Hi guys this imaginary script of mine has turned into fanfic now. All thanks to u guys and ur sweet comments. Would have never gone further without ur support. So here I am extending till our serial DMG gets all happy happy again. Tab tak I will keep trying to write.:) hope I don't disappoint u. so here I come again guys. Plssssssssss do comment aur agar nahi achi lagi to galiya bhi da sakta ho. All are welcome as long as u plsssssss comment guys. Ur comments mean the world to my writing. Plsssss guys
So here is it from the scene where I left all the three couples dancing. Its basically the whole party part. Hope u like it. Sorry for the spelling mistakes. Am quite week in my hinglish. Let me know if u find any pls.
Armaan and Ridz together dancing with the rhythm of there heart beat. Completely lost in each other, soaked in the nectar of love. Both have there eyes locked in each other and there were thousands of stuff volume being spoken by there eyes. Armaan was almost gonna kiss ridz….. When all of sudden they were out of there world as they heard someone screaming.
Anjali: OUCH
Atul: anjali I am really sorry vo miss step ho gaya. Anjali mujha maaf kardo. Pls give me another chance.
Anjali holding atul to take support as atul accidentally stepped on her toe while dancing.
Anjali. Ouuuuuuuu
Atul: ab kabhi nahi hoga
Anjali: chill atul ma tumhai suli pa nahi charaungi.
Atul: dard ho raha hai
Anjali: nahi ma pagal ho gayi hu isliya chila rahi hu.
Atul: sorry
While atul tries to carry anjali. But all in vain. He gives her a sorry kinda look.
Anjali: ufffffff just lead me to the table.
Atul: strong girl huh
Anjali gives him a whatever look.
While they exit the dance floor all burst out laughing.
Muskaan: oya pida tu koi yaha top dance nahi kar raha jo datte phar ka hass raha hai atul pa.
Rahul: oya aur tu koi ballet dancer nahi hai jo bar bar kud rahi hai.
Muskaan: aur ya koi tera Punjab ka bhangra nahi hai jo tu bhagra pa raha hai. English dance hai par tu dafar ko kya pata. Pata nahi kasa doctriate ka liya pass hua.
Rahul: oya mujha to ya shak tujh pa hai. Jarur nakle mar ke pass hui hogi. Ya rishvad di hogi. Varna tu to 5th bhi na pass ho. Na akle na shakle. hmmm
Muskaan all fuming by now.
Muskaan: aur tujha kya lagta hai tu hrithik roshan hai, Bandar hai Bandar ohhhh ya kya mana bolo Bandar nahi ghadha hai ghadha. Akle na shakli aur na hi baat karna ki tamiz.
Rahul: ha ha tujha to bahot tamiz hai na. jab dekh bagwas bakti rehati ……….
Till than armaan and ridz came inbetween them to stop there argument.
Armaan: guys chill karo dekho sab huma hi dekh raha hai.
By now all the people on dance floor were watching there fight.
Muskaan: dekhta hai to dekhna de. Is pida ko to ajj mai chorungi nahi. Mujha mat rok hero.
Rahul: kya kar lagi tu. Hah kar kya sakti hai.
Muskaan: tu..
By now armaan was dragging her out of the dance floor. And ridz tried to calm down rahul.
Ridz: rahul choro bhi gussa ab.
Rahul: app nahi janti rhidhima ya apna apko pata nahi kya samjhti hai.
Ridz just to distract the attention and divert rahul's mind.
Ridz: shall we dance.
Rahul was taken back by her sweet gustier.
Rahul: ya sure.
There was a nice waltz going on and they both started swirling by the tune.While other end armaan was busy calming muskaan down.
Atul: oya ya kya tu pagal hogaya hai kya. Ridz ko us raowl ka sath chor aya.
Armaan too busy with making muskaan calm down.
Armaan: Kya bol raha hai tu
Atul pulled armaan's face to the dance floor and pointed out rahul and ridz on dance floor dancing.
