imaginary future script ;)UPDATED PT4 PG7

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Killer weekend and am trying to kill time guys. pehla VM banaya
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=889206

aur ab ya story. just my imagination and yes u guys on the forum giving few ideas too.. vo kahata hai na khali dimag shatan😈 ka ghar hota hai😉 pls have a look. and comment toooooo plsssssssssss
aur ha agar koi point nahi pasand aya to let me know. every ones view of point is welcomed

So here it goes from where the serial ended on 13th Thursday. Ziggy trying to force ridz and our hero makes his entry just bollywood way😉

while armaan stops ziggy from forcing ridz he was fuming with anger. Frustration, confusion and all taking its toll he took the hell out of anger that was burning within him on his predator. Ziggy and gang had taken the worst possible challenging time with armmaan.

Ab to koi bhi unha is tufan sa nahi bacha sakta tha. No chance. Armaan gave a look to ridz to check weather she is all right he moved her behind him. Seeing the tear and fear in her eye he was out of control. N O way out for ziggys gang. They too knew it by, seeing the dreadful look of armaan. He throttled him from his neck .

Armaan: Maina kaha tha na mujhsa galti sa bhi panga na lana. Vo to teri kismet tera saath degayi thi par ab tu to gaya.

He really gave him one shot of punch that almost cracked his jaw for sure. The other gang member got there bats out. But as they all were quite drunk and armaan's temper was bursting to max. They didn't last for much long infront of him. To the extend armaan was almost throttling ziggy.

Ridz was watching all this getting tenced. She had never seen this violant side of armaan before. And the way armaan was throttling ziggy it seemed he will almost kill him. Ridz ran up to him.

Ridz: Armaan choro usa.

Her words again going against him forced him to exert more pressure.

Ridz: Armaan leave him alone. Vo marjayaga.

She pushed him pleading him please choro and she started crying.

Hearing her cry out he pushed ziggy. He was already going through a heck of emotions within him. Watch her cry was cracking him more within. His temper again taking over his heart.

Armaan: Tum jitni jaldi ho saka yaha sa chali jao.

Ridz: Armaan meri baat to suno ma….

Armaan: suna ko kuch baja nahi tumna jo sunana tha vo tumna mujha samjha diya hai Dr Ridhima gupta.

Ridz: mana vo sab gussa ma keha diya tha aur tum………

Armaan: Rhidhimaa tumha ek bar ma baat nahi samjh ati. I don't want to listen any thing. bas aur kuch nahi. Bahot raat hogayi hai. Tum kaha reha rahi ho ma tumha vaha tak chordeta hu. Kuch galat mat samjhna just for the sake of humanity.

He started his bike and geared up to ridz without saying anything further. He made more noise but finally when he saw she didn't move. He got more frustrated. Tumha sunai nahi deta am waiting for god sake mera pas aur kaam bhi hai sirf tuma chorna hi nahi. Seeing no reaction from her side he pulled her by hand to sit at back. She was shivering from cold, fear or what ever shock she was going through. He just could not get any thing. He pulled out his jacked and gave her. Watching her not take it he just pulled her. she was trembling and crying he forced her with the jacket and made his way to the guest house. Showed her the room and left, Seeing her cry made him week and he just didn't want any more of this pain. He went out with tears in his eye. On the way indicating his house manager to take care of the guest's need.

Remembering the time when he said he will never make her cry again. The whole night he was awake with the memories flashing around him.

On the other hand Ridz was awake too all hurt by his rude and cold shoulder behavior. The whole night she thought asa kya kaho ki vo man jaya. Mujha samajh jaya. Tears streamed down her cheeks non stop and finally she fell asleep. In the morning she was awoken by the birds siging . The birds which was so rare back in Mumbai, where nature was all vanishing with the concrete jungle was taking over. She got ready all packed. She was walking down stairs when he heard the payal's chan chan that she was wearing. He remembered- meri JAAN kaha hai isa mujha pata chal jayaga. He was still in the hall all night he was there awake fighting with memories and his emotions. Ridz saw him and knew he was up all night by the red shot eyes he was having.

Ridz: Armaan pls chalo mera saath.

Armaan: have ur breakfast ur flights at 11. I booked in for u. Will drop u there.

