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Posted: 12 years ago
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Suraj left Sandhya in the training center and was about to leave, before that he wanted to gift her something memorable so he asked bhabho and bhabhasa to wait and went to meet her. They both were standing under a shady tree . "Sandyhaji I have something for you" and he gave a heart shaped card to her. Sandhya opened it where she found the picture of herself with Suraj and "wo ai ni" written on it. Sandhya had tears seeing it Suraj gently wiped her tears.

Sandhya spoke in a husky voice "Surajji it looks beautiful even I have something for you " saying that she gave a box to Suraj. Suraj was surprised on opening it as he found the chain which he bought for Sandhya before their wedding."Sandhyaji this chain". "Haan Surajji your first present for your Sandhya which she didn't even made an attempt to look when u gifted her but now the time has come Surajji will you adorn your Sandhya with your lovely gift" Suraj nodded with a cute smile and gently wore the chain around Sandhyas neck "Sandhyaji it looks very beautiful on you" . "Surajji this was bought by you how come it will not be beautiful" they both had a naughty smile and Suraj pulled Sandhya near him and they both had an emotional hug after which Suraj left leaving all his memories to wander around Sandhya.

my first ever attempt plz feel free to criticize 😊

thank u thala fr ur encouragement😳🤗


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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
loved it very much VD
first impression best impression

keep writing more
nice to have so many awsm writers in dabhily
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful VArdhini.👏⭐️
I loved it very much
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank u all so much😊 😊
this encourages me a lot😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good
Just tdy i mentioned it in the DOTW
and you gave the OS
Thank you
Keep writing
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So sweet...well done!!👏 loved it...
wish v could see such surya moments in real dabh too...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice OS Vardhini. Keep writing.

Thanks Rama for bringing out so many hidden talents in forum members.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it...cute memory...V thumps up.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice one vardhini. The chain around which most of us OS writers have written OS. Dont know when the CVs will wake up to this fact. Hope they do it atleast now 😃😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank u all😊
@vasuma- hope i did some justice to ur expectation😳

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