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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#81

awesome update

loved it

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

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manjha

@manjha

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#82

awsomee update (: thanks for pm (:

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Ritz2012

@Ritz2012

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#83

Thank you so much for the PM Vani(I hope i can call you that)...and i really don't want this to be a dream.....AND Acc to me it didn't happen early coz i think after this making scene ,there relationship will grow more in a very good and romantic way..althou problems aayengi but still they will be MAN AND WIFE.forever....So i loved your all the parts.........GR8 JOB DONE...KEEP IT UP<3

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Preeti

@-Prithi-

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#84

lovely update ❤️
but it will be too early for Armaan to accept Shilpa
there should be some romantic moments b/w Arsh where Armaan develop feelings for Shilpa

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naaznin

@naaznin

Sparkler

+ 10

Posted: 15 years ago

#85

oh my god this part was so hot
thanks for such a lovely part
loved it totally

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501675

Hibernated

Posted: 15 years ago

#86

yeah it was too early to show thier emotion for each other coz in the last part armaan did not accept the fact that she was his wife coz he still loves riddhima so u have to gave time to armaan and his feeling to get over riddhima.

i will suggest u that make it a dream sequence and in upcoming parts show that armaan has statred to develop feeling for shilpa and all that.

anyway i have not enough time to tell u the whole suggestion. if i got time i will tell u later.

anyway keep continuing.

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AbnerFernandes

@AbnerFernandes

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#87

nah don't make it a dream it is too good to be a dream for us

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Heaven

@HeAvEnS

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#88

well hey

nice part well yeah

but how about they didn't made love after Armaan's recation and Shilpa just hugged him to make him understand that she was ok if he wanted time you but just becauseof that Armaan did pull shilpa in hug for iuunderstanding him u know????? then slowwly they will become comfortable with each other but i think Armaan should slowlly relaize that he is getting attracted toward her and getting over Riddhima .....

how that ??? like it think about it jaan

and Please update soon loved how RM didn't feel awakard toward it infact they liked her

Love Heaven

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Aakriti Mehta

@lil_desi_goddes

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#89

great two parts, but i would love to see the slow acceptance by Armaan for Shilpa, then you could show the hot scenes as well, though please do continue soon!