Ridz: Tum…

Before she could say he left to get changed. She by now knew there was no chance to make him listen to her. She wrote a note to him

She kept the note in the jacket he gave her. Hoping he will read it…..

Till than armaan came down and saw she had not even touched any food. He told her to eat but she refused. He was getting really mad on her again.

Armaan: Just eat something dam it. Agar tumha lagta hai ma tumpa taras kar lunga to bhol jao dr rhidhima. Bas bahot torliya tumna mujhko ab BAS aur nahi. Ma koi tumhara jhotha natak pa nahi ana vala. Kya kaha tha tumna ki agar tumha lagata hai ki armaan ma dar jaongi aur kahungi armaan mujhko mat chor ka jao to ma asa kuch nahi karungi. Yahi kaha tha na DR Rhidhima shashany gupta.

His screaming really effected her. Tears came streaming down her cheeks. his harsh world pierced through her heart. She just got up and ran to her room. He knew by now he had done the worst he could to her. He was all broken within. And making her cry was every second killing him. He saw her coming down with her luggage.

Ridz: Thanks a lot Dr armaan for saving me and letting me live here for the night. App ka ya asan ma kabhi nahi bholongi. Thanks for every thing.

She handed him his jacket back with tears still streaming. He saw she was still wearing the pustani kara he gave her. He wanted to wipe her tears but he stopped himself.

Ridz: armaan sanjeevani ko tumhari jarurat hai tumaha hum sab bahot miss kar raha hai. Pls ana jarur is zindagi ki khatir.

He was shattered cing her leave but he knew the path to her was all pain. But it was impossible to live without her too. He grabbed the jacket that he gave her to wear. Her perfume smell was still there on it. Just than he saw a note falling from the pocket. He read it

Armaan dekho ma janti hu mujhsa galti hogayi. Tum hara khatir yaha tak ayi hu par tum hoki kuch suna hi nahi chahata. I am sorry armaan. Really am sorry that I hurt u. pls forgive me…………..plsssssssss par agar tum mujha nahi maaf karna chahata to bhi I beg u for the sake of ur career

tum asa apna career ka saath nahi kar sakta. Mujhsa gussa ho apna zindagi ka career pa kyo asar de raha ho. Yaad karo armaan ya Dr ki degree itni asani sa nahi hasil hui. 6 saal ki mehanat tum asa miti ma nahi milao. Is degree ka picha pata nahi kitna logo ka sapna ARMAAN honga. Meri khatir nahi to UNKI kahatir hi sahi. Pls

Tumhari basket

Reading the note really jerked him out of his self thinking and he knew he was just thinking from his anger. He knew his degree was just not his but armaan of his parents. He was so lost in himself he completely forgot the main picture. He knew ridz was the only one there for him to always show him the right path. Her word came ringing in his ear again "problem ya hai ki tum galat aur sahi ma farak hi nahi janta. Pls ana jarur is zindagi ki khatir". ZINDAGI was his jaan ridz. Riddhima his basket


PART 2 UPDATED- PLS CHECK PAGE 4😊
PART 3 UPDATED- PLS CHECK PAGE 5😊
PART 4 UPDATED- PLS CHECK PAGE 7😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 arey wah wah wah !!! good job !!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: rymmi

👏 arey wah wah wah !!! good job !!!



thanks rymmi for liking it😊. meri first try hai script writting pa. ya DMG vala itna lamba weekend la lata hai to mujha asa kuch harkat karni hi pari😉
thanks dear😊
Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 very well compiled! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonia_dmg

👏 👏 👏 very well compiled! 👏



thanks sonia😊 for reading up the script
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow...that was awesome 👏 👏
I could picture it all while reading 😳

I really hope the creatives show something similar to this in the show 😳.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey thanks dear a lot😊


Originally posted by: lovelygurl

wow...that was awesome 👏 👏
I could picture it all while reading 😳

I really hope the creatives show something similar to this in the show 😳.


thanks dear for liking it. ya even i hope they show some good vibes. But am sure the DMG creatives will beat me out😉😆. they are too good yaar. just hope they meet up soon.
thanks once again for reading dear😊



thanks dear for liking it😊

Edited by castrafa - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome yaar 👏
just imagining the situation made me cry. loved it.
Love Heena 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 Wonderful 👏 .

Muniza
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wow..i luvd it..if only this happens on mounday...

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