Originally posted by: msm98
I came across this piece a few days ago and since then am dying to comment and tell you how much I loved it but, due to some issues wasn't able to login. Finally I could today and the first thing I am doing is writing this comment.
I too have written fanfics for AvNeil - Naamkaran, but after it ended I ws on a break from IF. I ssly couldn't find any show where I could invest my time. But after watching DivyaDrishti and our DriKshit I ws back here. They are so adorable.
I have been reading different fanfics and wen I read yours I was so mesmerized by the way you write, gurl! It's simple yet so descriptive. The beach scene. Also, their emotional turmoil- the pain, the feeling of betrayal, mistrust everything is nicely portrayed. The last line of part 4- "Don't you think I deserved to ne questioned and not accused?" was such a cliffhanger dude. I am already so excited for the next part.
Post soon👏
Ps- being a writer myself I know and understand how much the comments mean and after reading this piece I really think you deserve this appreciation. Also, you have motivated to write a fanfic on them after like 2 yrs. Thanks🤗