Part 2 updated (Page 3) - Raghu's love confession - my version (OS) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderfully written OS... loved how u portrayed Raghu's inner turmoil... n the passion in his confession, omg rocking!! How I wish they had shown at least half the level of this passion in his confession in the show... no point lamenting now.. I enjoyed this very much... thank u so so much for giving this awesome piece...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: agbabe

wow Alpha👏...it was such a lovely end. there was a mixture of every emotions of Raghu and Shi which was so well described by you. and the kiss was like 😳.

thank you i really enjoyed reading it. if time permits please try more dear😉.



Thank you...😊. Glad that you liked it. Yes, if something interesting comes to my mind, I will definitely give it a try...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ArhanAngadholic

woww yr its really amazing OS a mixture of emotions romance n all u nailed it wid ur writing kash our cvs thought in same way :( bt u know n fr them sumi is more imp urghhh


Thank you...😊 Yes, that is what led to the show's unexpected closure. When the leads will be reduced to supporting characters, the show will eventually suffer and same thing happened to DDBEDS also...😔
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Renu111

wow alpha its awesum and i wish why cv didnt think of it. and raghu in ur os is fabulous ... 👏 and u r going to continue this as i want to know what will sumi do.


Thank you...😊 Yes, I always wanted to see more intensity in Raghu towards Shivani, so tried to depict the same. This was OS and I wrote it with a frame of mind of finishing it at one go itself. But, if something more comes to my mind, I will try to extend this story...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: jtmbarun

Wow ..It's an amazing OS dear!!!👏

The story was very well written..I loved the last part..❤️
Thanks a lot for writing and sharing it with us!!!🤗


Thank you...😊 I tried to depict the confession in a way I would have liked to see in the show. Glad that you found it worth reading and appreciating...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyoti06

Wowww wowww woww this is exactly how I wanted Raghu's confession .. A bit of anger , a bit of jealousy , overflowing passion and the main point is he should realise his love for Shivani on his own 😳 ...


Yes, this is what I found weird in the show that till the last moment, someone else had to persuade him to confess his love. It would have been better if he would have realized it on his own.

Loved the way you brought the whole Karan and jealousy angle by making Shivani work in his office so that Raghu can realise how he cannot see her with someone else or away from him .. this is exactly what we wanted in the Karan track too .. we all wanted that jealousy angle in Raghu which can make him passionate and authorative 👍🏼

He required a push to realize his hidden love for her and what better push than jealousy...😈

Only if CVs had even 1% of this creativity like u then Raghu's confession would hv been something else and we wolud hv cherished it like never before

I can totally imagine this RaShi moment when he confesses his love to her passionately and kisses her ☺️ ... wonderfully written dear 👏👏👏 ... Loved it ⭐️

Thank you so much for the kind words...😊. Yes, I felt it required intensity to match up to Shivani's confession, so tried to bring it out in my own words. Glad that you liked it...😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Uma-Arhaanfan

Wow wonderful os dear alpha.just loved the jealous enraged raghu here in your os.wonderfully written.:)


Thank you...😊. Yes, jealous Raghu was a treat to watch during the movie shoot. So, I thought of incorporating that side of him here as well...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rekrn

Wow wonderful OS ⭐️

Everything that you wrote I could imagine, very descriptive writing. Loved how Raghu's emotions finally won over his mind👏

Why couldn't the CV's have written something like this, looks like the members have a better feel of how Rashi's story should have been developed.

Please continue with your story if you can, wanting to see how Rashi handle his family and the progress of their love.


Thank you for the kind words...😊. I am happy that you could imagine the scenes through my writing...😃. Well, the CVs got entangled in something else which eventually led to the closure of the show. I will definitely write more if some new and interesting thought comes to my mind...😊
Edited by alpha_057 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: DivzOnAir

Wonderfully written OS... loved how u portrayed Raghu's inner turmoil... n the passion in his confession, omg rocking!! How I wish they had shown at least half the level of this passion in his confession in the show... no point lamenting now.. I enjoyed this very much... thank u so so much for giving this awesome piece...


Thank you for the appreciation...😊 Yes, I too wanted to see the inner battle of Raghu with himself before the confession. We did get one scene where he talks to his alter ego, but, that was it. So, the CVs never focused much on this crucial aspect of the story. I am happy that you enjoyed reading it...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful RaShi love journey dear ... loved the way raghu realised what does he actually want

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