Atul: kuch dikha
Anjali: Atul kya dekha raha ho.
Atul: nahi kuch nahi anjali mai abhi aya. Get u some ice for ur toe.
Atul to armaan: kuch kar varna ridz aur teri hona vali bhabhi……
By now armaan was walking to the dance floor with his anger fuming at the couple dancing.
He just banged in them,
Armaan: I guess dance ho gaya hanna.
Rahul and Ridz just looked up at him.
Rahul: nahi abhi song khatam nahi hua armaan.
Armaan: oya tu raowl mana kaha na to khatam ho gaya samjha.
Rahul: oh I c tuna kaha to music khatam ho gaya. Tum kya yaha ka raja ho.
Armaan: nahi ya meri party hai aur jo mai kahonga vohi hoga. Got it.
Rahul: ohhhhhhhhh ma to darhi gaya armaan ooh armi. Dekh mera to pasina chut raha hai. Oya ya tera boxing ring nahi hai dance floor hai. Bander kya jana adrak ka swade. Rhidhimaji shell we.
Rahul extended his hand forward for ridz but before ridz could react. Armaan grabbed his hand twisted it saying
Armaan: why not sweet heart. Ajj ma tujha dance sikhata hu. Common…
Ridz: armaan choro uska hath dekho don't create a scene here.
Ridz was pulling armaan
Armaan: tum jao vaha anjali tumhara intezar kar rahi hai. Aur atul ko yaha bhej na. bolna plan abhi shuru karanga.
Ridz: what
Armaan: jao anjali is hurting
Ridz just went to c anjali and told atul what armaan said.
Atul rushed to the dance floor with lovely. While all the four were on dance floor in middle.
Atul: rahul mai tumhara liya lovelyji ko la aya. Tumna bulaya tha na inko.
Rahul: mana what???
Lovelyji: kya dr rahul app mujha itna miss kar raha tha.
Rahul: kya??
Armaan: ji lovelygi jab sa aya hai yahi puch raha tha lovelyji kaha hai? Kab ayangi? He was really missing u.
Rahul: missing?
Loveygi: oh ab ma aagayi hu na DR rahul. Ab ma kabhi apko akela nahi chorungi.
Rahul: ji
Loveligi: chalo dance karta hai
She grabbed rahul and dragged him to dance with her.
While armaan and atul were laughing there heads off. And hugged each other on there plans successful execution.
On the dance floor two mans hugging- armaan and atul and all were giving them weird stares.
Armaan and Atul saw this and pulled apart.
Armaan: Hmmm champ mera jada nazdik na aya kar varna log u know….
They heard some few people saying "weirdoes" to them and " kya jamana agaya hai"
Armaan winked at atul and told him to play along with what people are thinking about them. He said loudly so that the few people who commented can hear.
Armaan: oh sweety itna dino baat mila ho common ek kiss bhi nahi milagi.
And he kissed at atul cheek.
They heard some old uncle with aunty screaming "basharam ma baap na kuch sikhaya nahi"
Atul: uncle kya kara yahi sikhaya hai ki kabhi ladkiyo ka saath asi harkat mat karo public ma. Jasa app aunty ka sath kar raha hai.
Armaan: ya karta honga……
They made them so uncomfortable that they just ran off from the dance floor.
While armaan and atul laughed like hell and made there ways to the table.
Atul: anjali ab tumhara dard kasa hai.
Anjali: i am fine atul.
Muskaan: oh yaar I am dam hungry lets order. Vasa bhi sari energy chali gayi hai us pida sa larta(fight). Ufffff
Ridz: ya but let rahul come too
Armaan just gave her a sharp look and ridz could feel she has upsetted him. He just rushed out to the balcony to get some fresh air. Ridz saw him leave and tried to stop him.
Ridz: Armaan………..
Ridz: Di ma abhi aati hu
Anjali: chaldi ana
Ridz: ji di
She ran out to the balcony.
