MagicalKash thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago
#1
Helloooooooo!
I just wrote a small poem from Ridz to SId.Its a happy poem reflecting SR's life at the moment!
Do criticise/comment plz!

Its love when you feel the sun's shining brighter

Its care when a small hurt in his hand makes

Your heart ache like it never had.

Its jealousy when you start fuming

On seeing him hugging someone else even if

its a guy

Its passion in his eyes that

Makes you go weak in your knees

It's the smile on his lips that makes you

Wanna live

Its care in his eyes that makes

Your world a paradise

Its beautiful when his cheesy lines

Also makes you blush

Its amazing when his single 'I love you"

Can make everything perfect!

Its Lovely to see the same world differently

Its paradise to visit your dreams

Its heavenly when Its only you he sees

Its funny that even you can see only him

Its Life given to live again

Its Love when you marry the

Same guy again!

Edited by MagicalKash - 15 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

16

Views

1.8k

Users

13

Likes

28

Frequent Posters

.Angel thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 15 years ago
#2
oh wow this is awesome dear👏👍🏼
MagicalKash thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago
#3

Originally posted by: .Angel

oh wow this is awesome dear👏👍🏼

Thank you!😳
492811 thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#4
amazing poems👏 just straight to the heart, M-I-N-D-B-L-O-W-I-N-G, every words is perfect, marrying the same guy twice is love!! BRAVO!!
MagicalKash thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago
#5
Thank you!
MagicalKash thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: hewascool90210

amazing poems👏 just straight to the heart, M-I-N-D-B-L-O-W-I-N-G, every words is perfect, marrying the same guy twice is love!! BRAVO!!

Thanks a lot bani!🤗
monalobo thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#7
Wonderfully written ,straight from the heart.Perfect for Sid n Riddhima.
Akankshaa. thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago
#8
Parul !! 🤗

OMG, Parul, I have no words. Just one advice. Turn a lyricist, and do something with the songs these days. 😛

Loved it, like, reallly reallly loved it !! ❤️

MagicalKash thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago
#9
Thank you Anky and Nikki!🤗🤗
LOL Anky I am not that good at all and neither I think I have time for that ryt now!
Maham thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 15 years ago
#10
Wow...........Awesome!👏

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".