ArSh OS Series: Mera Pehla Pehla Pyaar || *Completed* - Page 13

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Aditi.



Hahah yeah it was yesterday😆but apologies for not updating yesterday.

Thank you so much for the appreciation😃

Happy belated teddy day to you too.

Yeah with the progressing story It has only 3 chapter left as in promise day is coming today only and I really gonna miss it😕



No need for apologies ...,
And iam excited for the next part...but don't forget it like last time...
And why miss it now...? It still has 3 chapts ...na..? 😉 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan


No need for apologies ...,
And iam excited for the next part...but don't forget it like last time...
And why miss it now...? It still has 3 chapts ...na..? 😉 😃


3 chaps 3 days 😲
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE...👍🏼

JUST LOVE IT...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Aditi.



mere bhi cousin ki shadi hai kal shopping ke chakkar mein update nahi ho pai😆😆

haan yehi hota h Mai b aisa kuch khaas Ni karna tha but fir b bas time Ni mil pata tha!! 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
I was awaiting for the Teddy Day Part 😳

Another awesome update .. Muje bada maza aata hai inko ladte dekh 😆 I Njoyyy a lot ... Pehle mall then locker room hehehehe..

N wat is mre better than sorting out nok jhok wid a teddy n i love teddies 😳 n full room wid teddies Hayyee mai le lu usme se kuc plss 😆

Update now fr promise day 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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February 11th: Promise Day




It was the cocktail party night of Abhi and Niki's marriage. The colorful lanterns, red curtains, candles, champagne fountain and the red roses were making the party night simple but elegant and beautiful.



The party has started but the entry of a couple grabbed the attention of the whole crowd, Armaan and Shilpa. They entered intertwining their palms, just like a perfect couple.


Armaan was clad in the black suit with a white shirt whereas Shilpa was attired in an elegant blue saree which she liked at the shopping mall, the last morning while shopping with Armaan.



All the guys were drooling over Shilpa at which she teased him, "See! How famous I'am".


At the same time the ladies started glancing Armaan without blinking their eyes and immediately and arched his brow, when he realized that, Shilpa tightly clutched just like and insecure fiance.


They both passed a smile to each other and Armaan said, "Let's see who is more


"Is it a bet?", she asked scrunching her brows.


"No. Promise.", he replied.


"Of what?", she immediately asked.


He thought for a while and came near her and answered, "The one who will lose has to impress the winner"


"Deal!", she agreed.


And they took their steps forward in would be married couple's direction.


~~**~~


Shilpa was enjoying and giggling with the girls of DMG gang, whereas the boys were with Abhi, and the same time a guy came to her and forwarded his hand, "Can I've a dance with this beautiful lady"


Shilpa became hesitant, her eyes were searching for Armaan but his attention wasn't at her. So she smirked as it was a chance to win and make him jealous as well. and decided to dance with the guy.


"Sure", she kept her apple juice on the table and forwarded her hand in his.


All applauded the lady and a song played at the indication of the guy, which took Armaan's attention toward the dance floor and he burned from his head to toe with envy.


Shilpa grinned looking at Armaan, they intertwined their either hand the guy encircled his arm around her waist and started dancing on the music of piano, at which Armaan clutched his teeth and tightened his fist.


And he twirled her around holding her hand and again snaked his arm around her waist. But Armaan envied and Armaan came to the dance floor and forwarded his hand towards her and passed a deadly glare to the guy. She pressed her lips and gave her hand in his.



Tumko Paya Hai to Jaise Khoya Hoon

Kehna Chahoon Bhi to Tumse Kya Kahon


Armaan snatched his lady in his arms and tipped his fingers on her bare back at which she closed her eyes and he snaked her waist finally.


Tumko Paya Hai To Jaise Khoya Hoon
Kehna Chahoon Bhi To Tumse Kya Kahon

He again sang and circled her holding her finger and gently held her from her back and encircled her waist again at which she rested her hand on his and they swayed.


Kisi Zaban Mein Bhi Woh Lafz Hi Nahi

Ki Jin mein Tum Ho Kya Tumhein Bata Sakun


He rested his chin on her shoulder and huskily whispered in her ears and tried to kiss her hairs but she moved forward but he didn't leave her hand.


Main Aagar Kahoon Tumsa Haseen...
Qayenaat Mein Nai Hai Kahin
Tareef Yeh Bhi To Sach Hai Kuch Bhi Nahi

Tumko Paya Hai To Jaise Khoya Hoon..