Armaan was all trying to calm him self down. To himself "chill armaan chill vasa bhi ridz teri hi hai"
Ridz: armaan kya hua.
He saw her and turned back.
Armaan: kuch nahi ma pagal ho gaya hu bas. U c mujha dora parta hai tum hara pyar ma.
Ridz: armaan pls. I was just saying as a friend.
Armaan: ha ha sab kuch usi pa tum hai acha lagta hai. Dance uska saath kitna enjoy kar rahi thi na. am soo sorry Dr rhidhima I spoilt ur fun with him. Aur ab khana uska bina tum kasa khaogi.- he said all sarcastically
Ridz: armaan pls tum bhi na. common stop acting like a kid. U know na I love u.
Armaan: nahi mujha nahi pata. Hmmmmm how about tell me again.
Armaan trying all to be cheeky.
Ridz: armaan stop it na ab chalo.
Armaan: no way I need something tabhi chalonga
Ridz: armaan ander sab wait kar rahai hai.
Armaan: to karna do. Ajj sab bhukha maranga jab tak mujha kiss nahi milagi.
Ridz: armaan please.
Armaan: what please I want a kiss and thats final.
Ridz: tuma aur bacho pa vasa koi farak nahi hai
Armaan: I don't care a kiss or am not moving from here.
Ridz: fine mat chalo. I don't realty care too.
She stood there. He didn't move too. 1 min 2 min……..
Ridz: OH dam it man mera baap har gayi
Armaan: oh cool basket I just love it jab tum kehati ho tum har gayi. But am not ur baap.
Ridz: chala
Armaan: ya what u waiting for.
Ridz: hai bhagwan kaha phas gayi. Apko bhi yahi pagal mila tha mera liya.
Armaan: oh I c apsos ho raha hai apni choice pa;
Ridz: ha itna ziddi aur khamandi insane mana kabhi nahi dekha
Armaan: aur dekhogi bhi nahi
Ridz: fine I am going maro is thand pa.
She just started walking away from him.
Ridz: uffffffff
She stopped and turned to c he was just standing there with his back at her and hands folded. She ran back and gave him a kiss on his cheek by surprise. He was taken back and smiled.
Ridz: ab chala
She started walking
Armaan grabbed her sari's pallo. And pulled her towards him
Armaan: I asked for lip kiss.
Ridz: oh is it but am sorry u didn't specify. Ab isi sa kam chalao. Kiss is a kiss. And I gave u one. U can't back up from ur words.
Armaan held her tightly and stared at her lips.
Ridz: armaan pls koi ajaya ga
Armaan: bahot purana dilog hai. Am not leaving u till I get the kiss. Koi naya dilog hai to bolo.
Ridz: Armaan pls vo vo.....
Till than they heard atul coming towards them. Armaan quickly left ridz . Ridz quickly wiped off the lipstick from armaans cheek.
Atul: hufu hufu hmmmm whats happening here
Armaan: kuch nahi bas were having fresh air. Hana ridz
Ridz: ha ha vo
Atul: fresh air yaha Mumbai ka sabsa traffic vala area pa.
Armaan: ofoo champ tu bhi na hows anjali's foot now.
Atul: oh ha anjali she needs me. Jaldi chalo we all are waiting for u.
Armaan: tum chalo hum ata hai
Ridz: nahi atul hum chalta. Every ones hungry.
She showed armaan her tongue and walked in front of the two mans.
At the table
All sited and having dinner
Armaan still pissed for not getting his kiss yet.
Atul: Armaan kya hua tum kuch kha kyon nahi ra.
Armaan: jo jahia vo to mil nahi raha
He said looking towards ridz
Atul: kya chahi tujha. Yaha sab kuch milta hai
Ridz gave him a stare to shutup. Armaan winked at her back.
Armaan: kya batao sab kuch nahi milta
Atul: tu mujha bata ma order karva deta hu
Armaan: vo order hi to nahi lati. Aur isika to apsoos hai.
