear.what happened to him actually.he was not used to these kinds of feeling."antara..."he slowly uttered her name.a sudden unknown feeling washed over him as he took her name.his heart suddenly skipped a bit.her beautiful face was mooving allover his thoughts.he mooved towards the road and after some silent moment he reached near the shiv temple and market of gulmarg.while suddenly his eyes got allerted seeing the police force at some mere distant.he could clearly heared there talks.two of them was holding a photo and asking something to a travell agency's guide."no sir..i didn't saw him!!i am definite..!!"the guide said."look at him carefully.his name is raghu...he is the notorious gangstar from mumbai...bahut sare murder aur police case hain iske upar..."the policeman said.the person who was watching over them hided his face with mufler and tried to run sweep out from the place silently.but one policeman saw him and screamed,"hey there he is...raghu!!!"he said."what?!!"the police who was busy in convo pull out his revolver.the starnger sensed the approachig danger and rushed towards the alpine forrest situated on the hill.the whole force rushed behind him screaming his name but they were uneable to catch him.he was so fast.they fired to him but they ,missed as the clever person was not running straight but in a serpentine move so bullets can't reach him straight.in front of their eyes.he got vanished inside the forrest!!"damn!!...he escaped again...the police stomped his feet in disgust.
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Edited by ifians - 11 years ago
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lol...meine bhi apna ss dusare forum mein abhi update kiya hai


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