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first night pg1
first day in sanjeevani pg1
arsh meet s----r pg 5
packing for honeymoon pg7
shilpa sees armaan without shirt pg8
moments in flight pg9
arsh meet rm in paris pg11
arsh give their relationship another chance pg15
armaan gives a ring to shilpa pg17
janmashtami celebrations pg21
riddhima informs armaan about her marriage pg23
sweet moment in kitchen pg25
shopping time pg33
car accident pg36
confession pg39
khatron ke khiladi pg44
shashank tells arsh to return pg 48
bedroom romance pg 54
the decision is urs pg 63
winner announced pg70
I'll miss u armaan pg70
ahem ahem pg72
muski darling pg 77
truth revealed to ammy pg 84
its over pg 88😭
read at your own risk pg92
true love (last part) pg 97
surprize pg102
saajna......❤️
The journey begins........
As shilpa got up from the bed on which she was sleeping alone , events of last night started flashing in her mind & her eyes got filled with tears??..

FLASHBACK (ARSH first night)

Armaan enters his bedroom decorated beautifully for their first night by JP, jiggy, sid & his??.. NOT his riddhima. Shilpa was sitting in the centre of the bed covered with rose petals, her mind filled with nervousness & a blush on her face. As she saw Armaan proceeding towards her, her heartbeat increased & she clinched the bed sheet with her toes. 😳

Now armaan was just one inch away from her. Shilpa was ready to surrender herself completely to her husband- HER armaan. As she was waiting to be loved by her hubby, armaan just picked up the pillow kept on the bed & turned to leave.😕

S- armaan??..

Armaan turned to see her sitting there, asking thousands of questions from her big eyes

A- I'm sorry?I can't (with this he left & went to sleep in the guest room)

Shilpa kept crying & questioning herself the whole night.😭

FLASHBACK OVER

Armaan enters the room to get his clothes

Armaan enters the room to get his clothes but gets dumbstruck by the sight in front of him. Shilpa was standing in front of the mirror in a red sari, trying to tie the doris of her blouse. 😳

S- Armaan, plz help kar do na 😳

A- (Immediately comes out of the trance & thinks)- no armaan, u can't think about any other girl?you've gone mad..😕

Suddenly his thoughts get disturbed by another call from shilpa

S- armaan, soch kya rahe ho, plz help me na😳

A- (Shouts) why don't you understand? Neither I'm interested in all this, nor in u😡

S- (Her eyes filled with tears) it's okay?. I'll manage😭

Shilpa runs into the bathroom to stop her tears from flowing & armaan feels guilty about his rude behaviour

9:00 am

KITCHEN

Shilpa is making breakfast for armaan. She arranges everything in the tray & reaches the dining table. Armaan is waiting for her to come so that he can apologize to her.😳

Shilpa is serving the food in his plate. As soon as armaan opens his mouth to speak something, shilpa goes back to their room

He quickly finishes his breakfast & goes to their bedroom. He enters to find shilpa lying on the bed.

S- (Quickly gets up as she realizes that someone is there) kuch chahiye tha?

a- haan

s- kya?

a- maafi

s-hun?😲

a- shilpa ??I'm really for my behavior in the morning ? Its just that , I'm not used to doing all these things for some girl other than ?..😕

s- its okay?. there's no need to explain it. I think we are getting late, shall we leave?😊

a- I'm really sorry once again

s- I said na its okay?. lets go😊

They leave for sanjeevani

As soon as ARSH enter sanjeevani, all eyes are on them. They seemed to be soooo made 4 each other.

Shilpa tries to hold armaan's arm & he lets her do so as he was still guilty for his behaviour. Shilpa looks at him lovingly but he was busy in own world.

Suddenly Jp comes out of no where😆

Jp- array armaan bhaiyya, shilpa flower ji?. Shaadi ke dusre din hi sanjeevani?😉

a-ji haan dr.jp kyunki hamare liye sabse zaroori hamare patients hai⭐️

jp- acha who sab chodiye , ye batayi, apki suhaagraat kaisi thi?😳

Shilpa's suddenly becomes sad thinking about the previous night. Armaan was about to say something when they get disturbed by a voice.😕

Voice- dr. jp? back to duty now 😡

Plz tell me guys if it good or bad. Criticism will also be accepted with a smile . Tell me if I shud continue or not (this is my first FF)😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#2
hey it is nice but don't start with a sad promo since it is your first time and best of luck add me to your pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: vaaniKSGmallik

As shilpa got up from the bed on which she was sleeping alone , events of last night started flashing in her mind & her eyes got filled with tears''..

FLASHBACK (ARSH first night)

Armaan enters his bedroom decorated beautifully for their first night by JP, jiggy, sid & his''.. NOT his riddhima. Shilpa was sitting in the centre of the bed covered with rose petals, her mind filled with nervousness & a blush on her face. As she saw Armaan proceeding towards her, her heartbeat increased & she clinched the bed sheet with her toes. 😳

Now armaan was just one inch away from her. Shilpa was ready to surrender herself completely to her husband- HER armaan. As she was waiting to be loved by her hubby, armaan just picked up the pillow kept on the bed & turned to leave.😕

S- armaan''..

