Aakhri Mod...

Zindagi ki rah mein mod toh kayi aate hai... jaahaan chand palon ke liye tehar kar... guzre zindagi ki or mud kar dekhte hai kayi, aur kuch... guzre palon ko ek beeti zindagi maankar , bas aage bad jaate hai...

Par har mod pe , agar hum kuch yaadein sameth-te hain, toh wahi bebas khade , guzri zindagi ko chootthe hue bhi dekhte hai...

Har mod par , zindagi se haath chudhate chalte hai...yun, ki aakhri mod par rukhkar... jab peeche mude tho jee ghabraaye... ki kahin... zinda rehne ki koshish mein , jeena bhule toh nahin...

Faislon par jinhe hamein guroor tha kabhi, aakhri mod par khade , apne unhi faislon par muskuraate hain kayi, toh pachtaate hain kayi...

Padma Aunty ne zinda rehne ki koshish ki hai... us dard ko dil me samaaye jo unke ek faisle ne zindagi mein dard ko zehar ki tarah ghol di...

Aaj apni bitiya ki nadaani ko dekh , jee unka ghabraata hoga...apni bacchi ke faislon par... jiska dard wo khud jee chuki hain...

Ek Aisi Maa ki apni beti se yahi guzarish hogi...jab wo use samjhaane ki koshish kare...

"Aaj ye ek ladki ka faisla hoga... aur kal ek aurat ka pachtaaava; zindagi sapnon ke peeche chalne ka nahin... ek sapne ki tarah jeene ka naam hai beta... "

(The dialogue has been modified taking off from teh scene from Kal Ho Na Ho, between Jaya Aunty and Preity Zinta)

- Sareeta

awesome....will give detailed reactions in a bit... there are some typos...u wanna correct them???

Aarti, I corrected a few... will be rechecking.. the post... I wrote the post in a frenzy what with the thoughts flowing like a flood through me!

Do PM me the details , if I have missed out on anything...! I will change immediately!

@ sareeta...pm-ed the typos corrected...al u have to do is cut-paste-format!!!

Aarti - THanks a lot, have already done seen your PM and made the corrections! Thanks a ton... cant believe I missed so many typos... hang on I need to get my specs! 😆

truely awsum............man u ave 2 write a book
u ryt so nice

it really meanz so mcuh.............DMG does influence ppl 2 very extent

luv ur post!!

@ sareeta...its hindi...typos are natural since word the saviour cannot rescue...

now, for my reactions...brilliantly said, particularly considering you haven't watched the episode. you'll understand what i am talking about once you do...this could've been prophetic had u just managed to post this at 8.29 pm...but well, as far as your concerned, it is still prophetic...

but apart from that i wanna hang to this till 11.30 when i know we can genuinely take this forward, you having watched the episode. there is one brilliant line which i know you will pounce on and devour like a hungry beast!! till then let me just critically analyse this....

technically, i think you are far more crisp and wry when you write in hindi...not so much urdu, but perhaps urdu as a language itself lends to a musical lyrical quality that can only be echoed through your dreamy style. either that, or considering woes...too, i think maybe you are finally venturing into a different style altogether. the experimentation is definitely worth it!!! but please don't lose touch with the stream of consciousness style, please??? because that is really brilliant and unique. i maintain, you do complete justice to this style too....

completely unoriginal, but the minute i read it, the song played in my head...i love it and since the instrumental version made such a beautiful appearance in DMG, i like it even more!!!


dhadkane khaamosh hain, kuch kehti nahi
yeh aakhari alvida na ho
chaahate aankhon se behti nahi
yeh aakhari alvida na ho
iss dard dil mein, dil mein rehne do
jo khauf hai aankhon se, aankhon se kehne do
dukh ki nadi chup chaap behne do
jo kehna hai tum dheere se keh do
yeh aakhari alvida na ho

sab yaadein, jo baandhe the bandhan
kaajal, bindiya, haathon mein kangan
mehki rehti thi menhdi
gaata rehta tha saawan
inn yaadon ko sapno mein rehne do
yeh aakhari alvida na ho

Strings
Shootout At Lokhandwala

oh did they play the instrumental of this...oh god, doesnt bode well does it...i think they are trying to do a hum tum or sumthing like that...my god, yes, i do hope padma does sumthing..i never knew a serial cud turn the ebb and tide of our lives so much. its scary. it feels like kisi ne mere dill go haathon se nikalkar pairon taley badi berahami se kuchla aur muskra kar kaha ki ab chalte hain....

wow! I love the way you said we can live our lives in a few moments and Zinda rehne ki koshish mein , jeena bhule toh nahin. Padma Aunty sure is not too happy with Ridzy falling out with Armaan. She recognizes the sapno ki Zindagi that Armaan can give her daughter and doesnt want her daughter's life to become a wild goose chase running after an illusion like you say. Oh! Ridzy if only you had the wisdom of your mother to see what you are losing out on! I pity you. You must actually take after your father. Proved beyond doubt now. She doesnt realize it but she is witnessing the most wonderful opportunity of her life slip out of her grasp and indeed orchestering it and willing it.

Bitiya ki nadani ya bewakufi! Apni manmani karne pe tuli hai, aur aakhon me patti bandha hain guroor ka jiske wajah se usko kuch saaf dikhta nahin hai.

Hamare armaan mahashay tho zindagi jeete hain zindadili ke saath tho jab who mudke dekhenge to unke hoton pe to muskarat ka hona hi wajib hain par hamari pyari behenji ka pata nahin. Agar is mauka, is rishtey ko haath se jane diya to mohtarma, kabhi to pachtayengi.

@dmg2c, yeah they played it the episode after ridz finds out about armaan and anjlai's bet, when she comes jogging to find armaan crying alone in the basketball court. it was really moving at that time!!! because it was accompanied by a pastiche of black and white images...