ArSh OS Series: Mera Pehla Pehla Pyaar || *Completed*

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Abi

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Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#131

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#132

Heyy Aditii... 😃
Iam so glad and happy that you kept on your words and updated it early... 👏
A wonderful and well written part...⭐️ ⭐️ 👏
Armaan & Shilpa tried to tease each other...
But Armaan and his promises were spot on and very brilliantly penned...
But i didn't understood one thing...what did Armaan meant when he said that promises are promises and saying I love will not need him to say and do anything more...
But i liked this update...
And Promise me Don't Continue it soon... 😉

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Anu

@tacker_karan

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#133

Suprb parts yr

full of romance

I lvd d teddy vala part esp

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rihanna

@rihanna09

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#134

I love the dressing.

The song and their romantic moves makes the part stupendously beautiful.

Waiting for the next part.

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Ananya Agarwal

@..Ananya..

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#135

Both the updates were extremely adorable 😳 The way you have sketched all the characters is commendable 😃

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Chahat Doshi

@Chahat_A_Doshi

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#136

Promise Day

A really nicely written OS

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#137

awww...I loved it ...it was very cute...

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ArmaanShilpaFan

@ArmaanShilpaFan

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#138

It was amazing.

Thank you for the PM.

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Surish

@Surish

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#139

Powerfully moving, has wow- inducing ingenuity, hilarious, and carries me into a state of paradisiacal bliss! Excellent!

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Surish

@Surish

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#140

Promise Day was a compelling and fantastic read that felt like an epic! I know that there are still plenty of jaw dropping moments to come! Keep up the good work!