Gun and Guitar-a RANTARA ff(note at pg150) - Page 105

Omg what an update totally outstanding
Need to bow down to u ur a amazing writer ria
Omg the last bit was amazing the way the sindoor landed on her forehead amazing
Antara is already fighting with her inner self
Can't wait for the next update
Thanks for the pm

wat so does dat mean dey are married

Raghu effect on antara...ye to hona hi tha kab tak raghu k charm se bachti but hayla...ye kya sindur...or bhi raghu k haatho antara ki maang me... ek chutki sindur ki kimmat tum kya jano raghu babu...per Please ria iss love story complicated mat bana dena...

Raghu effect on antara...ye to hona hi tha kab tak raghu k charm se bachti but hayla...ye kya sindur...or bhi raghu k haatho antara ki maang me... ek chutki sindur ki kimmat tum kya jano raghu babu 😆...per Please ria iss love story complicated mat bana dena...

Ria mein kya kahoon tujhse yar, I think I dont have words to appreciate your stories 👏
Sab se pehle tujhe HOLI BOHAT BOHAT MUBARAK 🤗
Or Antara ki tarha teri zindagi bhi holi key rango se bhar jaye
Lakin mera intentions teri shaadi karane ka nahi hai 😆
Antu jitne bhi try lar ley Raghu ko apne dil or dimag se nahi nikal paeygi uske pyar ka jaddoo hi kuch aisa hai 😳
Omg very smart of Raghu, Antara ka mobile usne mami key cell se hi liya
Mera Sher 🤣
Poor Antu is missing her mom so much, Ek request ek bar to mila dey Ria
OMG, Raghu ka good night message Hayeee and more shocking he wrote Antara 😳
Antara jitna bhi dur bhag ley, jitne hi nafrat kyun nah kar ley kismat usse hamesha Raghu key or karib ley aeygi 😃
Ek or message bole to GOOD MORNING, Hayeee Raghu ko ek jhalak dekhny hai Antara ki so romantic yar 😳
Holi mein Chingam Chabba key wala song thats weird but really funny 🤣
That MM dialogue was damn good ap i yediyoon key naam le cheers 😆
Bechare chote pundit jee
Finally Antara ghar se bahar to nikli
Hayeee the way you describe when Raghu see's Antara is outstanding 👏
Rantara mujhe pagal kar deygi I kept blushing all the time 😳 😳
God ek chutki sindoor 😲
But yeh kya sara Sindoor Antara pe hayeee I love you Ria for this
Bappa key Mandir mein Maang bhar di 🥳

I dont know how Antara will react
Waiting to read more
Continuee soon
Love you
Sorry aj comment zyada lamba hoga magar bhura nah mano HOLI HAI 😆

Originally posted by: PurpleSunset

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Originally posted by: PurpleSunset

Ria...Tum mere sath aisa kaise kar sakti ho 😆
ab maine kya kiya??😕
aisa koi update deta hai kya?? 😆 😆
aur kisi ka pata nahin par main to deti hoon...🤣

I literally died after reading this update 🤢
now get back to life soon... otherwise you can't be able to read next chapter😆

Seriously HATS OFF to you 👏 👏 👏
aww thx 😳

I'm out of words today Ria 👏
is that so??? 😆
btw the update was brilliant and outstanding for me.


Perfect in every way 😊
aww thank u thank u again...😃
loved it when Antara was tangled in Raghu's thoughts.😳


awww...that night sms was so cute 😊
yaar sab ko mere sms itna pasand kyun aa rahe hain... mujhe sms ki dukan kholni paregi..🤣

It made my heart ache with the wish he desired.😭


He wanted to be the first one to put color on her but still he tried to resist it...and promised her not to cross her path...but in return, he just wanted to have one glimpse of her. ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
yup... cause his day won't get complete without seeing her...😳

How mesmerisingly beautiful she looked on the holi day ❤️


Morning wish from Raghu, just enhanced her beauty more 😳
yup thaat's right... raghu ke pyar ka asar hain.. antara din be din nikhar rahi hain..😆
Raghu and MM convo while drinking bhaang was cute and funny. 😃

yup... MM is always funny nodoubt...😆
Loved the way Raghu's eyes savoured Antara from head to toe making her blush and lowered her gaze 🤗

ohh ohh... 😉
so Antara's hormones have finally started to kick in 😆 😆 😆
hormones... ROFL..🤣

Chota Panditji scene was hilarious 🤣
he was just a medium to bring raghu at the temple where antara was..😉

I gasped When Raghu filled Antara's maang with Sindoor unknowingly 😲 😳
yup... i know that moment would give shock to all..😆

Indirectly hi sahi...Antara to Raghu ki wifey ban hi gayi 🤣

yes... woo too hain.. antara raghu ki wifey ban gayi..😆
This was the best scene for me in this update and it did turn my world upside down 😆 😆

was it hat much shocking?😆
it was written very beautifully ❤️ ❤️
You know what Ria...its raining over here at my place and your update turned the atmosphere more tranquil and romantic 😳 😳 😳
awww enjoy the rain..😳😳
and I love you for that...wanna thank you for giving such a wonderful update ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
mention not...😳

Now I'm waiting to see Antara's reaction 😕

well you will get to see it in next chapter😊
Oh Ria...IT WAS A KILLER UPDATE 😆 😆
yup i can see that as you were dead after reading the update..🤣

Pls do update soon.


Sending you loads of
love
hugs
&
kisses...mwah 🤗