Armaan turned to see her sitting there, asking thousands of questions from her big eyes

A- I'm sorry'I can't (with this he left & went to sleep in the guest room)

Shilpa kept crying & questioning herself the whole night.😭

FLASHBACK OVER

Armaan enters the room to get his clothes''

Plz tell me guys if it good or bad. Criticism will also be accepted with a smile . Tell me if I shud continue or not (this is my first FF)😊




Vaani ki Bachi tu mujhe aaj maar daalegi.
I loved it , I can see the intensity in the story in future.
As mein khud FF writer ho , I know how intense this story wud get,

Jaldi update kar.Warna 😡😡😡😡

😆😆Sis itna daro mat😆😆

jaldi update karo.😊

and u dint comment on my thread??about ridzy.
comment on Armaaniacz thread too.😊

😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: ABNER

hey it is nice but don't start with a sad promo since it is your first time and best of luck add me to your pm list

thanks . it's sad but it's about how armaan starts developing feelings for shilpa & how she explores different sides of him 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice
looks intresting
con soon
plz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: Princezz22




Vaani ki Bachi tu mujhe aaj maar daalegi.
I loved it , I can see the intensity in the story in future.
As mein khud FF writer ho , I know how intense this story wud get,

Jaldi update kar.Warna 😡😡😡😡

😆😆Sis itna daro mat😆😆

jaldi update karo.😊

and u dint comment on my thread??about ridzy.
comment on Armaaniacz thread too.😊

😆

u really scared me lol😆
thanks & i'll update soon . I don't know whether I wud b able 2 keep up to ur expectations as this is my first ever FF.
i think i replied on ur topic 4 ridz
& about the topic on my love, i was busy drooling & blushingEmbarrassed
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Posted: 15 years ago
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u really scared me lol😆
thanks & i'll update soon . I don't know whether I wud b able 2 keep up to ur expectations as this is my first ever FF.
i think i replied on ur topic 4 ridz
& about the topic on my love, i was busy drooling & blushing😳


Haha 😆😆, tu dar kyun gayi??😆😆

Your Love , excuse me He is mine sis😉

I know you would make this story intense , I am sure meri vaani sis bohut creative hain aur ye inko abhi tak realize nahin hua.😊😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva

nice

looks intresting
con soon
plz add me to ur pm list

thank you so much
i'll update but it'll take sum time as i'm new at this
& i've added u
thanks 4 replying😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Kuch kum roshan hai roshni
Kuch kum gili hai baarishein


Kuch Kum lehrathi hai hawa

Kuch Kum hai dil mein kwahishein


Tham sa gaya hai

Yeh waqt aaisi

Tere liya hi tehra ho jaise


Mmmmm..mmmm..mmmm
MMmmm…mmmm..mmmmm



Kuch kum roshan hai roshni

Kuch kum gili hai baarishein

Kuch Kum lehrathi hai hawa
Kuch Kum hai dil mein kwahishein

Tham sa gaya hai

Yeh waqt aaise

Tere liya hi tehra ho jaise


Mmmmm..mmmm..mmmm
Mmmmm..mmm..mmmm..

Kyun meri saans bhi
Kuch bhiki si hai


Dooriyon se huyie

Nazdiki si hai

Mmm….



Kyun meri saans bhi

Kuch bhiki si hai



Dooriyon se huyie

Nazdiki si hai

Jaane kya, yeh baath hai

Har subha, aab raat hai

Kuch kum roshan hai roshni

Kuch kum gili hai baarishein

Kuch Kum lehrathi hai hawa

Kuch Kum hai dil mein kwahishein

Tham sa gaya hai
Yeh waqt aaise


Tere liya hi tehra ho jaise

Mmmmm..mmmm..mmmm
Mmmmm..mmm..mmmm..



Phool mehke nahin

Kuch gumsum se hai

Jaise roothe huwe
Kuch yeh tumse hai

Phool mehke nahin
Kuch gumsum se hai


Jaise roothe huwe
Kuch yeh tumse hai

Khusbooien dhal gayi
Saath tum aab jo nahin



Kuch kum roshan hai roshni
Kuch kum gili hai baarishein

Tham sa gaya hai
Yeh waqt aaise

Tere liya hi tehra ho jaise

Mmmmm..mmmm..mm

Mmmmm..mmm..mmmm..

Originally posted by: Princezz22


u really scared me lol😆
thanks & i'll update soon . I don't know whether I wud b able 2 keep up to ur expectations as this is my first ever FF.
i think i replied on ur topic 4 ridz
& about the topic on my love, i was busy drooling & blushing😳



Haha 😆😆, tu dar kyun gayi??😆😆

Your Love , excuse me He is mine sis😉

I know you would make this story intense , I am sure meri vaani sis bohut creative hain aur ye inko abhi tak realize nahin hua.😊😃
we can share, u can keep KSG & i'll have my armaanEmbarrassed (ab isse zyada compromise main nahi kar sakti)😉😆
& thanks 4 the compliment sisSmile
Edited by vaaniKSGmallik - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: karan-007

its very nice update soon 😊

thanks , i'll do that😊

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