My continuation of THE story 05/08/14 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loving your version you are giving nice romantic Rashi scenes😳
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bela suddenly comes from behind and clears her throat..."Raghu,I was looking all over for you and you're here romancing !"
Raghu smiles but does not release shivani just yet. he holds her tightly and plants a kiss on her forehead. he whispers to her that he loves her so much... shivani smiles and runs away blushing..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww...jen u are quenching my thirst of what I missed wt rashi😳...tq
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Posted: 10 years ago
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back at the haveli.

Renuka just came of the phone with someone. She looks and mahima and tells her that everything will happen as per their plan. mahima smiles.

Now they only had to look for a suitable bride for karan. one who they could easily manipulate.



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renuka says that now things will finally go her way.
Jass walks in and wants to know what they are talking about. mahima quickly says that aunty saw a sari and thinks it would look good on her. Jass is skeptical and tells them not to try anything tricky as he has his eyes on them. he says he will not ever repeat the mistakes he made earlier. he leaves and mahima says that they have to be careful not to let jass know about the plan as me will stop them.
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meanwhile, ginny is in the market buying vegetables. Karan was with her but he got a call from his office. he went to take the call... ginny walks away from the vendor and is at the entrance to an alley. she is all smiles. she had to be be dreaming. they moment she saw karan she fell in love with him. and now they were about to get married. she was the happiest girl on earth.
suddenly a black van pulls up. three masked men grab ginny and push her in the van. she tried to scream but her mouth was covered. the men make there escape through a side road.


Karan comes back and looks for ginny. he notices her phone lying on the ground, he is frantically looking for her. he calls her name over and over.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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karan is worried and calls up raghu. he asks if ginny came back home. raghu says no. he rushes to meet karan. karan is frantic. he sees the tire marks of the van and decides to follow it...he gets in his car... how could he leave ginny for even a moment? he is so worried...
if anything happend to ginny then he would never forgive himself...

meanwhile one of the man calls renuka and tellsher that the work is done. a flashback is shown . renuka aunty and mahima decided to kidnap ginny and they took the help of the men...



Precap...Shivani learns that ginny is missing and goes to find her.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Woww Jen thats a fab fab updt 👏👏👏

This is what we wanted to see , a balanced episode with drama , romance and good story progress 👍🏼

RaShi scene was amazing especially Raghu lost in Shivani and does not even care when Bela comes 😆 and then plants a kiss on her forehead 😳 .. I got goosebumps imagining Raghu brushing off her hair and touching her lips ☺️ .. wish we got all this after the confession .. sighhh 😭😭

Cant wait for the next updt .. lets see how Renuka gets convinced and how RaShi and Karan save Ginni 😲
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful update Jen Thank you👏👏

So will Shivani in your story tell Raghu that she is going to look for Ginny and ask him to come with her or will she act impulsively😆

Looking forward to tomorrow's update😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanks guys😳
i'm sorry the story is not planned. i just write what come into my head...

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