Let Me - DriKshit TS [Part 2 Pg 9] - Page 4

Love the concept <3

The dialogues were apt for the situation with the 'taunts' injected into them. When Dri got the premonition and shield her face away from Rak, it brought glimpses from back when she did so in the show after he caught her from the ladder.

Eager to know what unfolds further on.

Update soon if time permits.

Take care 🤗

Great update. Do continue soon :)

Nice one👍

Do continue

Interesting start od the story and curious to know what's gonna happen next

The bonding between drishti and rakshit is same as that in show. They would argue with each other constantly but couldn't bear each other's silence fir even five minutes 😂

Please update soon ☺

Interesting

Sometimes even normal people get this instinct. My brother makes fun saying chatte indriya

But we have learnt to rely on our gut when it is very strong

Thanks a ton for dropping by your wonderful feedbacks. I haven't been able to reply yet owing to the time constraints that I have at this time. However, I have each one and am grateful for the same. I'll revert as soon as I can manage. Advance apologies in case I fail to do so.

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-Harshada

Loved the part.. Reading Drikshit and their banter is always a treat.

Mr. Sergil is mad 🤣 One hand he gets irritated with Mrs. Sergil's constant chatter and on the other hand he can't take her silence for even couple of minutes. Typical male who can't accept his fault .. 😃

Oooh no so Drishti is gonna be shot in place of Raskhit 😭.. He should have listened to her and left that place ..

Do continue soon..

this was soo good. I liked how you showed Dri's power being used for something where Pi was not involved. And the banter🤣Him being restless coz she wasn't talking ☺️ Continue soon

But I guess you are working on The Promise... anything will be okay for me coz I love ur write ups. Waiting waiting

Lisa

Awesome love it

Continue soon plzz

Originally posted by: kgoyal

Awesome loved it do update soon rak never listens to her but he cannot bear her silence tht was good

I am glad you did. Thank you. ❤️

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