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Posted: 18 years ago
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Guroor tha , dil e Armaan hone ka unhe

Har kamsin kali...ki...

Jo hue khud , majboor , dil ke haathon yun kabhi...

Jab nazar mein bas gayi.unki.. surat ek pari ki...

Ke dil ke Armaan , hue choor ...

Jo ojhal hui, wo pari... ankhon se yun...

Ke khaamosh , beh gaye saare , armaan unke...

Ashqon mein ....

Reh gaye... wo bankar Armaan , sirf naam ke....

-Sareeta

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Posted: 18 years ago
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WOW!! 👏 👏 That was gr8...it portrays Armaan's feelings to a T...good goin luvd it😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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so real di......... 👏 👏 ur initial lines remind me of old armaan who use to keep gal's at the tip of his nails............... n now since he is in love we are not able to see our old armaan n he is really very very sad deep inside coz his feelings n love are not accepted by his LOVE Dr. ridhima n now he is trying to hide his frusrtration behind this fake n idiotic fights......... 😕
I just hope ridhima realizes armaan's love or else bring back old attitude armaan who is not ''majbur yun dil ke haathon''

TOO GUD POEM DI 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: mayah

WOW!! 👏 👏 That was gr8...it portrays Armaan's feelings to a T...good goin luvd it😉

Thank you sooooooooooo much Mayah!!! So glad you liked it! It was jus a spontaneous thing, that struck my head and I jus penned it ... jus as quick and posted it!😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wah kya baat hain. Ab mehfil saj gayee hai to hum haazir hote rahenge. Aap hain shama-e-mehfil aur hum aapke parwaane.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: mehak_kapoor

so real di......... 👏 👏 ur initial lines remind me of old armaan who use to keep gal's at the tip of his nails............... n now since he is in love we are not able to see our old armaan n he is really very very sad deep inside coz his feelings n love are not accepted by his LOVE Dr. ridhima n now he is trying to hide his frusrtration behind this fake n idiotic fights......... 😕
I just hope ridhima realizes armaan's love or else bring back old attitude armaan who is not ''majbur yun dil ke haathon''

TOO GUD POEM DI 👏

Thanks Mehak!!! I totally agree with ya!!! You've said it all...!!!! 😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ginak

Wah kya baat hain. Ab mehfil saj gayee hai to hum haazir hote rahenge. Aap hain shama-e-mehfil aur hum aapke parwaane.

Zaranawazish Ginak Mohtarma! 😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sareeta

Zaranawazish Ginak Mohtarma! 😉

I am like huh what does that mean! 😕. My Urdu is pretty rudimentary and wobbly.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: mehak_kapoor

so real di......... 👏 👏 ur initial lines remind me of old armaan who use to keep gal's at the tip of his nails............... n now since he is in love we are not able to see our old armaan n he is really very very sad deep inside coz his feelings n love are not accepted by his LOVE Dr. ridhima n now he is trying to hide his frusrtration behind this fake n idiotic fights......... 😕
I just hope ridhima realizes armaan's love or else bring back old attitude armaan who is not ''majbur yun dil ke haathon''

TOO GUD POEM DI 👏

Beautiful poem sareeta di👏👏👏...uve potrayed armaans feelings very well and that too in a shayeri andaaz😳😛...couldnt have put it better than mehak...😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ginak

I am like huh what does that mean! 😕. My Urdu is pretty rudimentary and wobbly.

Oh Gina, I caught that bit from the new version of Umrao Jaan... and the oldie man keeps saying everytime Umrao pays him a compliment... so it must be a thank you of sorts...

I love the way it was said... zaranawazish...aapki! Aye hayee!!!!😆

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