Atul: nahi lati. Kya?
Armaan: hmmm vo mera matlab vo….. hmmm champ tu khana kha dekh tuna to kuch khaya hi nahi
Atul: kya bol raha hai armaan. Tera dhyan kaha hai ma to second serving la raha hu ab. Aur since mera dost itna pyar sa bulaya hai, aur free bhi hai I am up for the third too.
Armaan: in atuls ear: oya jada mat kha varna vo samna dheekh rahi hai na loveliji vohi tera naseeb ma ho jayagi. Saath vali anjali bye bye kar degi atul the free khana khana vala hathi ko.
Atul: kya bol raha hai bacha ko dara raha hai kya. Ma darna valo ma sa nahi hu…… vasa tu sach kaha raha hai. OMG mujha to dieting karni paragi.
Atul stopped eating all of sudden.
Anjali: kya hua atul. Kha kyo nahi ra
Atul: ma tum hai kho nahi sakta anjali
Anjali: what
Armaan: vo kuch nahi anjali atul bas kaha raha hai uska patte bhar gaya. Hana atul
Atul: ha ha vohi armaan
Anjali gave them a weird look
Muskaan to rahul: oya tu kya Africa ka jungle sa aya hai kya. Kitna kha yaga
Rahul: tere ko kya ma ditna marji khao. Tera baap ka kya jaa raha hai.
Muskaan: asa lagta hai jasa kitna salo sa khana na khaya ho. Bhikhari kayi ka
Rahul: oya……
Anjali: cut it guys. Stop fighting. Tum log thori dere ka liya pyar sa baat nahi kar sakta
Atul: ha jasa ma aur tum hari hona vali anjali bhabhi.
All busted out on his comment and anjali just winked at him. Atul was all blushing cing anjali reaction.
Armaan in atul ear: oya sharam kar ladkiyo ki taraha sharma raha hai. Be a man yaar. Macho bhol gaya. Anjali impress uffff champ ya kya kar raha hai. Wink her back now.
Atul: ma
Armaan: nahi ma karta hu tera liya duffer
Atul: kasa
Armaan: kasa? Tu ? ufff champ rana da vo loveliji dekh raha hai na…
Atul: samajh gaya.
Armaan: ab kya its getting too late
Atul: vo to meri taraf dekh hi nahi rahi
Armaan: to usa ishara kar uffffff rana da champ
Atul all exhausted by his infertile result.
While they all were done with dinner. They made there way to the car park
Atul: anjali tum kasa chalaogi gari. Tum hara to toes pa chot lagi hai.
Anjali: its all right I will manage.
Armaan: nahi nahi champ will drop u. Leave the car here. Will pick it up in morning for u.
Anjali: thanks armaan.
Armaan winked at atul and atul thanking his fren in gesture for helping him out.
Armaan to atul: champ show her ur motorcycle skills today. Is sa acha moka nahi milaga impress kar naka.
They both got there motorbikes out and waited for there ladies.
Anjali: atul tum aur bike. Mera abhi koi irada nahi marna ka
Atul: common anjali trust me
Anjali: hmmmm ok
She climbed back while atul helped her up.
Atul: anjali hold me tight
Anjali: what
Atul: varna gir jaogi na
Anjali hesitating a bit holding him but the moment she did….our champ was in his dream world………anajli and him in swiss alps dancing to tujha dekha to ya jana sanam pyar hota hai dewana sanam… ab yaha sa kaha jaya hum teri bahao ma mar jaya hum………………DDLJ……………
Anjali: atul chala
Atul all dumb stuck and back to reality
Atul: kya anjali
Anjali: chala
Atul: oooo ha
Anjali: atul start to karo
And atul all getting nervous…..started and raced it out of the hotel
Armaan on other hand was waiting for Ridz
Armaan: what u waiting for chala
Ridz: hmmm kasa batho. Sari pani hui hai. Tum car nahi la sakta tha kya
Armaan: hmmm nahi car pa itni paas kaha tum mera
Ridz all blushing
Ridz: Armaan
Armaan: sit side way.