Armaan kept her dragging back gently and twirled her again in three circles and again encircled her waist while caressing her back and placed her arms around his neck.


The melodious tone was playing on the piano and they looked into each other's eyes as were promising to be together forever, till the eternity. He minimized the distance and whispered with the music.


"You dances in whose arms it doesn't matter to me, after all I've embraced you in my soul"


Shilpa tilted her head in pride with his promise and he started singing,


Shokhiyon Mein Dooobi Yeh Aadayein
Chehre Se Jhalki Hui Hain


Armaan gently caressed his palm's back on her blushing cheeks and pulled her towards himself, at which she thought he will kiss her lips but he hugged her and swayed while singing.


Zulf Ki Ghani Ghani Ghatayein

Shaan Se Dhalki Hui Hain


He nuzzled in her hairs and felt the aroma of hers and held her head and leaned back gently with her and supported her from her back.


Lehrata Aanchal Hai Jaise Badal

Bahon Mein Bhari Hai Jaise Chandni


He pulled her back and picked her up from her waist and circled on the dancing floor at which her pallu waved with the flow of air and carefully took her back on the floor.


Roop Ki Chandni...


He closed the distance between them again and touched her cheek with his and hugged her.


Main Agar Kahoon Yeh Dilqashi

Hai Nahi Kahin, Na Hogi Kabhi
Tareef Yeh Bhi To Sach Hai Kuch Bhi Nahi
Tumko Paya Hai To Jaise Khoya Hoon...


Armaan again looked into her eyes and as he was declaring through the song to the whole universe that she is the most special and precious to him.


The piano artist was moving his fingers on the piano keys and in the melodious music and he whispered looking in his eyes confidently.


"Promises are just promises, if I said I love you then I don't need to promise that I will not leave your hand. I will be forever with you, for you and to you"


Armaan's words moist Shilpa's eyes and he nodded her head negatively as he was trying to say, don't cry at which she smiled and started the command to sing.


Tum Hue Meherbaan

To Hai Yeh Dastan


She tilted her head indicating in his direction and rested her head on his shoulder and moved back and kept moving backward.


Hoo Tum Hue Meherbaan

To Hai Yeh Dastan
Abb Tumhara Mera Ek Hai Karwaan
Tum Jahan Mein Wahan...


But Shilpa immediately took quick steps forward and hid her head on his crook of neck and kept waving in his arms and mumbled while the piano music.


"I don't promise to never leave you alone, I mean it"


Main Agar Kahoon

Humsafar Meri
Apsara Ho Tum Ya Koi Pari ...


Armaan smiled rested his hand on her head and supporting her head he moved backward and scooped her in his arms and rolled on the floor.


Tareef Yeh Bhi To Sach Hai Kuch Bhi Nahi

Tumko Paya Hai To Jaise Khoya Hoon..
Kehna Chahoon Bhi to Tumse Kya Kahon


He gently brought her down on the floor and hit his head with hers. Their lips were hardly inches apart and he brushed her hand on her bare waist to encircle it.


Kisi Zaban Mein Bhi Woh Lafz Hi Nahi

Ki Jin Mein Tum Ho Kya Tumhein Bata Sakun


They swayed in the same position and their lips brushed with each other. Shilpa closed her eyes and parted her lips as she was allowing him to kiss but he pecked on his forehead and hugged her.


Main Agar Kahoon Tumsa Haseen

Kaynaat Mein Nai Hai Kahin
Tareef Yeh Bhi To Sach Hai Kuch Bhi Nahi
Tumko Paya Hai To Jaise Khoya Hoon..


The song ended but they kept embracing each other but the claps and applauded sounds brought them back to the reality. Shilpa immediately parted from him as she was blushing hard and was about to run from the dance floor but a tuck on her wrist stopped her.


"Kiss is just a promise, but I intend to not leave this"


Armaan ended while announcing this simple promise in the huge crowd and claimed her as his without capturing her lips while showing the tight hold on her wrist and she intertwined her fingers into his as fist as she was agreeing him.





A/N: So promise day update is here, I kept my promise😉. I hope you liked it then please hit Like and drop a comment


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Happy Promise Day
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Aditi
Belated happy teddy day.
I loved the os. They are so much in love. It was a bit annoying due to the fight in the mall since Armaan was rude. But yes the surprise was awesome. The best part was shilpa gifting the teddy to armaan.
Waiting for the next os.
Update soon.

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