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Posted: 16 years ago
#91
thankss ill be good in no time 🥱 ur doin a greatt job and ill try to pinch in the diolages as much i can..im not to good at it but ill try :)😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: bmtdloverr2050

thankss ill be good in no time 🥱 ur doin a greatt job and ill try to pinch in the diolages as much i can..im not to good at it but ill try :)😛

Don't worry about it... the important thing is for you to get better 😊 We have plenty of time! And everyone can write dialogue... it's all about imagining what you would say if you were one of the characters... it's easy if you think of it like that 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#93
yuupp ill try 😊
im startin to feel a lil better but im gettin to bein normal in a week or so 😊 hate being sick!!😔
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Posted: 16 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: bmtdloverr2050

yuupp ill try 😊
im startin to feel a lil better but im gettin to bein normal in a week or so 😊 hate being sick!!😔

Don't worry about it 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#95

Hannah gets home after a particularly exhilarating night concert. She changes out of her stage clothes, glances at the clock and decides that it isn't too late to call Lilly. She dials her number and Lilly picks up on the third ring.

Lilly: Hi.
Miley: Hey, Lilly! I just got home from the concert. It went amazingly well!
Lilly: That's great (her voice sounds kind of stuffy)
Miley (frowning): Are you all right? It sounds like you have a cold or something.
Lilly: No, I'm fine! It's just my allergies kicking off again.
Miley: That's too bad.
Lilly: So... did you have something special you wanted to talk about?
Miley: Yeah, I was wondering if you were free tomorrow. I thought maybe we could go to the mall and hang out for a few hours.
Lilly: That's great. I'll be over first thing tomorrow morning.
Miley: Awesome! So, I'll see you tomorrow then.
Lilly: Bye.

Miley hangs up the phone, feeling puzzled. Lilly hadn't seemed like her usual cheery self on the phone. As Miley is standing there, staring worriedly into space, Robby Ray comes into the room.

Robbie: Hey Miley... what's wrong?
Miley: It's Lilly.. she sounded weird on the phone... almost as if she'd been crying.
Robby: Did you ask her about it?
Miley: Yeah.. she said it was her allergies... but I don't think she was telling the truth.
Robby (putting his arm round Miley): Why don't you invite her to come round tomorrow?
Miley: I already did... She'll be here first thing tomorrow morning.
Robby: Well, that's great! I'm sure she'll tell you if anything is wrong.. She's your best friend after all.
Miley (smiling wanly): I guess you're right... I'm gonna go to bed now.
Robby (giving her a hug): Good night, honey.
Miley: Good night, Daddy.

Robby leaves Miley alone in her bedroom. She bites her lip and then gets dressed for bed. She falls asleep after a long time, wondering about Lilly.

Promptly at six o' clock the next morning, the doorbell rings. Miley is sleeping peacefully in bed and she jumps at the sudden noise. She clambers down the stairs, rubbing her eyes. She opens at the door and sees Lilly standing there. She gazes at her blearily, squinting in the bright sunlight. Lilly looks slightly preoccupied as she gives Miley a huge hug.


Miley (patting Lilly on the back): Hey, Lilly. What are you doing here so early? I was asl… hey are you crying?
Lilly (crying hard): Mymumsaidwearemoving!
Miley (worriedly): Calm down, Lilly… now tell me what's the matter?
Lilly (taking a deep breath): My mom says we're moving to New York.
Miley (stunned): What?
Miley (beginning to laugh): Oh, I get it! You're playing a prank on me, aren't you? Well, I actually believed you for a second!
Lilly: No, Miley. I'm not kidding. My mom has been offered a better job in New York and you know she's always liked the Big Apple. So we're going in a month. *starts to cry again*
Miley: But… you can't go!
Lilly (miserably): I know… I'm gonna miss you so much!
Miley: Oh no you're not! I've decided you're not going anywhere and that's that!
Lilly: Try telling that to my mom.
Miley: That's exactly what I'm going to do!
Lilly: But that's ridiculous Miley! You know she's never gonna listen to you!
Miley (frowning): Well… I'll think of something… for now let's just go outside… maybe the fresh air will give us some ideas!

i added a bit more... hope you like it
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Posted: 16 years ago
#96
thats greatt and yay! im feelin waaay better then before :)
ur doin a awesome job im gonna message everyone again just to seee if they still remember they signed up for this contest :) jeeez
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I really don't think it's going to be any use, Charleen... i expect suhana and simz are a little busy at the moment but I'm sure they'll show up. :) and by the way, I'm not going to be posting anything for a few days because I want to finish it and post the entire thing up here... so it'll take a few days... i'll try and have it up by the twentieth or twenty second... that will give us five or six days to make any changes before we submit it... how does that sound? Oh, and I'm glad you're feeling better :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#98
its k i feel bad cuz i reallly didnt do alot :(
and you did a lot in the last task and your doing all the diolaogs to this task :( imm really sorry..
but it sounds great cuz it is hard to just keep posting it up one at a time..so best of luck :) and ill try my bessst on the next task :)




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Posted: 16 years ago
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Don't worry about it :) I don't really mind... :)

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Posted: 16 years ago
thanks 😊
but il doo even more in da next task :)

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