He helped her up and speeded up
Ridz: armaan ma gir jaongi
Armaan all cheeky: than hold me tight
Ridz: armaan mujha dar lag raha hai pls
Armaan: tight and close
Ridz: armaan please accident ho jayaga
Armaan: am an expert. Nahi hoga jab tak tum saath ho.
He gave breaks jolt in-between to get ridz more closer to him.;)
Ridz: armaan stop it
Armaan all trying to pretend innocent: kya ridz.
Ridz: armaan
Car park
Muskaan started with her scooty but was not able to get it running.
Rahul: ma help karu
Muskaan: koi jarurat nai. I can handle
She tried few times and than looked at rahul with puppy face.
Muskaan; hmmm oya vo kya kehata hai…. Rahul help karo na
Rahul: kya bola. Sunai nahi diya. Kisi ko help chahiya kya
He tried a few times but all in vain.
Rahul: oya lagta hai teri scooty bhi teri taraha kharab hogayi hai
Muskaan: oya pida tu mujhe sa panga na la. Vasa bhi ab koi nahi hai tujha bachana ka liya mujhsa.
Rahul: sharam kar ladko ka dilogs mar rahi hai. Vasa ya mujha bolna chahiya.
Muskaan: oya kuchj sahi to kar nahi sakta aya hai dilogs…….
Rahul: ok ok mujhe tujhsa koi behaas nahi karnu just leave this scooty here. Kal subha pick up kar liyo. Will give a life.
Muskaan: no thanks u nahi chahiya teri lift aur tera asaan.
Rahul: Dekh la teri marji vasa bahot raat ho gayi hai.
Muskaan: nahi chahiya aur vasa bhi dar to mujha tujhsa hai bhoot.
Rahul waited for her but she just ignored him. Rahul followed her…
Muskaan: mera picha mat kar varna ma chilaongi
Rahul: muskaan samjhna ki koshish kar varna
She just walked when she came across few drunken group of guys our there in car park
She quickly made her way back to rahul and sat behind him.
Druhuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
All the three couples on there motorbike. Were out of hotel by now.
Racing with each other. Atul being new didn't really take up much chance. But Rahul and Armaan were having proper neck to neck race. As it was late night all the roads were almost empty. Ridz screaming from behind to stop this race while muskaan screaming too as she was getting scared.
Armaan: yo basket trust me yaar.
Ridz: armaan u stop it varna mujha utar do.
Armaan looked at her through the front mirror and slowed down as he saw she was really getting scared.
While rahul and muskaan made there turn to other way waving bye. Armaan was leading so he slowed more down for atul to make up the distance.
GUPTA'S Residence
Both the bikes haulted as they reached there girls destination.
Atul helped anjali down
Atul all sad caus he could not show off his speedy motorbike skills.
Anjali: no worries atul am all impressed tumna mera liya jo ya sikhi hai is enough.
She gave him a kiss on cheak and ran in
Armaan too got ridz down reluctantly.
Armaan: Dam when r u marrying me
Ridz: Armaan tum hai har kam mai jaldi hai kya
Armaan: ha meri girl fren hoka bhi mera paas nahi
Ridz: well than u gotta learn to be patient.
Armaan: kiss
Ridz smiled and moved forward to kiss him on his cheek when he turned his face and kissed her on her lips.
Ridz Just surprised quickly moved back.
Ridz: armaan….hmmm goodnight
Armaan tried to catch her again but she ran away winking at him. His eyes followed her till she closed the door.
Both the boys were in dreamland………………………love always make person travel to places where one can't even imagine the limit of happiness.
❤️Love a mystery in itself which is known to all yet surprises one when it happens. ❤️
Edited by castrafa - 17 years ago
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