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Hannah just came back from her night concert in --( state name goes here( idk where she lives)) -- She calls lilly asking her if they could go to the mall tomorrow? Lilly tells her that she is going to come to her house tomorrow, and hangs up. miley thinks why lilly was soo sad on the phone and why she hung up. she goes to sleep after. its in the morning, and she tells her dad everything, he tells her that maybe she just wasn't in a good mood.. Miley thinks yeaa maybe she isnt..its 1pm, and lilly comes over, and rings the door bell, and once miley answers the door, lilly hugs miley right away. Miley is wondering why lillys acting like this.. lilly starts to cry.. and tells her that she moving. And shes moving in a month:(....Miley is in shock!! and still trying to think what should she say and do and tell Lilly what is this some kind of a joke?..and lilly tell her i wish it was :( and they both hug again?............ alright i think thats enough for today anyone wants to change something pleaase do i know i made mannny mistakess.. and i reallly dont know how to write an written upgrade but im trying my bestt..if anyone could also please add some moree lines to it, it would be awsomee! hope everybody likes what i wrote so far :)


umm..

After..(oo god im stuckk :( ) they are both thinking about all the times they spent together...etc..
then Lilly + miley go walking around the beach.
There they meet ( i forgot those 2 girls nams that are always makin fun of lilly and miley..i think its amber+Ashley) they start laughing and stuff just to get on their last nerves.. then they have a lil fight but then lilly tells miley to just forget about it. so they walk n talk..they talk about how they will alway talk to each n other no matter what happens :)...then lilly says we should try to stop this all somehow.. they should stop lillys mom from transferring. then miley gets the perfect idea and then she tell lilly (its in mute)..ill do sum friday and this whole weekend :)
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guys im gonna redue what i did friday cuz it would make sense if i did that soo here it is.. :)

-lilly goes home, then they show the second day comes :)
-lilly is talking to miley and miley wishes her all the best
-lilly's mom comes to da park, and then they are just walk then lilly explains how she is really gonna miss this place.. then she takes her mom to the place where her mom first met her dad...sad scene.. its by the lake :-)
-lilly tell her how shes gonna miss her friends.. miley and oliver are shown on the side hoping everything works out.. and
-then lilly +mom are walking then its just them two, then lilly breaks, and starts to cry hows shes gonna really miss everything an everyone.. then she slowly ask her mom if she could stay here..
-her mom is really sad and breaks down her self and says she cant leave the place where she spent her whole life
-then lilly's mom says guess what we arent moving :))
-lilly getts happy, and happy scene between them 2(detail ill put in latter)
-lilly then goes to mileys house later on, and first shes all sad and scares miley that shes still moving, then she looks at mileys face expressions and couldnt help but to start laughing, miley give lilly a wierd look and ask her if shes k
- lilly tell her shes jk then they get happy and hug :)
idk what to do after

what i think is missing in this episode is
-comedy
-jackson scenes
-and more of miley and hannah montan

hb u guys ?what do u think is missing even thou we arnt finish yet?😕

once we are finish with the whole outline ill re-write the outline that way it will be easier to understand and read 😊

just one question.. i don't really watch hannah montana all that much... in fact i've only watched one full episode and that was the one with the jonas brothers... so who's oliver? and jackson? and shouldn't we put robby ray somewhere too? like maybe miley is telling him about lilly moving and he kinda comforts her?

sorry...work hectic....when is this due by the way? I don't watch hannah montana....the only thing i can do is fix it up a bit and add a bit.

Yeah it's the same with me simz.... but at least I've watched one episode of hannah montana which really is helping a lot... i'll just check out the due date and get back to you

haha i was hoping u guys would watch it lol i got alot of the ppl from my sister cuz she watches it all day :) and i think jackson is mileys brother.. and im not sure but i think oliver is miley+lillys friend.. 😕

I've seen only one episode.... only because the jonas brothers were in it and i really liked that episode

haha i seen that episode it was awesomeee! 😛
k then ill continue to write it tommorow cuz its like 1 am right now
gudd nite :)
im soo happy cuz we got like a whole month to do this episode soo we could take our time :)

Originally posted by: bmtdloverr2050

haha i seen that episode it was awesomeee! 😛
k then ill continue to write it tommorow cuz its like 1 am right now
gudd nite :)
im soo happy cuz we got like a whole month to do this episode soo we could take our time :)

haha its tottallly k :)
im better at just writing down the outline then dialogs :)

Originally posted by: bmtdloverr2050

Hannah just came back from her night concert in --( state name goes here( idk where she lives)) -- She calls lilly asking her if they could go to the mall tomorrow? Lilly tells her that she is going to come to her house tomorrow, and hangs up. miley thinks why lilly was soo sad on the phone and why she hung up. she goes to sleep after. its in the morning, and she tells her dad everything, he tells her that maybe she just wasn't in a good mood.. Miley thinks yeaa maybe she isnt..its 1pm, and lilly comes over, and rings the door bell, and once miley answers the door, lilly hugs miley right away. Miley is wondering why lillys acting like this.. lilly starts to cry.. and tells her that she moving. And shes moving in a month:(....Miley is in shock!! and still trying to think what should she say and do and tell Lilly what is this some kind of a joke?..and lilly tell her i wish it was :( and they both hug again?............ alright i think thats enough for today anyone wants to change something pleaase do i know i made mannny mistakess.. and i reallly dont know how to write an written upgrade but im trying my bestt..if anyone could also please add some moree lines to it, it would be awsomee! hope everybody likes what i wrote so far :)


umm..

After..(oo god im stuckk :( ) they are both thinking about all the times they spent together...etc..
then Lilly + miley go walking around the beach.
There they meet ( i forgot those 2 girls nams that are always makin fun of lilly and miley..i think its amber+Ashley) they start laughing and stuff just to get on their last nerves.. then they have a lil fight but then lilly tells miley to just forget about it. so they walk n talk..they talk about how they will alway talk to each n other no matter what happens :)...then lilly says we should try to stop this all somehow.. they should stop lillys mom from transferring. then miley gets the perfect idea and then she tell lilly (its in mute)..ill do sum friday and this whole weekend :)
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guys im gonna redue what i did friday cuz it would make sense if i did that soo here it is.. :)

-lilly goes home, then they show the second day comes :)
-lilly is talking to miley and miley wishes her all the best
-lilly's mom comes to da park, and then they are just walk then lilly explains how she is really gonna miss this place.. then she takes her mom to the place where her mom first met her dad...sad scene.. its by the lake :-)
-lilly tell her how shes gonna miss her friends.. miley and oliver are shown on the side hoping everything works out.. and
-then lilly +mom are walking then its just them two, then lilly breaks, and starts to cry hows shes gonna really miss everything an everyone.. then she slowly ask her mom if she could stay here..
-her mom is really sad and breaks down her self and says she cant leave the place where she spent her whole life
-then lilly's mom says guess what we arent moving :))
-lilly getts happy, and happy scene between them 2(detail ill put in latter)
-lilly then goes to mileys house later on, and first shes all sad and scares miley that shes still moving, then she looks at mileys face expressions and couldnt help but to start laughing, miley give lilly a wierd look and ask her if shes k
- lilly tell her shes jk then they get happy and hug :)
idk what to do after

what i think is missing in this episode is
-comedy
-jackson scenes
-and more of miley and hannah montan

hb u guys ?what do u think is missing even thou we arnt finish yet?😕

once we are finish with the whole outline ill re-write the outline that way it will be easier to understand and read 😊

-After they show a hannah montana concert where oliver and lilly are cheering for her :)